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getter
10-18-2006, 11:01 PM
Hi I'm a newbie, I have a idea about a nonconsent sex story, and I was hoping for someone to write into a story. The story is about a highschooler's hot mom was forced to be a sex slave of her son's classmate bullies(gangster), and the son and husband doesn't know about it. The hot mom was control by the bullies using some sort of sex addicted drug and forced to become prostitute and porn film star to earn money for the school bullies. One day the son find out about his mother's secret by watching a porn film produced by the bullies, and try to save his mother from the bullies. The son's attempt was discovered by the bullies and he was forced to have sex with his mother.
The detail about the story:
A 18yrs old highschool senior son was bullied in school and afterschool, and the mother(she has to be pure innocent mother and wife figure) call the police to take down the bullies. The bullies took revenge on the mother by secretly taken naked photo of the mother and threat to kill her son. The loving mother for the safty of her son accepted the blackmail. The second part is submission, the mother was drugged and tortured to become slave(body transformation can be add in this part, forced shaving of public hair, breast enlargement or even lactation, tattoo on private part, red matured nipple and cunt become pink, and younger sexier outlook). The main point of this part is conflict between the drugged unconscious state and the conscious state of the mother, resisted vs. submitted, natural sexual desire vs. moral, pleasure vs. pain. She definitely feel guilt and remorse after the drugs wear off. Although the side effect of the drug make her irresistible to sex, she try to resist every time, in the final she was failed, and she feel sad and powerless. The bullies get tired of her body after a while and force her to become prostitute and porn film star to earn money. (The first time she get hook on and first porn shoot should be interesting to write about, afterall she will be shy and forced. Dog sex and forced enema, public pissing and more humiliation the better). The son find out about the porn tape when one of the bullies accidentally drop it on the school ground while mentioning about his mother name. He was shock and angry, he can't believe his innocent and loving mother has turn into this slut (his mother act normal in the house), and then he went to investigate this matter by either following the bullies or his mother. Then his act to save his mother was discover by the bullies, and he was capture by them. The husband in this story is working outside of the country, after the son was capture, he may come back into the play. The story can start at present and the past was revealed, which frist the mother calling the police, and then couple of months later the son get the tape at school, then he investigate and find out piece by piece how his mother become the slave(there is where all the sex contents come in). I not very good at writing, I would really like someone to write about this story. So someone pleaseeeeee write.

Kimiko
10-18-2006, 11:29 PM
Jeez...you have every detail worked out! You ought to just write it yourself!

getter
10-18-2006, 11:33 PM
I would like to write it myself, but I don't got the skill. There is still a lot progress in story after the son was capture, and the content of detail can be change by the write, I'm just providing some ideas.

Kimiko
10-18-2006, 11:39 PM
Well, I would do it, except that I've got about eight stories in progress right now, all getting stale from an almost terminal case of writer's block.

Besides, there are elements in the story you describe that I have trouble relating to. You need someone considerably less normal than I am. :D

Good luck!

getter
10-18-2006, 11:51 PM
Thanks for the interest Kimiko, I would really like you to write about it, you can just write according to your own way, don't worry about all the details that I wrote. I've been longing for such story for a long time, I would really want to see someone to make it come true.

getter
10-19-2006, 08:36 PM
Eh....... :cry: , is somebody eles interest to write about it, is it really that bad of a idea :cry: ?

scotchncoke
10-20-2006, 10:23 AM
I think given your'e abilities to explain such an introduction to your'e story why not write it yourself we don't care wether it's right or not it's what you think of the end product,if your'e happy with it that's all that counts.

Dale
10-20-2006, 11:03 AM
I think given your'e abilities to explain such an introduction to your'e story why not write it yourself we don't care wether it's right or not it's what you think of the end product,if your'e happy with it that's all that counts.

I agree. Kick back, relax and let your imagination take over. It is an incredible release.

You could write the next great classic and half the people that read it would be confused or just not get it.

Kimiko
10-20-2006, 03:57 PM
I think given your'e abilities to explain such an introduction to your'e story why not write it yourself we don't care wether it's right or not it's what you think of the end product,if your'e happy with it that's all that counts.

I agree. Kick back, relax and let your imagination take over. It is an incredible release.

You could write the next great classic and half the people that read it would be confused or just not get it.

Yeah...like James Joyce, for example.

getter
10-21-2006, 10:18 PM
If I can write it myself why would I request it? English is not my native language, so maybe I can write about the intro, but the details in the story is difficult for me to write.

Kimiko
10-22-2006, 06:34 PM
If I can write it myself why would I request it? English is not my native language, so maybe I can write about the intro, but the details in the story is difficult for me to write.

Why don't you write it in your first language and look for someone here to translate it?

scotchncoke
10-22-2006, 10:53 PM
So what your'e really saying is you get writers block.Don't we all?.Your'e introduction tells me straight away you have enough writing skills to write.My advice is take your'e time think it through,double check and it can take time to write a story that takes two minutes to read.I have spent six, seven, eight hours on a story only to read it in two minutes.That's what story writing is.But I think your'e too damn lazy to write your'e own story.

Empress Lainie
12-12-2006, 02:45 PM
Eh....... :cry: , is somebody eles interest to write about it, is it really that bad of a idea :cry: ?

Getter, it looks like a great and potentially high rated story. Thinking about it, but you are bound to get someone better than poor me to write for you, I think. We have so many superb authors on this site. IF I did it you would be in complete control of the story, except for grammar and English in which I try to excel, and these GODDAM:mad: computer keyboards that don't do what your type. I would have to write it in works or word, and email to you for your suggestions, IF I do it. I am not into some of the things you incorporate, so I feel unsure of my ability to do those things well.

getter
12-17-2006, 06:21 PM
Hi zyzx, thanks for replying my thread, I thought nobody was intrested. This idea is one of my fantasies, and I would really like somebody to write about it. It doesn't matter whom wrote it, as long as it can be done. If you want to write about it, you can write according to your own idea. Hope to hear from you soon.

Empress Lainie
12-18-2006, 05:25 AM
I am getting ready to start working on your story. One bad thing with this system ( or maybe I am just dumb) you can't copy a post and put in into a file in your computer. Paste is never there on the menu. So I printed it and found out that when you print it prints the whole thread.

MusicMachine
12-18-2006, 10:49 AM
Highlight the text you want to copy, Press Ctrl C then move to your word doc or wherever you want to paste it and press Ctrl V. Magic!:)

Empress Lainie
12-18-2006, 11:09 AM
Highlight the text you want to copy, Press Ctrl C then move to your word doc or wherever you want to paste it and press Ctrl V. Magic!:)

Thanks MM, will try it next time.

getter
12-18-2006, 02:12 PM
Thanks for taking the idea, zyzx. Hope to see story really soon.

jimfox
12-18-2006, 07:43 PM
Why not be a go getter! Give it a try and use spell and grammar checks to help out. Post the story and you might be surprised at the response.
Go on...Jump......you might just fly! :-D