What id like to see

[pookey227]

What id like to see is a Romance type story of young innocent love... I was just reminicing about my younger days, no worries, no bs, you didnt know enough about the real world to really be sad and un-optimistic as we are now...

So Id like to see a story with, Im not going to say Kids exactially, Im not into that but its up to the author to decide. I've seen a few stories KINDA like that but theyre more Sexual oriented and not really character based/plot kind of thing... Id like to sit down and get a good read off of something like that


So Anyone gunna run with it? Think its good? Post some suggestions, whatever - Just dont stray too far off topic

And I SWEAR TO GOD IF SOMEONE COMES IN FLAMING ME CALLING ME A FUCKING PEDAPHILE IM GUNNA FLIP A BITCH IF YOU READ AND UNDERSTAND YOULL GET WHAT IM SAYING.

[Fanfiction]

Hi :) ,

I hope an author hereabouts will try to do it for you.
Its not a job for me, simply because I was way to sordid back when things were new. But I think I understand what you're saying.

And I just wanted to suggest that perhaps if you've read a story in the kind of ball park you're happy with. Maybe you could write to a few of the authors in the archive via their email, if provided, and ask? Not all authors read the form, I suspect.

cheers :)

[bladeway]

i wrote a story kinda like that. Interstate Innocence parts 1 and 2. never finished it though. Anyway, you can find it here at xnxx, under my name in the author index.
-blade-

[chunky]

i wrote a story kinda like that. Interstate Innocence parts 1 and 2. never finished it though. Anyway, you can find it here at xnxx, under my name in the author index.
-blade-

I read it....it's a good read, you should do another chapter, very real, very believable.

[chunky]

Pookey, when you say young romance, do you mean without sex...or a little sprinkling of sex.......or realistic teenage 'fumblings'.

I only ask because I have several stories on the boil, (which I despair of ever finishing), one of which is loosely autobiographical, where the principles are two teenage lovers whose relationship is destroyed by the neurotic objections of the girl's parents.

I have to say that one of the reasons that these stories aren't progressing is because I cannot bring myself to write steaming, graphic sex every other paragraph.......so I don't think the story that I want to write would be well received.

I can't stomach the thought of pouring myself into a story, only to have it scrolled over in search of the blow-job........and get comments like..."he shuld hve fucked her"!!

If I really thought more people wanted the kind of story you describe I might be encouraged to continue..........

[Rockprincess]

Myself, I'd rather read the kind of story you are describing, Chunky. I enjoy them much more than the others. I actually like a story with the sex. Crazy, isn't it!!!;) I would enjoy something hot, sexy, and not dirty. Do you know what I mean?? I very seldom read the stories here because they are not something that I like. I thought MM's story today was excellent!!!:D

[MusicMachine]

Myself, I'd rather read the kind of story you are describing, Chunky. I enjoy them much more than the others. I actually like a story with the sex. Crazy, isn't it!!!;) I would enjoy something hot, sexy, and not dirty. Do you know what I mean?? I very seldom read the stories here because they are not something that I like. I thought MM's story today was excellent!!!:D
Why thank you sweet lady.

[Rockprincess]

Why thank you sweet lady.
You're very, very welcome, Big Daddy!!;) The lady says blushing!!

[MusicMachine]

Pookey, when you say young romance, do you mean without sex...or a little sprinkling of sex.......or realistic teenage 'fumblings'.

I only ask because I have several stories on the boil, (which I despair of ever finishing), one of which is loosely autobiographical, where the principles are two teenage lovers whose relationship is destroyed by the neurotic objections of the girl's parents.

I have to say that one of the reasons that these stories aren't progressing is because I cannot bring myself to write steaming, graphic sex every other paragraph.......so I don't think the story that I want to write would be well received.

I can't stomach the thought of pouring myself into a story, only to have it scrolled over in search of the blow-job........and get comments like..."he shuld hve fucked her"!!

If I really thought more people wanted the kind of story you describe I might be encouraged to continue..........
I'm sure it will be we recieved, the readers here have shown me nothing but kindness and with your talent I am sure they will be enjoyed. Please finish them, you know you want to, don't make me beg:p

[Rockprincess]

I love a man who'll beg!!!:cool:

[MusicMachine]

I love a man who'll beg!!!:cool:
On bended knees "Pant, Pant, Pant, anything you ask mistress"

[Rockprincess]

"Anything at all?" she asks.

[MusicMachine]

"Anything at all?" she asks.
ANYTHING!!!

[Rockprincess]

ANYTHING!!!
My kind of guy 'up' for anything!!!!;)

[Kimiko]

Pookey, we need an answer....are you looking for something devoid of sex, or with sex hinted at but not quite realized...perhaps two young people just beginning to discover their sexuality? It could be treated in a way that gently built up a lot of sexual tension...but would you want a release from that tension?

[Kimiko]

Pookey, we need an answer....are you looking for something devoid of sex, or with sex hinted at but not quite realized...perhaps two young people just beginning to discover their sexuality? It could be treated in a way that gently built up a lot of sexual tension...but would you want a release from that tension?

I'm thinking "Blue Lagoon" here.

[pookey227]

Sorry, ive been elsewhere for the last 24 hrs...

Okay, Sex - Making love

Love making im kind of talking, but not overdone as in the skanky Porno with an attempted story line, it should probably be built up, but nothing crazy, more of a head fuck than physical, do you know what i mean? Where more mind is involved, damn I cant think of the words today, up in your head, emotional, uhh psychological there we go!

Probably not okay I love you - Lets fuck in the jacuzzi, more realistic romantic foreplay leading up to passionate sexual contact, in an "In your dreams" type environment, like perhaps two families go up to the mountians for a few weeks type seculsion story where two people (in this case young children/teens whatever) really get to know eachother and discover theyre love and get to express it in a fantastic (Fantasy based, does that word work?) environment, but nothing too crazy, believable... The realism has to be good because this isnt some sick-o child porn grade fuck fest story...


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Community Development:

Please post basic settings/names/m-f ages/etc.

LETS MAKE THIS ONE KICK ASS STORY AND LEAVE IT UP TO THE BRILLIANT WRITERS OF XNXX

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My example

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Location - Colorado Mountain Ranges or some mountainous secluded area

Male - Age 14}{15

Female - Age 13}{15

Male Name - Justin/Sean-Shaun however u wanna spell it

Female Name - Kate/Shelby

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Age has to make it so they haven't been really experienced with love and relationships and sex and whatnot

Character Development, has to be big, we have to start out on the story not knowing much about the other characters, so we can learn about them and their values and habbits and interests as the other character is...

Character influence, Parents have to have a part, siblings if you choose, its a family trip so there has to be siblings (for my scenario as in family trip, doesnt have to be)

Character Imperfection - No ones perfect, so there has to be some traits of imperfections, adding to realism.

Geography - This has to be good, a little less un-realistic, like a family trip, or the m/f moving to some crazy out there type place for a realistic reason and finding out they like it better - Has to be a good place, im not talking about the generic suburbia thats usually written about. Characters need an environment where character development can move at whatever pace realistically, and in-depth...

School - Teenagers go to school, but school can fuck with the character development, better make it summer.

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Anything else to add? Please be reasonable and others have the right to say DONT DO THAT IT WOULDNT BE GOOD! Constructive Criticism is the key here, this story is going to develop with the community. And the opinions of respected and or intellectual members will be valued, WRITERS! PLEASE DONT LISTEN TO IDIOTIC NOOBS!

Writers, DONT JUST GO AHEAD WRITING WHEN THE COMMUNITY ISN'T DONE! Feel free to do something that wont take a lot to change or edit and what not, don't waste your time on something that isn't great.

[MusicMachine]

Sorry, ive been elsewhere for the last 24 hrs...

Okay, Sex - Making love

Love making im kind of talking, but not overdone as in the skanky Porno with an attempted story line, it should probably be built up, but nothing crazy, more of a head fuck than physical, do you know what i mean? Where more mind is involved, damn I cant think of the words today, up in your head, emotional, uhh psychological there we go!

Probably not okay I love you - Lets fuck in the jacuzzi, more realistic romantic foreplay leading up to passionate sexual contact, in an "In your dreams" type environment, like perhaps two families go up to the mountians for a few weeks type seculsion story where two people (in this case young children/teens whatever) really get to know eachother and discover theyre love and get to express it in a fantastic (Fantasy based, does that word work?) environment, but nothing too crazy, believable... The realism has to be good because this isnt some sick-o child porn grade fuck fest story...


~~~~

Community Development:

Please post basic settings/names/m-f ages/etc.

LETS MAKE THIS ONE KICK ASS STORY AND LEAVE IT UP TO THE BRILLIANT WRITERS OF XNXX

~~~~~

My example

---

Location - Colorado Mountain Ranges or some mountainous secluded area

Male - Age 14}{15

Female - Age 13}{15

Male Name - Justin/Sean-Shaun however u wanna spell it

Female Name - Kate/Shelby

---


Age has to make it so they haven't been really experienced with love and relationships and sex and whatnot

Character Development, has to be big, we have to start out on the story not knowing much about the other characters, so we can learn about them and their values and habbits and interests as the other character is...

Character influence, Parents have to have a part, siblings if you choose, its a family trip so there has to be siblings (for my scenario as in family trip, doesnt have to be)

Character Imperfection - No ones perfect, so there has to be some traits of imperfections, adding to realism.

Geography - This has to be good, a little less un-realistic, like a family trip, or the m/f moving to some crazy out there type place for a realistic reason and finding out they like it better - Has to be a good place, im not talking about the generic suburbia thats usually written about. Characters need an environment where character development can move at whatever pace realistically, and in-depth...

School - Teenagers go to school, but school can fuck with the character development, better make it summer.

___________________

Anything else to add? Please be reasonable and others have the right to say DONT DO THAT IT WOULDNT BE GOOD! Constructive Criticism is the key here, this story is going to develop with the community. And the opinions of respected and or intellectual members will be valued, WRITERS! PLEASE DONT LISTEN TO IDIOTIC NOOBS!

Writers, DONT JUST GO AHEAD WRITING WHEN THE COMMUNITY ISN'T DONE! Feel free to do something that wont take a lot to change or edit and what not, don't waste your time on something that isn't great.




OK I know this comes across as yet another shameless plug but have you read my breaker 19 thread in stories. Might be what you're looking for.

[pookey227]

I will tonite

[pookey227]

OK I know this comes across as yet another shameless plug but have you read my breaker 19 thread in stories. Might be what you're looking for.

Yea, i enjoyed ur story a lot but im looking for more seclusion and I think the male was a bit too old, as I said before Young, innocent, love not threesome fuckfest lesbian stuff ^^ although it was hot as hell


Well, you have my opinions in for the story, any writer up for it??

[Fanfiction]

After her reply to my 'Romantic sex fantasy' post I believe Kimiko would have what it takes to write your story. :)

Of course everyone wants action. And Chunky is dead write about the pinheads that are merciless about a lack of smut.:mad:

But it seems strange to me so many people seem to think romance is only some sort of bait to sucker a lover forward into a trap until she can be clubbed and drilled like a seal. As if, ok, that smoochy smoochy shit is over thank god, now let me nail ya butt to the bed head for ya.

I think a story dealing with LOVE, one that explored the exciting and mysterious qualities of sex, where characters talk or behave amorously, but still with very serious intentions toward a GOOD HOT fuck! (even though more gentle words were used)

Is what I think I'm understanding you want. In that case. Again, I would be begging for Kimiko's services on bended knee, a rose between my teeth, and a poem about her eyes ready in my mind to whisper hotly into her shell-like ear at some becoming moment. :D

[pookey227]

Sadly Kimiko doesnt believe that its her type of story to write


:cry:

[pookey227]

Ill be brainstorming this week on my free time, Ill write the story and post it up

[MusicMachine]

Yea, i enjoyed ur story a lot but im looking for more seclusion and I think the male was a bit too old, as I said before Young, innocent, love not threesome fuckfest lesbian stuff ^^ although it was hot as hell


Well, you have my opinions in for the story, any writer up for it??
Maybe I'll give it a go. I just tried the love versus lust angle in my Hong Kong diaries, very hard work. Main characters are mature so probably not what you are looking for. Very much love rather than fuck, suck etc so could work. Promised to dress Diane and Emily up in ladies clothes for vegebon, think they are going to do Bugsy Malone as a school play with me as the DJ playing the dubbed songs. After that am visiting Chicago to have a romantic encounter with a beautiful blonde bar manager, If I still have the appetite to write more I might revisit my childhood summers and the days at the caravan park playing "Truth, Dare, Kiss, Command, Promise, or Tell" with the other kids. I think that is what you are looking for.