hi .. just wanted to say how much i enjoyed reading the Property's of Devil Outlaw and thinking myself i am Hannah.

I was a slave, made to please my Master, these writings remind me of what I have been through although not to extremes. People don't survive the extremes but controlling a woman's body and making her cum does make the story cum true, make a woman enjoy the torture and she will make a mess!

my story which isn't a story, it a real life experience.

No it's real experience translated to someone's story.

Samantha is forced, with all the other slaves into a room where they are forced to please each other,Each slave must please, failure is punishment. Dildo's, fingers, mouths, all to be used to please the slaves as Master watches along with his men. Humiliation abounds as the slaves must make each other cum in a twisted sea of bodies. Each woman cums,afraid of what the Master's men will do if they don't.

Hannah is twisting in ecstasy.Outlaws uses feather,excite Hannah's nipples,clit,ass.Nothing more humiliating than cumming at the will of your captures.

Hannah hung by her wrists,spreader bar,weights on her nipple rings,hood pierced,weighted.Her inner/out lips should be pierced too.Outlaw uses Y-clamps,excites Hannah,she can't stand it,begins to fist her.She screams in pain,hates the excitement.OL caresses her ass,inserts fingers.

I read your stories not in disgust because your writing is prolific and stimulating. You give some people fantasy and others a reminder how cruel people can be. Both are exciting despite how "holier than thou" people pretend to be. I'll be happy to send you some lines for your stories.

Samantha, humiliation is a harem, each captive instructed to make another woman cum as all the captives are twisted together, forcing them to give each other pleasure while all the men watch, jeer and applaud. Both are very humiliating, I can give you more detail, this is limited space. It was 25 years ago I was forced to do things that disgusted me. Today I'm a different person but I remember what made me cringe.

Final input for both stories, Outlaw, hoist up, spreader bar, more piercings to clit and labia. Weights and tri-clips. Dildo's in Hannah's, or others spread holes. Excite whore, make her understand the Outlaw using a feather on her clit will be controlling her soul, making her cum for the first time since they took her.

Describe the surroundings more and less repeating what the female looks like. When readers picture the conditions, it will add to the story and their reaction.

Despite what one person commented the second most humiliating experience is to enjoy what is being done. Your writing will either be something people enjoy or people detest, if people detest they shouldn't read. One critique, you do repeat yourself, I think to add length to the story.

Will you be adding new chapters to Outlaw or Samantha? While my experiences were not at the level you write about, thank goodness, one of the most humiliating experiences for a woman is to pleasure themselves in front of men like in these stories.