SORRY ALL DON'T THINK I'LL BE ABLE TO PARTICIPATE ALL THE MEDS I WAS TAKING MY BODY IS COMING OFF NOW AND I HAVE CONSTANT RUNS. HARD TO WRITE WHEN ONE IS ON THE TOILET CONSTANTLY HELL EVEN DOING THIS HAS MY STOMACH IN KNOTTS UGH! CRAP!

 

@ahorsewithnoname put up his pic choice. Here's the one I'm working from.

 

Well if they last that long, you'll be in the hospital.

Get a laptop and take it with you.

 

That's not very fair I seen the way you guys ripped into him if you bother checking out his stories you'll see he is a very talented and creative writer. Yes he can be a ass even to me but that's just how he is artistically. He's like a Van Gogh while he can be a pompous ass the talent can't be denied. Frankly he is the only one on forum and sexstories who helped me out crafting my writing from sex with some hints of story to stories with some hint of sex. He honestly crafted my work into a fine statue instead of a lump of rock like it was before. I wanted to stick up for him on his last post of KAW but he told me not to burn bridges like he has done with that pompous ass acting like he was a decorated writing critic instead of some guy who probably wanted to get his story to win. As most other contestants tore at each other stories. I'd also like to point out he never sad anything bad about other people stories or any one specifically. He only defended his story and his idea.

Sorry for ranting but yeah he is my friend and I won't let him be attacked like that frankly the whole talking shit on another person while there not around ruined my whole writing mood and I think this may not be the best place to express my writing talent. Sorry but seems I'll have to drop out seeing as I'm sure my opinion pissed someone off and it be impossible to get a none biased vote on this contest. [^,~]

 

Also don't be ass hurt by my honesty and down vote my stories thanks <3 you guys

 

Whoa whoa whoa. Slow down Lolis.R.Legal I said not to go and burn bridges like I did for calling out that imbecile who thought a land mass was floating above L.A.

You have lots of talent the rough draft you sent me via Email was excellent. It can definitely win over what anyone else can post in my opinion, but you might have ruined any chance of that happening simply because you defended me. Its been a month since I last thought about that KAW contest. Lets face it every writer except three wrote bad comments on every story except they own. I think it was the money prize that drove their greed and drive to tear down every other writer. While it's passion that drives authors like you and me.

We both post story lines that leave our readers wanting more and more and we feel a duty to keep posting on the site. Don't let a few people who are still mad about something from so long ago kill your writing mood.

Honestly I'm surprised I'm still a topic of hate on this forum seeing as I rarely post on the forum or the sexstories site anymore since the derpy rules changed and I've been getting payed on my blog for my stories.

So don't let the rules or these haters get you down they haven't ruined my book deal or my payed subscribers to my stories. Keep on posting I really enjoyed your latest story line about a brother and sister it's really good and shows how much you evolved.

I remeber I called you a smut peddler for the type of stories you posted just mainly being sex with very little story line. Now look at you building plots leaving open ended endings and making a real contribution to the writing world. I'd love to post your story on my blog for a cut of the profit going to you of course and help build your army of "little Lolis monsters" as you like to call your readers.

Email me the story and I'll post it ASAP. Thanks for having my back but really you should post up your entry I'm not sure how well it would be received with the last two post you made but it be a shame to waste such a powerfully written story by not sharing it with the world. If you don't feel like posting it to the KAW then post it on forum or as a non-entry piece.

~Reed

 

Oh yeah a non-entry piece sounds like a plan and check your email I sent you that story ^,~

 

I would disagree with that. I gather Reed is again demonstrating not saying anything bad about his readers, but as I can't see anything Reed writes, who cares.

If you don't want any honest feedback I have about your story, just tell me, I can put you on ignore just as easily.

You give the impression of just being Reed in disguise.

 

First of all no I am not Lolis.R.Legal my writing style and his? are not the same. You can see I write stories not peddle some cheap material for any freak to masturbate to and feel good about himself. No offense to LRL. While I helped LRL work on his writing style it's his own. I would like to claim I helped him on his last project as its been nothing but positive feedback,but no I can't he is his own writer and person. If you can't find my stories anywhere really? Not anywhere on the sex story site? None at all?

I would give you my story submission address but I feel you won't be able to afford the sign up fee. Here you can have a link to my public stories on my public page sense it interest you so much that you feel the need to look at my work enjoy it while you can. Yes I have my work notarized so if you plan on plagiarizing my work I'll sue as the site time stamps the work and I have the rough drafts printed and notarized and two different publishers have seen the story I'm getting published and many of my diffrent concepts as rough drafts to be sold to diffrent published authors, I also ghost write for many diffrent people mostly non fiction papers and essays for diffrent college students and teachers. Enjoy the Read

~Reed

 

In other news, I started a non-entry. I hope this KAW inspires a lot of stories. In the northern hemisphere, darkness is coming, and it's getting close to Halloween, so to me, it's the right collection of themes at the right time. Now the question is whether I can get my nightmare idea to make sense.

 

Wow really Reed we email 1000 times and your not sure I'm a man. Lols

That's besides the point yeah I'm my own writer deal with it.

B(>~<)3

I'm offended Reed I'm not a smut peddler...anymore.

 

If you can't take critical analysis of your writing don't enter it in a competition. After reading many CAWs and partaking in one I can tell you that even the winning storty normally has minor faults, although they are getting better and better as the writers take the comments/complaints/criticisms and apply it to there next works. There are some of us on here who will never be great and others who are already great. I might not be able to run as fast as Usain Bolt but if he offered my advise/help/constructive criticism you can bet I would have a note pad out.
There is nothing wrong with being a smut peddler, just be the best smut peddler.

 

Well yes I'm all for honest and open criticism but if you're just going to talk shit then best expect some shit thrown back at ya ^,~

For reals tho' I probably won't post a story simply because the atmosphere around here seems too negative. I was just called fake for defending my friend if that isn't negative then I don't know negative additude and trust me I know me some things about negative additudes.

It's one thing to hold a contest but if there is set cliques that will have each other's back and are more then willing to gain up on writers doesn't seem fair to new writers like me. While I enjoy the concept of the idea it seems corrupted or at least it does to me. I should however say thanks to everyone who will participate in trying to win and I'll vote maybe if I finish my story in time who knows I work 10+hrs a day so it's hard for me to write. If I do finish it I'll post it as a non entry just to have fun but wouldn't be surprised if I get nothing but hate comments.

I'm used to them had them my whole life but what can you do just role with the punches like my friend Reed did. I'd like to see everyone try their best and hopefully get more positive feedback then negative. I like to point out where writers did good instead of pointing out the more obvious faults in a story, but that's just me.

I love being a smut peddler but I also like how I evolved my writing craft to a simple sex story to a great piece of literature. I hope everyone aims for that then the forum will be better set for everyone and less people will hate on others and actually have real criticism to give not just feel like a bad ass for noticing typos or incomplete sentences in a story cuz really that doesn't matter in my eyes. What really matters is the story plot the depth of different types of characters and how they change or stay the same threw a awesome story. Grammar and spelling isn't too big of a impact if the story is good enough then people will over look these simple mistakes.

=^~^=

 

Norse mythology, eh? Well, damn! Sounds like an entertaining read. I like the photo choice, thought about that one myself (the photo, not the mythology angle), but there's a certain story that I really wanted to write about, and the photo I selected fits it to a "t".

My only hope is that I don't end up kicking myself for non-entering this story for the KAW and then finding out I could have entered it into the CAW, because I burned myself once before doing something similar with The Extraordinary Journey, a story about 9/11. Meh...

@Norton X & Sybil: For non-entries, you okay if we post them early/when done? So that they don't take away from the reading time and focus of the actual entries.

 

I respect your opinion but I do have something to say. I hope you don't mind since people seem to be honest and open here.

Honest opinions (even the negative ones) don't necessarily make the atmosphere negative. Intense - but not negative.

I wrote my very first story and submitted it as an entry for CAW25. All I got was fair and just reviews.

Not all who particapates the competitions here write to win. Some join for experience and the joy of writing. Others say they write to practice their writing skills.

Know how to differentiate "hate comment" and "constructive crirtism". And these guys don't mess with what they say.

Honest review IS a positive feed back. At the end of the day, it's the writer who will benefit.

I believe it's the readers job to notice the little things like typos and incomplete sentences. Small errors in grammar and spelling might not affect the "awesomeness" of the story, but it does have an impact on the story in general. If you didn't notice these errors on your story, who would point it out for you? Yes, the readers.

If you post your story here, expect an honest feed back and constructive criticism. People on this part of the forum aren't just readers, they're critiques.

And oh.. There is a clique here. It's "Critiques Clique". They're the best one around.

 

@Lolis I'm not sure about the negative aspect of the comments if your story isn't brilliant you will get comments and they will seem negative. If you can't spell, use malapropisms, have bad punctuation and don't finish sentences then its not a good story, no matter how well thought out the plot is or the character depth. If you enter a story that has no beginning or end don't be surprised when people don't like it. I saw quite a bit of that in KAW where people just enter a part of a story they are busy with or a chapter of a novel, this is completely pointless entry as you are taking for granted that the people have read the 6 earlier chapters. The point of CAW is to take that CAW theme and write a story for it not just enter some thing you had. When it comes to negative comments I think I have written on one of Norton's entrys that it was shit, the only reason being I have read other works of his and they where so much better and there is no reason to go backwards.
If you have written the story for the KAW man up and enter it. Non entrys are for people who have won CAW.

 

I'm sorry, lol, I can't resist! Critics! Critiques are what we give. What's extra funny is that the site thinks that "critics" is not spelled correctly as it has it underlined in red as I'm typing this.

Anyway...you are correct, Phoebe, we are critics, and if you post here, you should expect criticism. One definition of criticism is "the expression of disapproval of someone or something based on perceived faults or mistakes." Constructive criticism, possibly an oxymoron, is really what's desired here. When I point out an author's grammar mistakes, it's not to belittle someone (unless they've been a jerk previously in the thread), it's to get them to start noticing their own errors. I don't get off on correcting grammar. I do appreciate and rank higher those stories that are grammatically correct because I know that it takes extra effort. If I bought a self-published book and found it riddled with errors, I'd think twice about purchasing from that author again. Why? If the author is so unconcerned about the technical aspect of writing, how I am to believe that they have accurately researched the rest of their story?

Good post, Phoebe, and I hope you don't take *a fence* to my critique.

 

See?? That's what I'm talking about! Now I'm smarter than I was five minutes ago.

None taken, Sir!

 

Do it.

 

WELL, WELL, WELL.

I take one Saturday night off from the site and all hell breaks out?

Wtf people? I know every KAW/CAW has controversy and strife somewhere in it but god damn!

Can't we all just get along and write some
good smut?

No....okay.

How about we just write some dark demonic porn?

Let us move on with writing as you only have 24 days or so left to write and post......

I have an idea, channel your anger/rage/annoyance/disgust into a story.

Just a thought...

Happy hunting folks.