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  1. stex

    stex Porn Star

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  2. 1 Toy Maker

    1 Toy Maker Kuns og Kram Smukke Love once found never lost

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    Its the first one I read and damn it hits hard. The odd tempo made it feel disjointed and harsh but so is the story so it fits.
     
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  3. Little Miss K

    Little Miss K Porn Star

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    WOW!:wideyed:

    This was dark! However, being that this was a tale of revenge and retribution, I could get into it.

    There seems to be some back story missing about the association between Dani and James, but that can be filled in by the readers own imagination. (what dark and violent acts have these two shared in the past?:eek:)

    It was uncomfortable to read, and made me squeamish... Well done!:wtf:

    I think the opening was over done. Too much with the Dark Dark, but the rest of the story was done well.

    Good entry Sybil!
     
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  4. ejls

    ejls Siren of the Seaway

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    Dark, dark story. Dark, twisted, violent....and well done, Sybil.
     
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  5. wantsomefun

    wantsomefun Storyteller and Lover In XNXX Heaven

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    The cadence of the opening was disturbing, which I suspect was the intent. Revenge stories are never pretty, and neither is this one. I agree with horse -- your work has much more polish now. When you go dark, the evil shines through.
     
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      "When you go dark, the evil shines through" - I love it!
       
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      I also love that last sentence.
       
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  6. Sybil_62

    Sybil_62 Porn Star

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    From the heart
     
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