SEX is never normal... there is no such thing that SEX is bad if it excites everyone involved...
Same thing with SEX stories... no such thing as bad English if the readers gets excited by the written words... your so call good English skills seems to do the opposite..

 

Your stories r to long with out SEX before the SEX starts.. by the time u get to the SEX us reader r already reading someone else story...

 

How can proper grammar and spelling be a turn-off? You're not going to tell me this is easier to read, are you?

how kan prpoer grammer n speeling bee a turn0ff ur not gohing 2 teel me this is eezier 2 reed r u
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Or DO you find it easier to read? I'm confused.

 

SEX stories should be like a new relationship... the lady side tease me, then tease me some more.. then finally tease me..
BOOM WE GET MARRIED...

 

My words has never been that bad... all exciting stories has never been that bad... I read 1000s of stories and haven't yet read one that bad...

 

But I did and could read and get more excited by that than your other writings... yes your other writing not as exciting as that was... because that was u trying to reach me as one of your readers.. other words u tried to actually reach me...it was short and to point.. with no bullshit writer run around

 

Okay. It seems we're not going to agree. I won't bother you with my questions or explanations any more.

 

uh huh I saw that you just attacked what I said you never answered what I asked, I never said anything bad to you yet YOU attacked me. As I said only the pedo and illegal age writers have been run off that isn't a sex story that stuff is just sick

 

Let me say this again... it's not about type of stories or even the words u use...
Your stories has no sex build up... it like they are written for some other site and sex is thrown in at the bottom... if the story has sex in it... then most of u guys stories is about plot build up or character build up.. again no sex build up. . Over 3/4 of your very long boring stories has nothing to do with sex.. again so boring we stop reading it.. this is a sex site, we want sex... point blank.. if u ever going to get votes again, first u must give us exciting sex stories.. not bullshit 3/4 of the story.. not bullshit us with character plots... only by giving us what we came to this site for, a exciting sex story...
Call me perverted if u want... why in the hell are u here then... u sure as hell didn't come here to read fucking stories about playing with fucking drones... I know I fucking didnt... u a fucking retard if u think I going to vote for a drone story on a sex story site...
U want us to actually read and vote for your stories give me what I came here for... like u all have said there's plenty of exciting sex stories here... so why in the hell are we stupid enough to click on a CAW story because we know that they are fucking boring and hardly anything what we came to this site for...
Again change the stories.. put exciting sex in them.. tease us from the beginning...
Then and only then will u get us the readers to read and vote... I promise u if u can get 1 of us readers to read your entire story then he will vote for that story... yes that is that simple... all u have to do is get the readers to read your entire story...
Again u are not going to get us reader to read a bullshit run around plot or a bullshit character run around... u will have to tease us though out the story and boom knock us for a loop.. if a writer can do that in every contest I promise you he/she will win every contest with a huge margin.. trust me none of you elite writers here has the talent to excite us readers... it's going to take a new fresh writer run your bullshit writing skill off the contest... again u guys really suck ass at writing exciting sex stories...

 

Honestly more like rated r bullshit... trust me I read your shit, it more a run around to no where... nothing exciting with it when everyone who read your stories stay limp from the start and can't completely read the story... u guys keep saying it's all about nasty facials, or perverted sex... no it not about that... it's all about teasing the reader.. then keeping the reader excited...u guys spend more time explaining other irrelevant bullshit than going after our excitement... who the fuck cares Alice was walking to the store when she stop by the corner church and Matt, Ken, Jim, John, Lisa, and Kim go inside... as she walk past Kevin said hey..
We want Alice at the store, fuck all the other writer run around bullshit... this is not pg13 novel site.. or a set of worldwide dictionaries... a good sex story take u straight to a tease and keeps u excited... it don't have to be messy or perverted.. but has to be exciting sexually... come on u can't be that stupid and at the same time believe u are a good writer and can't understand the meaning of the words tease, exciting, and sex...

 

If u can't understand the meaning of these 3 words tease, exciting, and sex u are way out of place as a sex stories writer...probably out of touch in your marriage and/or relationship too...

 

Let me say one more thing... Again this is a x-rated sex stories site... Same as the Penthouse sex stories books...Which I do also buy.. CAW is a sex stories contest.. How in the hell can a story get posted there but would never get consider for Penthouse..
CAW29 was a total embarrassment to the sex stories industry.. Drone won a sex stories contest... No wonder u can't buy a reader and/or voter...

 

Okay, now I KNOW you don't have a clue what you're talking about. "Drone" didn't win. If you're going to criticize, at least get some of your facts straight.

I've tried to be nice and reasonable, which you even acknowledged, but I'm done with this pointless discussion.

 

I know it didn't win it finish 2nd... the winner isn't here or acting like a spoiled bitch... I refuse to fight with someone not here calling me a idiot... u wrote drone... shouldn't even been able to be posted on a sex site contest...it's not a sex story... honestly speaking the winner isn't either so don't feel bad... both 1st and 2nd place doesn't belong on the site...a total embarrassment to the sex story industry... but I refuse to call out someone until they first call me out...

 

I wouldn't classified any of the posted CAW stories a sex story... honestly they more between book and a chapter, finally boring as can be... I have never seen shit like that inside sex stories books... again total embarrassment to the sex stories industry...

 

If u guys had to make a living from writing sex stories... I'm sorry to say u guys would fucking starve...hell I don't even think u could afford to pay just the fucking power bill for a well...yes they are that bad...it's a shame someone with no English skills out do u guys when it comes to excitement...

 

Honestly u really want to see where u guys fucking up... Do yourself a favor and walk inside a adult book store.. spend 5 or so dollars on a sex stories book... pick any story and read it... I promise u would cry to yourself when u even consider calling yourself a sex story writer...

 

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Troll is what u guys been doing the last few years. ... lol as I said above your stories suck, and u continued to trash the exciting stories... with that said who actually the troll here...

 

Let's be honest here... actually I think I been nice to u guys... all I said is your stories are boring and they suck... to be truthful your stories r far worst than that...then u call me a troll but ever since this site started u guys go around and say our English suck.. hell I would rather have bad English skills and write a exciting story.. than what u guys fucking write... honestly every story is a total embarrassment to the sex stories industry... not even .0001% exciting.. no where near the meaning of the words sex stories... as I said before this is a sex stories site, get it together or please move on somewhere else... there's tons of site where 100s of people would enjoy your bullshit stories...sorry to repeat this over and over u stories are not being enjoyed here.. voting numbers prove this.. only retarded writers voting...again your stories are far worst than boring...