Forum: Sex Stories
02-21-2010, 11:07 AM
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Forum: Sex Stories
01-29-2010, 12:21 PM
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Forum: Sex Stories
01-29-2010, 12:10 PM
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Forum: Sex Stories
01-21-2010, 01:51 PM
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Forum: Sex Stories
01-16-2010, 11:56 PM
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Forum: Sex Stories
01-13-2010, 04:59 AM
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Forum: Sex Stories
01-12-2010, 08:12 AM
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Views: 19,685
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Forum: Sex Stories
01-12-2010, 03:25 AM
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Forum: Sex Stories
01-11-2010, 08:47 AM
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violence and abuse is sick >:( it spoils sex
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violence and abuse is sick >:( it spoils sex
@donb - I do agree with what you say but there are some pts i'm sure I have stated right. Maybe you dont want to follow my style of adding "resistance"
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Forum: Sex Stories
01-11-2010, 01:37 AM
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Forum: Sex Stories
01-11-2010, 01:35 AM
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Views: 19,685
nono. My problem is not with that part. What I...
nono. My problem is not with that part. What I think you should do is add a little resistance to your story. What I mean is that you should not make it so easy for the protagonist. I enjoyed the...
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Forum: Sex Stories
01-10-2010, 08:15 AM
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Replies: 82
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Jackass, saw your post and decided to come here...
Jackass, saw your post and decided to come here for a look. Its a good story, good start description, use of vivid descriptions. Unfortunately I'd like to nit pick at the plot. Is it ok? In case you...
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Forum: Sexuality
01-08-2010, 01:06 PM
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Views: 3,337
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Forum: Sex Stories
01-08-2010, 12:52 PM
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Forum: Sexuality
01-07-2010, 08:47 AM
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Replies: 91
Views: 3,547
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Forum: Sex Stories
01-07-2010, 07:38 AM
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Forum: Sex Stories
01-07-2010, 06:57 AM
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Critical Advice.
Alright, I'm starting this thread in the hope of helping ppl write better stories. So here's my idea. I'm going to list some things that I feel would help improve a sex story and I hope you guys...
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Forum: Sexuality
12-26-2009, 05:18 AM
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Forum: Sexuality
12-23-2009, 08:44 AM
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I think many ppl are still missing the point....
I think many ppl are still missing the point. This guy already said he DIDNT AND DOESNT want to have sex now. He just likes the girl. I don't see anything wrong with that. I think love matured from...
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Forum: Sexuality
12-22-2009, 03:11 AM
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Forum: Sexuality
12-20-2009, 09:28 AM
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Replies: 4
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Amateurs
Wat makes a blowjob amateur? Wat's the diff between a good and bad. Always hear about it, never understood. I believe it was how a dick is sucked right?
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Forum: Sex Stories
12-08-2009, 03:14 PM
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Forum: Sexuality
12-06-2009, 01:41 PM
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Views: 2,918
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Forum: Sex Stories
12-06-2009, 12:46 AM
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Replies: 2,595
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At jackass. I am very sorry if i had insulted...
At jackass. I am very sorry if i had insulted you. I had no malice intended in my content. I was just trying to say that you ought to try different varieties since your good writing can make good...
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Forum: Sex Stories
12-03-2009, 11:54 PM
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Replies: 45
Views: 1,454
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