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    If you found your way here from the story's site, you know why you are here. If you just stumbled in here, then I created this thread to provide a place for comments on the new chapters of My Neighbor's Incest.


    Feel free to comment on any of the chapters here while the system is not working. This is your last chance to give me input to the story. I am once again going to have to leave for a period of time. Because I don't know how long I will be gone, I am going to end this story before I go.


    The story will end on the story side, in line with the way the story has been going. However, there is a real life ending that I will most likely stick at the end of this thread when the story finishes.


    Let me take another opportunity to thank all of you who have contributed to this story by commenting, encouraging and correcting. It is obvious to anyone who starts at chapter one, that the quality has improved along the way. I credit that to all of you who have made constructive criticism, and been patient along the way. To the rest of you, thank you for reading.


    I strive to make every chapter better, and I hope you will not be disappointed with these last chapters as I hurry through them to finish before I go off-line.
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    I think ur story is awesome and that u should not end it yet.
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    I love the stories, like ive said before I check multiple times a day to see if you posted a new chapter

    I loved the first few chapters the most however... I liked some of the stuff they did sexually, and just the thought of them starting a sexual adventure. I think i started reading when you had 4 chapters out...

    I dont expect you to change what your writing for me, I know others like how they are now, I love the stories regardless! Keep them coming
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    I think the stories are great! I got hooked when you had already posted about 9 chapters and started checking daily to see if any new chapters have been posted. I know all good things must come to an end eventually, but I hate to see this story end, but I also know it must. While I will be happy to read what new chapters you will post to it I will also be sad knowing it is winding up. I hope you can get things aranged to where you can start new story lines, a writer as good as you should continue writing.
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    This was a great chapter. Joe is getting more entangled with 2 women and he can't choose which one he wants i still favor him and susan. even though i'm coming around to joe and jasmin as a couple. I still want to know what susan did to get grounded and what she did at school why wont u tell me
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    Quote Originally Posted by darkcloud75 View Post
    This was a great chapter. Joe is getting more entangled with 2 women and he can't choose which one he wants i still favor him and susan. even though i'm coming around to joe and jasmin as a couple. I still want to know what susan did to get grounded and what she did at school why wont u tell me
    I might. But it's not in XIII which just has to be proofread and posted. Maybe she failed math
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    Not only does this story have a sexual plot..it has a plot. I spent most of a day reading all of the stories. Awesome..even when I was interupted for several hours before I could finish them, it remained on my mind wondering what was going to happen next. I can't wait for the rest.
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    i know all well that she didn't fail math she only failed math cause she wanted to spend time with joe and then she magically got an a in math
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    Quote Originally Posted by longbow1212 View Post
    Not only does this story have a sexual plot..it has a plot. I spent most of a day reading all of the stories. Awesome..even when I was interupted for several hours before I could finish them, it remained on my mind wondering what was going to happen next. I can't wait for the rest.
    Thank you that means a lot to me. I know the writers on this site are supposed to write for themselves and not care about the voting and comments. Thick skin as some have said. But, I personally, wouldn't bother spending hours working on these stories if someone wasn't enjoying them. And, if no one says so, how would I know. Thank you for saying so.

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    i know all well that she didn't fail math she only failed math cause she wanted to spend time with joe and then she magically got an a in math
    You my friend are an excellent study of Susan's ways. What you supposed about her is correct. I will tell you in the last chapter what happened. I have to finish this week. After next week I will have no access to my computer for a while.
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    well i should know your stories very well after all i have read them multiple times each so i should know how susan acts, and for my reason why i think she is grounded for i think she did something at school with another boy or girl and she got caught and she doesn't want joe to know about it
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    Quote Originally Posted by darkcloud75 View Post
    well i should know your stories very well after all i have read them multiple times each so i should know how susan acts, and for my reason why i think she is grounded for i think she did something at school with another boy or girl and she got caught and she doesn't want joe to know about it
    You might be on to something, but she might have also done something at Mary's house that night before Joe's bike ride with Jasmin?? Hum, I wonder?
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    quit doing that u are making me want to see what happens next and to know what susan did to get grounded it just driving me crazy
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    Don't stop writting your story, I spent most of Saturday reading it and part of today, the story is excellent their sexcapades are rather arousing.
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    you know my views from PM's. This story should get an award if we had any.

    How about: EMPRESS LAINIE'S AWARD FOR STORY OF THE YEAR?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Empress Lainie View Post
    you know my views from PM's. This story should get an award if we had any.

    How about: EMPRESS LAINIE'S AWARD FOR STORY OF THE YEAR?

    Consider it granted.
    I humbly accept the honor.
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    Does this thread bode of things to come? I know there are other factors involved having to come to the forum and find my thread, but still. Are people too shy? Do people not want to come to the forum to make a comment? Or, is the fact that most comments are by "READER" a sign that when login is required to make comments, many will not make comments anymore?

    Just wondering.
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    Personally I love the entire series, I just don't like commenting much in general. I don't know why that is, but meh. But so you know, I would love to see the story continue, it is the best erotic story I have ever read.
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    I think you have hit on it. Most who comment want to be cloaked in anonimoty. Yes it is bode, not bote. I also misspell words - quite often. You know how I feel about your stories, so comments are superfluous. Peace to you.

    (By the way, I know the correct spelling is not 'anonimoty', but I can't think of the correct spelling.)
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    these are very sweet stories..
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    Sweet stories indeed
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    Quote Originally Posted by donb9033 View Post
    I think you have hit on it. Most who comment want to be cloaked in anonimoty. Yes it is bode, not bote. I also misspell words - quite often. You know how I feel about your stories, so comments are superfluous. Peace to you.
    (By the way, I know the correct spelling is not 'anonimoty', but I can't think of the correct spelling.)
    That is a shame. I hope our requested changes don't hurt the comments.


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    these are very sweet stories..
    Thank you.

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    Sweet stories indeed
    Thank you!
    Next chapter should be visible today, or tomorrow at the lastest. The final chapter will come this week.
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    I'm again up to chapter X and loving them even more. I still cannot believe Joe is really in love with Jasmin. I think it is what we used to refer to as 'Cunt Struck' - it's only the sex. His true love is Susan. Just my opinion. Peace to you.
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    wat a amazing chapter 18 was really good i'm glad joe didn't do it with cindy. i thought joe was going to get a letter from susan about why she was grounded or is that the next and the last chapter
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    keep the stories coming they are great
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    honestly bistander this story has been extremelyyy confusing, but your tying ends and such and its finally fulfilling my desire for answers and now im really looking forward to the choice that has to be made in the 'finale'. The writing is amazing and the story is even better. I am really looking forward to the ending of everything!
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    Great story man they just keep getting better and better.
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    Quote Originally Posted by hotty520 View Post
    honestly bistander this story has been extremelyyy confusing, but your tying ends and such and its finally fulfilling my desire for answers and now im really looking forward to the choice that has to be made in the 'finale'. The writing is amazing and the story is even better. I am really looking forward to the ending of everything!
    Honestly, you are correct, it was getting pretty confusing. Except, if you read it all the way through without having to wait on me to get to the next chapter. These things take time when you write it piece by piece. I actually have to go back and reread stuff some times so I know what happened already
    The finale is just about done. I'd like to come back one day and take these characters through high school, but I don't think I'll be back intime to do that. So, and ending is coming in the next few days. It will not be as good as it could be, but it will be better than me running out of time and just ending it without an ending.
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    Quote Originally Posted by BiStander View Post
    Honestly, you are correct, it was getting pretty confusing. Except, if you read it all the way through without having to wait on me to get to the next chapter. These things take time when you write it piece by piece. I actually have to go back and reread stuff some times so I know what happened already
    The finale is just about done. I'd like to come back one day and take these characters through high school, but I don't think I'll be back intime to do that. So, and ending is coming in the next few days. It will not be as good as it could be, but it will be better than me running out of time and just ending it without an ending.
    So are you ever coming back our is this it for your stories. I hope you come back
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    Quote Originally Posted by Shiftless Void View Post
    So are you ever coming back our is this it for your stories. I hope you come back
    I hope to come back one day. I just don't know if it will be months or years.
    If I come back I'll be a better writer by then and maybe I'll even have a whole story written at one time.
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    He's not gonna come back??so it means there is no stries?****
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    Quote Originally Posted by BiStander View Post
    I hope to come back one day. I just don't know if it will be months or years.
    If I come back I'll be a better writer by then and maybe I'll even have a whole story written at one time.
    Alright man good luck on whatever you end up doing and I hope to read more of your stories one day.
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    Quote Originally Posted by BiStander View Post
    I hope to come back one day. I just don't know if it will be months or years.
    If I come back I'll be a better writer by then and maybe I'll even have a whole story written at one time.
    well i hope whatever is keeping you away from writing on the site won't keep you from writing on your own. that way when you come back (i really hope you do, your one of the best writers in my opinion) you can post it all at once!
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    if there is a way he will continue writing but if not i hope u have luck in what ever u do
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    Default Final chapter

    Last chapter should be visible tomorrow or Sat.

    I wonder what the reduction in the hits to the stories has been through this down time? I bet it's huge and takes time to come back.
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    I hate for it to come to and end, I don't know what you do but you may have misssed your calling! Story has been wonderful.
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    don't stop with the story line
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    its not that like he wants to end the series but it has to be done if he could continue he would
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    Quote Originally Posted by darkcloud75 View Post
    its not that like he wants to end the series but it has to be done if he could continue he would
    Thank you sir, you are so correct.

    I will be packing my bags Tue and will make my final comment on that late afternoon. It has been great and I hope to return before expected, but I can not make any promises. During the summer I expected to be gone for two to three weeks and I was gone for 70 days. So, expect to not see me for a long time and maybe I'll come back early.

    I thought by now the final chapter would be up, but I see it's not. Hopefully tonight.
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    10 out of 10 on the last chapter will post what i think about it at a later time
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    Great ending to the story man, it's probably best that we don't find out what Susan did in school. Maybe when you come back you can pick up the story where you left off. But if you never come back just know that you've written a truly great story that I will never forget.
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