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    Default A Pirates Life For Me [Part 2] (Kidnapping, Rape, Hardcore, Oral, Anal)

    Shivering in the cold damp brig the throbbing in her head and the pain in her heart had caused Lillith to pass out again. There was no way to tell how much time had passed since she had been kidnapped, nor for how long she as unconscious for this time. It wasnít until she heard the melodic jingle of keys and the eerie creak of the cell door being opened that finally roused her from her dreamless slumber. "Vivian?" She whispered into the darkness, wishing that it was her lover coming to rescue her, but Lillith knew well enough that Vivian was dead and was never coming back for her. "Vivian?" A gruff mans voice rang out from the darkness. "That was that dyke cunt that killed herself, donít you remember?" Said a second voice that was passing across the damp room to the other side of the wall. With a strike of a match the second man had flooded the cell with a dim light as he lit a lantern mounted on the wall. Then Lillith immediately recognized these two as the pirates who tried to take Vivian.

    "Aye! I remember now!" The first man went on once more. "She was a tight ride, that one. Begged us take her instead of you. So we took her, and we took her hard." He went on. Lillith's stomach churned in anger and despair at the same time. Images flashed across her mind of Vivian being taken by these pirates in a brutally intimate way. Vivian once told Lillith how disgusted she was by a man's cock, and in her final moments of life she had been forced to take the dirty dick of a scoundrel pirate tearing in and our of her. A tear streamed down Lillith's face at these thoughts. Her mind was jolted back to the present when the first pirate began to speak once more. "Then without warning the cunt shot herself. Stupid bitch got blood all over my best boots!" He growled these words in irritation. All the while the second pirate was making his way toward Lillith. He ripped open her sleeping robe in one shred and molested the pale skinned captive with his eyes. "Shut up fool! You want the captain to find us?" He growled back in a hushed tone.

    "Aye, you fools wouldnít want the captain to find you with your grubby hands on his newest treasure now would ye?" Came a third voice commanding from the darkness at the far end of the brig. By the way the two men in Lillith's cell stood at attention and stopped everything they were doing she could figure at once that this man must be the captain. She took this moment to scramble to cover herself up. "C-Captain!" The first pirate spoke up in surprise, but didnít dare speak more as he stood shaking in his Vivian blood stained boots. "W-we beg your indulgences Captain. We was just warming her up a bit for ye is all." Said the second pirate next to Lillith. The captain came from the shadows and stood at the door to her cell and glowered down at his two underlings. "It be true we have not seen a woman aboard this ship in many moons. But I promise ye, soon enough you may all have a taste of this treasure." The captain than looked down at poor shivering Lillth before giving an order. "Bring her to my quarters," He said gruffly in a commanding voice before turning and disappearing into the darkness once more.

    The two pirates dragged Lillith from her cell in the brig. "Aint no use struggling!" The first pirate grunted at her. "Aye! Aint too far a girl can get in a ship filled with men out on the open ocean." The second pirate chimed in before they both laughed mocking her misfortune as they gripped her arms and pulled her up onto the ships deck. The two men were right, and any notion of struggling flew from her mind right then and there. It was nighttime, but the moon was full and Lillith was able to make out her surroundings. Indeed, she was on a pirate ship. She could see at least twenty other men milling around the decks doing various things. Four were engrossed in a game of gambling dice; a few others were swabbing the deck or pulling on the lines connected to the sails. Her head flailed around looking for any sign of escape, but not even a spit of land was visible on the horizons.

    It was at this time she finally got a good look at the two men who had been her captors. The first pirate was a tall skinny man with long hair that straggled across his shoulders and down his back and sickly brown eyes with a terrible looking scar running from his left eye and down his cheek. Lillith would forever know this man as Scar. The other was a shorter more portly man with a round belly. His hair was shorter, straggling only to about his ears and dirty bald spot at the crown on his head. His eyes were a startling blue color, but they were surrounded by a sickly yellow color where the whites of his eyes should be, and rim of skin around his eyes were puffy and raw like uncooked meat. Due to his sheer size and sickly raw look of his eyes Lillith would dub this man Meat. These two obviously had some standing with the captain and Meat was definitely the leader of this filthy pirate duo.

    The other pirates on deck began to hoot and holler as Lillith was dragged to the captainís quarters. It wasnít long until she was shoved into an ornate room lit well by burning oil lanterns, the captain sat at a large plush chair at the far end of the room. "'Here's your prize m'Captain." Meat said politely to the man sitting before them as he pushed Lillith down to the floor before him. With a flick of the wrist Meat and Scar hurried from the room at the captains quarters. The captain, who looked to be his late thirties, was a plain looking man in ornate layers of flamboyant clothing. His hair was as black as the night sky, and flowed around his shoulders with various beads and treasures twisted into it. He also donned a long goatee that was adorned with such treasures as well and strangely enough his eyes were as black as his hair. He was a well build man who had obviously been a seadog for a long time. His skin was tanned like leather from being in the sun and salt air for so many years and his body was well toned from the hard physical labor it took to live at sea. If Lillith had been inclined toward men in anyway she may have found him attractive in some manner, but the fact of the matter was she was a lesbian and was disgusted that mans hand had even touched her.

    When the Meat and Scar were gone the Captain just sat there staring down at Lillith as she lay on the floor trembling. "How old are you girl?" He said in a calm yet commanding voice. Lillith didnít answer. The Captain, obviously not used to being defied, grabbed Lillith by the hair and dragged her to her knees. Lillithís face winced in pain as tears once again pooled in her eyes. The Captain leaned down, his face only inches from hers. "It be best if ye are obedient. You mean only one thing to me and it will be the same to me whether you are bruised and beaten or not. Now I shall ask again. How old are you girl?" His breath had a certain bitter smell to it and Lillith could tell he had lost a few teeth; a couple of them had been replaced with gold fillers. "Iím s-sixteen sir." Lillith managed to stammer an answer.

    The Captain released her hair and looked her up and down once more. "Remove your clothes." He commanded in a low voice. When she didnít obey quickly enough he raised a hand and slapped her hard across the face. Her cheek glowed a hot red and the sound of his hand connecting with the soft skin of her cheek echoed within the room. Lillith wouldnít have been surprised if all the other men heard the echo of the slap out on the deck. "I wont ask you again." The Captain said gruffly, anger swelling on his leathery face. A cool tear streamed down Lillithís hot cheek as she slipped her sleep robe from her body and slipped her white cotton knickers from her legs. She stood humiliated and exposed before this man, but was slightly relived when a small smile played across his salt chapped lips indicating he was pleased with what he saw.

    "Now as long as you donít try anything and are obedient I will not hurt you more than I have to." The Captain said looking down at Lillith who nodded in agreement. As much as she didnít want to have even this mans eyes on her she didnít want to be beaten even more. Now that the ground rules had been set the Captain did no hesitate to start what he had sent out to do. His hands found their way to Lillith's hips and ran along the front of her thighs. It didnít take long for his hand to cup the hot hairless patch of skin between her legs. He began to slide his thick index finger along her soft slit. He parted her lips and dipped his fat grubby finger into her folds gently. Lillith shuddered in disgust as this man touched her in the same intimate way that Vivian did only what seemed like a few hours before.

    Lillith winced as the Captain's fat finger pressed against her hymen, his eyes lighting up with lust as he felt that she was still a virgin. "Still intact I see." He said to her with a devilish grin. Lillith averted her gaze to hide from his lustful expression and foul breath. It was true, she had never felt the intimate touch of a man before, she found men to be foul and brutal. The Captain was no exception. He slipped his hand from between her legs, Lillith felt dirty as her body betrayed her allowing her pussy to grow slightly wet with arousal. "Please, let me go. I can give you money, jewels, anything you want." She whimpered as she crouched over on her knees trying to hide her naked body from the Captain.

    The Captain just laughed at her comment. "I have all I want right here girl." He said in a wanting manner. "And you are going to give it to me whether you want to or not." He growled at her obviously getting angry with her insubordination. And before she knew it the Captain had his large hand around the back of her head, his fat fingers tangled within her hair. With his other hand he reached into the folds of his clothing and found his belt. His belt jingled as he undid it and pulled it from his waist, his pants soon falling to the floor. Lillith's eyes widened in shock as she saw the monstrous member in front of her.

    She felt a sickening nausea in the pit of her stomach as she eyed the nine-inch long throbbing cock before her face. Its veins popping from the shaft leading toward the swollen mushroom of a head, with precum already oozing from the tip. The Captain then suddenly gripped her hair within his fingers tighter, causing Lillith to yelp out in pain as her hair felt as if were being ripped from her scalp. He took this opportunity to plunge the first few inches of his throbbing member into the young little mouth. Tears began to well up in the corners of her eyes as he stretched her lips wide around his thick cock. "You better not use any teeth bitch, or else I will rip each one of them out to fuck your toothless mouth!" The Captain growled as he pushed another inch or two into her warm mouth. Lillith had no doubt he would keep his word if she didnít obey him.

    Lillith decided, for her own safety, that she should just do exactly as she is told, no matter how vile she finds it. She tried to open her jaw wider to relieve the pressure that was pushing into her mouth. "That a girl." The Captain cooed as he felt her working to accommodate him. And with that he thrust his hips forward forcing the last few inches of his swollen cock past her lips, into her mouth and down her throat. Lillith gagged, feeling the urge to vomit as he pulled a few inches from her lips and plunged it back into her mouth pushing down her throat. Tears were now streaming feely from her eyes and down her hot cheeks as she breathed feverishly though her nose in order to fill her lungs with the much needed air the Captain was not allowing her to get through her mouth.

    With his hand firmly on the back of her head he began to pick up his pace, going from sliding slowly in and out of her mouth to full on fucking her face. He rammed his dick in and out of her mouth, forcing it past her throat with every thrust. Lillith was trying not cough as he choked her with his cock; strings of saliva drooled from her mouth and dripped from her chin onto the floor. Every so often the Captain would pull his dick from her mouth and Lillith would gasp for as much air as she could before he plunged back between her lips to rape her face.

    The Captain finally pulled completely from her mouth. His growing member had begun to swell within he mouth and pulled from her lips with a pop. Her face was wet with saliva as it continued to string from her chin. She gasped for air as the captain just hovered his fully erect cock before her face. He would give her no time to recuperate from the brutal face fucking she had just received before he gave the next orders. "Now suck it." He said to her commandingly. Lillith just kneeled there still trying to catch her breath. When she didnít immediately do as she was told he raised his hand and slapped her hard across the face, the force actually knocking her over. Her cheek, red from the Captain's strike, throbbed as her hot tears streamed down. "I said suck it wench!" He growled at her pulling her face up once more, her lips just meeting his swelling head.

    Lillith finally parted her lips and leaned her head forward, taking his cock into her mouth. She began to move her head back and fourth sliding her lips along his slick shaft, her tongue wrapped around his throbbing member. She sucked his dick harder not wanting to anger him again and suffer another beating. Then without warning the Captain groaned out a primal guttural growl. He gripped her head with both of his hands and thrust his dick deep into her throat one last time before exploding. Cum filled her mouth, pouring down her throat into her stomach. There was so much cum erupting from him that she couldnít hold it all and the white sticky cum dripped from the corners of her mouth. As the Captain slid himself from her mouth more cum came pouring out with it, dripping down her saliva soaked chin, down her neck and chest and pooling on the floor below her. She couldnít help but cough on all the cum as she was granted the privilege to breathe once more.

    The Captain panted heavily from his massive release, but he was far from done yet. As he peered down at the gasping red haired girl laying naked with a face full of cum his cock was soon raging with another erection. He reached down and wrapped one of his own large hands around his shaft and pumped it up and down slowly, jacking himself and preparing for his next sexual endeavor. "Get up." He ordered gruffly. Lillith scrambled to her feet as fast as she could, knowing that if she didnít the Captain would not hesitate to add another bruise to the collection she was already gathering since her capture.
    He lead her over to a large wooden treasure chest near the wall and pushed her harshly down so that she lay across the curve of its lid on her stomach.

    The Captain positioned herself between Lillithís knees, spreading her legs apart. Lillith trembled in fear knowing he was preparing to take her precious virginity. But she wasnít prepared for what was actually to come next. She felt the Captain lean down and press his tongue against her tiny puckered asshole. She whimpered as he slipped the tip of his tongue into her, lubricating her tight hole well his saliva. He stood up once more and leaned over onto her back and whispered into her ear. 'This is going to hurt love." He said menacingly as he worked his thumb into her asshole sinking some of his saliva deeper into her pucker to increase lubrication.

    He then popped his thumb from her ass and placed the tip of his cock against her tight little puckered entrance. "Oh God please no!" She screamed out beggingly as she realized that he had the full intention of fucking her virginal asshole next. The Captain just laughed as he forced the first few inches of his massive cock into her tiny untouched ass. Lillith felt a horrible discomfort as she squeezed his thick member slowly into backhole. Then without warning he pulled out a few inches and plunged himself as hard as he could deep into her bowels. Lillith let out terrible scream of agony as he ripped mercilessly into her rear. The Captain groaned like an animal as he pumped his dick slowly in and out of her puckered hole, stretching it to the limit.

    The tightness of he asshole gripping around his cock as he raped her ass was more than he could bear, and it didnít take long for him to build up an orgasm again. He picked up the pace, ramming himself harder into her bowels as Lillith just cried out in agonizing pain as the Captain ripped mercilessly into her tiny asshole. Before long the Captain was groaning out once more and shot another massive load of hot sticky cum, this time deep into her bowels. Lillith could feel her entire backside full with the Captains seed, knowing she couldnít do anything but cry.

    Once again the Captain panted as he pulled his enormous member from her now gaping asshole, cum pouring out after he pulled it free with a sickening pop. He was almost spent, but he was sure to save up enough energy left to rape her delicious pussy. He leaned down and slid his slimy tongue along her virginal slit as he jacked his cock off again to regain his erection once again. He slipped his tongue along her clit and dipped it gently into her tiny fuckhole, lubricating her substancially with his own saliva. Lillith was beyond protesting by this point, she just laid limp over the wooden trunk trembling with tears streaming down her face.

    The Captain once again stood up, and with one hand on Lillith's back and one on his cock he positioned the head of dick at her wet little entrance. He closed his eyes as she pushed the head of his cock past her lips and into her tight little pussy only a few moments. He took it slow, being careful to find but not rupture her precious hymen. He pushed a little further before he was greeted with the resistance of her cherry. Lillith whimpered as she felt the pressure of his massive member pushing gently against her hymen, but that gentleness wouldnít last for long. The Captain gripped Lillith's hips hard with his hands as he pulled back slightly. Then suddenly with a savage groan he thrust his hips forward as hard as he could, ripping through her hymen violently and plunging himself to hilt in one brutal stroke.

    Lillith screamed out a blood-curdling scream of agony, warm blood from her destroyed virginity dripped down her inner thighs. "God yes!" The Captain growled out in pure pleasure as he ravaged her sweet little pussy. He nearly pulled out of her before thrusting his hips forward and tearing into her once again brutally. He repeated this a few more times, burying himself deep within her womb ruthlessly. Lillith cried out in pain with each thrust, her face saturated in her own tears and saliva, her hair matted down with cum and sweat.

    The Captain then began to simply fuck her, in and out, mercilessly. Ramming his massive cock deep into her womb over and over again. Her tightness gripping against his swollen member Lillith's body betrayed her fear, hatred, and disgust by lubricating his brutal fucking with her own juices. She couldnít help it, as much as she just wanted it all to stop the stimulation in her now tainted vagina was building up. As the Captain continued to rip hard into her, ravaging her little fuckhole, she was unwillingly building into an orgasm of her own. The walls of her battered pussy began to contract as spasms shot through her loins. Her juices flowed freely out her pussy around the Captain's invading member as her body was wracked with an intense orgasm.

    That was enough to send the Captain over the edge. Feeling the walls of her of sweet little fuckhole contract tightly around his cock as he raped her hard and mercilessly drove him to yet another orgasm. Once again the Captain groaned out, louder than before, a long guttural groan as he thrust his hips forward as hard as he could to bury himself as deep as he could into Lillith's womb. Loads of the Captain's hot seed shot from his cock and filled Lillith's womb. She cried out as she felt her stomach being pumped with cum.

    Finally, the Captain stood back and slid his cock out of her used pussy with ease. Her once untouched tight vagina was now a raw gaping hole dripping with cum and blood. Her inner thighs were caked with a mixture of the Captains dripping seed and blood from her torn innocence. . Her mouth, ass and pussy had been brutally raped, her face was bruised from where the Captain had hit her, and she was exhausted from the abuse and the struggle. The Captain was finally spent. He stood over Lillith's used body, he pet her dirty hair with a strange kindness before Lillith passed out, still spread upon the wooden treasure trunk.

    To be continued....
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    Excellent! Looking forward to another installment.
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    Thank you very much. Ill try to get to work on part three soon enough ^^ I think this one is my best story yet. I had criticism on my others that my sex scenes were too short so I hope this is a valid improvement on that.

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    I really enjoyed this one. I may be biased, but I thought the anal bit was especially good. Obviously, there are a few typos and grammatical errors, which can't entirely be avoided. The story itself, as a whole, is good, and my main criticism is simply the syntax. Bad syntax can break and really great story.

    As just one example, the paragraphs need to be broken up a little differently. For instance, I noticed that in a single paragraph (3rd paragraph in, actually), three separate people speak. When a new person speaks, always start a new paragraph. Otherwise, the dialogue can get confusing. The easiest way to learn syntax is to pick up a book of an author you enjoy and just look over a page or two of it to get the gist of proper syntax.

    Beyond that kind of stuff, it was well done, with good descriptions that perked my dick up once or twice . I'll certainly be waiting for part 3.

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    If things like mild grammer errors and syntax are my only really problems than I am content lol. Thank you so much for your comments Chagrin, I really like constructive criticim like that. Anyway, I shall work to improve on the syntax and hopefully part three will be even better! <3

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    Well, i must say that was a delightful treat. I had no problems with it other than evey time I heard the word Captain, i kept thinking of Pirates of the Carribean's Balbosa and I got real disturbed...

    But that's just a personal thing. It was a pretty good story. can't wait fr the 3rd. Just whatever you do, don't sacrifice quality for quantity. In other words, don't keep cranking out stories just cause people want you to, crank em out cause you have a passion to write them. After all, stories where the writer has passion are the best.
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    Thank you very much for comments and encouragement. I honestly wasnt thinking about Pirates of the Caribbean when I wrote this, I just thought this environment would be interesting to write about considering most people write in modern times and such. Aslo I would have given the Captain an actual name, but I wanted Lillith to keep detached from her surroundings by not knowing their real names, and perhaps give the reader a feel for what its like to be in her world where she is just trying to adapt at this point.

    And dont worry about the quality/ quantity thing. I have a whole brain ful of ideas and plot furthering events stored up. And my thing is, if I dont feel like writing I wont lol, because I know it will be crap if I am doing something I dont want to do.

    So keep a weathered eye on the horizon mate!

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    I would love some more feedback on my story <3

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