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  • Annabeth (Percy's GF & Daughter of Athena)

    9 90.00%
  • Katie Gardner (Daughter of Demeter)

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  • Lou Ellen (Daughter of Hecate)

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  • Pollux (Son of Dionysus)

    0 0%
  • Travis or Conner Stoll (Sons of Hermes)

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  • Will Solace (Son of Apollo)

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  • Nico di Angleo (Son of Hades)

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    Post Percy Jackson & the Olympians: The Camp Whores - Chapter 1: Clarisse

    Intro: "I'm in love with this series,written by Rick Riordan,which about a kid named Percy Jackson who finds out that he's the son of the Greek God Poseidon.I was inspired to do this because I got bored 8P. P.S. this is my first story so,please, if you find any mistakes or whatever that needs fixing up, PM me or something Thnx!"

    Chapter 1
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    I woke up suddenly to Tyson,my half-brother Cyclops, snoring in the bunk above me...,the big guy usually snores loud enough to wake me up. I couldn't go back to sleep. I kept on thinking about my Girlfriend, Annabeth. She's a daughter of Athena. Me,her & my best friend who's a Satyr named Grover went on a whole bunch of Quests. All of them involving my old enemy Luke,who was a son of Hermes,he turned on me years ago. The Titan Lord of Time Kronos turned him,and eventually took over his body. Luke sacraficed himself to kill Kronos last month.

    Usually I masturbate to Annabeth as we are both virgins,and once in a while one the of the Aphrodite girls. And strangly to Clarisse,who's a Daughter of Ares. So,I got up out of bed, got dressed & quickly grabbed my magic sword, Riptide & put it into into my pocket. I went to the Sword Arena to practice a bit until breakfast was ready. After about haIf an hour I heard someone coming to the Arena. It was just Clarisse. "What are you doing up Percy?" She asked. "Tyson woke me up with his snoring,couldn't go back to sleep so I came out here" I replied. "Oh,I see." she replied back.


    She started hacking at a few dummies with me, then after a while, we were both drenched in sweat. We stopped to relax a bit. Clarisse asked me if I missed Beckendorf,a Demigod who was the Son of Hephaestus,who died during the Titan War last month. "Of course I do,I'm guessing you really miss Silena?" I replied. "Yea...it's kind of strange not having her around anymore" she replied. Then she started to sniffle & cry,so I gave her a hug which was pretty awkward for me because we don't usually socialize like this. She bawled her eyes out then she stopped after a while. Then she did something I wasn't expecting. She kissed me right on the lips. "What the Hades are you doing Clarisse?!" I yelped. "Oh gods,I'm sorry Percy, I -I- don't know what got over me" she stammered. "You know I have a girlfriend! plus,you have a boyfriend!" I replied back. In my mind, I did kind of like it,even though we were both with someone. I slowly kissed her back. It was a nice feeling. Her nice warm mouth in mine. We kept raping eachothers mouths with our tounges for at least 5 minutes,then she took off her shirt. She had nice big breasts,plus she lost quite a bit of weight from excersise. She put one of my hands on her breast. "Do you like it?" she teased. "uuh....uhm..." that was all I could get out. I sucked on her nice round beautiful nipples. "mmm...oh yea Percy...ohhh...."Then she pulled down my shorts & boxers to reveal my hard cock. "mmm....I want a taste of that" so she put my dick in her mouth...I thought I was gonna cum right there...but I held my load in. She kept on sucking & slurping,then after a while I blew my load in her throat,Clarrise swallowing it all. 'mmm....sweet" she teased. Then she took off her jeans & pantes to show off her shaven pussy. "Go ahead Percy,eat me out...I know you want to..." So I ate her out. Her Puss was amazing...she was absolutly wet! "mmmm.....oooh....ahhh....oh fuck....I'm gonna cum!!" She released her pussy juices all over my mouth. "oh gods... that was amazing Clarrise!" "maybe we could do that some oher time" She replied with a wink.we both got dressed & then the Conch horn for breakfast went.

    Chapter 2 coming soon...and character Ideas... choose who Percy should get lucky with next...

    Annabeth (Percy's Girlfriend)
    Kate Gardner (Daughter of Demeter)
    Lou Ellen (Daughter of Hecate)

    It can be a guy too but it'll be awkward for me to write it lol :P

    Nico (Son of Hades)
    Conner Stoll or Travis Stoll (Bro's & Sons of Hermes)
    Malcom (Son of Athena)
    Pollux (A son of Dionysus)
    Will Solace (Son of Apollo)
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    Percy Jackson & the Olympians - weren't they a Motown group in the 60's?
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    It's a 5-book series by Rick Riordan??
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    Needs work... a lot of work. What I didn't like and really didn't care for about the Movie was that the Pantheon was so very limited...

    But there was also quite a bit of fun to be had there I mean where else can you have a girl (Aphrodite) spawned from the package of the father of the gods (Cronos), which begs the question is Aphrodite a first teir godess or a second teir godess. You should really read up on the myths a bit more before you play.

    Your story... needs an arc before you can call it a story otherwise it's just a sex scene, you have a story arc and then you sprinkle it with sex.

    And somehow you need to get Bacchus in there to twist the knife...
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    love this book series, but to be frank is this just fanfiction there are other places for this. and also, Clarisse would sooner impale Percy on her spear then suck on his spear. They may have an understanding after the war, but hes loyal to Annabeth. sorry, just dont like this.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Valhurst View Post
    love this book series, but to be frank is this just fanfiction there are other places for this. and also, Clarisse would sooner impale Percy on her spear then suck on his spear. They may have an understanding after the war, but hes loyal to Annabeth. sorry, just dont like this.
    Then why read it???
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    Quote Originally Posted by crackedjaguar@hotmail.com View Post
    Needs work... a lot of work. What I didn't like and really didn't care for about the Movie was that the Pantheon was so very limited...

    But there was also quite a bit of fun to be had there I mean where else can you have a girl (Aphrodite) spawned from the package of the father of the gods (Cronos), which begs the question is Aphrodite a first teir godess or a second teir godess. You should really read up on the myths a bit more before you play.

    Your story... needs an arc before you can call it a story otherwise it's just a sex scene, you have a story arc and then you sprinkle it with sex.

    And somehow you need to get Bacchus in there to twist the knife...


    I know how Aphrodite was born thank you very much.....& Bacchus is Dionysus's Roman Form...... & thnx for some Info
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    Quote Originally Posted by LOSTxPROPHIT View Post
    I know how Aphrodite was born thank you very much.....& Bacchus is Dionysus's Roman Form...... & thnx for some Info
    Wasn't Implying that you didn't know how Aphrodite was born... was using it as an example of the crazy ass shit you could possibly get away with... I was just attempting to help you with your story telling not trying to grab your ass and gang rape you.
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    Quote Originally Posted by crackedjaguar@hotmail.com View Post
    Wasn't Implying that you didn't know how Aphrodite was born... was using it as an example of the crazy ass shit you could possibly get away with... I was just attempting to help you with your story telling not trying to grab your ass and gang rape you.
    uhh...right...well thnx lol :P
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    Quote Originally Posted by crackedjaguar@hotmail.com View Post
    trying to grab your ass and gang rape you.
    Maybe you could work that idea into a chapter down the road. After all, you have Nico di Angelo in your cast of characters. Bet he's got some friends.

    CJ is right. You need to have a plot line to call it a story. This is a vignette, which is not a bad thing, but slow down, flesh it out, and THEN it will be a story. Don't forget to have fun while you do it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by wantsomefun View Post
    Maybe you could work that idea into a chapter down the road. After all, you have Nico di Angelo in your cast of characters. Bet he's got some friends.

    CJ is right. You need to have a plot line to call it a story. This is a vignette, which is not a bad thing, but slow down, flesh it out, and THEN it will be a story. Don't forget to have fun while you do it.
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    I HAVE DONE A RE-WRITE/RE-DO OF THIS STORY!
    I added:

    A Prologue

    More Detail

    More steamy,sex parts

    I am still going to have Annabeth in the 2nd Chapter with a steamy surprise or two! ;-3
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    kool change the dress code at camp half blood too
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    Quote Originally Posted by LOSTxPROPHIT View Post
    I HAVE DONE A RE-WRITE/RE-DO OF THIS STORY!
    I added:

    A Prologue

    More Detail

    More steamy,sex parts

    I am still going to have Annabeth in the 2nd Chapter with a steamy surprise or two! ;-3
    Is Clarisse still getting impaled? I ask merely for information.
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    Quote Originally Posted by clarise View Post
    Is Clarisse still getting impaled? I ask merely for information.


    What do u mean by impaled? Impaled as in Fucked or as in Impaled with a Spear?? lol


    & I will have her have LESBO SEX with Annabeth which will turn into a Threesome
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    Its a good start for a 1st story keep up the good work i will be following this thread
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    Quote Originally Posted by innocentoutlaw View Post
    Its a good start for a 1st story keep up the good work i will be following this thread

    I made a re-write of this...it's in my Threads section
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    Intro: "I'm in love with this series,written by Rick Riordan,which about a kid named Percy Jackson who finds out that he's the son of the Greek God Poseidon.I was inspired to do this because I got bored 8P. P.S. this is my first story so,please, if you find any mistakes or whatever that needs fixing up, PM me or something Thnx!"

    Chapter 1
    --------------
    I woke up suddenly to Tyson,my half-brother Cyclops, snoring in the bunk above me...,the big guy usually snores loud enough to wake me up. I couldn't go back to sleep. I kept on thinking about my Girlfriend, Annabeth. She's a daughter of Athena. Me,her & my best friend who's a Satyr named Grover went on a whole bunch of Quests. All of them involving my old enemy Luke,who was a son of Hermes,he turned on me years ago. The Titan Lord of Time Kronos turned him,and eventually took over his body. Luke sacraficed himself to kill Kronos last month.

    Usually I masturbate to Annabeth as we are both virgins,and once in a while one the of the Aphrodite girls. And strangly to Clarisse,who's a Daughter of Ares. So,I got up out of bed, got dressed & quickly grabbed my magic sword, Riptide & put it into into my pocket. I went to the Sword Arena to practice a bit until breakfast was ready. After about haIf an hour I heard someone coming to the Arena. It was just Clarisse. "What are you doing up Percy?" She asked. "Tyson woke me up with his snoring,couldn't go back to sleep so I came out here" I replied. "Oh,I see." she replied back.


    She started hacking at a few dummies with me, then after a while, we were both drenched in sweat. We stopped to relax a bit. Clarisse asked me if I missed Beckendorf,a Demigod who was the Son of Hephaestus,who died during the Titan War last month. "Of course I do,I'm guessing you really miss Silena?" I replied. "Yea...it's kind of strange not having her around anymore" she replied. Then she started to sniffle & cry,so I gave her a hug which was pretty awkward for me because we don't usually socialize like this. She bawled her eyes out then she stopped after a while. Then she did something I wasn't expecting. She kissed me right on the lips. "What the Hades are you doing Clarisse?!" I yelped. "Oh gods,I'm sorry Percy, I -I- don't know what got over me" she stammered. "You know I have a girlfriend! plus,you have a boyfriend!" I replied back. In my mind, I did kind of like it,even though we were both with someone. I slowly kissed her back. It was a nice feeling. Her nice warm mouth in mine. We kept raping eachothers mouths with our tounges for at least 5 minutes,then she took off her shirt. She had nice big breasts,plus she lost quite a bit of weight from excersise. She put one of my hands on her breast. "Do you like it?" she teased. "uuh....uhm..." that was all I could get out. I sucked on her nice round beautiful nipples. "mmm...oh yea Percy...ohhh...."Then she pulled down my shorts & boxers to reveal my hard cock. "mmm....I want a taste of that" so she put my dick in her mouth...I thought I was gonna cum right there...but I held my load in. She kept on sucking & slurping,then after a while I blew my load in her throat,Clarrise swallowing it all. 'mmm....sweet" she teased. Then she took off her jeans & pantes to show off her shaven pussy. "Go ahead Percy,eat me out...I know you want to..." So I ate her out. Her Puss was amazing...she was absolutly wet! "mmmm.....oooh....ahhh....oh fuck....I'm gonna cum!!" She released her pussy juices all over my mouth. "oh gods... that was amazing Clarrise!" "maybe we could do that some oher time" She replied with a wink.we both got dressed & then the Conch horn for breakfast went.

    Chapter 2 coming soon...and character Ideas... choose who Percy should get lucky with next...

    Annabeth (Percy's Girlfriend)
    Kate Gardner (Daughter of Demeter)
    Lou Ellen (Daughter of Hecate)

    It can be a guy too but it'll be awkward for me to write it lol :P

    Nico (Son of Hades)
    Conner Stoll or Travis Stoll (Bro's & Sons of Hermes)
    Malcom (Son of Athena)
    Pollux (A son of Dionysus)
    Will Solace (Son of Apollo)

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