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    I thought "Xxnx Virgin might get your attention. I have been a professional writer/editor half of my adult life. Although I am no virgin to Xnxx or its story forum, I am new to posting stories here, which I have not actually done. I'm not sure what the hold up has been. I'm wondering about two things, how my life may change once I move into writing erotica.

    I'd like to read a comment by some who've written here and how it has affected you as a writer and separately, as an individual -- if the two are separable.

    Literature is to me a form of bondage, and I abhor bondage and I loathe violence. However, I am always affected by literature that captures my mind. Capture my mind, capture me. I recently experienced a sleepless night after spending several hours (about four) of fairy tales collected by the Brothers Grimm, for example.

    Although I feel foolish writing this, I am still drawn to the idea of posting stories here. I have noticed that thousands of pairs of eyes have checked out the stories here. I guess that's what intrigues me.

    For example, I recently read "Amy's Uncle" and other 'Amy' stories by a writer who chose the name "Wolfstar". He posted one story in September and by a week ago 63,320 people looked at it. That intrigues me. I want to write for such a huge audience, but I'm not sure where it will lead.

    Can you offer perspective? Thanks1

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    well that seems a bit of a disrespectful way to start
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    I don't understand AngelEyes15's comment at all.

    Anyway, my perspective:

    I used to loathe writing. I could do it -- had done it well enough to get good marks on writing assignments in high school and college, and found myself writing a lot in my 25-year career in industry. That wasn't for pleasure; it was writing done as a necessity.

    When I lost that job and separated from my wife, I stumbled across this place. I lurked for quite a while, reading stories, some of which were great, some of which were horrible. I started to wonder if I could do it, so I tried. My first efforts were pretty bad. Wordy, ponderous, cumbersome, but full of hot sex. They were actually pretty well received because of the subject matter, and it was the subject matter that caused me to take them down (some of the young ladies were, well, a bit TOO young).

    By that time I was hooked.

    I say, go for it. It IS a thrill to know that people are reading your stuff, even though it is posted anonymously (under a made-up user name). You'll probably get some negative votes and some troll/hate comments. That's also because of the anonymity. People can say stuff they would never say to your face.

    Don't let that stop you. Write. Read. Re-write. Re-read. Stick a fork in it, call it done, and serve it to us.

    You won't know if you can write erotic literature, erotic romance, or just good ol' smut unless you try, will you?

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    Quote Originally Posted by wantsomefun View Post
    I don't understand AngelEyes15's comment at all.
    it's not that serious but: "I thought Xxnx Virgin might get your attention" ...?

    maybe it's just me who read it as a bit manipulative and smug?

    you've been more generous than me anyway .
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    Manipulative and smug? I didn't take it at all that way. I thought it was a way to catch someone's attention and get them to read the thread. That's why we're here.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ejls View Post
    Manipulative and smug? I didn't take it at all that way. I thought it was a way to catch someone's attention and get them to read the thread. That's why we're here.
    okay it was a way - a trick way tho so he has to start with that.

    don't you think he'd have got more replies if he'd said "what's it like writing on here?" or something?

    he didn't make you want to help him out did he?

    so far only wantsomefun has been nice enough
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    WSF said it better than anyone. I would have given him the same advice.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AngelEyes15 View Post
    so far only wantsomefun has been nice enough
    That's me. Mr. Nice Guy.
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    The big attraction of posting on this site for me is getting published and getting read. And having more readers than 99% 'bricks and mortar' writers can dream of. Sure you're not going to get rich, but neither do 99% of authors in the real world.

    I have a friend who had a book published - deserved congratulations to him for that - it sold 2,000 copies and he and his publisher were deliriously happy. He made pocket money from it.

    But here and on some other similar sites stories do get read. The average story tens of thousands of times. For me that's a buzz. Communicating with hundreds of thousands of readers around the world - you betcha.

    And you've already got one of essential ingredient for success. How to write an attention grabbing headline - just the skill needed to write an attention grabbing title.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mark Twayn View Post
    The big attraction of posting on this site for me is getting published and getting read. And having more readers than 99% 'bricks and mortar' writers can dream of. Sure you're not going to get rich, but neither do 99% of authors in the real world.

    I have a friend who had a book published - deserved congratulations to him for that - it sold 2,000 copies and he and his publisher were deliriously happy. He made pocket money from it.

    But here and on some other similar sites stories do get read. The average story tens of thousands of times. For me that's a buzz. Communicating with hundreds of thousands of readers around the world - you betcha.

    And you've already got one of essential ingredient for success. How to write an attention grabbing headline - just the skill needed to write an attention grabbing title.

    Good luck and welcome
    +1. I have an average of over 40,000 hits on my 27 stories, including several that have over 100,000. Where else can an amateur get that kind of an audience, especially for "adult" fiction?

    And Mark Twayne is right in saying that you write an attention-grabbing headline. Now, write us an attention-grabbing story.
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    Well, I don't understand why you feel anything was disrespectful. I really only want to be assured that I'm not inviting heartbreak or disaster. I've never shared erotic writing with anyone for fear of rejection. It seems to me that feared rejection may not be a part of life as an author here. I want to contribute, but not if it costs me in reputation.
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    Quote Originally Posted by wantsomefun View Post
    My first efforts were pretty bad. Wordy, ponderous, cumbersome, but full of hot sex. They were actually pretty well received because of the subject matter, and it was the subject matter that caused me to take them down (some of the young ladies were, well, a bit TOO young).
    Once again, I find myself in disagreement with you. Your earlier stories, if you are referring to 'The girls in the store', were not wordy, ponderous, cumbersome - although they were full of hot sex. I believe that that series was so popular, not because of the age of the girls, but because of the quality of the story and the way it was told.

    You should be able, by now, to realize that you are a very gifted writer and that there are a lot of us who thoroughly enjoy your stories.

    And, for DepotCat54, by all means make the effort to write for us. We need all the GOOD writers we can find.
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    AngelEyes, I just caught up with this post. Maybe my post title was a bit manipulative, in the way newspaper headlines are manipulative with the purpose of increasing the number of people who might read an article, especially an inaugural one.
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    Quote Originally Posted by DepotCat54 View Post
    .... Maybe my post title was a bit manipulative, in the way newspaper headlines are manipulative with the purpose of increasing the number of people who might read an article, especially an inaugural one.
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    .... I've never shared erotic writing with anyone for fear of rejection. It seems to me that feared rejection may not be a part of life as an author here. I want to contribute, but not if it costs me in reputation.
    Writers of fiction are "manipulative" by definition. We want people to see, hear, feel, taste, touch, and experience certain things in their minds, and we do what we can to "manipulate" those reactions.

    As far as rejection is concerned, no one gets rejected around here. Some just get more accepted than others. I have no idea what writing you've done or what you want to write about to post here, but as long as it's well-written (which doesn't look like it's going to be a problem for you), formatted into proper paragraphs (rather than being a wall of words), and has some entertainment value to it, you'll get read.

    Reputation? Screw that! You don't have a reputation now. Even your user name doesn't have a reputation. We're all anonymous. You don't have a reputation to tarnish, only one to build.

    But enough of this thread, Cat. Get busy on writing a story.
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    I see this as my chance to chime in... I started writing... When is was about 5 or so... mostly stupid stories... Then at the ripe old age of I don't know about thirteen, I discovered sex and... all the other stuff about it... and I got hold of some CHerry Poptart comic's (If you haven't read them you should) as well as some penthouse. I liked the pictures but I found the stories to be much more interesting.

    I was more than a bit introverted and didn't play well with others from the start so I was typically lonely so I started writing... my first sex stories were pure bullshit... with enormous run on sentences and glaring errors and what not... then as I started getting more and more interested in girls who were not interested in me I got into punishment and quasi rape stories... I evolved into what you get now which are more accumulation of harem stories...Of course I write other stuff... I look at most of it as an exercise to see where I can bend the story and make it plausible.

    Would I like to eventually make some money off smut... sure who wouldn't but I don't expect to... as for readers they are a real encouragement here because they can talk directly to you and you can get feedback or bump the plot one way or another, just to make them happy.

    The camaraderie here between the writers is pretty good most of us who post here aren't jealous but encouraging for others. With any site online there are trolls and they come out and wreak havoc on stories but if your any good... they can't hurt you too bad.
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    Quote Originally Posted by crackedjaguar@hotmail.com View Post
    The camaraderie here between the writers is pretty good most of us who post here aren't jealous but encouraging for others. With any site online there are trolls and they come out and wreak havoc on stories but if your any good... they can't hurt you too bad.
    Exactly.

    Thanks, CJ, for the use of the word camaraderie. That's exactly what it is. We're a bunch of pervs who can type, and we share our little oddities with each other. My God, look how many people come in to comment on every story that's posted? Look at the enthusiasm for the Calling All Writers Challenges? Hell, we're "officially" in number nine, and with the recent Halloween-themed CAW #8.5, this is the TENTH time in about eighteen months that the gang around here has done a group activity. As you may or may not know first-hand, group activities can be very stimulating. Getting the juices flowing, if you will.

    Trolls have all the power we give them. In the beginning, I was infuriated by them, and, I'll admit, pretty hurt. I whined and bitched about it, and learned that I was far from being alone. After a while, I decided I didn't care that much, as long as I was having fun writing my stuff. Not everyone likes me in real life, so I guess I was pretty naive to hope everyone would on a porn site.

    So, DepotCat54, when should we expect something from you? No pressure, you understand.
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    See he didn't talk smack so I didn't put the lid on and turn up the heat....
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    Quote Originally Posted by crackedjaguar@hotmail.com View Post
    See he didn't talk smack so I didn't put the lid on and turn up the heat....
    I noticed. Hell, in GD talking smack is considered an art form.

    Here, we like to talk dirty.
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    Quote Originally Posted by DepotCat54 View Post
    AngelEyes, I just caught up with this post. Maybe my post title was a bit manipulative, in the way newspaper headlines are manipulative with the purpose of increasing the number of people who might read an article, especially an inaugural one.
    K well it was only me, i like things to be straightforward and you had no replies at that point but im not even an author and no-one else minds so it's all cool

    you should go for it anyway obviously
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    my grammar and punctuation skills suck, i have been writing stories on my phone while im working, some like 'em, some don't, but my only goal really is to.........
    well to be blunt is to make some pussies wet,
    im really shy in person, and don'tget to do that much, but on here they ask for it,
    maybe im wrong but i think women are sexually stimulated mentally,
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    I say this a lot; writing is about craft. Talent can get you places, but talent alone isn't good enough, it requires hard work and application to develop talent to the point of being applicable. The only way to write well is to write often. Preferably, you should be writing constantly.

    The nice thing about sites like this is that they provide incentive and a framework. In the old days, amateur writers spent long hours alone, writing many things that no one would ever read. A venue like this, in which you can share your work directly with like-minded people, provides a lot of motivation. Now you're not just writing as an exercise, and your words need not fall into the void never to be seen by human eyes, you're writing for an audience, and that's pretty exciting. The example set by others can be a catalyst for you as well. In short, it gives you a reason to write and some small rewards for writing, and that encourages you to write more, and as I've mentioned, writing more is the only way you can learn to write well.
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    Now that you have our attention, now what?

    Write a story, but not here, on the 'Story Site'. Good Luck.
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