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    Default Biker Girl: 2 School Lesson

    This is a continued story, after Biker Girl: 1 Lambsey.


    The next day I was so tender, in my pussy region; that I skipped school altogether.
    When I returned the next day (Friday), it was interschool sports day; so it was a day of but we had to hang around watching sport.
    I sat in a ground stand watching athletic, daydreaming and very bored.
    It was then my eyes pricked up, as I overheard a conversation nearby.
    Some kid was telling another kid, about my special hole in the toilet.
    It was then I started thinking, what if this got back to the teachers!
    After school I walked home, lost in thought and worried.
    So I hatched a plan after having a chat with Shazza, that night; I was to write another ad.
    Then next day, I was to be place it over the hole stating,
    This hole will be closed
    If someone couldn’t keep their mouth shut about it
    Signed Jessinta
    The note was put in place on a Monday, and now it was Wednesday (Science class day).
    I was so worked up I arrived early and sat on my crate waiting patiently, for whatever was present to me; through my make shift hole.
    The school bell sounded and it was time for the next period.
    Yesterday I messed up my school blouse with some cum, that escaped my mouth, so this time for the first time I stripped off completely; and I noticed I was already wet.
    I smirked to myself.
    Pacing around in my little storage room, impatiently, horny, naked and eager.
    Finally guys began entering the change room, so I sat down on my crate and waited, peeking when I could through my money hole.
    Then someone entered the toilet.
    $5 was handed through the hole and that meant a blowjob from me.
    So I dropped to me knees and eagerly slurped on his cock, and swallowed it as deep as I possibly could.
    I heard derogative talk from his friends like, “Can you believe what a whore she must be?” “What type of chick eagerly does this?”
    All it did was make me suck harder, until his cock spasmed inside my mouth; and I got my throat filled with his warm cum.
    As soon as he left the hole, another $5 peered through; I licked my lower lip and went back to work.
    The name calling continued, but instead of being upset; it just helped drive me on.
    Next a $10 note was passed through the hole, I was happy at that; as I was dripping wet and my pussy ached for action.
    So I turned around and backed into the hole, put my hands on the ground; while he positioned his cock into my dripping pussy.
    He started pumping it hard into my pussy, oh god it felt so good.
    But he didn’t last long and in about two minutes, he cum in my pussy; I was panting and disappointed.
    I needed more cock in my pussy.
    I looked around at my money hole and saw a $5, more blowjobs.
    So while I sucking, I rubbed my clit furiously; as I needed to cum too.
    I was moaning with cock in my mouth, and what guys were still there, heard me.
    “Can you hear that cum starved bitch?” One of them said, and they all laughed.
    My mouth milked this guy’s cock, while I cum and cum hard.
    I briefly paused as an orgasmic wave spread over my body, before finishing off the guys cock.

    “God she’s good, but all she is, is a nasty fucking whore.” He said, and the guys laughed some more.
    This hurt; I could tell tears were streaming down my cheeks.
    It was then I heard a loud voice more like a growl.
    “WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING?” He growled at them.
    I quickly gathered my clothes and tried to hide as best could, as the room emptied.
    Then he slapped the wall hard, BANG BANG!
    “YOU IN THERE DON’T MOVE.” It was the Vice-Principle.
    I froze, in fear.
    Trying to get dressed and I was bent over pulling my panties up; when a torch shone a light through my money hole.
    He could see me bent over and it must have been a view, my wet cummy pussy and my lower back.
    “TURN AROUND MISS.” He bellowed at me.
    I pulled down my panties and turned around, revealing who I was.
    “Jess? Why? Why would you submit yourself so easily to these boys?” He lowered his voice.
    I was so embarrassed and knew; he was going to call my mum or the police; as I was really whoring my body for a small sum of money.
    “Why sell your body to these ratbags?” He asked, calmly.
    Dropping to my knees with my hands on my knee, I confided in him.
    “Well, mum gives me no money and I like it.” I said.
    It was then I noticed the bulge within his trousers.
    I don’t know what possessed me but I flipped my skirt up, and then turned around and backed into the money hole.
    I backed into the wall hard and spread my legs wide as I could.
    There was silence.
    Until he started rubbing my pussy.
    “You like that, don’t you?” He asked and continued.
    “Yes, yes sir.” I stumbled out the words.
    “Seeing as you like to be a school whore, you’re going to be punished as one.” He said, and pinched my clit so hard, making me cry out.
    Then he release it, only to pinch harder; and then over again.
    Until he inserted a few fingers inside my swollen pussy; then he started finger fucking me, hard.
    2 became 3 then 4, I was screaming out loud; in ecstasy and pain.
    I was crying as he hurt me, by doing this.
    “TURN AROUND, and suck my cock!” He ordered me, and I turned around.
    But it wasn’t his cock I saw, it was his face.
    “NOT HERE WHORE, in my office now!” He ordered, I hurriedly put my bra and panties in my backpack and headed to his office.
    I watched him leave and I snuck out too.
    My mind was racing, is he calling my mum or police or what?
    Mr Anderson was about 40 and in shape, apart from a little bit of flab.
    The gym class all watched me, walk out of my cubby room; now everyone will know that I was the school whore.
    I felt so small.

    Knocking on his office door, and he motioned for me to sit on a chair by his office door.
    My mouth tasted of cock and cum, my pussy was sopping wet and dribbling down my legs.
    I waited 5-10 minutes and my pussy just couldn’t stop leaking.
    Panicking I took my panties from my bag and began whipping the leakage off my legs.
    Not noticing the secretary watching me, until I caught her displeased glance.
    My skirt had flipped up and she could see part of my womanhood.
    It was then Mr Anderson opened the door and invited me in.
    I sat on a chair before his desk, he sat back down and he looked at my school record sheet.
    Knowing I was in deep trouble, I just looked around the office; at the cupboard, the floor and then anything but him.
    He smirked as he looked at me.
    “My, my, my. After 10 years of teaching, I had never seen anyone so brazenly selling herself at school. If and if I call the police, you will be charged with prostitution; causing the school a great deal of unwanted publicity. Or what would your mother say? Would you like that?” He scolded me.
    “No sir.” I said, in a soft voice.
    “You need to be punished for whoring yourself and bringing school down. Do you understand?” He said.
    “Yes sir.” I said.
    He sat there eyeballing me, I felt so embarrassed.
    I didn’t have enough money to leave home yet and the Clubhouse won’t admit me until; I am 18.
    “Stand up, NOW.” He order, and I did.
    He then asked me personal questions like, “Did you enjoy being used?” “Did I swallow all their cum?” “Did I know I had become the school whore?”
    I stood in silence, which made him worse.
    Until he could hold back no more, and pulled out a large blackboard point (a cane).
    “BEND OVER, and brace my desk.” He order and I did.
    I began to cry, as he spread my legs apart.
    My ass was sky high, as he flipped my school skirt over my lower back; revealing my bare ass and pussy.
    “WHAT A SLUT YOU ARE, NOT EVEN BOTHERING TO PUT YOUR PANTIES BACK ON.” He was so loud; I think the whole school could hear him.
    Tears just streamed down my face.
    He stood beside me and watching my juices flowing out of my soppy pussy.
    Then he launched the cane above his shoulder and whacked my bare ass, hard.
    I bellowed in pain.
    Then again he hit my bare ass with the cane, until he hit me 5 times.
    I was crying, as my ass cheeks were stinging.
    “Now I know I am not to punish student this way but if you tell, I will tell. Understand?” He said.
    I nodded.
    “Now, did do enjoy being a slut?” He asked. I didn’t answer.
    WHACK, come the cane down.
    “Do you want me to fuck you, here?” I didn’t answer.
    WHACK.
    “Do you like sucking all those cocks?” He asked, I nodded a yes.
    “Good, you learn fast.” He said.
    All these whacks were making my pussy juices flow like mad.
    I was wobbly on my legs and my knees began to bend, from the pain and my horniness.
    “DO YOU ENJOY BEING A SLUT?” He asked, and I didn’t answer.
    WHACK.
    My ass hurt like hell, I was crying; but my pussy was making me jittery.
    I was struggling to stand as my knees were like jelly.
    “DO YOU WANT ME TO FUCK YOU? He asked again, this time I gave in.
    If I said, “No” I would be whacked with a cane, if I said, “Yes” he would use me like a slut.
    “YES YES YES FUCK ME LIKE A WHORE I AM, MAKE ME YOUR SCHOOL SLUT. JUST FUCK ME ALREADY!” I bellowed out so loud, I reckon everyone would know what was going on, nearby.
    Did I really blurt those words out, oh my god!
    “Good.” He said and moved behind me.

    He dropped his pants, while calling me “A Whore” repeatedly.
    He arched my back, making my pussy stick up; feeling his cock rub my asshole then my clit.
    It felt huge, much large then I had ever seen up till now.
    He was slipping its tips into my pussy and then near my asshole.
    I didn’t know what he was planning, but I choose to say nothing.
    He gripped my ass cheeks and spread open my asshole and pussy, until I grimaced in pain.
    Eventually, slamming his cock deep inside my wet pussy.
    It shocked me and I bit my lip, to hide a scream.
    He was fucking me hard, deep and fast; causing my head to shake uncontrollably.
    All I could do was brace the desk and take it, while he grabbed hold of my hair and making my head bend back.
    I was copping the pound of my life, as I had never been fuck by a monster cock like his or as hard.
    God it felt good being fucked like this, but I didn’t want him to know.
    But he knew, as my pussy betrayed me and started to tighten; as I was about to cum.
    As I did, I lost all control of my body, and wave after wave of orgasmic bliss hit me.
    With that, he yanked me by the air and threw me to the ground and unto my knees; forcing his cock in my mouth.

    Forcing his large cock down deep inside my throat, gagging me; everything went silent as I gasped for air.
    He held my face to his groin, by gripping my hair tightly.
    Waving my arms furiously in the air, as I struggled for air.
    I looked up at him as tears run out of my eyes as I choked, on his cock.
    “You’re a nasty piece of ass, Jess. You are mine suspended, for the rest of the month” He smugly said.
    He then face fucked me, using my head as his fuck tool.
    Until, he spasmed and forced my head down even deeper into his groin; my tongue rested on his ball sacks.
    As he blew his load in my mouth, I again gagged on cock.
    I couldn’t move as my orgasm made my body limp like and suggestible.
    Once he unloaded his cum in my mouth, he pushed me away, like trash.
    “Get dressed and get out of my office.” He ordered.

    I slowly walked from his office, by the secretaries who just looked at me like trash.
    Aching, humiliated, suspended; I heading out the school main door to go home.
    Mum was at work, so I ran a bath and stayed in it for a long time; until I walked out naked but for my bath robe and straight to bed.
    I fooled mum, by heading to the Clubhouse dressed like I was heading to school.
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    I was so worn out and sore, that I fell asleep in my robe on my bed.
    Only waking up, to the sound of my alarm clock; the next morning.
    I fooled my mum into thinking I was going to school, by dressing for school and leaving as usual, but I headed straight for Clubhouse.
    Gingerly strolling the 2 kilometre walk, to the front gate and ringing the daytime bell.
    Shazza, answered and I immediately, gave her a tight hug; before balling my eyes out.
    She soothingly caressed my hair, holding me tight to her and leading me inside.
    Crazy Gypsy was drinking at the make-shift bar; as we walked inside.
    He was in his 40’s, in ok shape; but scruffy looking.
    When we settled down by a bench, and I then explained to Shazza, about the things troubling me.
    From the money problem and home, to taking money from my fellow student, to the punishment at the hands of Mr Anderson.
    Crazy Gypsy sat there smirking at first, but he looked shitty.
    “How comforting, a fucking Sheep and her Lamb. PFFT.” He said.
    “Now Sheepy Shaz, get on your knees and blow me.” He ordered, Shazza.
    Shazza left me and did as she was told.
    She unzipped his jeans and took his cock into her mouth.
    I just stared, at first; at how quickly and without hesitation she went to work.
    Crazy Gypsy just sat there drinking beer; while Shazza sucked his cock.
    When Crazy Gypsy blew inside her mouth, he shoved her away.
    Shazza picked herself up and she walked back to me; swaying her hips.
    Crazy Gypsy turned his attention towards me, now.
    “You’re hot little piece, aren’t you?” Crazy Gypsy smugly said.
    “You’ll never know how hot I am old man!” I spat the words back at him.
    He just laughed.
    He just laughed and went back to his beer drinking.
    Shazza took me outside and filled me in on Crazy Gypsy and the order within the Clubhouse.
    She told me, that a Sheep was a person who basically did whatever a gang member asked.
    Be it wash his bike, sweep the floor; or lewd sexual acts without hesitation.
    My jaw just dropped.
    As a Lamb, I am exempt until my 18th birthday; then I am to make a choice.
    Become a Sheep after an initiation or just be a Broad.
    “What’s a Broad?” I asked.
    Broads are girls that are brought back here for a one night stand, and then kicked out.
    No matter what, Sheep and Broads can at times be raped by those who choice to within the Clubhouse.
    I was stunned.
    I want to join, but I am not sure if I could; endured that.
    “Don’t stir up Crazy Gypsy, as he can be a very violent person; if he doesn’t get what he wants.” Shazza warned me.
    With that I went home, as mum would have now left for work.

    The next day, it was Crazy Gypsy and Shazza; in the Clubhouse alone again.
    Soon as I walked in, it was like yesterday; Crazy Gypsy drinking and Shazza obeying him.
    So after Shazza hugged me, Crazy Gypsy was barking orders.
    He passed me a beer, and I took it.
    “Shaz, I need a fuck. Come here and bend over for me.” She did as he ordered.
    Oh my god, under her leather skirt; she wore no knickers and Crazy Gypsy went and fucked her hard over the make-shift bar.
    She was howling in pain and ecstasy, as he fucked her fast and hard.
    Once he was done, he slapped her ass and sat back down.
    Shazza walked back to me panting and rubbing her ass.
    I was so astonished at how easily she just did as she was told.
    After lunch, Crazy Gypsy sent Shazza to the shop for more smokes.
    He passed me another beer, and I drank it quickly; making my head rush a little.
    “So you think you got it worked out, don’t you. Tease the boys, get them to pay for you; and your life is sweet. Then you get found out and punished for it, you’re got a lot of growing up to do missy!” He lectured me.
    I sat quietly, until I couldn’t hold my anger at him to myself no more.
    “What you jealous, that you’ll never have me; like Shazza.” I stumped him.
    “Don’t be stupid, you silly little cunt...” He spat these words at me.
    I shut up, thinking he was going to blow a gasket at me.
    He got up and grabbed me, and squeezed one of my breasts, hard.
    I tried to free myself but he was too strong.
    He kissed me hard on the lips, trying in vain to stick his tongue inside my mouth.
    So he grabbed my throat tight making me open my mouth.
    He tasted like beer and an ashtray, his body stunk of petrol.
    I thought I was in a bad place, so I thought quickly and kissed him back.
    While we kissed, he slid a hand inside my shirt and fondled a breast.
    Oh my god, I was starting to feel a little horny, as we kissed and he pinched my nipple.
    I felt his hard cock against my thigh, through his jeans.
    We kissed and I started grinding my thigh against his hard on.
    I felt wet, now and needed to stop before this went too far.
    He was pinching a nipple while sneaking a hand inside my skirt and knickers; and started fingering my wet pussy.
    I think he sensed I was get sexually excited.
    He then forced me against the wall, and holding both my arms above my head and kissing me roughly.
    His hips grinded into my belly, and I could feel his hard on as he did so.
    He stopped when he heard, Shazza or someone enter the premises; via the warning buzzer.
    So he took me by the waist, and dragged me into the beer keg room.
    I feel over as he shut the door.
    “On your knees bitch, let’s see how good you are at sucking then.” He said this and unzipped his fly.
    I thought of my predicament and decided to do as he said.
    After unzipping his fly and releasing his hard cock, which glistened with precum.
    His cock wasn’t huge but it was thick, and I took it in my mouth anyways.
    “Mmm.” I mouth as I sucked on it.
    It was too thick to swallow whole, but swallowed what I could.
    Teasing his cock’s head, and then swallowing as much as I could.
    I could tell I was wet as the coolness of the refrigerator, made me sense as much.
    He then took control and savagely fucked my mouth with his fat cock; I instinctively slid a hand inside my panties to silence the drama between my legs.
    I knew he was getting close to spewing his seed inside my mouth, as his breathing was erratic.
    Then it happened his cock explodes and spewed cum inside my mouth and throat, and I keep sucking after he stopped pumping into me.
    He let me keep sucking until his cock started to go limp.
    I licked my lips and sat down, just looking at him.

    “You did good kid, keep it between us and your teacher; will be taken care of. How’s that sound?” I looked up at him and nodded yes.
    He then walked out, and I composed myself before doing the same.
    Shazza just stared at me; and just looked down on the ground.
    I think she knew something had gone on, between Crazy Gypsy and me; but didn't know what?
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    thanks, i enjoy writing it. Almost finished the next part.
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    Default Biker Girl: 4- Sit and Watch

    Biker Girl: 4- Sit and Watch
    From that day on, Crazy Gypsy and I were; better friends.
    I would blow him in the beer room, when no one was about almost daily; and he wasn’t as mean to me.
    Shazza at first didn’t like it; but understood that eventually I would be a Sheep like her and this was training.
    Crazy Gypsy and few of his friends paid a visit to Mr Anderson, and I was told he won’t be a problem; if I wanted to do sexual favours for money again.
    Which I eventually did, but like before I advertised to a select few; with a few changes.
    Jess is back
    $10 for a Blowjob
    $25 for pussy sex
    $30 for an invite one friend.
    Locations will vary.
    To contact me, leave a note and a deposit of $5 in Lock #3668
    Each time I earned more than $30, the remainder went to Crazy Gypsy.
    Also I had an arrangement with Mr Anderson, if he wanted my services or knew someone; it was double what I charged the boys.
    On some days, I earn nothing; other days I earn $50-60.

    A year had passed and no more dramas, I was now 16 years old and hooked on sex.
    Mum hadn’t changed, so I was spending even more time at the Clubhouse; and now I was under the shadow of Crazy Gypsy.
    So on a school night, I spent the night at the Clubhouse; and got drunk celebration my 16th birthday.
    The next day, I woke and my head was still spinning.
    I looked around and some of the girls were asleep and naked, what I missed seeing when I passed out, I thought.
    It was then I heard a familiar voice.
    “Get up and eat this this.” Crazy Gypsy had his cock out for me.
    I did as I was told, and stopped after a minute; to throw up.
    He laughed, someone is hung over.
    I tried to smirk, with yuck oozing from my mouth.
    “Shaz, go get Lambsey a burger from the Fish’N Chip shop.” He told Shazza, who was just waking up and unclothed.
    She pulled on a pair of jeans and button up her Club jacket, she never wore bras or panties; then she put some flip flops on her feet and she was off to the shop.
    After I ate my burger, I had a shower and I felt better; apart from the throbbing inside my head.
    The naked girls were gone, now.
    I looked for them, the Crazy Gypsy laughed.
    “Relax, they were Broads. We fuck them, and then fuck them off.” Crazy Gypsy said.
    “This afternoon, we are initiating Sonja. If you want to stick around a see what happens at a Sheep initiation, stick around; your choice.” He said.

    There were about 20-25 bikers congregating in the main drinking area of the Clubroom.
    Most of which I had never seen before.
    Sonja entered as we were getting up to head to the kitchen area.
    She was dressed in T-Shirt, plaid mini-skirt and leather knee high boots.
    She took a few pills of some sort, smiled at me; then stripped off all her gear.
    With that, we went to make lunch.
    Shazza told me the pills were muscle relaxants, which are optional.
    I decided to I wanted to see the rest of the initiation; but only after I had some lunch with Shazza and Jules.
    We could hear loud noises, while we ate.
    When we re-entered the room, my jaw almost dropped.
    Two lines of Bikies were formed, one that were going to fuck her and ones who were going to be blown.
    We sat well away from the action, watching all these naked bikers but for their jackets; fucking Sonja without condoms.
    Intrigued I sat and watched as, they fucked her hard and fast; in her mouth, in her pussy and in her ass.
    She didn’t care; she was definitely earning her colours today.
    “This is just the start, for her; after today this could happen every day.” Shazza told me.
    She was an utter mess, cum was leaking from everywhere.
    All she cared about was sucking cock and more cock; without a fear in the world.
    There were pools of spent cum running from within Sonja’s pussy and onto the Clubhouse floor.
    As soon as a hole was vacant, it was eagerly filled.
    Sonja was covered in hickeys and had cum all down her thighs, back and strings of cum, oozing from within her well used cunt.
    When the last of the guys finished and pulled out of her mouth, she gasped for air.
    She rested her head on the floor, and you could see cum stains on her face and hair; as thick strings of cum oozed from within her mouth.
    Oh my god, this is what an initiation is like; I am starting to have second thoughts when it becomes my turn.
    With that it was over, except for one last thing; a tattooist then inscribed on her lower back “Property of Rings of Death MC.”
    Then I watched as two lower ranked members, who were not involved in the initiation; picked her up and struggled to drag her slimy cum coated body to the showers.
    Cum just poured from within her poor asshole, once they lifted her.
    She emerged an hour later, naked but for a towel; and they handed her new denim jacket and leather skirt.
    The jacket had a large embroidered patch on the back, “Property of The Rings of Death MC.”
    Her clothes were no more; she was to wear what they give her.
    No bra, no panties; just the jacket and leather mini-skirt.
    She plonked down on the bench near where I was seating, cum was still trickling from within her bowels; but in small droplets.
    I saw hickey marks on her small breasts; as she left the jacket open.
    It didn’t take long for her to soon pass out asleep, with her arms crossed in front of her head on a table.

    When she woke she complained about a sore pussy and butt, but was glowing in happiness.
    It made me nervous, as next year at 17; that could be me.
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    Thanks for the comment, much look forward to them.
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    You are intelligently erotic writer! Amazing story!
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    Jemma..
    I have re-written this whole story and will repost once it has been properly edited, as once i posted it in the Stories section i was abused for bad grammar and spelling by unknown readers.

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    Same Feeling as, bad grammar or not bad erotica?
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    Grammar aside, it's a good, erotic story and I'm enjoying reading it. I don't think anybody here is perfect at grammar. I know I'm not. Even professional writers submit their stories to editors who remove all the grammar mistakes. The story is the important thing.
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    tell that to the tools on the main site who bagged me and voted me down, but didn't leave a user name.
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    Grammar aside, it's a good, erotic story and I'm enjoying reading it. I don't think anybody here is perfect at grammar. I know I'm not. Even professional writers submit their stories to editors who remove all the grammar mistakes. The story is the important thing.
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    You really are an intelligent writer.
    Remember that any tool can gripe about grammar but it takes real talent to come up with a good story that keeps one reading, like yours did. So i want you to keep on writing, but what good grammar does at the end of the day to a story is what sexy and classy lingerie does to a beautiful body. IF you've made the effort to write, then why not spend a few more hours polishing it. Trust me those few extra hours are appreciated.
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    Thanks
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    I have reworked my original biker girl story and been checked so I will be reposting as 'Biker Chick 1 Jessinta' and I am doing the same for my other biker girl stories...
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    Great story
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    INTRIGUE,LYNX,ELP, and anyone i missed i will be posting my story later today as ELP helped me with my grammar and will post it, under "Bikerchick".
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