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    Default I'd like advice ... writing porn

    I have started a porn story, called Let me make you a *Porn* star...

    I have had one comment, and I'd appreciate others -- the comment was that the story lacked sensuality

    I'd like some suggestions as to what I could do to improve -- I have 2 parts, and I am working on Part 3 -- I plan a 5 part story

    Any recommendations would be welcome -- thanks
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    post parts of your stories here and ask for constructive comments
    Quote Originally Posted by PornWriter1956 View Post
    I have started a porn story, called Let me make you a *Porn* star...

    I have had one comment, and I'd appreciate others -- the comment was that the story lacked sensuality

    I'd like some suggestions as to what I could do to improve -- I have 2 parts, and I am working on Part 3 -- I plan a 5 part story

    Any recommendations would be welcome -- thanks
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    Or put a link in your sig so that everyone can find it... what I do...
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    Do as Twisted Sister and Cracked Jaguar suggest; use the forum to get commentary about it - suggestions and critique, and to work out any errors in the story itself; here you can always post it a second time with the title containing (reposted/edited/etc.)

    Post a link to your story directly on the main site as Cracked Jaguar suggests.

    Look at most authors who write on the forum frequently; in the signature portion at the bottom of the posts are examples of these links.

    Note though - until you have 10 forum posts you cannot post a link, after that though no problems.

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