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    Howdy folks. At the risk of being pedantic, I am doing something a little bit weird for this site.

    This is not my story and I do not want to even appear to be stealing it but I thought that I would share something with the forum.

    The Writer is Wolf_Knight and if you check you will find that his name IS a link (if you see similarly formatted items in any of my messages, you will find them to be links as well). Please note that if you select and copy any link on this site then the copy creates an exact duplicate of what you copied (text and hyperlink together).

    I will be adding the story as well but wanted to make sure that everybody also noticed a few other things. These are things which do not generally mean anything to regular conversations but when you are writing stories and chapters show up every so often to break the flow then there are some things which can be done to improve the reader's experience.

    If you check the top of the page here, you will see an option for "Display Modes." The options are linear, hybrid and threaded. I will be willing to bet that most of you reading this have never used either threaded or hybrid but that is what will really improve the READER's experience here. Select Threaded Mode and your display will show the conversation's flow.

    Keep it selected while viewing what happens with this thread and you will see what I mean about enhancing your reader's enjoyment.

    ANYWAY, this post is an introduction and as such, here is the introduction which Wolf Knight provided with his story originally

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    This is my first story written and posted. I checked spelling and grammar but may have missed some things. This is based loosely in White Wolf Games old World of Darkness for my inspiration and is just a start or the many ideas I have to continue on with. There is no actual sex in this chapter but the ending sets up for the start of the next chapter. Please let me know what you think of the story as a whole and of the writing style as well. Please be constructive not just this sucked or it was great. Let me know what you actually think. Thank you
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    If I told you Mages truly existed you’d probably laugh at me or think I was crazy. You’d want to lock me up and throw away the key if I told you they are around us here and now, not just legends of the past. Mages do exist, and they are here in the world with us today. I should know, I’m one of them. Now when I say Mage I sure the first though to come into your mind is the Harry Potter novels and movies or the old cartoons where you have people in old laboratories surrounded by strangely labeled jars like eye of newt and bat wings. Where that kind of magic is in the world and there are a few hedge wizards among you mortals, that’s not true Magick. My name is Andrew and I’m going to give you a glimpse into the reality of a true Mage.

    I wasn’t born a mage, like everyone else in the world I was born mortal and had a pretty average childhood. I grew up in a small tourist town at the Jersey shore. I did well in school, but I always got in trouble for being a dreamer so my grades weren’t the greatest. Like any other kid I dreamed of being everything from an astronaut to soldier, Knight of the Round Table to any other thing I could imagine. I was about 11 when I first started to notice weird things about the world around me. There were times I knew for a fact that I wasn’t going to get home before dark and would therefore be grounded for a week and rushed to get home. Even though there was no way for me to get home in time I’d get in just in time. As a kid I just chalked it up to rushing and luck and forgot about it. Around the time I turned 13 my mind was becoming sharper than ever. I could read a book once and remember everything in it, and even understand college text books for classes my brothers and sister were having difficulty with.

    I’m going to tell you a little about my family because it’s important that you understand a little more about me and them before I explain my Awakening. I came from a large family, my parents of course and 4 siblings. I had 2 brothers both older and 2 sisters, one older the other younger. At the time of my awakening my mother was a stay at home mom, she was one of the nicest people. She would help anyone who needed it however she could. My father was engineer with a government contractor. He never spoke of what he did at work, but you could tell he enjoyed it. My brother Matt and Jake were both in college. Matt was studying Medicine and Jake was working for a PHD in Computer Sciences. My older sister, Arica, was a senior in High School and one of the most popular girls. What set her apart is like our mother she was kind to everyone, and didn’t allow bullying or rudeness to people just because they were different. I was just past 16 and an avid reader, my favorite books were about time travel and other Sci-Fi themes. I was also a science geek, playing with Chemistry sets and learning anything I could get my hands on at that point. Then there was my younger sister, Jamie. I hated the idea of a younger brother or sister when my parents told us they were having another child. I was wrong about how I’d feel. Jaime was a living contradiction. She was a proper young lady when we went out to dinner or movies and a real tomboy when we were out playing in the woods or at the park. She was 8 when everything in my life changed forever.

    Now that you have a short history about me and know some of what’s going on I’ll explain what an Awakening is and then we’ll get on with the story. For most people reality is what it is and they can’t do anything to change it. The truth about Reality is this, for the average person Reality is Consensual, meaning what the majority of the world believes is true. In the past people believed in Dragons and Wizards and Monsters. Nowadays most people don’t, science says they can’t exist so for the average person they don’t. Some mortals come to understand that there are more things in the world than science has explained. Some consider themselves lucky and others are haunted by the knowledge that they live in a world surrounded by monsters and knowing that they can do little except survive and pray the monsters don’t notice them. Mages learn of this greater reality, but they also learn that they have the power to change reality by force of will. Learning what you’re capable of as a Mage however comes after this Awakening. Every Mage reaches their awakening differently, for some it’s simply their mind coming to an epiphany realizing the greater truth of the world, for others it’s violent and mind shattering. I fell into the latter category.

    It was 2 weeks after my 16th birthday when everything in my life change forever. It was the July 4th holiday and my family took a vacation together to celebrate my Birthday and the holiday together. Being that we lived in a tourist trap we left the area for the Holiday. We were staying at a hunting cabin in the mountains. We had been there four nights when my life changed forever. There had been a string of murders in Cheyenne’s newspapers when we passed through, 5 dead in as many weeks. The murders were ritualistic and the papers were reporting a serial killer. As we were heading a couple hundred miles north-west to the cabin and the murders were all listed in the city we figured we’d be safe. We couldn’t have been more wrong. It was after midnight when I was startled out of sleep by a noise downstairs in the cabin. I first thought it was one of my brothers grabbing a late snack but I could hear both of them snoring across the room. I slid quietly out of bed to check on the sound out of curiosity when I heard a loud thump and my mother scream from the stairway. My brothers both came awake and to their feet as I was running out of the room to see what was going on. What I saw as I came to the stairs is burned into my mind forever. My father was on the floor bleeding from his scalp with a cast iron pan on the floor beside him. I started to run down the steps to him when I heard my brothers and sisters reach the railing and gasp. That’s when I saw my mother and the man. The man was about 6’2” , had long dark black hair and eyes so pale blue they were looked white in the firelight. He was holding my mother by her hair with one hand, and the other was hidden by her body as her back was to us. I saw my mother being hurt and like any overconfident teenager I charged the man thinking I could make him release her. I hit him in the ribs with my shoulder and knocked him away. He tripped over the coffee table and was forced to release my mother. As he fell and she landed I noticed that the front of her nightgown was stained with blood and I moved to help her. There was a strange Glyph in blood on her chest as I helped her up and pushed her towards my Brothers who came to the bottom of the stairs when I rushed the guy. Unfortunately, in my haste to protect my mother I forgot about the guy. He grabbed me from behind and spun me to face him, grabbing onto my neck when he did so. I knew he was going to kill my entire family and that I lost my chance to stop him when I went to help my mother. I heard my brothers coming at him he picked me up by the neck on handed and figured they’d be able to stop him and save the others. I was afraid to die but glad my family would live. Then he looked directly into my eyes and his face changed. His pupils expanded to where they filled the entire eye except for a blood red rim around it. He waved the hand not holding me and my brothers were stopped in their tracks.

    In a low almost whispered one that just had the sound of evil flowing through it, “You’re the one I sensed. I am going to have your power for myself.” He reached out toward my chest with his right hand and as it touched my chest I felt it passing through my skin as though it wasn’t there. I screamed as the pain became pure torture and forced my mind to accept that his hand was passing though me like I didn’t have skin and bone. As his hand reached my heart I felt an oily darkness slide through my body. I didn’t understand how I felt or knew any of this but it was there in my mind. I grasped for the knowledge that I knew I never read or studied and tried to pull it into me and fight the feeling or being smother by this oily darkness. It was then that I felt the third presence within me. This one was bright and strong, the darkness not able to cover it. It was joined to me in several places and I felt a power coming from it. It was fighting and pushing back the darkness within my body.
    A strange voice sounded in my mind, “You must fight this darkness if you wish to live, accept what your mind is telling you is impossible and fight!!!!” and then the voice was silent as I felt the brightness and energy seeping away from me.

    I realized that if I gave up, this man would kill me and then kill my family. I opened my eyes and stared into his. Choking as I said to him in a growl from his hand around my throat, “I will not let you hurt my family!!!” I reached deep into myself for that brightness and just pulled as much of it to me as I could. I shoved the power out of me at this monster, for he was no normal man. There was an intense flash of heat, light and sound as the world shook around and I blacked out. My last thought was that I failed to stop him.

    It was hours later when I started to wake up, I could feel rain falling on me and assumed that it was all a dream and that my brothers pulled one of their pranks. As I opened my eyes and stood up, I saw that the Cabin’s upper floor and roof was gone and the walled were crumbling and splintered. There was charring on the edges all the way around. I realized that something had happened last night. I looked over towards the kitchen and could see me fathers leg sticking out from behind the counter. I ran over to him and checked for a pulse. He was alive but he was breathing shallow and there was still a lot of blood around his head. I grabbed the dish towel and wet it placing it against the wound. I checked the drawer for the CB to call for emergency services for him and looked around for the rest of my family. I found Matt still unconscious laying on the floor under where the stairs were. He was breathing normally but looked like he hit his head. I looked to where I last saw Jake and moved over to him. I could tell he was dead before I got to him, his head had be twisted around so far. I started to look for my mother and sisters. I found my mother and Arica quickly. My mother was slumped against the wall by the cabin’s door in a pool of blood. And Arica was outside the cabin with burns all over her body. It took me longer to find Jamie and she was the hardest for me. She had been thrown 50 yards from the cabin into the trees and rocks. When I found her almost every bone had been broken and I wouldn’t have recognized her except for the necklace she always wore, even when she slept. I carried her broken body back to the cabin to find Matt awake and taking care of our father. A few minutes later the Flight for Life helicopter landed outside of the cabin and a couple ranger vehicles arrived via the service roads. The Flight for Life people took my father right away while 1 of the medics stayed to take care of Matt and myself. I kept pushing the medic away as I searched for the man that started all of this. I found his body a tangles mess near the natural gas tank the cabin used for the fire and cooking. He looked as if someone had reached into his body and ripped him apart from the inside. I was numb, physically, mentally and emotionally as I wandered around the disaster that had taken most of my family away from me. When one of the medics approached me again I swung at him and yelled for him to stay away. The Cops that arrived while this was going on tackled me and the medic sedated me.

    While I was unconscious, my mind kept replaying what happened that night in the cabin. I still didn’t understand why it happened but I knew that the world was far different than I knew. Somehow that monster had reached his hand through me like the flash wasn’t there and I somehow fought back. I had to know what happened. Every time it played through however I saw the bodies of my family and felt crushed. I awoke in a hospital bed; there was an officer by the door to the room. I pushed the call button for the nurse. An older woman came in past the officer. He made no move to stop her.

    “I see you’re finally awake,” she stated with a forced smile. “You had us worried there for a while”

    I tried to ask for water but my throat was very dry and soar, it came out sounding like growl. The older nurse turned to face me and I pointed to the pitcher of water. She picked up the cup with the flexi straw and moved it to my lips. “Sip the water slowly; you haven’t had anything to drink in the last few days because you wouldn’t wake. We put you on an IV for fluids and nutrition.”

    I took a few sips of the water and let it sit in my mouth before swallowing it. I managed to whisper, “what’s the date?”

    “It’s the evening of the 10th and you’ve been here since the 6th. You’ve been asleep the whole time. Now that you’re awake, I need to notify your doctor and the officer there needs to speak with you when you are ready,” the Nurse replied.

    “Send him in please,” I stated hoarsely. She left and sent the officer in. When he came in he told me he needed to call the detectives in charge of the case in to see me. While I was waiting for the Detectives the Doctor came in. Her name tag said Dr. S. Grey, she was about 5’1” and 100lb. She had shoulder length read hair, and beautiful gray eyes. Dr. Grey looked to be in her early 20s no older than 24. She looked over my chart and rechecked my vitals. I asked after my father and Matt. She told me that my father had been flown directly to a trauma center and that Matt went to join him two day ago when I showed no sign of waking. She would contact the trauma center to let them now I was awake and to check their conditions for me.

    The Detectives arrived about 15 minutes after the doctor and nurse had left and asked if they could get a statement from me about what happened. I told them what I remembered about hearing a noise and then my mother’s scream. Running downstairs to try and help and about body checking the guy. Then I told them about him grabbing me by the neck and picking up. After that I told them I didn’t remember much, it was all strange like a dream. That I didn’t know what happed as I passed out while he was holding me. I left out the strange sense of what was going on and his hand passing through me because I didn’t fully understand what happened and didn’t want to get locked up for being crazy. They told me the officer on the door was for my protection and privacy as the guy was the serial killer that had been in the papers in Cheyenne. They put the officer there in case he had an accomplice and to keep the media away. They explained that what I remembered of the next day was accurate. Stated that the explosion was caused by a lightning strike to the gas tank outside and were amazed that anyone had survived it according to the arson investigator. I was out of the hospital and going to the trauma center to my father and brother the next day. We were there for another week before my father was released and we returned home. My father became distant and withdrawn and Matt stopped talking to me and went back to school. He and my father would talk on the phone but he wouldn’t talk to me anymore. I noticed immediately that the world seemed more real to me, I could sense things before they happened sometimes, I always know the time. I went to the school counselor upon returning as they wanted to make sure I was ok to return to class. I went to the adult education center and arranged to complete my classes and graduated 3 months into the school year. After that I went to work full time and started to put money away. Over the next 18 months I put away around 10 thousand dollars. During this time the strange sense I had of the world kept getting stronger and I noticed more things about what happed around me. I noticed that when I drove I always hit green lights and that my mind and body were getting stronger. On my 18th birthday I drove away from my home. I left a letter to my father explaining that I couldn’t stay there any longer as he had completely withdrawn from me as well as Matt, and without my mother and the girls I couldn’t live there any longer. That was 3 years ago, since then I have found a teacher and learned about True Magick and have gained in power quickly. They say that power corrupts, and that absolute power corrupts absolutely. I won’t say I am totally incorruptible but the way I came about my power makes me think before I abuse it. I have used it to make enough money to live comfortable as an investment broker and I am moving to my new home. I drive into Las Vegas, NV on my 21st birthday and can’t wait to have some fun.

    I see the signs for the Green Valley Ranch Casino as I’m driving down the freeway and decide that’s a nice enough place to stay. I pull of the freeway and head to the Valet. As I get out of my car and hand the keys to the valet I see a vision of beauty from the past. She is standing alone so I walk over to her, “Dr. Grey?” I ask.

    She turns and looks me over, she slowly looks me up and down. I should probably describe myself now as a lot has changes since I started explaining everything and this is where you need an Idea of my appearance. I’m about 5’10” around 190lbs of toned muscle. I have short back hair and green eyes, like a dark emeralds. I dress fairly well; right now I am in black slacks and a forest green silk button down shirt. She finishes looking me over and says “I’m sorry, but how do you know me?”

    “Granted, I was only 16 at the time, but I didn’t think I was that forgettable. You on the other hand have only gotten more beautiful. I’m Andrew Graves, you treated me after the incident at the cabin in the mountains.” I tell her. And the compliment wasn’t just idle. She was still only 5’1” but in her heels she came to about 5’7”. She still looked like she was in her early 20, time was being very kind to her. Her hair was now down to her waist and was more of a copper-red that practically shined. She looked to be about 110lbs now, and it showed in her curves. She had a heart shaped ass that was shown off to great advantage by the tall heals and the body hugging dress she was wearing. It was a deep green almost shading to black that ended at mid-thigh and showed off her silky legs. The neckline dipped in front to show off her incredible cleavage and B-cups that I couldn’t see before because of the loose scrubs she wore for work. She was a walking dream come true.

    “Of course I remember you, it was such a tragedy what happened. I’m sorry again for your loss.” Was her response with a sad look.

    “It’s alright, it was years ago and I’ve learned to live with it.”

    She smiled and my heart started beating faster, “I didn’t recognize you because you have grown and changed since we last met, for the better as well. You’ve grown into quite a handsome man Mr. Graves.”

    “Call me Andrew please, no need to be so formal Dr. Grey” I replied. As I spoke I infused my works with a little Magick to spark her desire for me, and to influence her to want to spend time with me.

    “Certainly Andrew, and it’s Sindee. You aren’t my patient anymore and no need to be so formal.” She flushed as her desire started to heat up within her.

    “Would you join me for dinner Sindee, I just arrived in town and would enjoy the company?” I didn’t infuse the words with anymore Magick; I just reached out to her mind to read the surface thoughts as I waited for her reply.

    “I’d love to Andrew, let me just call my friends and let them know I’m changing my plans.” She stepped away and made a call on her Cell phone. As she thought about the call I say several women in her thoughts as she talked about changing plans. When she started talking about meeting an old friend by chance, images of her and I entwined and sweaty in a bed were passing through her mind.

    As she put the phone away I stepped up to her and offered her my arm. As she put her arm through mine I told her, “we just need to go by the desk so that I can check in, then we’ll go get that meal.” We started up the escalator and headed for the front desk. “How long are you in Vegas for Sindee?”

    “I’m actually living here now, moved down shortly meeting you. I came down here to do more good than I could in that small town hospital. How long are you planning to stay?”

    “I’m an investment broker now and am moving here. That’s the reason I chose a Casino this far out. I figured I’d be closer to looking for real estate for my home and maybe an office.” She smiled upon hearing that. I got checked in quickly and had my bags sent up to the Suite I checked into while we went to get dinner. We spoke and got caught up on what we did over the last few years. During the talking I used a little more Magick to enhance her Sense of taste and the pleasure centers of the body using the aspect of Magick dealing with life. I only increased these senses a little for now but kept the connection opened between us so I could change the effects as the night went on. We finished the meal and I invited her to my suite for a night cap. We left the restaurant and headed for the elevators together.
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    As Sindee and I rode up the elevator I thought about the path that brought me here to Vegas. When most of my family died I thought it was the man that had caused their death and the explosion that devastated the cabin and my life. As I started to learn about what I was and could do I stopped being so sure. When I met the Mage Marcus, who would be my friend and mentor I found out about Awakenings and he explained that my tapping into Magick the first time a just throwing the power at the evil who attack us caused the destruction and deaths of those I loved. It also alerted many other Mages and other beings that a new Mage came into the world. My mentor explained to me that the man that attacked us was another Mage who wanted my power for himself. I took me months to accept that my survival had caused the death of most of my family. From that understanding I came to believe that having the power meant I had to learn to control it and use it properly. I’m not saying by any means that I go around helping everyone selflessly. I just don’t abuse the power I have. I have fun with it sometimes however, who wouldn’t?

    The Elevator arrived at my floor and I led Sindee into the Suite. As soon as we were through the door and closed it I turned to her and leaned down to kiss her. When our lips met, we both felt each other’s need and desire. I reach around her as we kissed and lifted her from the floor by her perfect heart shaped ass. She wrapped he legs around my waist and broke the kiss. Sindee ripped my shirt open tearing buttons off as I carried her towards the bed, pulling the shirt out of my pants and trying to slide it down my arms that were wrapped around her. I sat down on the bed with her wrapped round me so she was in my lap. I held her in my lap with my left hand as I unzipped her dress with the other. She stood up to slip the dress off, as she did this I stood and turned her so her back was to the bed. I pulled my shirt off as I turned her. She wasn’t wearing a bra so her incredible breasts were on full display. They were about the size of a grapefruit and her bright pink nipples stood out against her pale skin begging to be sucked on. I stepped back into her and began kissing her again lowering her back onto the bed. I started to slowly kiss down her body and tapped into the Magick allowing me to know what she enjoyed and to enhance the pleasure she received as I started to kiss down her neck and across she shoulder moving down to her right breast as I ran my hands along her soft, hot skin. I got to her right breast and slowly ran my tongue around her nipple without actually touching the stiff point itself. I then sucked her nipple into my mouth and flicked the hard bud with my tongue. Sindee grabbed onto my back and shoulders as her nails dug into my back. While I was enjoying her right breast I used my left hand to fondle and play with the other nipple, squeezing and pulling it gently. I then moved to her left breast with my mouth and moved my right hand to her right breast and nipple to treat it the same way. Sindee began to tremble and spasm as she was push into her orgasm just by having her breasts licked and played with.

    Sindee simply moaned in pleasure as I continued to move down her body, running my hands along her silky skin and kissing my way down. Sindee reached down and ran her hands through my hair as I moved along her body. When I got down to her waist, I knelt down on the floor and pulled her to the edge of the bed. I blew air across her wet panties watching the goose bumps spread across her flesh as she shivered. I grabbed her green silk panties by the waistband and slid them down her legs as she lifted her hips to aid me in this. I tapped into the Magick and allowed us each to feel the others passion and pleasure as it built between us and then ran my tongue the full length of her slit. My cock was instantly as hard as it had ever been as her pleasure poured into me and mine into her. I slip my hands up her inner thighs and spread her hips wide; opening her shaved pussy to me and exposing her clit. I slipped a finger into her hot pussy feeling the heat radiating from her as I lick her clit and the lips of her sweet pussy. I took the little button gently between my teeth and applied just a little pressure as I ran my tongue around and randomly across it, never letting the sensation become a pattern and keeping her body reacting to the sensations it was feeling. I continued to finger her pussy and slipped a second finger as she loosened up more. I slipped the two fingers in continuing to play with her until I pushed her into her second orgasm. Sindee screamed out as she came harder than the first time and covered my face and chest with her juices.

    As she came down from her orgasm, Sindee sat up and pulled me up to kiss her. She explored my mouth with her tongue not caring that she was licking her own juices from my face. She stood and turned me around so my back was toward the bed. She knelt before me, reached out and undid the buckle of my pants, yanking them and my underwear down together. My rock hard 9in cock was pointed almost straight up as she wrapped her right hand around it and with a doctors knowledge of anatomy began to slide her hand along it she moved her mouth around the head. She sucked just the head between her lips and slid the tip or her tongue into the slit lick and suck the pre-cum leaking out. Sindee started to take a little more into her mouth at a time using her tongue both to lubricate it and drive me insane as she played with the sensitive edges of the head as she pulled back before going deeper onto again. She ran her right hand down the shaft and cupped my balls, starting to massage them while she sucked on my hard cock. She slid her left hand up my leg and slowly pushed me back so that I was laying on the bed. She continued to take more and more into her mouth until she had me in her throat. It was the first time a woman had ever taken me that deep and I thought I was dreaming it felt so good. It was strange as well because I could feel her pleasure in my mouth and throat as well but that just made it that more erotic and pleasurable knowing she enjoyed doing that to me.

    Sindee slowly withdrew my cock from her throat and slid her mouth off of my cock, letting her teeth gently and barely scrape along the surface just as I had done with her clit, changing the possibility of pain into the highest of pleasure. I reach down and took Sindee’s hand pulling her up onto the bed with me as we both moved so we weren’t on the edge of the bed any longer. I looked down into her eyes as I positioned myself between her legs and slid the head of my hard dick just into the lips of her soaking hot pussy. Sindee reach out with both arms grabbing my hips and pulling me forward. As my cock slowly slid into her tight, wet, silky pussy we both groaned as our partner’s pleasure flowed between us making everything more intense and exciting. As my cock bottomed out into her cervix there was still another inch not in side of her since she was so petite. I slid out slowly until just the head of my dick was still inside and slid back in. I started pumping in and out increasing my pace as the pleasure built for both of us. Sindee was screaming, “Yes, Fuck me….Harder…faster. OH MY GOD YESSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!” as I continued to increase my pace and push against her cervix on every stroke. She rolled me onto my back and started to fuck me. Sindee started off rising and lowering herself building the pleasure, just we started to get near the edge she lowered herself all the way so my cock was buried to pushing against her. Sindee started to rock and twist her hips and continued her fucking me, riding me hard. Just as the pleasure built to where it was almost unbearable, Sindee forced herself down onto me until my cock head pushed into her cervix and squeezed with the walls of her pussy pushing us both over. Sindee screamed, “ YESSS!!!!! Cum in me!!!!!!!.” As I pumped my seed deep into her womb her orgasms hit and our pleasure flowed into each other through the Magick. There were no words during this as we were both wracked by each other’s orgasms until we passed out wrapped around each other tangled in the sheets as the image I saw in her mind earlier. As we passed out the spell wore off as I no longer was aware to maintain it.

    We woke hours later as the sunrise spread light into the room as the curtains were still open from last night. Sindee was still laying half across my body with her head on my chest, hear ear pressed to my beating heart. When I looked down, her eyes rose and met mine and I realized that I truly felt for this woman. I looked into her eyes and just wanted to continue to do so. “Good morning Andrew, I wasn’t sure you were going to wake up again,” She stated with a smile as she looked at me.

    “If I get to see you when I do, I’ll always wake up,” I replied as I remembered once again the reason we first met. For a change, the memory didn’t completely fill me with sadness. It would never be an easy memory to live with, but I now knew that the pain would fade and I’d be able to remember my family without hurting in time.

    Sindee got up and said she needed a shower. While she got out of bed and walked into the bathroom for her shower, I got up and grabbed a robe. I called down to room service for Coffee, Tea, Orange Juice and a few light pastries and fruit. It arrived just as she came out of the bathroom in a robe, he red silky hear glowing in the morning sunlight as she walked across the room. I signed for the cart and tipped the waiter generously on the room bill. I pulled the cart into the room and turned to Sindee, “I wasn’t sure want to get so I got some light starters so we could wake up before going anywhere.”

    She laughed, and it was an almost musical sound coming from her. “Thank you, the Orange juice and fruit will make a great start.”

    “I’m going to take a quick shower, I’ll be right out.” I showered in record time wanting to be done before she could leave. When I came out she was stepping back into her dress from the night before and sliding it up her body with her back to me. I walked up behind her was she slid her arms in, and the straps onto her shoulders. I zipped the dress back up for her and turned her to face me. “Leaving already?”

    “No, I just wanted to get dressed before we talked more. I need you to know that I’ve never slept with a patient before. Current or former and I don’t normally jump into bed with someone.” She grimaced as she said this. “Last night was a great experience, but it was new for me and I don’t want you to think I’m some slut who just sleeps around,” she turned her eyes down as she said this.

    I reach out under her chin and gently turned her head up until she was looking me in the eyes. “Last night was one of the best in my life. Not just because of the passion we shared, but that I shared it with such a unique woman. I could never think of you as anything other than an angel, you were there for me after one of the worst nights anyone has ever had. I’ll admit I had a crush on you when we first met, but the situation was a lot different than now. Now we are both consenting adults and I hope you don’t regret it, as I want to spend more time with you since we are both going to be living here and you’re the only person I know.” I said this sincerely and let it show in my face, not hiding any emotions so she could see it was true.

    Sindee’s smile returned and it out shined the sun coming through the window, “I’d like that as well.” As she said this her phone rang and she answered it on speaker. “Hello?”
    There were several female voices in the background as one of them spoke quickly, “Morning Sindee, so how was your night with the hot thing we saw you walk into the restaurant with?” Sindee blushed at this statement and after a moment of silence the voice came back, “Come on Sin, I haven’t seen you out with anyone in months, give me the details. Who is he, how do you know him?”

    Sindee finally regained her composure and replied, “He’s a young man I met about 5 years ago and just heard your entire line of questions as you’re on speaker. Thanks for mentioning that I hadn’t been out in months Natalie.”

    A gasp came from the speaker as she realized what she said. I spoke up, “It’s nice to meet you Natalie, I’m Andrew Graves. I’m moving into to town and was pleasantly surprised when I saw Sindee at the Valet.”

    Natalie sounded surprised as the others in the background started laughing at her. Then she asked, “Sindee, are you still meeting us for lunch today or are you changing plans again?” She paused, “you could always invite Andrew along if you’d like.” I chuckled as she said this. One of the other voices in the background spoke up and we heard he question. “Natalie, isn’t that the name of the patient Sindee said inspired her to move her and she had a cru..” The voice cut off as Sindee pressed the end call button, she was blushing and with her pale skin and copper red hair she looked even more beautiful doing so.

    She smiled quickly and said, “Friends, you can always expect them to say just the right thing.” I simply smiled back and acted like I didn’t hear the other one in the background. I knew what it was like to have a crush, I had one on her but wasn’t thinking about it at the time due to everything else that happened when we met.

    “I was going to ask you to join me for lunch so we could continue to catch up, but it seems like you had other plans. I would feel bad if I was the reason you stood your friends up again.” I walked over to my pants and pulled out my wallet. I pulled out a business card and walked to the table grabbing a pen. I wrote on the back of the card and handed it to Sindee, “The number on the back is my personal cell.”

    She picked up my phone and added a contact to the list, then took a picture of herself. “That’s my number. Make sure you call me so we can get together again.” She then stepped back up to me and kissed me, slipping her tongue into my mouth. I reach up and ran left hand through her hair as my right cupped her cheek and neck. She ran her hands down my sides and pulled on the robes belt. I didn’t notice this as I was caught up in the kiss. When we both needed to breath she stepped back a few feet, snapped a picture with her phone and slid it into her purse saying, “something to tease the girls and get them back with.” She walked over to the door leaving me standing there with a hard on. She looked over her shoulder with a mischievous smile as she walked out and let the door close behind her.

    I tried to focus on getting myself settled in to town after she left but my thoughts kept returning to her. I knew it was possible for random chance to bring us back together but after learning that chance a probability were just another part of reality that Mages can alter I started thinking about it more. Since I couldn’t settle my mind on finding a new home I chose a different project. I tapped into the Magick that I could control and back along my personal path through time and entropy. I saw that I was guided to here by the natural flow of time and chance. There was no sign that other Mages had their hands in it. I again thanked the laws of entropy that brought us here together last night. I should have looked towards the future instead; I may have been prepared for what was coming…….
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    If you were following my instructions in the first post, you will notice something in the threading now.

    The first post shows all by itself at the top of the threads but the STORY posts show up as identically indented items.
    Each story has a thread dedicated to it; these are replies that are made directly to messages in that thread.
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    If you were NOT following my instructions in my first post, then the conversation here will not seem odd at all because this is the most recent message posted so far.

    If you have set your display to threaded mode, however, then you will have to look at the times to notice that this is the latest entry as it shows up on the first thread.

    NOW let's switch to Hybrid mode and see what changes.
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    Threaded mode actually shows individual messages which can be followed as a conversation (quotes actually show the references here).

    Hybrid mode allows the conversation to be seen almost like normal but the threads are separated and show the flow of THOSE conversations instead of simply the flow of the thread itself.

    You will also notice something different about the reply options depending on the display version which is used.
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    Sorry for the break in instructions, I forgot to put the links to the stories locations on the story site as well

    Modern Mage - Introduction (Edited)
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    Modern Mage - Chapter 2 (edited)

    I will probably put more of his story up here (unless he requests that I stop) as conversation gets entered in order to show other aspects which can be used by both the author and audience.
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    I already replied to Darthel0101 via PM but also wanted those on the site to now that not only did I agree and tell him it was ok to use my work but that I appreciated that fact that he though my work, flaws and all could be used to help other writers and the constructive feedback on here I can use.

    Quote Originally Posted by darthel0101 View Post
    Howdy folks. At the risk of being pedantic, I am doing something a little bit weird for this site.

    This is not my story and I do not want to even appear to be stealing it but I thought that I would share something with the forum.

    The Writer is Wolf_Knight and if you check you will find that his name IS a link (if you see similarly formatted items in any of my messages, you will find them to be links as well). Please note that if you select and copy any link on this site then the copy creates an exact duplicate of what you copied (text and hyperlink together).

    I will be adding the story as well but wanted to make sure that everybody also noticed a few other things. These are things which do not generally mean anything to regular conversations but when you are writing stories and chapters show up every so often to break the flow then there are some things which can be done to improve the reader's experience.

    If you check the top of the page here, you will see an option for "Display Modes." The options are linear, hybrid and threaded. I will be willing to bet that most of you reading this have never used either threaded or hybrid but that is what will really improve the READER's experience here. Select Threaded Mode and your display will show the conversation's flow.

    Keep it selected while viewing what happens with this thread and you will see what I mean about enhancing your reader's enjoyment.

    ANYWAY, this post is an introduction and as such, here is the introduction which Wolf Knight provided with his story originally

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    This is my first story written and posted. I checked spelling and grammar but may have missed some things. This is based loosely in White Wolf Games old World of Darkness for my inspiration and is just a start or the many ideas I have to continue on with. There is no actual sex in this chapter but the ending sets up for the start of the next chapter. Please let me know what you think of the story as a whole and of the writing style as well. Please be constructive not just this sucked or it was great. Let me know what you actually think. Thank you
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    If you check the threaded view again, you will see that this comment is directly associated with the first chapter itself. This makes it easier for the writer to see comments which are directly related to his offerings as opposed to comments which are more general. Once again, Hybrid mode allows the individual conversations to play out on the screen instead of simply throwing out the comments as they appear.

    Please note that for this to work to its optimum, both writer and reader need to participate.
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    … when I say Mage I sure the first though to come into your mind is the Harry Potter novels and movies or the old cartoons where you have people in old laboratories surrounded by strangely labeled jars like eye of newt and bat wings.
    Here is where the commenting can come in - I am going to go grammar nazi for a second.
    …when I say, "Mage," I am sure that the first thought to come into your mind is either Harry Potter or the old cartoons where a person is in an old laboratory and surrounded by strangely labelled jars like "Eye of Newt" and "Bat Wings."
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    Where that kind of magic is in the world and there are a few hedge wizards among you mortals, that’s not true Magick. My name is Andrew and I’m going to give you a glimpse into the reality of a true Mage.

    a little more grammar nazi,
    While that kind of magic is in the world and there are a few hedge wizards among you mortals, that's not true Magick.

    My name is Andrew and I'm going to give you a glimpse into the reality of a true Mage.

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    Dareth - thanks for the lessons on using the threaded mode; obviously I had missed this aspect of the forum threads completely. Thanks again, it will make it easier on my longer stories, such as the one coming up shortly this day, to track the responses.
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