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    I feel, dear one, that you are attempting to inspire me. If that is the case, I think you have succeeded. I feel all the attraction to this site that many others do and probably more than most.

    I make a pledge herewith: I will do my very best to pull myself from the mire of the doldrums and to all that I can, in my own weak way, to revive the spirit of this site to what it was in the not too distant past.

    This has been a marvelous site for both the novice, the perv, and the polished author. The only thing stopping it from becoming that once again is the constant attack by the trolls on the very best of us. Even though that is so very despiriting, I pledge to do my very best to overcome that.

    How's that, dear one, for your self-worth? You have inspired me and I hope I can cause you pride.

    Thank you.
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    Quote Originally Posted by donb9033 View Post
    How do we know the site is dying? Try this:

    1.) No new authors worth recommending,
    2.) Not many new stories worth reading and reviewing,
    3.) No meaningful communication with those we really care about,
    4.) Days go by without any posts on the Forum,
    5.) The only source of joy is private communication (not via the forum) with those we really care about,
    6.) A sense of discouragement whenever one thinks about writing,
    and on, and on, and on, ad infinitum.

    Need I say more?

    Oh, and how can I forget: after a wonderful concept by ejls and marvelous work by some thoroughly noteworthy authors, the writing contest is complete and not too many (other than us hard-core members) even care.

    So sad.
    It must be all in the way you look at it (or in this case don't look at it).

    1. I see new authors almost daily and some have started very good stories! (I have left them encouraging comments... ON the forum).

    2. I have seen some great new stories and WOULD review them if I were a better reviewer... I DID leave one review on the "story review" thread.

    3. I have gotten a lot of PM's here.... though I'd rather people comment on the forum.

    4. I see at least a half-dozen new posts, on the "Story Forum" alone, each day.

    5. I see and send a whole bunch of PM's

    6. I am working on a new story right now. I have written two since joining this site.

    Don't ignore what is there.

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    If there are so many new promising authors, why haven't you posted their names and links on this thread? Forgot?

    I have tried reading the stories from some of these new ones and have been hard-pressed to withhold my impulse to puke. Some are okay, most seem to suck, some actually show promise. If you see it differently, why don't you show us? You see so much more clearly than I, enlighten me.

    It's hard to have fun when the assholes are engaged in such a gratuitus attack on everything I hold dear. If that would stop, so would I.
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    Quote Originally Posted by donb9033 View Post
    I feel, dear one, that you are attempting to inspire me. If that is the case, I think you have succeeded. I feel all the attraction to this site that many others do and probably more than most.

    I make a pledge herewith: I will do my very best to pull myself from the mire of the doldrums and to all that I can, in my own weak way, to revive the spirit of this site to what it was in the not too distant past.

    This has been a marvelous site for both the novice, the perv, and the polished author. The only thing stopping it from becoming that once again is the constant attack by the trolls on the very best of us. Even though that is so very despiriting, I pledge to do my very best to overcome that.

    How's that, dear one, for your self-worth? You have inspired me and I hope I can cause you pride.



    Thank you.
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    *blushes* I wasn't scolding you don. I was trying to show the established authors here that YOU are what drew alot of people here and that they will keep coming. IMO it's merely the tracking methods here that need some sort of overhaul.

    Again, please do not think I was being condescending or scolding.

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    Quote Originally Posted by donb9033 View Post
    If there are so many new promising authors, why haven't you posted their names and links on this thread? Forgot?

    I have tried reading the stories from some of these new ones and have been hard-pressed to withhold my impulse to puke. Some are okay, most seem to suck, some actually show promise. If you see it differently, why don't you show us? You see so much more clearly than I, enlighten me.

    It's hard to have fun when the assholes are engaged in such a gratuitus attack on everything I hold dear. If that would stop, so would I.
    Try just looking at the story forum once in a while. I check it daily.

    This thread has rarely (lately) been used to recommend authors so I have no example of how this even works.
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    Quote Originally Posted by donb9033 View Post
    Funny, but when did the word 'fuck' become so very funny? In fact, is the only reason this skit is funny because he says it so often?

    Love.
    I'm sorry if I offended you Don. It was apparently a poor attempt to get people to smile. As a golfer, this piece of comedy makes perfect sense.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ELaken-Palmer View Post
    Try just looking at the story forum once in a while. I check it daily.

    This thread has rarely (lately) been used to recommend authors so I have no example of how this even works.
    Being retired, I have the ability to check the forum several times a day and do so. It seems the most popular threads are re-posts of stories that have been on the site for many years. New talent?

    As to how this thread works; check back a little and you will probably find some recommendations to use as an example.
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    Quote Originally Posted by donb9033 View Post
    Being retired, I have the ability to check the forum several times a day and do so. It seems the most popular threads are re-posts of stories that have been on the site for many years. New talent?

    As to how this thread works; check back a little and you will probably find some recommendations to use as an example.
    Lately (in only the last several days) I have noticed the very old posts at the top of the page. New members are looking through the forum and commenting on older stories... bringing them to the top of the page where they get commented on again.

    I hate to comment on these stories (though some are quite good) because some of the writers are long gone.

    I commented on one of them yesterday and mentioned that it was written in November. I did check and see the author was logged on day before yesterday.
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    Don-

    You're making me smile. If you're really looking for new authors with new stories that show real promise, (as in staying on the the front page of the 30 day top rated list for several days,) you can even see one in person if you've got a mirror in the house.

    With respect and appreciation;
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    I would like to recommend these two stories by Berril, what makes them both compulsive reading is the fact they are true.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Wimmers View Post
    I would like to recommend these two stories by Berril, what makes them both compulsive reading is the fact they are true.


    http://stories.xnxx.com/profile219702/berril
    I agree. The punishment story is a little too much for me, but, with a little more attention on format, this could be very interesting. I hope she continues to write.

    Thank you for making this recommendation.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ssalo View Post
    Don-

    You're making me smile. If you're really looking for new authors with new stories that show real promise, (as in staying on the the front page of the 30 day top rated list for several days,) you can even see one in person if you've got a mirror in the house.

    With respect and appreciation;
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    Thank you for your kindness, but I will no longer write. They have won.
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    Quote Originally Posted by donb9033 View Post
    Oh, and how can I forget: after a wonderful concept by ejls and marvelous work by some thoroughly noteworthy authors, the writing contest is complete and not too many (other than us hard-core members) even care. So sad.
    Friend Don, quite a few readers must care because your story is doing well on the front page with 55+ thousand hits! I believe this is the highest read count of any contest story.

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    Ellen, try Zycam. It's only zinc, but it really knocks the crap out of a cold.

    Love.
    Hasn't this medicine been in the news recently as sometimes causing a loss of smell and taste?

    Quote Originally Posted by ssalo View Post
    Thanks for the chuckle. Zycam's worked for me as well as Don. It seems to be worth some effort to start using it ASAP for maximun effectiveness. I'm also a believer in about 2000mg of Vit. C twice a day.

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    guess i need to try harder to make the cut
    If she likes it, it cant be a bad thing

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    Quote Originally Posted by JackassTales View Post
    Friend Don, quite a few readers must care because your story is doing well on the front page with 55+ thousand hits! I believe this is the highest read count of any contest story.

    Hasn't this medicine been in the news recently as sometimes causing a loss of smell and taste?


    ssalo, I take a 500mg dose of Vit C daily. My urologist told me that anything over 1000mg daily can cause kidney damage. If it works for you, pay no attention to me.

    All those hits, very decent rating, some very nice comments (along with some very obscene ones), and not one single vote on the poll. I'm not kicking, because I personally think Ellen should win.

    Zycam nasal swabs were pulled from the market because some idiot said they caused a permanent loss of smell. I've used them, with great success for a couple of years with no problem. Now, of course, I use either the mouth spray or the fast disolving pills. Either completely avoid catching a cold or severely limit symptoms. Only zinc - not medicine.

    I take 500 mg Ester C every day. The vit C is very slowly released into your system - take less, stays longer.

    Now that my commercial activities and medical advise columns are completed, How's things, Jack? Haven't heard from you in quite some time and was a little worried. Take care.
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    I am new to the XNXX Writers Guild. So far 4 with a sordid little tale in the holding pen.
    I have enjoyed the works here but I have no intention of copying someone elses style or ideas for a story.
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    Quote Originally Posted by donb9033 View Post
    All those hits, very decent rating, some very nice comments (along with some very obscene ones), and not one single vote on the poll. I'm not kicking, because I personally think Ellen should win.

    Zycam nasal swabs were pulled from the market because some idiot said they caused a permanent loss of smell. I've used them, with great success for a couple of years with no problem. Now, of course, I use either the mouth spray or the fast disolving pills. Either completely avoid catching a cold or severely limit symptoms. Only zinc - not medicine.

    I take 500 mg Ester C every day. The vit C is very slowly released into your system - take less, stays longer.

    Now that my commercial activities and medical advise columns are completed, How's things, Jack? Haven't heard from you in quite some time and was a little worried. Take care.
    How's things with me? Don, I seem to be in the same boat as you as far as getting votes on my story in the contest poll. I could say I don't mind, but I suppose I do. Like you, I believe Ellen should win.

    Thanks for the Zycam update. Knock on wood, I haven't had a cold in over two years so I haven't been keeping up with remedies. I hope Ellen gets well really soon?

    I have a new story halfway done, but I'm having a problem with having the motivation to continue. I may be one of those writers you mentioned who feel despair with the state of affairs at the story site. I might release my half-story (it has a beginning, middle, and end) this week on the forum site if I can edit it. Here I can post the picture which was my inspiration.

    As I close, I'll mention that I'm quite busy PM-flirting with a sexy, young, 21 yr old lady (yes she knows I'm pushing 60). At her last posting she was halfway out of a thong bikini, so I'd better go check on her instead of hanging out here with old fellas like you!
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    I just read a story that appeared in the "New Stories" section by an author who calls herself Cly. Wow! I'm really not much of a Dungeons and Dragons type person, but, as you (hopefully) have seen, I do occasionally enjoy a little play in the supernatural world (shameless plug for my latest story).

    Cly's latest post, "The Rat and the Dragon," appears to be part 1 of a series, one I am anxious to see her complete. The story is quite well written, but for the casual reader who just wants a good jerk-off story, it may be too long.

    HOWEVER, the length of the story is absolutely necessary, since a large amount of background information is required as Cly invites us to her fantasy world (one with several moons -- nice touch!) filled with elves, dragons, vampires, giants, and other magical creatures. The supernatural, which plays heavily in this tale, is completely believable, due to the expert way in which the author crafts her story.

    Altogether, an excellent read.

    Now, I must go study the rest of her collection.

    Here is the link to this wonderful offering, which, in my humble opinion, qualifies Cly as a recommended writer:

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    Quote Originally Posted by JackassTales View Post
    I have a new story halfway done, but I'm having a problem with having the motivation to continue. I may be one of those writers you mentioned who feel despair with the state of affairs at the story site. I might release my half-story (it has a beginning, middle, and end) this week on the forum site if I can edit it. Here I can post the picture which was my inspiration.
    Just what do I have to do to motivate you? Maybe paint a picture of some 21 year old bending over your knees for a spanking? What ever it takes to get you to writing, let me know.
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    Quote Originally Posted by wantsomefun View Post
    Here is the link to this wonderful offering, which, in my humble opinion, qualifies Cly as a recommended writer:

    http://stories.xnxx.com/story/24015/...and_the_Dragon
    Thank you for this. I must check her stories out.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Prurient Purveyer View Post
    I am new to the XNXX Writers Guild. So far 4 with a sordid little tale in the holding pen.
    I have enjoyed the works here but I have no intention of copying someone elses style or ideas for a story.
    Just checked out your stories - well, the first one and the last one to check on style/improvement, etc. I must tell you that your story ideas are bloody marvelous.

    What I see lacking, if you care to hear, is proof read, proof read, proof read, and some more of the same. With a little care and attention to detail, you could have some real winners on your hands.

    For now, they do provide something very interesting to think about, but with the changes that I think should be made, they would provide a reason for wet dreams.

    I hope I have not upset you, but I did want to be honest.

    Keep trying and I'll keep reading.
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    Quote Originally Posted by wantsomefun View Post
    Altogether, an excellent read.

    Now, I must go study the rest of her collection.

    Here is the link to this wonderful offering, which, in my humble opinion, qualifies Cly as a recommended writer:

    http://stories.xnxx.com/story/24015/...and_the_Dragon
    I thoroughly agree. What a great story. I was spirited back to a day when there was majic with shades of Princess Lea (piss on Luke Skywalker).

    Thank you, dear friend, for recommending this writer. A very good read and almost, but not quite, who cares about the sex.
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    Quote Originally Posted by donb9033 View Post
    If there are so many new promising authors, why haven't you posted their names and links on this thread? Forgot?
    Fair enough I dunno if this one has been recommended and vetoed off of DC'c list. but...

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    he's been writing for quite a while and has been pretty well recieved I certainly think he is quite entertaining and is one of the authors I look out for. dunno if your just after new ones or if you want to keep the list up to date. his new series "Fun with coworkers" is alot of fun as are his older ones.
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    No one, I repeat NO ONE, is ever voted (or vetoed) off DC's list. All it takes to get on the list is an honest recommendation. Like yours. Thank you. I will be sure to check out his stories.
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    For all the talk of this site dying, there's finally a new page on this thread and a couple of new recommendations, so I think tomorrow I'll post an updated list. If anyone has any last-minute suggestions, get them in now.
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    Quote Originally Posted by donb9033 View Post
    Just checked out your stories - well, the first one and the last one to check on style/improvement, etc. I must tell you that your story ideas are bloody marvelous.

    What I see lacking, if you care to hear, is proof read, proof read, proof read, and some more of the same. With a little care and attention to detail, you could have some real winners on your hands.

    For now, they do provide something very interesting to think about, but with the changes that I think should be made, they would provide a reason for wet dreams.

    I hope I have not upset you, but I did want to be honest.

    Keep trying and I'll keep reading.
    donb... Can you please give the same type of critique for my stories? No need to praise or reject them, but I would really like an honest comment as to how I can improve my writing. My stories on the stories section are often long but I do have a few short ones on here.

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    Thanks for that. Yes, I am horrified when I see that I have let errors get through. I guess at this stage I'm in too much of a rush to get the things posted.
    My latest should be up very soon, Meeting the Neighbors ( hope the categories Young and Lesbian appeal to you) also I regret to say has some typos.
    Just a few but still ...
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    Quote Originally Posted by dominatemeplease View Post
    donb... Can you please give the same type of critique for my stories? No need to praise or reject them, but I would really like an honest comment as to how I can improve my writing. My stories on the stories section are often long but I do have a few short ones on here.

    Disclaimer: As per DC's suggestion, the main theme for them all is submission and domination.
    Did that and here goes:

    Your first story appears to have fallen into the usual trap and that is a 'wall of type'. Very difficult to read. Almost a superhuman effort is required.

    The last story (before the contest) you eliminated the wall of type. I think your grammar, spelling, story telling, etc. are superb. You appear to be forgetting to designate the story tags and that can be upsetting to the reader.

    Bottom line: I think you are very gifted even though I normally don't care for the dom/sub story line. I think you are enchanted by the whole dom/sub thing, but have you given thought to trying a somewhat different story line?

    I hope I have not discouraged you. If you had continued with the wall of type like the first story, I would want to discourage you, but you didn't. Some of your paragraphs are a bit longer than is comfortable, but overall not bad. The initial appearance of a story when you first open it has a great bearing on how well you receive the story.

    Please continue to write - I'll be watching. (Now I don't mean to sound threating.)
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    Quote Originally Posted by donb9033 View Post
    Just what do I have to do to motivate you? Maybe paint a picture of some 21 year old bending over your knees for a spanking? What ever it takes to get you to writing, let me know.
    Thanks for concern about my motivation. I think my problem is that I'm writing about a mature 19 yr old teen instead of one of my little girls. I've got a ton of "young" story ideas and want to get to them. Hopefully, soon.

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    I thoroughly agree. What a great story. I was spirited back to a day when there was majic with shades of Princess Lea (piss on Luke Skywalker).
    Majic??? Old Buddy, like an elephant, I have a long memory. You corrected my "baited" breath, so here is my payment in kind. Hey, let's not get into a nitpicky finding-mistakes contest because we ALL do it.

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    Yeah, piss on Luke Skywalker!
    What's wrong with Luke Skywalker? Am I the only one who found the whole Princess Lea - Luke Skywalker thing kind of hot in a kinky sort of way?

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    Quote Originally Posted by JackassTales View Post
    Majic??? Old Buddy, like an elephant, I have a long memory. You corrected my "baited" breath, so here is my payment in kind. Hey, let's not get into a nitpicky finding-mistakes contest because we ALL do it.

    Yeah, piss on Luke Skywalker!
    Okay, we're even. Thanks (sarcasm).
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    As a way to boost things going on around here... how about we put everyone that participated in the writing contest on the list. I am already on there but I think all of the stories were pretty good.
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    Where have you been, bullfrog? Haven't heard from you in a while.
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    Quote Originally Posted by DeGuru View Post
    As a way to boost things going on around here... how about we put everyone that participated in the writing contest on the list. I am already on there but I think all of the stories were pretty good.
    That sounds like a good idea. What do you think, DC?
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    Quote Originally Posted by donb9033 View Post
    That sounds like a good idea. What do you think, DC?
    I hate to do something wholesale like that because it doesn't seem fair to the other authors who got on the list because someone truly thought they stood out above the rest. The contest was on a volunteer basis, after all, and it violates the spirit of the list to have people nominate themselves.

    I'll do it though if that's what everyone wants. What do other people think?

    By the way, I completely forgot to update the list yesterday like I said, but maybe that's a good thing, because it gives people a chance to comment on the idea of uploading all the authors from the contest.
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    Quote Originally Posted by DeGuru View Post
    As a way to boost things going on around here... how about we put everyone that participated in the writing contest on the list. I am already on there but I think all of the stories were pretty good.
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    That sounds like a good idea. What do you think, DC?
    Quote Originally Posted by Daddycums View Post
    I hate to do something wholesale like that because it doesn't seem fair to the other authors who got on the list because someone truly thought they stood out above the rest. The contest was on a volunteer basis, after all, and it violates the spirit of the list to have people nominate themselves.

    I'll do it though if that's what everyone wants. What do other people think?

    By the way, I completely forgot to update the list yesterday like I said, but maybe that's a good thing, because it gives people a chance to comment on the idea of uploading all the authors from the contest.
    Although it sounds good on paper, it might have problems in practice. To get on the list, a non-nominated writer might simply write a story for the next contest in hopes we would repeat this "pass". Yes more contest stories would be good, but not if the author's other stories are not deserving of recommendation.
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    Any comments, bullfrog? I am tending towards the opinion of JT and DC. What say you? You could always recommend specific entrants for this thread.
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    Everyone over the age of 50 (and most everyone younger) must read the new story by Jayney Redd http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=158810 on the forum. She has submitted it to the story site, but has given us a sneak preview.

    What a thoroughly lovely, poignant story. Talk about leaving tears in your eyes. Wow, Jayney, just Wow! She'll wind up owning this thread if she keeps it up.
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    donb...I've not hit the big 50 yet, but thank you for sharing that link. The story is .... amazing.
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    Thank you, sweetie. Our memories become very important, then we lose them. CRS really sucks.

    I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Redlust View Post
    Fair enough I dunno if this one has been recommended and vetoed off of DC'c list. but...

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    he's been writing for quite a while and has been pretty well recieved I certainly think he is quite entertaining and is one of the authors I look out for. dunno if your just after new ones or if you want to keep the list up to date. his new series "Fun with coworkers" is alot of fun as are his older ones.
    I made a mistake when starting to read his stories: I opened his oldest story first - wall of type. Almost gave up, but because of your recommendation, I decided to check further. His story ideas really seem to be good and his style is good. I will read all of his stories.

    Thanks for your recommendation. At last; some new reading material.
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    Quote Originally Posted by donb9033 View Post
    Any comments, bullfrog? I am tending towards the opinion of JT and DC. What say you? You could always recommend specific entrants for this thread.

    I don't know about future contest I was speaking to just this one, being honest I have not checked to see if any of the writers that did the contest are not on the list... that should be done first. I know for sure allot of the regs that participated are indeed on that list. I was not nominating myself as I am already on the list too. But I read everyone of those stories and I think they were all pretty good, while of course some were not my cup of tea. So I am just saying I recommend anyone that did a story for that contest that is not already on the list should be. Consider that a recommendation I guess.

    Yeah, Don sorry I have been busy with life. I stop by here and there but don't spend allot of time on at the moment. I am of course still writing maybe all post something here soon.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Daddycums View Post
    I hate to do something wholesale like that because it doesn't seem fair to the other authors who got on the list because someone truly thought they stood out above the rest. The contest was on a volunteer basis, after all, and it violates the spirit of the list to have people nominate themselves.

    I'll do it though if that's what everyone wants. What do other people think?

    By the way, I completely forgot to update the list yesterday like I said, but maybe that's a good thing, because it gives people a chance to comment on the idea of uploading all the authors from the contest.
    I don't recommend myself because my ratings speak for themselves. But I do feel that some of the contest participants are overlooked in favor of more well known participants. While their story subject matter might not be what everyone enjoys reading, the stories themselves are very much readable and maintain the constant flow needed to interest the reader. I nominated a few writers on the "Story contest" thread

    http://forum.xnxx.com/showpost.php?p...9&postcount=34

    because I personally haven't seen them acknowledged in as significant a mantra as many writers are.
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    Quote Originally Posted by seeminglysatisfied View Post
    I don't recommend myself because my ratings speak for themselves. But I do feel that some of the contest participants are overlooked in favor of more well known participants. While their story subject matter might not be what everyone enjoys reading, the stories themselves are very much readable and maintain the constant flow needed to interest the reader. I nominated a few writers on the "Story contest" thread

    http://forum.xnxx.com/showpost.php?p...9&postcount=34

    because I personally haven't seen them acknowledged in as significant a mantra as many writers are.
    Very nice thread. Thank you for the lovely comments.
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    - The Birthday Girl: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=147061
    - Her First Crush, Chapter 1: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=147314
    - Her First Crush, Chapter 2: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=147585
    - Her First Crush, Chapter 3: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=147849
    stumbler
    styxx
    - Styxx's stories on the forums: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=47107
    sullygom
    - Morning: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=100621
    - Tied Up: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=104382
    - Quickie: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=104765
    - Dream?: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=108142
    sweetlily4u
    Taurus/Aquarius
    - Submissive Slut: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=81859
    ThunderedEchoes
    - Perverted Dad: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=17532
    - Rachael: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?p=330441
    - Forbidden: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=46002
    Tom J
    - Love Lost and Found at Home: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=107691
    x__orion
    - The Rider, Part One: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=37216
    - The Rider, Part Two: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=37512
    - Sarachan: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=93991
    - Camorra: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=94536
    YoungDaddyDom
    - Kate: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=77171
    - Airman Brown: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=79041
    - Kate, Chapter 2 - The Bookstore: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=82194

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    Story Reviews: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=113778
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    A note about the new authors on the list:

    I did NOT include all authors who submitted stories to the contest. I did, however, include the authors that seeminglysatisfied mentioned in the post on the contest thread. Normally I wouldn't include recommendations on other threads, but since SS actually used the word "Recommend" in the comment talking about them, I'm counting it.

    Besides, it was only an extra two nominations; the rest of the ones mentioned were already on the list.
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    Thank you so much DC. The list is getting a little lengthy, isn't it? Not that I would ever consider shortening it. Can we say - 'revitalized'? Looks a little like it, huh?
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    Quote Originally Posted by donb9033 View Post
    Thank you so much DC. The list is getting a little lengthy, isn't it? Not that I would ever consider shortening it. Can we say - 'revitalized'? Looks a little like it, huh?
    Speaking of revitalized, for all our talk of the site dying and nothing much happening anymore, I added seven or eight new names to the list this time, which is an unusually large quantity. That suggests to me that XNXX is alive and well.
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    Starting to look like it.
    "The freedom and happiness of man...[are] the sole objects of all legitimate government."
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    I am starting to think the writers out there are showing themselves on the forum instead of just posting to the stories site. Maybe having their stories on both places would help to garner attention in their favor
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