My Early Incest Experiences.

[kevin_1s]

Great read. Still only on part 5...so plenty still to read.

[darkestdesires]

I love this story. On part 20, read it one section at a time. I LOVE IT!!!

[Cr00ker]

When's the next part up bella?

[vaughanie74]

I really like the way this story is going, thank you for sharing this
with us.

[Fish Monster]

I think Bella may have fallen off the face of the earth. I watched this thread for a while and am contemplating giving up on it because I can't take the disappointment of seeing it on page one and it only be a bump and not another posting by Bella.

FM

[QuietTemptress]

I totally know what you are saying FM... this was great once...

[wakyk]

I have followed this story since the first post and have like everyone else waited on pins and needles for the next chapter to come out. I don't know if I am ready to give up but I am close. If Bella would just acknowledge that she still intends to continue and approx when it might be posted, I would gladly wait. I do know that she posted a couple of months ago that she was working on it and it would be soon or at least that is what I remember but here we are. It is truly a shame as this was the best that I think I have ever read up to this point. Still Waiting

[maryjanneexx]

just read the whole story again jesus I'm so fucking wet... come out n play bella.....

[tuc_sac]

This was one great and hot story, I really enjoyed the pre-danny parts but still great read. Hoping on reading an update soon!

[vaughanie74]

I love this story and am patiently waiting for the next part.

[BabyBella]

Part 25

I was on my bed, naked, having just lost my virginity to my oldest brother. I heard him go upstairs and into the bedroom he shared with Ben, which was directly above mine. I just remained where I was, not moving, not doing anything. It was like I was frozen in time. I just stared up at the ceiling for the longest time. I didn't know what to do. Even though I knew there was the possibility of Ben coming down, I couldn't bring myself to clean myself up or do anything. I don't think I even thought about it anyway. I crawled under the duvet and into bed, just to get warm, but I left the light on. I had trouble coming to terms with what had happened. I wasn't even sure about how I felt about it - whether I felt good, bad, or indifferent. I'd had sex, and with my own brother. It was a big deal, but I couldn't get my head around it. Despite everything I'd done up to that point, nothing really prepared me for taking that extra, very huge, step.

As I said, I just lay there, lost in my own world, without any thought for Ben or anything else. If he did come down, he would have found me naked and awake. As usual, he would have had to wait maybe an hour after Danny went to bed before daring to venture downstairs. As it happened, he did come down - I heard him on the stairs - but he didn't come into my room. I can only assume he saw the light was on and changed his mind. I think he stood there for a time and then I heard him retreat upstairs to his room. I must have slept that night, but I don't really remember.

I remember thinking in the morning that everyone would know. It would show on my face somehow. I felt so different, so how could everybody not know? I didn't see Danny. I think now that he was avoiding me, but I wasn't really looking for him anyway. I was amazed at how samey everything was. My whole world had changed and yet everything was exactly the same. It was so weird. I couldn't tell anyone, of course. It was yet another secret for me to keep, on top of all the secrets I already had.

Everything was as it always was. No-one treated me any differently. I was always fairly quiet, so if I was a little more quiet than usual, no-one would have picked up on it. I had breakfast, I went to school, I hung out with Mark and his mates at lunch, I did pretty much what I did every day. Losing my virginity wasn't quite the earth-shattering event I'd thought it would be. I so wanted to tell everyone, to announce it to the world, but I couldn't. It would have ruined everything and hurt so many people in the process. So the day went along and Mark walked me home and we kissed in the park and nothing had changed.

And then there was Ben. As he tied me up and blindfolded me and took off my panties and spread my legs, I was sure he would somehow notice something different, but it wasn't so. If he noticed any difference in me, or in my pussy, he didn't show it. Again, everything was the same as it had been the day before. I did my stuff with Ben, had my tea, played with George, and the world carried on as normal. The fact that I was no longer a virgin made no difference to anything. Danny didn't come home but that wasn't unusual, so I couldn't tell if he was deliverately avoiding me or not, or even if he'd be back again for more of the same that night. I accepted that as a real possibility - why wouldn't he be back for more?

I was surprisingly calm about it. I think that the fact that everything was so normal made me think that maybe it wasn't such a big deal. Things might have been different if I'd had someone to share it with, someone close who could point out that it was a big deal, but I didn't have anyone like that. It might have been the same, of course, if someone had pointed out that what me and Ben were doing was a big deal too, but no-one ever did. I think I knew that what was happening to me wasn't "normal" but I didn't know any different and just accepted things the way they were.

Danny didn't come home that night. Again, I lay awake, anticipating his return, but he stayed at his friend's house. Ben came down, as usual, and did his stuff, so nothing had changed there either. It had been twenty-four hours since I'd lost my virginity and my life hadn't changed in the slightest. Maybe it wasn't such a big deal after all.

The next day was a Saturday, so I slept in. As I've said, the non-sexual relationship between me and Ben had deteriorated and we weren't as close as we used to be. I'm not sure if this was due to my relationship with Mark, or if something else was pulling us apart. Anyway, it got to the point where I would spend almost the entire weekend with George and his friends, and that meant that I could meet up with Mark from time to time - although we were usually chaperoned by George. I don't know why George insisted on accompanying me and Mark, but he seemed to enjoy it. Of course, Mark tolerated him, as there was really no way around it. In fact, Mark seemed okay with George most of the time. Though I'm sure he would have preferred that he wasn't there, he never said a bad word about George to me. Maybe he saw that George and I were close and didn't want to risk upsetting me, but I think it was mostly that Mark was just a good guy and he had a brother around George's age, so it didn't really bother him. Me and Mark did get some time alone, but only when George and his mates went off to do stuff on their own. When we were alone, we mostly kissed and Mark grabbed my tits and bum, but we didn't go any further than that. Even though I was no longer a virgin, I didn't instantly turn into a cock-hungry slut, although I'm sure Mark would have wanted me to. As it was, he seemed content to wait, and didn't try to pressure me into anything. I'm sure his attitude would have been different if he'd known the truth about me, but I guess we'll never know.

As I've said, the games with George and his friends usually had me as the helpless victim, tied to a tree, waiting to be rescued. I rarely got to do much more than that. It was all boys games and I was never allowed to fight or do any of the exciting stuff. They might have read about female action heroes in comics and seen them in movies, but they didn't exist as far as their games went. Even when we played football, I was never involved much. I was just tolerated - it was almost like they were doing me a favour, letting me join in. Despite all this, I never minded and never complained. Even during the breaks from the games, when we were all just sitting around, I was rarely involved in the conversations, which were mostly about football or other stuff I didn't understand. I can even remember being given money and sent to the shops to buy drinks and stuff, like a servant almost. There were times when I was the focus of attention, but it was rare, especially in the early days. I was just a girl and girls weren't important to them at the time - I was George's dumb older sister, and they only tolerated me because of that. Of course, as they got older, they started looking at girls in general - and me in particular - differently.

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More to come, if I can find some time. My life's a bit crazy at the moment, but hopefully it's getting back to normal, whatever that is. Sorry about the long delay and thanks for all the nice comments and PMs. I'll try and write more when I can.

[snowleopard3200]

HOLY HANNA! Well done BB.

[Fish Monster]

Thank you! Thank you so much for returning to us! I opened this thread anticipating another person hopelessly begging for this thread and for you Bella to resurface. And to my surprise your back!

I can wait to see where this may go.

FM

[ELaken-Palmer]

Love reading this ongoing story. Keep it coming.

[Fish Monster]

Originally Posted by ELaken-Palmer

Love reading this ongoing story. Keep it coming.

Hey Hey Hey! No reading for you. Their are MANY MANY MANY people waiting for the events of the Cantena to unfold...

FM

[bs3781]

Baby Bella you can't leave me hangin like that.... I've been reading this story on and off all day, free time at work and all that. I guess I'll just have to patiently wait for you to continue.... I can't wait

[DeepinsideXXx]

Seems like I've been waiting a long time, but it's OK. Thanks for the update Bella. And it's a very good update that I enjoyed reading.
Can't wait to hear more..

[mrlxymrn]

yay! Glad to have you back Bella. Oh, and thanks for the update, too. :D

[Scootter]

Welcome Back Hope all is well! and Thanks for taking the time to write this

[BabyBella]

Part 26

I saw Danny from time to time over the next few days, but we didn't talk or anything. He was away that whole weekend, which wasn't unusual, but came back Sunday night. I heard him and Dad arguing about something or other - again, not unusual. Over the next few days, Danny ignored me or avoided me, which was no big deal, as we were never really close anyway. Again, I think the fact that I never said anything to anyone about what he'd done must have seemed to him like some sort of acceptance - or even enjoyment - of him fucking me. I still wasn't sure how I felt about it. He didn't even sneakily grope me in the mornings, which had been his habit of late, but then he suddenly started doing it again one morning and I knew that he had satisfied himself that I wasn't going to snitch on him to Mum and Dad. I knew at that moment that he would be back to fuck me again. My acceptance of his groping no doubt seemed to him to mirror my acceptance of him fucking me. Since that night he would have, of course, been aware that Ben was still sneaking downstairs for his nightly visits, but I still wasn't sure what he thought Ben and I got up to on those occassions.

I don't know what I felt about the idea of Danny fucking me again. As with so many things, I was strangely calm about the prospect and perhaps even accepting of the inevitable. Did I think of ways to stop it from happening? What could I do anyway? Wasn't there a hint of blackmail in there too, suggesting that I go along with it or Mum and Dad find out about me and Ben? Of course, Danny would be getting himself in trouble too, for fucking me, but did he care? It was hard to tell with Danny.

In the end, I took the easy way out and did nothing, which is often the way with me.

I think maybe a whole week passed before Danny came tapping at my window again. I guess I knew it would happen again, but I didn't know when. I could have chosen to ignore him, but I didn't. I wasn't particularly apprehensive or nervous as I opened the window for him and watched him climb through. If he didn't fuck me again, it would be because of some inner guilt he felt, or his conscience getting the better of him, and not because of anything I said or did. But as soon as I saw the expression on his face at the window I knew that he was going to fuck me again.

"Missed me?" he said, smiling. He was already undoing his belt as I straightened the curtains and faced him. I was wearing a long t-shirt that came down to mid-thigh. If Danny had any lingering doubts about fucking me again, he didn't show it. His confidence was clear and his cock was already hard, no doubt in anticipation of what was to come.

"Don't fuck about, Bella. You know what to do."

Almost automatically, I dropped to my knees, doing what was expected of me.

"Get undressed first."

I stood up and quickly stripped off my t-shirt and panties. There was no hesitation on my part. Being naked in front of Danny wasn't a big deal any more. After letting him fuck me, there seemed little point in being modest. I dropped to my knees in front of him and started sucking his cock, taking my time, in no particular hurry. I just seemed to accept what was happening and ignored the potential dangers of being caught in such a compromising position, distancing myself from it. Looking back, it seems weird to imagine myself naked, down on my knees, sucking on my brother's cock, while my parents and the rest of my family slept peacefully upstairs.

"Yeah, you like that. My little sister the cock-sucker."

I don't know if Danny was worried about being caught, or if he just wanted things to move along, but he grabbed my hair in his fists and took control of the situation, fucking my mouth at his own pace. I just let him get on with it, offering no resistance as he fucked my mouth faster and deeper than before. It didn't last long, as he seemed determined to fuck me again, so he pulled out and then pulled me up by my hair, telling me to get on the bed. I watched him strip from the waist down, leaving just his t-shirt on. His cock was wet and shiny from fucking my mouth. I dutifully lay back and spread my legs, just like before. The way he looked at me told me what he thought of me - a cock-hungry slut with her legs open wide, offering her pussy to him.

He seemed calmer than the first time, and I guess I was too. He already knew I wasn't going to stop him or scream the house down or anything, He knelt on the bed and forced my legs even further apart, looking down at my pussy. He had a look of triumph on his face, knowing that he could have me any time he wanted, knowing I wouldn't resist him. Basking in that knowledge, he wasn't so hurried this time, taking the opportunity to finger my pussy. He was rough, showing no concern for my feelings, not caring if I got any pleasure out of it or not. With Ben being increasingly rough with me during our after-school games, I was used to it, though it was still uncomfortable.

"You fucking love this. I always knew you were a dirty little slut."

He climbed on top of me again, between my open legs and forced his cock deep into my wet pussy. He stayed like that a moment, looking down at me, breathing hard. I could feel his warm breath on my face, and smell it too - a mixture of beer and cigarettes.. His cock filled me up more than Ben's screwdriver handle or my wooden cock ever could. I could feel it deep inside me, stretching my pussy, warm and throbbing. The first time he'd fucked me, I was in a sort of daze, but now it seemed more real. And when he started fucking me, I found myself responding, almost automatically, moving my hips and arching my back. I also didn't look away, as I had done before. I looked straight into my brother's eyes as he looked into mine. There was no love there, or even affection - it was just pure lust. His thrusts lacked the urgency of our first time too - he was taking his time with me, savouring the moment. Though he was still fucking me hard, grunting with each thrust, it was less hurried. The first time was rushed, as though he just wanted to fuck me and cum in me, just to get the first time done and out of the way. Now he seemed more relaxed and was enjoying it more. Maybe it was just me, and the fact that I was no longer just laying there like a lifeless sex doll.

I'm sure it lasted longer than the first time. It seemed to, anyway. But, even with Danny pacing himself, it was over fairly quickly. I don't think he cared much, really. He'd fucked me and shot his load and that was really all he wanted. In a way, it didn't differ much from Ben fucking my thighs, except of course where his cum ended up. It was all about the boys' own pleasure.

After Danny emptied himself into me, he climbed off me and just pulled his boxer shorts on, not bothering with the rest of his clothes. I guess he thought it was pointless dressing completely just to walk upstairs and undress again, but what if someone saw him coming out of my room like that? What if Ben was laying awake, and saw him like that, entering the bedroom in just a t-shirt and boxer shorts? Wouldn't it be obvious what he'd done? Of course, I never said anything, but it was something more for me to worry about.

Danny didn't even look at me as he left, carrying his bundle of clothes, but I had no doubt in my mind that he would be back for more. I waited until I heard his bedroom door close upstairs, and then I cleaned myself up, getting ready for Ben.
　
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Wow. Part 26 already, and still so much more to come. When will it end? Anyway, thanks again for all the positive comments and PMs. It’s nice to know I didn’t lose all my readers during my brief time away. More to come as soon as I can manage it.

[ELaken-Palmer]

Very good and still quite exciting. This is, quite simply, one the the very best continuing stories on here. Please keep this hot story coming.

[Fish Monster]

Originally Posted by ELaken-Palmer

Very good and still quite exciting. This is, quite simply, one the the very best continuing stories on here. Please keep this hot story coming.

I couldn't agree more!

FM

[wakyk]

It is great that you have come back Bella, your's is a great story and one of the most erotic that I have ever read online. Hope you can keep it rolling, and well worth the wait if there is lapse between parts.

[hoses]

Not bad. You've certainly got to do some reading to get to the juicy parts though.

[BabyBella]

Part 27

I still wasn’t sure about how I felt about Danny fucking me. Part of me liked it, or at least certain aspects of it, but it didn’t help that I actually didn’t like Danny as a person, even if he was my brother. He used to be nice, when we were kids, but he had changed so much in the last few years. It seemed he was sullen and moody half the time, and a loud-mouthed bully the other half. I think Ben was the only one who even tolerated him, but I guess that was because they were closer in age and had shared a room for years. I also think Ben was intimidated by him. Martin and George seemed to have very little to do with him lately and, up until the sex thing, neither did I.

Oddly, having sex with my own brother didn’t really bother me too much, or even the fact that it was seemingly against my will. Maybe it would have been different if Ben hadn’t ‘prepared’ me all this time, but who knows? I guess I was used to being used as a sex object by now, so it sort of lessened the impact. The problem wasn’t even Danny, much as I didn’t like him.

My main concern (apart from being caught, of course) was the sense of betrayal I was starting to feel. I felt like I was betraying both Mark, my boyfriend, and Ben.

Well, in a way I was already betraying Mark with Ben and vice versa. That’s kind of how I felt. I knew Ben didn’t like the fact that I was with Mark, and would rather I spent my time with him. Mark obviously didn’t know what Ben and I were up to, but I knew it would have freaked him out. Now I was betraying both of them by fucking Danny.

What would Mark have thought about me doing all the things I did with Ben and Danny - even if they weren’t my brothers? Mark was my boyfriend and he was having to make do with a quick grope in the park each day, while Ben tied me up and abused me, and Danny fucked me whenever he wanted. Mark seemed content with grabbing my bum or tits, and never tried to go further. I guess he saw me as an innocent young girl, and wasn’t trying to pressure me into anything. Not that I stopped him anyway, when his hands started to roam. It was more the idea of being caught that worried me, and my parents finding out I had a boyfriend. We were in public, pretty much, and there was always the chance of being seen by a neighbour or something. I felt guilty that I was doing all this other stuff with Ben and Danny - or letting them do it to me, at least - and poor Mark was going home with a stiff cock and no release. But it wasn’t in my nature to be aggressive in that way, to take the lead and offer myself to Mark so openly. After fucking Danny, I knew I wouldn’t stop Mark if he wanted to fuck me too, but I wasn’t in a position to suggest it or even really hint at it. I guess I was also scared that showing Mark that I was "that sort of girl" would have him running for the hills.

And I felt guilty about Ben too. After all that time working his way up to fucking me, I let Danny do more in a couple of nights than Ben ever did. It’s easy to look at it and say it’s Ben’s fault for lacking the confidence to just fuck me. It’s obvious now that I wouldn’t have stopped him, even when we first started our naughty games together. As with Mark, I was unable to initiate anything, and was content to let Ben go at his own pace. Maybe if we were still as close as we used to be, it would have been different, but things had changed so much and it was too late to go back now. I had no doubt that Ben would fuck me at some point, but it seemed a lot less scary now.

I didn’t like the feeling of betrayal, but there seemed little I could do about it. Even now, I hate cheating on boyfriends, and the guilt can make me physically sick sometimes. I think, at the time, that I perhaps didn't worry about things as much as I should have, but that might have been a good thing. Besides, there didn't seem to be enough hours in the day to stress about all the things that were happening to me. Again, maybe I just accepted that these things were beyond my control, so worrying about them was pointless.

Things with Ben had pretty much stayed the same for a little while now. He still varied things slightly, but not much. He was obviously happy doing what he was doing, and didn't feel the need to add anything new. Even though it was pretty repetitive, I still got a thrill out of the things he did to me. It never ceased to excite me every time he pulled my panties down, for example, either for our after-school fun or his night-time visits. Even though Danny had gone further by actually fucking me and making me suck him off, it didn't change the way I felt about Ben. I just wished we could have been closer during our non-sexual times together. I also wished he wasn't so jealous of Mark.

Even though I didn't think about it at the time, I have to assume that everyone in my family knew about me and Mark by now. Well, not my parents, obviously. Me and Mark didn't flaunt our relationship at school - we were usually part of a crowd - but I'm sure all my brothers knew about it. Even though it was quite a big school and I rarely saw any of my brothers, except Martin, who was in some of my classes., they had to know. I already assumed Ben knew, even if we didn't talk about it, and Martin would have known, and George definitely knew, having accompanied us on our rare nights out to the cinema. I'm not so sure about Danny, but I'd be surprised if he didn't. Despite not wanting my parents to find out about us, me and Mark didn't go out of our way to keep our relationship a secret. Even if we didn't kiss and cuddle openly at school, or in the street, we walked home together most days, and it would have been obvious to anyone seeing us that we were a couple.

With the school year coming to a close, me and Mark were making plans to see eachother over the summer. I would need George's help in covering for me, of course, but I didn't see that as a problem. I think George got a thrill out of being part of this secret relationship, and he liked the idea that he could use it to blackmail me too. Not in a nasty way, but he'd jokingly use it every now and then, to get me to go and fetch him a drink or something, or to watch what he wanted on TV, or to get me to play a certain game with him. I don't really think he would have ratted me out to our parents if I refused, but it became a little game between us. I'm not sure what Mum and Dad thought about it. We'd all be sitting watching TV or something and George would say, "I'm thirsty. Get me a glass of orange, Bella."

And Dad would say, "Get it yourself, you lazy sod."

And George would say, "Bella doesn't mind, do you, Bella?"

And I'd look over at George and he'd be make silent kissing motions at me, or some other subtle hint and I'd get the message., and I'd say, "No, I don't mind. I was going to get one for myself anyway."

And that was the way it worked. He'd use it too, when we were alone, as extra leverage to get me to do things, though I usually went along with what he wanted anyway, just because that‘s the way I was. Also, he'd use it against me if he had to cover for me and Mark, even though he was often involved in our activities anyway, like going to the cinema or whatever. He'd ask me for things, like burgers or hot-dogs, for him and his friends, but make it sound more like an order than a request. I actually found the whole thing funny most of the time, and went along with it, but would always act as if I was doing it reluctantly. It was a game, after all.

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There was no sex in that chapter at all, but I don’t really plan what I’m going to write in advance, which is probably why it jumps around so much sometimes. So much was going on, it’s hard to keep track of things. Anyway, as usual, I’m thankful for your kind comments and PMs, and hopefully Chapter 28 will be more to your liking. I’ll get on it right away…

[Eric the Red]

There isn't really much overt sex in this entire thing, but it's still exciting to read because the tension, the build up, you really have a talent for that, and getting me to care, so that when something happens I'm right there with you.

You are one of the people that keeps me coming back to xnxx to read.

[snowleopard3200]

BB - excellent, this adds significantly to the story - sex or no sex it adds to it. Well done.

[QuietTemptress]

OMG! youre back?! I havent read them yet but.... ahhh. im so pumped to cum.. i mean read these! :D

[ELaken-Palmer]

Remains one of the best continuing stories on the forum.

[Fish Monster]

Some of your best writing is when your describing emotions and what not about what is being done to you. I myself have experienced many of these feelings and can completely relate to the reluctance and excitement aspects of the story line. I can also relate completely to the need to satisfy your own urges with the wooden dick. It's weird how most would assume you would feel violated and become repressed and angry at the opposite sex for causing you such turmoil, but what they forget is their are natural curiosity that are triggered by the taboo you describe in your story.

Between BB and ELP I find myself popping on to XNXX several times a day to check for updates.
Thank goodness for my IPhone.

FM

[kearns]

You're a terrific writer. I love how you describe how you feel about all the things that were being done to you. I check here several times a day to see if you've written anything.

[thesilent1]

Hi Babybella, I want to say that you are such a wonderful writer. I love your ability to go into depth with details and emotions from your experiences. I find myself wanting to read more and more after each part that you had posted. I can't wait until you continue posting some more parts of the story.

[jackD1]

Damn, I'm too emotionally invovled in this story. I don't like having feelings and what not. Please tell me that you're a happy person and life is good. I want a happy ending for Miss BabyBella. I understand being passive, under the radar, and riding the ride. Consequently, I sympathize and want you to be happy. Please tell me that life is good for you.

As much as I like S&M, D&s play, or whatever, I need to know that you're happy with life. I may have been drinking, so I'm a little more feeling than normal, but I need to hear that BabyBella is a doing well and happy.

I know this all happened a while ago, but I wish you good luck on dealing with the ramifications of all of it.

You're an excellent writer by the way. I normally come here seeking simple arousal. Your excellent writing, however, has made me emotionally vested in the outcome of your trials.

Sincerely and emphatically, good luck in life's endevors BabyBella.

[mystery_girl_91]

I'm excited for the next part. I really enjoyed reading this.

[Cr00ker]

Didn't he get you pregnant bella?

[theCoolGuy22]

this is without a doubt the best story on this site

[sophie233]

hot hot hot

[harvardPervert]

Bella,

thank you a lot for your great story. I started it for the horny side of it, looking forward the hot parts, and I got so much more than being turned on. Then you got me interested in the characters as you built some tension in to the story, and I enjoyed reading it even when there was no sex involved, thinking about my next break, when I come back into your world on my smartphone, wondering if Ben will become more social or Danny more gentle. It sounds very candid and authentic and I enjoy it as I would with another piece of literature, even if you are a bit repetitive at times. Reading the fan comments and the tension about whether you will continue to write or not was cute and thrilling at the same time, as I caught up with the last bits yesterday. In short, one more guy joined the crowd of your fans, thank you Bella

[BabyBella]

Thanks for all the nice comments, as usual. I wasn’t really expecting it, especially after quite a boring chapter, and I was truly amazed at some of the comments made - way too much praise, in my opinion. I haven’t had much time to write lately - well, I have written some, but not enough to post. So it will probably be early next week when I post the next chapter. Anyway, a few things I thought I’d mention…

To Hoses - yeah, there’s a lot of words to get through before the good stuff happens. I’m always happy to see new names commenting on here or PM-ing me. It’s quite a commitment to read so much and I’m truly amazed and pleased that people do. Thanks one and all.

To jackD1 - I’m fine, honestly. Thanks for asking. No nightmares, no therapy, no trauma, nothing like that. My life isn’t ideal, but that’s because I keep messing things up, but that’s just me. I don’t think I can necessarily blame it on what happened in my youth.

To CrOOker, the short answer is no. I didn’t get pregnant. More on that in the next chapter.

To harvardPervert, thanks for your kind words, but I have to agree that it is repetitive in places. I rarely re-read the whole thing, but I did recently and I can see what you mean. Part of that is because I am quite limited in my writing, and also simply because a lot of things were repetitive back then. Also, because of the gaps between postings, and the length of it all, I sometimes feel I need to remind readers of what has happened before. I’ll try and do less of that in future.

Anyway, more to come, probably next week. I only post when I’ve written enough to be worth posting, and I’m not very organized or disciplined. Plus, I’m trying to finish some of my fiction stuff, which is always harder for me to write. Keep the comments and PMs coming, and try to turn the praise down a notch, as my head is in danger of getting way too big.

[SW1]

What a complex, complicated emotional web you weave. Needless to say, I'm immensely enjoying your story.
If this is the raw draft you present, you're doing an amazing job of telling the story.
Hope you find the time to continue to share your story.
SW

[harvardPervert]

Originally Posted by BabyBella

To harvardPervert, thanks for your kind words, but I have to agree that it is repetitive in places. I rarely re-read the whole thing, but I did recently and I can see what you mean. Part of that is because I am quite limited in my writing, and also simply because a lot of things were repetitive back then. Also, because of the gaps between postings, and the length of it all, I sometimes feel I need to remind readers of what has happened before. I’ll try and do less of that in future.

Well, as you say this is a forum and you post as you write, therefore the repetitiveness is understandable and is not really a problem. I would not worry about it to much, that should not cut the flow of your writing. I would rather remove the duplicated sentences later, if you want to polish the text and make it as a finished story or a short novel.

Best

[xFLG KING PIN]

Any updates?

[ironmunky]

My cock is over here throbbing in anticipation over reading more about Bella getting her horny little twat wrecked by her brothers, and there's nothing new. Stop getting distracted by your dripping pussy and get to writing bitch, my cock ain't got all day.

I'm really interested in what's going to happen with Bella and the younger brother, and who the instigator is gonna be.

PS. If it's real,keep it real. If it isn't real, don't tell me.

[MrOrange677]

Excellent story! I can't say I'm turned on by it but I am definitely enthralled. This seems to be therapy for you. Best wishes to you Bella!

[dinomagick]

Excellent Story Bella! Wow. I'm really impressed!
Not my favorite genre/content, but the descriptive way you explain the scene and the character dialog makes it quite vivid.

I good read and well written. have you posted this to the Sex Stories board yet?

[young youth]

Oh really hot Incest sex I like this very much

[Big Drew]

Hi Bella, I'd gone to reply to your previous PM - however it would appear your quota is maxed out. Popular, aren't we?

[18244]

Good story. Looking forward to the nextinstallment(s).

[waldop]

This is my favorite thread on the forum, but I fear that Bella has moved on. Sorry to see this one go.

[Fish Monster]

Originally Posted by waldop

This is my favorite thread on the forum, but I fear that Bella has moved on. Sorry to see this one go.

Bella is still around. We have to keep bumping her so she can see that we are waiting. I ha just about given up once before and she returned with a vengeance of amazing chapters. Soooooooo, Bella! Where are you?

FM