Needing your Advice

CrimsonSun · 06-21-2012, 08:36 PM

First Story: http://stories.xnxx.com/story/42277/GIRL_WHO_CAME_BACK

I recently wrote a story, and since it got highly positive reviews, I'm starting to write a second one.

I have two ideas for a story , and since I can't seem to make up my mind between them, I decided to ask you guys.

So, in General terms,

a) A story of a runaway's return to his past and his family.
b) A story based on the love/hate relationship between two cousins.

Which story would you prefer to see?

Cheltenham · 06-21-2012, 09:51 PM

The latter.

Upon checking your link, I perused the first couple paragraphs and I think you've done yourself well.

Check out his link if you are so disposed to.

belizelarry · 06-22-2012, 02:16 AM

I prefer the first topic better. Could go many different ways. I did love your story The Girl Who Came Back.

thatcuriousone · 06-22-2012, 02:18 AM

B. I also read the girl who came back.
It would be interesting to read how you craft that one.

snowleopard3200 · 06-22-2012, 03:35 AM

Why not both as two seperate stories?

06-21-2012, 08:36 PM	#1
CrimsonSun Porn Surfer Join Date: Jun 2012 Location: UK Posts: 14	Needing your Advice First Story: http://stories.xnxx.com/story/42277/GIRL_WHO_CAME_BACK I recently wrote a story, and since it got highly positive reviews, I'm starting to write a second one. I have two ideas for a story , and since I can't seem to make up my mind between them, I decided to ask you guys. So, in General terms, a) A story of a runaway's return to his past and his family. b) A story based on the love/hate relationship between two cousins. Which story would you prefer to see? __________________ My stories: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile652748/

06-21-2012, 09:51 PM	#2
Cheltenham Ascetic Kitten Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: With a boulder on my shoulder, feelin' kinda older Posts: 4,583	The latter. Upon checking your link, I perused the first couple paragraphs and I think you've done yourself well. Check out his link if you are so disposed to. __________________ *Calling All Writers #16 - The Writing Phase* Nyan Cat Indebted and so grateful ~ Girls in Uniforms ~

06-22-2012, 02:18 AM	#4
thatcuriousone Porno Junky Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: A Secret~ Posts: 286	B. I also read the girl who came back. It would be interesting to read how you craft that one. __________________ Currently working on my newest story; Blinded Love. Here's a link: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=274552

06-22-2012, 03:35 AM	#5
snowleopard3200 Guardian of the Snow Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 3,508	Why not both as two seperate stories? __________________ To Dream of Dragons: Saga of Snow Cat Winter War: legend of the snow fox Sharks of Steel

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06-22-2012, 02:16 AM	#3
belizelarry Sex Lover Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: Central America Posts: 195	I prefer the first topic better. Could go many different ways. I did love your story The Girl Who Came Back.