Everything I Dreamed It Would Be: Intro

[I_Aint_Here_1]

Everything I Dreamed It Would Be

Hello guys , I would just like to say this is my first ever at writing a story like this , so please keep critism to a good standard! Thanks! :D
Also on another note this story is in no way true , just a strange part of my imagination...

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Ok Lets Begin.

Well , what can I say , my name is James. I am roughly about 6 feet tall , blonde wavy hair , blue eyes and I am 17. I have a nice sport figuire as I try
to be as active as I can. Ever since I was 12 , I have thought about women and as I got older , my feelings somewhat changed. Ever since I can remember , I have always been able to get with girls. Trying not to sound cocky here but I have been with my fair share. But I still feel that something in my life is missing.

My parents were away for a good week or so , so I had all this time , on the holidays to myself.

It was a simple Saturday , wake up play some video games then drool around the house to waste a few hours. Then finish off with watching a bit of porn.
As of now , I was single , and loving it! Now I wasn't exactly a wizard when It comes to finding porn. So I usualy stuck with what I had for a few weeks.
Then If I felt like it try to find something different. But today , that was to change! I was going to find something different. So while browsing through
the search engine , I stumbled across a site. "Cum Slut Gets A Massieve Load" I read , sounds good. So I clicked on it. As I started to watch an advertisment apeared at the bottom of the video , "Find Shemale Cock In Your Area" It said. I ignored it and continued to watch the porno. I cummed , finished up and went back to playing video games. The though of a hot 17 year old girl , with a cock kept on coming up in my memory. I seemed to want to find out more. I hopped back on my PC , googled some pictures of shemales. I started to get a hard on. Looking at these hot girls with cocks as big as mine , some even with ones bigger. I slowly started to stroke my cock , it when hard was about 7". I found a good picture , It was a shemale who looked about my age.
She wore just her red laced bra and had her panties half way down her leg , showing her cock. It was just abit smaller than mine. I continued to stroke
my growing cock. As I looked at hers , I thought what it would be like to have it in my mouth. To feel it on my tounge , pressing at my throat. This seemed
to turn me on even more. Then another thought struck me. It was that what it would feel like in my ass. I continued to stroke my cock , looking at this
gorgous shemale. After all this excitment , I cummed. I cleaned myself up and went to bed. Dreaming of a big , shemale cock.

The next day , Sunday. I headed downstairs after waking up to a bright sunny day. I looked into the living room towards the clock , 9:03 it read. This was
quite late for me to wake up. I went into the kitchen , fed the two dogs and started to make myself some toast. I enjoyed my breakfest , always felt it was an Important meal. I only had some butter on my toast , then ran upstairs towards my PC. Thoughts of a shemale cock racing through my head again.
This time I built up the courage to search for a porn video of a shemale. As I searched through the Internet , I found a video. "Big Cocked Shemale Gets
Cock Sucked" , I clicked on it. As soon as the video started , I whipped out my cock. It instantly went hard seeing this shemale. I stroked my cock.
I watched the shemale lower her panties presenting her cock to the white man. He leaned his head in and placed his lips around her 8" cock. She was quite big I thought to myself. I stroked my cock , watching as the man moved his head up and down the shemales cock. "Suck it slut" Stated the shemale.
Thinking of one day that man could be me turned me on even more. I stroked my cock , and started to moan a little. Pre cum dripped of my cock.
Now the shemale was pumping her cock into the mans mouth , moaning as the man choked on it. I started to moan and knew I was close to cumming.
She pulled her cock out of his mouth and started to jack her cock infront of his face. I started to stroke my cock harder. She cummed on his face , I cummed in unison. I knew what I wanted to do , this was the best cum I had to this point in my life. I knew there would be better.

Please rate this as this is my first ever post and attempt at a story. Also should I continue this? Thanks.

Some of the format might be a bit weird as I typed it up on a notepad first.

[belizelarry]

Actually it was a well written story. You don't show your age so I can only guess. Many of the stories posted by very young writers are so poorly done in spelling and punctuation that a third grader could have done better. Yours was well posted with good spacing and very few mistakes. Like real sex your first story was good and you will get better with practice. Keep writing you are off to a good start. Look at some of the better writers on this site and follow there methods. Just make your stories your own ideas. Thanks for your first and hope for more.

[I_Aint_Here_1]

Originally Posted by belizelarry

Actually it was a well written story. You don't show your age so I can only guess. Many of the stories posted by very young writers are so poorly done in spelling and punctuation that a third grader could have done better. Yours was well posted with good spacing and very few mistakes. Like real sex your first story was good and you will get better with practice. Keep writing you are off to a good start. Look at some of the better writers on this site and follow there methods. Just make your stories your own ideas. Thanks for your first and hope for more.

Thanks for the advice! I will take in what you said and try to adapt towards my own stories...