A Game of Inches.

[Rhiannon57]

Since so many members are constantly messaging me about new chapters, I will post this as a place to view updates for coming chapters. As I mentioned before, I work roughly 14 hours a day, so it's tough to get quality writing time in. I want to thank all the loyal members of this site who have supported both of my stories along the way. You give me the will to write on, which I do enjoy doing. Thanks to everyone for your support.


The next Installment - Chapter 11 should be up on or about July 16th, it will be a long chapter.

Take care everyone and please stay safe.

[BlueNight]

Originally Posted by Rhiannon57

Since so many members are constantly messaging me about new chapters, I will post this as a place to view updates for coming chapters. As I mentioned before, I work roughly 14 hours a day, so it's tough to get quality writing time in. I want to thank all the loyal members of this site who have supported both of my stories along the way. You give me the will to write on, which I do enjoy doing. Thanks to everyone for your support.


The next Installment - Chapter 11 should be up on or about July 16th, it will be a long chapter.

Take care everyone and please stay safe.

Perfect! I just reread the 1- 8, tomorrow when you post 11 I'll read 9 - 11. I know this will be a link in my favorites so I can be updated on my favorite series that I've read in a long time.

[Rhiannon57]

Thanks Blue, I'm glad you are enjoying the series. Thank you for the kind words. Take care, be stay and Semper Fi.

[BigRD]

just like to say what a great series you have going here. personally i read it for the story not just the sex. you are a great writer and i hope you continue writing (not just this series) for a long time to come.

[asmshufty]

I just want to say how much I've enjoyed this series. You're a great writer, and it has been a wonderful distraction/alternative to studying this summer Keep it up, and I can't wait to keep reading. This story is one of the few that I've really really enjoyed

[Rhiannon57]

Thanks to everyone for the support, I have more chapters coming.

[BigRD]

Just read chapter 11. You deserve an award! Very great story, although little sex i think it added to the story instead of taking away from it. Keep up the great writing.

[Drilliginsideu]

Your chapters keep getting better and better. I can't wait for the next chapter

[BlueNight]

I just finished reading it, another piece to this amazing puzzle of a series you have! I'm excited for you to release Chapter 12 within the next few weeks!

[Rhiannon57]

Thanks guys, I appreciate the kind words. They make me want to write full time, in fact my job is getting in the way of my story. LOL. But seriously, thanks to everyone for the encouragement, you are way too kind.

[Rhiannon57]

BTW already working on Chapter 12.

[ILF2]

Great to hear ch12 is in the works . Love your story, and like the direction with Alexis. Hope the back injury doesn't set back HD1 . Keep up the great work. I look forward to more chapters

[belizelarry]

This is just an amazing story to follow. It keeps the interest all the way through to the last word. I hate to see the last sentence scroll up, because that means the end of a chapter. Just as we all get enthralled with the storyline and the characters. After learning how extreme the training and practice is, I really would not want to do that even for a few million. No time for a real life, and the possibility of permanent injury, makes me happy with the path I chose. Keep going with this same style and I will keep reading and voting positive. Thanks so much for a quality story.

[Dizzyworks673]

I've read all 11 parts so far and have to say great job all the way through. Yours is one of the best stories on this site.

[Thereader22]

I also think that this is an amazing story. You write very well and I hope you continue writing either this story or others. I'm sure most people who read this story feels the same way.

[Rhiannon57]

I do not understand why some people feel the need to intentionally try and disrupt a story. I have had one particular user who left me 14 messages, anonymously of course about how bad he dislikes my story and the lack of sex in it. If you go back to Chapter One, I tell people in the introduction what to expect. I understand if you dislike my story for the lack of sex, you indeed have a point. But why go on every chapter and post dozens of comments ? I get your point the first time. Then you give me 10 dislikes a day to bring my rating down. I guess that's why people don't allow anonymous votes, I couldn't figure that out until now. Anyway, thank you to all of the people who have been so supportive, the story will continue for you. Take care and be safe.

[darthel0101]

I started reading these stories a number of months ago and cannot help but praise the quality of writer which is showing their ability here and on the story site. Your stories are comparable to those of daddycums even though you do not have an extremely erotic theme. You have a quality that many other writers here lace, the ability to develop a character beyond a simple sex scene.

[tigervi]

don't let the ankle biters get you down. character development superb. pace is great. only question is when Alexsis works out to get her killer bod. not a big point as she is not main character.

[Dizzyworks673]

Originally Posted by darthel0101

I started reading these stories a number of months ago and cannot help but praise the quality of writer which is showing their ability here and on the story site. Your stories are comparable to those of daddycums even though you do not have an extremely erotic theme. You have a quality that many other writers here lace, the ability to develop a character beyond a simple sex scene.

I agree, with darth, you are one of my top favorite writers on this site, don't let the issues of the sex stories site.

The negitive voting is a common problem writers have talked about in the past. Some people think to get their stories noticed they have to vote down others. Every time I get over 97% I get a bunch of negative votes at once.

Darth named Daddycums and his stories are a perfect example, his stories colectively are among the best body of work on this site, but if you look at his percentages they have been voted low. I've figured that people just vote down others to inflate their own ego.

Your story is good don't let the ratings or comments stop you from completimg this great story.

[I hate implants]

every time I see this thread has a new post I rush in hoping to see that a new chapter is up, instead it's just more well-deserved praise.

Sorry to anybody else who does this

[Rhiannon57]

New chapter will be up before the end of the week. Thanks for your patience.

[ILF2]

you made my day... Now I have one more good decadent treat waiting for me by the weekend... sigh!!

Thanks for keeping the story going!

[asmshufty]

Originally Posted by Rhiannon57

New chapter will be up before the end of the week. Thanks for your patience.

Thank goodness! I'm sure my refresh button is about to wear itself out!

[samuelmichaels]

Originally Posted by Rhiannon57

Anyway, thank you to all of the people who have been so supportive, the story will continue for you. Take care and be safe.

I am very glad the story will continue. As others said, you built good characters, and that makes the sex scenes much more enjoyable.

Looking forward to future chapters.

[swordster]

hey there. I just want to thank you for giving us such an fabulous story. I hate readimg but i actually read all part which even i cant believe. I m so attached to it that i cried while reading the courtneys departing part. I mean u gavee the best story i ever came across. I just afraid of you concluding the story. I left college just because i hate reading but i seriously wanna read atleast 50 more chapters before the conclusion. For me ur the best author man keep on and thrill thousands of hearts with ur talent. Once again thanks alot. This is not just a story its a saga

[Rhiannon57]

Chapter 12 is up, thanks to everyone for their continued support. But most of all thanks for your patience, I am so busy lately, it's very difficult to get in good writing time. Take care and stay safe.

[Dizzyworks673]

Thanks for another great chapter, your story is a work of art man, one of the top stories of not just this site but that I've read in a very long time. You have real talent.

[thatcuriousone]

Although I'm echoing everyone else, I must also add my praise to the list. I've never read a story such as yours. Normally, sports related stories completely turn me off since I could never really understand the technical terms, but you explain it in such a way that completely makes sense. Ever since I started reading Chapter one, I've been hooked and keep coming back for more. Thanks for making such a story that really can relate to everyone.

[I hate implants]

Originally Posted by Rhiannon57

Chapter 12 is up, thanks to everyone for their continued support. But most of all thanks for your patience, I am so busy lately, it's very difficult to get in good writing time. Take care and stay safe.

[darthel0101]

Originally Posted by Rhiannon57

Chapter 12 is up, thanks to everyone for their continued support. But most of all thanks for your patience, I am so busy lately, it's very difficult to get in good writing time. Take care and stay safe.

Thanks for the head's up - I really liked this chapter.

[Rhiannon57]

For all of those that asked is the story over, no it's not, I am already working on Chapter 13. Once again, thanks to everyone for the kind words, I really appreciate it. Your comments are what keeps driving me back to the keyboard. Take care and everyone stay safe.

[Johnnie341]

Awesome chapter, I really hope your schedule clears up soon, it's probably the highlight of my night when I see a new part is up, I know I'm echoing everyone else again but amazing story, and I am really happy you aren't done yet. You are AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!

[swordster]

hey man. Thanks for another chapter i wish i cud read 120th chapter to i dont wannt you to fish so soon

[anarchyjason23]

awesome

[samuelmichaels]

Originally Posted by Rhiannon57

For all of those that asked is the story over, no it's not, I am already working on Chapter 13. Once again, thanks to everyone for the kind words, I really appreciate it. Your comments are what keeps driving me back to the keyboard. Take care and everyone stay safe.

Thanks. Another tense chapter.

Glad that there will be more. Looking forward to lucky 13!

[asmshufty]

Rhiannon57, let me tell you, go ahead and feel free to post as many chapters as you want now. My summer classes are over, so I can read them without feeling guilty about not studying.

Looking forward to 13

[haggas]

Must say that I am loving the story. Thanks so much for your time and dedication to your work in progress. I just wish I had half of the vision that you have with your story telling abilities.

[Rhiannon57]

Just a note to readers : Chapter 13 is posted, I hope you enjoy it. I want to let everyone know, I will be wrapping up the story in the next two chapters. As much as I have enjoyed writing it, I cannot keep up with the demands of the readers. I so want to thank all of you for the support, it's been wonderful, I know I am extremely slow with the chapters. Therefore, I will wrap up this story and I won't publish the next until I have completed the entire story. I think it will make for a more enjoyable read for you the reader. Once again, my heart felt thanks for all of your encouraging words, I am truly humbled by your kindness.

[Dizzyworks673]

Don't let the readers push you, you've written such a great story and I'm always happy to wait for you to make the next part right.

I will be sad to see the story come to a close but all great books do have an end. I thank you for this story and take all the time you need to get it right.

Fans get impatient but in the end they want a good story no matter the time it takes. It takes writers years to write novels as good as this, the difference is Steven King or John Grishem don't post by chapter.

Fans need to realize these stories don't write themselves and not all of us can just sit down and write everyday.

[Rhiannon57]

Thanks once again for all the positive feedback on Chapter 13. As a few readers noted, it is much shorter than the rest, I was trying to cut the time down between Chapters. Saying that, I was not really happy with the chapter, it was rushed, so I am back to old form. Sorry about the delay, but I would rather have quality then speed. Take care and be safe.

[Johnnie341]

Originally Posted by Rhiannon57

Thanks once again for all the positive feedback on Chapter 13. As a few readers noted, it is much shorter than the rest, I was trying to cut the time down between Chapters. Saying that, I was not really happy with the chapter, it was rushed, so I am back to old form. Sorry about the delay, but I would rather have quality then speed. Take care and be safe.

With that said I am sad to see it end but can understand thanks for the story and I CAN wait because I know just how amazing you are when you take your time, I went back and reread 1-8 and saw that the slow and steady approach will leave us with a great ending. Thanks for the great story, ch 13 was awesome.

[bwheezy]

First off I want to thank you for the great stories(if you other readers haven't read his other story My Sister-in-Law Beth...I suggest you do). Thank you for the great work and I am sad to see it end soon, and as other posters have said I can understand. Like you said, I feel like 13 was a bit rushed(still great though) and getting comments and pm's to hurry up can be frustrating, I am sure. I can wait patiently and be amazed by what you write, please take your time and see it end the way you envision and we the readers will have to be patient.


(However, if you change your mind and decide to continue, I won't object, and I'm sure many other readers would agree)

Keep up the great work, Thanks.

[haggas]

Another great chapter. Please do not feel rushed in telling your tale. I have enjoyed taking the journey with Brian Stevens. Thanks so much for sharing.

[Rhiannon57]

I am already thinking about a new story but I want to go to the next level, or at least try. I would be interested in talking to a female, via chat of course, and try to get her point of views on what she finds erotic, what parts of the love making are her favorites, things like that. To see what she perhaps feels is lacking in most stories written, at least from a female's point of view. If you think this is something you might be interested in, drop me a line and let me know. I would appreciate any help I can get.

[bryan1340]

Damnit, I waited to start this series so I didn't get impatient waiting for new chapter posts. Unfortunately you had me hook line & sinker after the first 2 chapters and now Im once again waiting for new chapters Cant wait for it Rhi. Keep up the excellent work...

[Rhiannon57]

As I stated before, I am working on a new story line, one that I think requires a female's perspective. I am looking to possibility chat via computer who could give me a different point of view on what females like to read in these stories, I did have one reply, but so far they have not replied to my follow up. I am not looking for anything other than feed back for my next story, no phone calls, no pictures etc. Just a nice chat about what the other side likes. Thanks for your support, hope to hear from someone soon.

[Rhiannon57]

Chapter Fourteen has been posted, I hope you guys enjoy. Take care and stay safe.

[bearzly]

You said Chapter 14 had been posted, but I can't seem to find it under your stories, perhaps it didn't go through?

Otherwise, this is an absolutely fantastic series, easily my favorite. Keep up the amazing work!

[darthel0101]

Originally Posted by bearzly

You said Chapter 14 had been posted, but I can't seem to find it under your stories, perhaps it didn't go through?

Otherwise, this is an absolutely fantastic series, easily my favorite. Keep up the amazing work!

A Game of Inches - Part Fourteen
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[darthel0101]

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