"Digger" A tale of teenage sexual discovery. - Page 2

ejls · 07-21-2012, 05:51 PM

I feel bad that I haven't had an opportunity to read "Digger" before now. I feel bad because it seems everything I would have said about this has been said.

To paraphrase what has already been written - innocent, smart, sexy, playful, fun, days gone by, youth, summer-lovin', opportunities missed are just a few of my thoughts. I loved this because I saw it play out as clearly as if I were watching it at a drive-in.

Wonderful job, ELP.

blueheatt · 07-21-2012, 05:56 PM

+1

ELaken-Palmer · 07-22-2012, 01:01 PM

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Originally Posted by thatcuriousone

It's been awhile since I've read any stories on this Site and I'm certainly glad I picked yours. It's a interesting coming of age story that everyone can relate to.

Thanks for taking the time to read it and leave a comment.

ELaken-Palmer · 07-22-2012, 01:08 PM

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Originally Posted by ejls

I feel bad that I haven't had an opportunity to read "Digger" before now. I feel bad because it seems everything I would have said about this has been said.

To paraphrase what has already been written - innocent, smart, sexy, playful, fun, days gone by, youth, summer-lovin', opportunities missed are just a few of my thoughts. I loved this because I saw it play out as clearly as if I were watching it at a drive-in.

Wonderful job, ELP.

My motivation to write is to hear the comments of my peers and yet so few of them take the time to do so. I always appreciate your thoughts on the words that I string together. Thank you.
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hotjohn4321 · 07-22-2012, 02:29 PM

I like the formating you used.
Very well written. I enjoyed it.

JoeDirty · 07-23-2012, 10:17 AM

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Originally Posted by ejls

Do you mean under Today's Events? Anyone can post there, Joe.

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Originally Posted by JoeDirty

Riiiiight.

How come nobody ever did it before? Hmmmmmmmm?

This smacks of unadulterated favoritism....

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Originally Posted by ejls

Joe, sometimes you leave the site, right? You go off for awhile? Guess what, several have used it. Personally, I never have.

I stand corrected.

I really had never seen Today's Events on the index page before. So I had assumed---based on prior favoritism being shown toward the troll EL-P---that he was being given yet more special treatment.

However, I do see that it's being used by writers to draw attention to their own stories in order to get positive ratings. If I were to use it in such a manner these exact same mofos and their buddies would accuse me of being an attention whore.

clarise · 07-23-2012, 11:42 AM

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Originally Posted by JoeDirty

I stand corrected.

I really had never seen Today's Events on the index page before. So I had assumed---based on prior favoritism being shown toward the troll EL-P---that he was being given yet more special treatment.

However, I do see that it's being used by writers to draw attention to their own stories in order to get positive ratings. If I were to use it in such a manner these exact same mofos and their buddies would accuse me of being an attention whore.

Hey, Joe.

Your rants amuse me more than most around here; I'm one of the few on this side of the house who can put up with you. And Lord God in Heaven knows that ELP and I can be like oil and water.

But.

This is a story thread. Not a place for rants. So buzz off and rant somewhere else.

JoeDirty · 07-23-2012, 11:57 AM

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Originally Posted by clarise

Hey, Joe.

Your rants amuse me more than most around here; I'm one of the few on this side of the house who can put up with you. And Lord God in Heaven knows that ELP and I can be like oil and water.

But.

This is a story thread. Not a place for rants. So buzz off and rant somewhere else.

I was responding to Ejls, Clarise. I was also pointing out an inconsistency regarding "attention whoring" that many posters here are guilty of.

Do you want me to now point out the inconsistency of you ranting against my "rant"?...

JoeDirty · 07-23-2012, 01:54 PM

^^^

BTW...

Clarise...

Fuck you.

EL-P came into my completely-unrelated-to-our-quarrel threads and shit/spam posted the same fucking post over and over...ranting and lying about me being some fucking sexual pervert.

And I heard NOT ONE DAMN PEEP out of you.

Yet I come to this thread and post JUST ONE POST against the fucker (two posts don't count because I was responding to posts from Ejls)...and YOU HAVE A CONNIPTION FIT over it.

I didn't understand your response to me UNTIL I checked EL-P's Friends List....

I see that you and that troll are Friends. This tells me more than enough of what I need to know about you.

Guess what? WE AREN'T FRIENDS NOW. Both you and your sock (Rage) have been deleted. A Friend of EL-P is my enemy....

ahorsewithnoname · 07-23-2012, 02:34 PM

Hey, that was a great story. I could see myself back then, as you, no clue what to do, etc.

Would have made a great CAW 12 story.

Perhaps you have another within you?

Great job, five star effort!

Dizzyworks673 · 07-23-2012, 07:40 PM

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Originally Posted by ahorsewithnoname

Hey, that was a great story. I could see myself back then, as you, no clue what to do, etc.

Would have made a great CAW 12 story.

Perhaps you have another within you?

Great job, five star effort!

I agree with Horse as he basically said everything I was thinking as I was reading it. Your stories are great can't wait to see what you come up with next.

haggas · 07-24-2012, 01:48 PM

Excellent story. I know it sure brought back some memories for me. Thanks for sharing.

ELaken-Palmer · 07-25-2012, 07:32 AM

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Originally Posted by hotjohn4321

I like the formating you used.
Very well written. I enjoyed it.

Thanks. It's more work but I like the formatting too.

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ELaken-Palmer · 07-25-2012, 03:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ahorsewithnoname

Hey, that was a great story. I could see myself back then, as you, no clue what to do, etc.

Great job, five star effort!

Thank you, horse!

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Originally Posted by Dizzyworks673

I agree with Horse as he basically said everything I was thinking as I was reading it. Your stories are great can't wait to see what you come up with next.

I appreciate your thoughts on this.

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Originally Posted by haggas

Excellent story. I know it sure brought back some memories for me. Thanks for sharing.

I am so glad that the story connected with people. Thanks for the comment, haggas.

ringa185 · 07-25-2012, 11:32 PM

sex hottie

Obscene Cupcake · 07-25-2012, 11:56 PM

if he really did do that joe, the he won. he got under your skin, and everytime you bitch about it you are letting him win even more.

you can use writing as a weapon to irritate an enemy just as easily as you can use it to entertain.

HOW DARE YOU ACCUSE SOMEONE OF BEING A TROLL, JUST BECAuse THE UNDERSTAND THE POwER OF WRITING AND TAKE ADVANTAGE OF IT. especially an author with an INHERIT (he never took classes!) GIFT tO UNDERSTAND AND RESPECT THE RULES OF WRITING!

JoeDirty · 07-26-2012, 07:21 AM

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Originally Posted by Obscene Cupcake

if he really did do that joe, the he won. he got under your skin....

Ah. The perfect definition of a troll....

He did it to "get under my skin." He told a LIE about me---and KNEW that it was one since he made it up---to try to hurt me and harm my online reputation.

He is an asshole and a slanderer. Not a writer. His so-called "writings" are boring and pretentious drivel.

Dizzyworks673 · 07-26-2012, 07:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JoeDirty

Ah. The perfect definition of a troll....

He did it to "get under my skin." He told a LIE about me---and KNEW that it was one since he made it up---to try to hurt me and harm my online reputation.

He is an asshole and a slanderer. Not a writer. His so-called "writings" are boring and pretentious drivel.

I'm sorry Joe you did far more to harm your reputation then Elp did. You guys got into a fight. Ok I read about it and thought it was amusing. I honestly didn't notice Elps story until you started talking about it.

I read the story and saw it for what it was and really didn't care either way. At that time it didn't change my opinion of you Joe. It was the weeks of bitching that followed that changed my opinion of you.

It was when I really started reading your attacks I finally had to say something. I'm willing to bet others feel the same way. Sorry but its true it was you Joe that stomped you image.

Carl31 · 07-26-2012, 09:17 PM

It not a bad story really dont know if for me but not bad.

ELaken-Palmer · 07-26-2012, 10:21 PM

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Originally Posted by Carl31

It not a bad story really dont know if for me but not bad.

Thanks Carl!

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cheap whore · 07-27-2012, 11:53 AM

very well written

ELaken-Palmer · 07-28-2012, 03:31 PM

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Originally Posted by cheap whore

very well written

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment.

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xpepinitox · 07-28-2012, 04:03 PM

Thanks for the story!

Was really nice to read it, specially that reminds me of my old days :D.

Thanks again

.

Captius · 07-30-2012, 02:37 AM

This is a well written piece of work. I felt drawn into the story from the first paragraph. Kinda sucks about the way it turned out but that's what makes it so good. Keep up the great work.

Kountrygal · 07-30-2012, 05:21 AM

Great story, I loved it, too bad someone can't do a damn thing but rant. Makes me thing he has not been laid lately. LOL! Goodnight yah all.

ELaken-Palmer · 07-30-2012, 07:55 PM

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Originally Posted by cheap whore

very well written

Nice of you to leave a comment. Thanks!

Quote:

Originally Posted by JoeDirty

Ah. The perfect definition of a writer....

He DID "get under my skin." He told the truth about me---and KNEW that it was since he made it up---da to try to hurt me and harm my online da reputation.

He is the asshole of a salamander. Not a bad writer. His so-called "writings" are boring and pretentious drivel.

Thanks for always stopping by, Joe. Your comments are as welcome as anyone's. How many times have you read this now? I have to count you as a fan.

In this time of Olympics and athletics, I think of you as a supporter.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kountrygal

Great story, I loved it, too bad someone can't do a damn thing but rant. Makes me think he has not been laid lately. LOL! Goodnight yah all.

Thank you, Kountrygal.

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ELaken-Palmer · 07-31-2012, 02:00 AM

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Originally Posted by xpepinitox

Thanks for the story!

Was really nice to read it, specially that reminds me of my old days :D.

Thanks again

.

Glad that my story could bring back such good memories. We were only young once and I hope we didn't waste it.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Captius

This is a well written piece of work. I felt drawn into the story from the first paragraph. Kinda sucks about the way it turned out but that's what makes it so good. Keep up the great work.

So glad that you liked it and took the time to respond. A lot of the time reality is less than what we hoped for.
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LonesomeBoy · 07-31-2012, 03:18 AM

Thank you for reading my story, I liked yours very much. Thank you for the time you obviously went too to write and post this amazing story.

LB

Me2011 · 07-31-2012, 03:26 AM

Great story! Thanks for posting!

ELaken-Palmer · 07-31-2012, 11:11 PM

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Originally Posted by LonesomeBoy

Thank you for reading my story, I liked yours very much. Thank you for the time you obviously went too to write and post this amazing story.

LB

I'm only glad that great people (like you) took the time to read it and then left a comment to say that they enjoyed it. To me, that's what this forum is all about.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Me2011

Great story! Thanks for posting!

Thank YOU! Your comments give me the encouragement to write another.
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plushemma · 08-02-2012, 07:17 PM

Love the story just wish there was a continuation from her side to see what happened to her or what she was thinking.... just a thought

ELaken-Palmer · 08-04-2012, 02:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by plushemma

Love the story just wish there was a continuation from her side to see what happened to her or what she was thinking.... just a thought

Thanks for the comment.

vietnam123 · 08-05-2012, 12:03 PM

I agree

xpepinitox · 08-07-2012, 04:10 PM

This is a great story!

Too bad of the ending, as i would like to read a second part, or more.

Like always, i enjoy your stories t w

.

Keep them coming please :D.

JadeM · 08-24-2012, 09:30 PM

So much fun and made me laugh with some memories of my own cottage days. A very fun piece

Thank you for letting me know about it

PornWriter1956 · 08-26-2012, 06:33 PM

Well done, send links to more stories.

retropussy · 08-28-2012, 07:49 PM

lool

snowleopard3200 · 08-28-2012, 08:04 PM

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Originally Posted by vietnam123

I agree

Quote:

Originally Posted by xpepinitox

This is a great story!

Too bad of the ending, as i would like to read a second part, or more.

Like always, i enjoy your stories t w

.

Keep them coming please :D.

Quote:

Originally Posted by PornWriter1956

Well done, send links to more stories.

Quote:

Originally Posted by retropussy

lool

And so the legend of ELP (a rightfully earned one) continues to advance across the threads of the Forum.

wantsomefun · 09-01-2012, 03:48 AM

Spammer reported.

07-21-2012, 05:51 PM	#51
ejls Siren of the Seaway Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: On the river in NY Posts: 35,896	I feel bad that I haven't had an opportunity to read "Digger" before now. I feel bad because it seems everything I would have said about this has been said. To paraphrase what has already been written - innocent, smart, sexy, playful, fun, days gone by, youth, summer-lovin', opportunities missed are just a few of my thoughts. I loved this because I saw it play out as clearly as if I were watching it at a drive-in. Wonderful job, ELP. __________________ Calling All Writers Creator, CAW 1,5, 10 & 14 Winner MODERATOR-Making the world safe for pure porn

07-22-2012, 02:29 PM	#55
hotjohn4321 Porn Star Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: USA Posts: 1,141	Good story and nicely written I like the formating you used. Very well written. I enjoyed it. __________________ I like to write stories and do requests. This is link to story list. http://stories.xnxx.com/profile385671/hotjohn4321

07-23-2012, 01:54 PM	#59
JoeDirty Cute & Cuddly Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 7,234	^^^ BTW... Clarise... Fuck you. EL-P came into my completely-unrelated-to-our-quarrel threads and shit/spam posted the same fucking post over and over...ranting and lying about me being some fucking sexual pervert. And I heard NOT ONE DAMN PEEP out of you. Yet I come to this thread and post JUST ONE POST against the fucker (two posts don't count because I was responding to posts from Ejls)...and YOU HAVE A CONNIPTION FIT over it. I didn't understand your response to me UNTIL I checked EL-P's Friends List.... I see that you and that troll are Friends. This tells me more than enough of what I need to know about you. Guess what? WE AREN'T FRIENDS NOW. Both you and your sock (Rage) have been deleted. A Friend of EL-P is my enemy.... Last edited by JoeDirty; 07-23-2012 at 01:57 PM.

07-23-2012, 02:34 PM	#60
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07-25-2012, 11:56 PM	#66
Obscene Cupcake sexy fluffzilla Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,972	if he really did do that joe, the he won. he got under your skin, and everytime you bitch about it you are letting him win even more. you can use writing as a weapon to irritate an enemy just as easily as you can use it to entertain. HOW DARE YOU ACCUSE SOMEONE OF BEING A TROLL, JUST BECAuse THE UNDERSTAND THE POwER OF WRITING AND TAKE ADVANTAGE OF IT. especially an author with an INHERIT (he never took classes!) GIFT tO UNDERSTAND AND RESPECT THE RULES OF WRITING! __________________ Chapter 2 of Freewill is up! See the first interaction between Becka and David, after the new Government is in place! You won't want to miss it! for a shit ton o femdom pics, go http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php...=1#post5264376 here. Press control and minus to make the page small, and control plus to make it big. penises there too, and trannys, and naked girls. tons of stuff. fetish stuff at bottom.

07-21-2012, 05:56 PM	#52
blueheatt Porn Star Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 1,230	+1

07-24-2012, 01:48 PM	#62
haggas Amateur Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 56	Excellent story. I know it sure brought back some memories for me. Thanks for sharing.

07-25-2012, 11:32 PM	#65
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07-26-2012, 09:17 PM	#69
Carl31 Porn Surfer Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 33	It not a bad story really dont know if for me but not bad.

07-27-2012, 11:53 AM	#71
cheap whore Porn Surfer Join Date: Oct 2011 Posts: 18	very well written

07-28-2012, 04:03 PM	#73
xpepinitox Porn Surfer Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 32	nice ! Thanks for the story! Was really nice to read it, specially that reminds me of my old days :D. Thanks again .

07-30-2012, 02:37 AM	#74
Captius Porn Surfer Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Canada Posts: 22	This is a well written piece of work. I felt drawn into the story from the first paragraph. Kinda sucks about the way it turned out but that's what makes it so good. Keep up the great work.

07-30-2012, 05:21 AM	#75
Kountrygal Porno Junky Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 254	HEY EJP Great story, I loved it, too bad someone can't do a damn thing but rant. Makes me thing he has not been laid lately. LOL! Goodnight yah all.

07-31-2012, 03:18 AM	#78
LonesomeBoy Newcumer Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 3	Thank you for reading my story, I liked yours very much. Thank you for the time you obviously went too to write and post this amazing story. LB

07-31-2012, 03:26 AM	#79
Me2011 Amateur Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: Indiana Posts: 60	Great story! Thanks for posting!

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08-05-2012, 12:03 PM	#83
vietnam123 Banned! Join Date: Aug 2012 Posts: 11	I agree

08-07-2012, 04:10 PM	#84
xpepinitox Porn Surfer Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 32	great story. This is a great story! Too bad of the ending, as i would like to read a second part, or more. Like always, i enjoy your stories t w . Keep them coming please :D.

08-24-2012, 09:30 PM	#85
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08-26-2012, 06:33 PM	#86
PornWriter1956 Amateur Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: A northern suburb of Hippie Heaven Posts: 83	A fine story Well done, send links to more stories.

08-28-2012, 07:49 PM	#87
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