XNXX Adult Forum Free Porn - Sex Stories - Porn Videos  

Go Back   XNXX Adult Forum > Public > Sex Stories

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 05-04-2012, 12:55 AM   #2351
Dizzyworks673
Porn Star
 
Dizzyworks673's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2012
Location: Washington State
Posts: 1,373
Default

Personally my vote for Recomended writers are as follows:

#1: Daddycums, I recomend Allison and the Primdales, or Back Yard Princess

#2: Wojomartin, I recomend Abby To Much Too Soon, or Good Karma

#3: Rhiannon57, I recomend A Game of Inches

#4: W1drng, I recomend Adam seduced by Megans Little Sister

#5: Hard93, I recomend Sara's Protective Father
__________________
Your never to old to become what your meant to be.....


Click here for Toy Store Boy the saga of Joey and Ashley.

For the links to The Wall and My Other Collected Works.
Dizzyworks673 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 05-04-2012, 05:54 AM   #2352
Daddycums
Porn Star
 
Join Date: May 2009
Location: In the bushes outside your bedroom window.
Posts: 1,945
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dizzyworks673 View Post
Personally my vote for Recomended writers are as follows:

#1: Daddycums, I recomend Allison and the Primdales, or Back Yard Princess

#2: Wojomartin, I recomend Abby To Much Too Soon, or Good Karma

#3: Rhiannon57, I recomend A Game of Inches

#4: W1drng, I recomend Adam seduced by Megans Little Sister

#5: Hard93, I recomend Sara's Protective Father
Thanks! It's always nice to know I have a fan.
__________________
Read my CAW 14 Entry: A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to the Fertility Ritual.

And many more erotic tales of Daddycums!

For those who like their smut served hot with a side order of plot.
Daddycums is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 05-04-2012, 06:34 AM   #2353
crackedjaguar@hotmail.com
Porn Star
 
crackedjaguar@hotmail.com's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Somewhere in the Republic of Texas
Posts: 2,630
Default

Going to bump this just because I can
__________________
Thomas Jefferson: "To compel a man to furnish contributions of money for the propagation of opinions which he disbelieves is sinful and tyrannical."


"It is impossible to make people understand their ignorance; for it requires knowledge to perceive it and therefore he that can perceive it hath it not."
Jeremy Taylor 1613-1667
Woot I have stories?
http://stories.xnxx.com/profile58473/
XNXX RW AWARD
RECOMMENDED WRITER
crackedjaguar@hotmail.com is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 05-05-2012, 04:56 PM   #2354
soulmate087
Newcumer
 
Join Date: Apr 2012
Location: Indiana
Age: 39
Posts: 4
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dizzyworks673 View Post
Personally my vote for Recomended writers are as follows:

#1: Daddycums, I recomend Allison and the Primdales, or Back Yard Princess

#2: Wojomartin, I recomend Abby To Much Too Soon, or Good Karma

#3: Rhiannon57, I recomend A Game of Inches

#4: W1drng, I recomend Adam seduced by Megans Little Sister

#5: Hard93, I recomend Sara's Protective Father

I agree, Daddycums is the best writer on this site - all of his work is original and professional, with detailed plots an pleanty of character development.
As I've already posted, I also think that Perverted1, DSGIRL, and snowleapard3200 are also in the running for authors well worth reading; not in Daddycums class, but still great writers.
soulmate087 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 05-05-2012, 06:27 PM   #2355
crackedjaguar@hotmail.com
Porn Star
 
crackedjaguar@hotmail.com's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Somewhere in the Republic of Texas
Posts: 2,630
Default

and sometimes I'm glad I'm on the list even if I'm usually overlooked
__________________
Thomas Jefferson: "To compel a man to furnish contributions of money for the propagation of opinions which he disbelieves is sinful and tyrannical."


"It is impossible to make people understand their ignorance; for it requires knowledge to perceive it and therefore he that can perceive it hath it not."
Jeremy Taylor 1613-1667
Woot I have stories?
http://stories.xnxx.com/profile58473/
XNXX RW AWARD
RECOMMENDED WRITER
crackedjaguar@hotmail.com is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 05-06-2012, 03:16 AM   #2356
Daddycums
Porn Star
 
Join Date: May 2009
Location: In the bushes outside your bedroom window.
Posts: 1,945
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by soulmate087 View Post
I agree, Daddycums is the best writer on this site - all of his work is original and professional, with detailed plots an pleanty of character development.
As I've already posted, I also think that Perverted1, DSGIRL, and snowleapard3200 are also in the running for authors well worth reading; not in Daddycums class, but still great writers.
Watch out, or you're going to give me an even bigger ego than I already have. And that's saying a lot.
__________________
Read my CAW 14 Entry: A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to the Fertility Ritual.

And many more erotic tales of Daddycums!

For those who like their smut served hot with a side order of plot.
Daddycums is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 05-27-2012, 10:02 PM   #2357
shyguyy2
Banned!
 
Join Date: Aug 2010
Age: 26
Posts: 1,474
Default

I've been reading and rereading Ka Hmnd's sories lately. I really like the way he writes. My favorites are a "New Begining","Keeping things even","Wizardly protector" just too name a few. Very good author!
shyguyy2 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 06-01-2012, 03:31 PM   #2358
JustBeth
Amateur
 
JustBeth's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Chicago
Posts: 82
Default

I hope someday to make this list
__________________
xoxo
Beth
JustBeth is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 06-12-2012, 05:50 AM   #2359
Dizzyworks673
Porn Star
 
Dizzyworks673's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2012
Location: Washington State
Posts: 1,373
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by JustBeth View Post
I hope someday to make this list
Me too. Its always been my dream to write stories people enjoyed.
__________________
Your never to old to become what your meant to be.....


Click here for Toy Store Boy the saga of Joey and Ashley.

For the links to The Wall and My Other Collected Works.
Dizzyworks673 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 06-12-2012, 01:20 PM   #2360
snowleopard3200
Guardian of the Snow
 
snowleopard3200's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 3,550
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by JustBeth View Post
I hope someday to make this list
Quote:
Originally Posted by Dizzyworks673 View Post
Me too. Its always been my dream to write stories people enjoyed.
Just keep writing and seeking to improve your works; eventually you will each find your groove and develp a style or styles unique to your works. I have had people compliment my style of writing; yet compared to the old hands of the sight, such as those in CAW 11, ELP, Ejls, and so many others I am not even close to their caliber by far.

Be patient and use any critique here in the forum as a basis to grow. An example is Ejls gave me some advice on incorporation the five senses into my stories; and I came to understand just how much more material it allowed me to develop in unique ways.

Also - have a good thesarus as well.

Above all - have fun and enjoyment in writing.
snowleopard3200 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-08-2012, 09:15 PM   #2361
dylanm312
Newcumer
 
Join Date: Jul 2012
Posts: 2
Default Editor

I can edit stories for spelling and grammar. Just email me at dylanm312@gmail (dot) com
dylanm312 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-08-2012, 09:18 PM   #2362
dylanm312
Newcumer
 
Join Date: Jul 2012
Posts: 2
Default Editor

I can edit stories for spelling and grammar. Just email me at dylanm312 @ gmail dot com
dylanm312 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-30-2012, 10:59 PM   #2363
Speculum
Newcumer
 
Join Date: May 2012
Posts: 2
Default Finding Authors.

How do you find specific writers? I search for some writers and it does not find them for me. I also searched specific Story titles and did not get anything.
Speculum is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-30-2012, 11:13 PM   #2364
Dizzyworks673
Porn Star
 
Dizzyworks673's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2012
Location: Washington State
Posts: 1,373
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Speculum View Post
How do you find specific writers? I search for some writers and it does not find them for me. I also searched specific Story titles and did not get anything.



I do it probably the hard way, on the stores site you have to pic the link that says "Authors List" then click the link that says by name, after that it's just a matter of finding your author alphabetically.

I hope that helps..............
__________________
Your never to old to become what your meant to be.....


Click here for Toy Store Boy the saga of Joey and Ashley.

For the links to The Wall and My Other Collected Works.
Dizzyworks673 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-30-2012, 11:14 PM   #2365
ejls
Siren of the Seaway
 
ejls's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: On the river in NY
Posts: 35,896
Default

Or if you go back to page 47 on this thread, you'll find a great many writers listed with links to their work.
__________________
Calling All Writers Creator, CAW 1,5, 10 & 14 Winner
MODERATOR-Making the world safe for pure porn
ejls is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-03-2012, 08:39 AM   #2366
MrRolinn10
Newcumer
 
Join Date: Jan 2012
Location: North America
Posts: 1
Default

Hope I make the list
I write lots of fanfiction and have recently started a new series called Brian's Power. So check out my stories, and I'll give you a million fake dollars
MrRolinn10 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-03-2012, 10:18 PM   #2367
snowleopard3200
Guardian of the Snow
 
snowleopard3200's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 3,550
Default

Here is a link to an up and coming author UrbanSolstice:

http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=301594

Mind you, this story features a cat-girl within it, and there is immense potential as the story unfolds - the first two portions are up on the above link.
snowleopard3200 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-04-2012, 07:39 AM   #2368
Prurient Purveyer
Porn Star
 
Join Date: May 2010
Location: New Zealand
Posts: 1,418
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by snowleopard3200 View Post
Here is a link to an up and coming author UrbanSolstice:

http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=301594

Mind you, this story features a cat-girl within it, and there is immense potential as the story unfolds - the first two portions are up on the above link.
With all due respect Snowy you want this to go on the recommended writers list?
__________________




Prurient Purveyer

Prurient Purveyer is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-04-2012, 03:21 PM   #2369
ahorsewithnoname
Porn Star
 
ahorsewithnoname's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2011
Location: After nine days I let the horse run free
Posts: 1,914
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Prurient Purveyer View Post
With all due respect Snowy you want this to go on the recommended writers list?
I have to agree with you, PP. The story might not be everyone's cup of tea, but, what makes me question inclusion is the number of grammatical errors within the story. One doesn't have to pass muster of the National Association of Grammar Nazis, but, when a work is littered with common errors, it lowers the value of the story. Grammar and spelling are often overlooked elements of writing.
__________________
My Stories

XNXX RW LISTED
RECOMMENDED WRITER

CAW 7 & 11 Winner
ahorsewithnoname is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-04-2012, 04:28 PM   #2370
snowleopard3200
Guardian of the Snow
 
snowleopard3200's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 3,550
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by ahorsewithnoname View Post
I have to agree with you, PP. The story might not be everyone's cup of tea, but, what makes me question inclusion is the number of grammatical errors within the story. One doesn't have to pass muster of the National Association of Grammar Nazis, but, when a work is littered with common errors, it lowers the value of the story. Grammar and spelling are often overlooked elements of writing.
Looking back at it, PP and you are right; I jumped the gun. I do see that there is potential for a author of great skill to emerge, with refinement. My error, sorry.
snowleopard3200 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-05-2012, 02:28 AM   #2371
watcher4905
Porn Surfer
 
Join Date: Aug 2012
Location: in dreams
Posts: 28
Default good stories

Has anyone besides me fell in love with the Swinging in the Neighbor series. They have so much of human nature in them and some great sex too.
watcher4905 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-05-2012, 04:30 PM   #2372
darthel0101
Porn Star
 
darthel0101's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2012
Location: Aneheim, CA
Posts: 1,725
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by watcher4905 View Post
Has anyone besides me fell in love with the Swinging in the Neighbor series. They have so much of human nature in them and some great sex too.
The only problem I have with Sgt J's (walleyeguyj) writing style is the length of the intro when he starts a new chapter. For those who have not yet found this gem, HERE is a link to the first story.
darthel0101 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-05-2012, 04:43 PM   #2373
darthel0101
Porn Star
 
darthel0101's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2012
Location: Aneheim, CA
Posts: 1,725
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Daddycums View Post
Watch out, or you're going to give me an even bigger ego than I already have. And that's saying a lot.
Is it wrong to have a big ego if what that ego is based on is true? I have see stories of comparable quality to your work sold professionally and your erotic novel ability can even exceed some of the professionally offered works that I have seen.

I have seen many writers on this site which approach your ability but even the best consistently fail to exceed the standard which you have set.

Allison is a POWERFUL story and is written in such a way that it also has a definite end (something that many writers here fail to achieve). The story uses sex but does not DEPEND on it even though the sex is very much an integral part of the story itself.

Ka Hmnd is a good writer but his characters tend to come off as superheroes instead of real people. That can be a good thing in certain stories but it can also be overdone. His stories also tend to simply stop instead of finishing; they leave the reader wanting more

A new writer - Karax - is showing promise as well.
darthel0101 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-06-2012, 01:15 PM   #2374
Bend Over Backwards
Banned!
 
Join Date: Aug 2012
Location: Alone!
Posts: 561
Default

Wow! What a plethora of excellent talent there is on this forum!

I'm a writer myself and hope to be posting some of my stories in the enar future. i only hope that I can match up to the standard here
Bend Over Backwards is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-06-2012, 08:47 PM   #2375
darthel0101
Porn Star
 
darthel0101's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2012
Location: Aneheim, CA
Posts: 1,725
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by ejls View Post
Or if you go back to page 47 on this thread, you'll find a great many writers listed with links to their work.
I got lazy - made that post into a favorite so that I can easily access it.

If'n ya don' no howta doo dat, tri clik'n on de numer in de upp'r rite o' the post. Most browsers'll letcha do a <CTRL>+D ta drop it inta yur favs.
darthel0101 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-08-2012, 12:52 AM   #2376
Rhys17
Newcumer
 
Join Date: Aug 2012
Posts: 2
Default

Not too sure if its already been mentioned but one series i really enjoyed is My Summer Boss by Von Aramand Its really worth a read.
Rhys17 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-09-2012, 03:47 AM   #2377
Wolf_Knight
Porno Junky
 
Wolf_Knight's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2011
Location: Sin City itself, Las Vegas
Age: 35
Posts: 289
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Rhys17 View Post
Not too sure if its already been mentioned but one series i really enjoyed is My Summer Boss by Von Aramand Its really worth a read.
One of my Favorites as well, he makes his character seem real and develops them. Porn is two dimensional, writing shouldn't be. The ability to get a reader invested in a character is one of the things I look for in my favorite Authors. The "I cant Resist my Neighbor or her teenage daughters" series that just came to an end was great for that.
Wolf_Knight is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-09-2012, 05:40 PM   #2378
ELaken-Palmer
Forum Porn Laureate
 
ELaken-Palmer's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Southwest Michigan FILTH AS LITERATURE Recommended XNXX Writer Multiple CAW Winner
Posts: 4,274
Default JustBeth

I would like to add JustBeth to the list. Here's a link to her story "Teasing Little Brother Goes Too Far" http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=283713

She's fantastic!
__________________
"My aim is to put down on paper what I see and what I feel in the best and simplest way."

.
.
.
.
.
NEEDLESSLY VERIFIED: Pictures of my cock
Writing Wrongs
But Whom?
ELaken-Palmer is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-10-2012, 09:49 AM   #2379
Prurient Purveyer
Porn Star
 
Join Date: May 2010
Location: New Zealand
Posts: 1,418
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by ELaken-Palmer View Post
I would like to add JustBeth to the list. Here's a link to her story "Teasing Little Brother Goes Too Far" http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=283713

She's fantastic!
Why? This story is of barely average quality.
__________________




Prurient Purveyer

Prurient Purveyer is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-12-2012, 07:04 AM   #2380
hunt201
Newcumer
 
Join Date: Jan 2009
Posts: 2
Default need help

hey guys i need help finding a certin storie that i cant rember the name to, it was about a young man that was orfined and found a place with a welthy older couple, he also inherited there welth and property including an apartment complex so can you guys help me. pm me if you can.

Last edited by hunt201; 08-12-2012 at 07:08 AM.
hunt201 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-12-2012, 08:05 AM   #2381
snowleopard3200
Guardian of the Snow
 
snowleopard3200's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 3,550
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by ELaken-Palmer View Post
I would like to add JustBeth to the list. Here's a link to her story "Teasing Little Brother Goes Too Far" http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=283713

She's fantastic!
Everyone should keep up with ELPs subliminal messages; just hit the quote button when responding to them. Quite ingenious actually, though I still do not get the onion quip from the other day.
snowleopard3200 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-15-2012, 01:45 PM   #2382
mo.bil
Porno Junky
 
Join Date: May 2012
Location: on the river
Posts: 398
Default Sex Stories

Quote:
Originally Posted by JustBeth View Post
I hope someday to make this list
Keep writing, even if it isn't porn.
mo.bil is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-16-2012, 01:43 PM   #2383
FuckM3Pumps
Newcumer
 
FuckM3Pumps's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2012
Location: North Carolina
Posts: 8
Default

I think immediate is a fantastic author. All of his stories are rape/non-consensual, if that's your style, I definitely recommend you read his stories.

Also; I will take this time to promote myself.

New writer, but working on quite a few more to add.

I am a new poster, so I'm afraid that the site will not allow me to post links.
__________________
Former account is CaptainHowdyy.

Verified XNXX girl.

FuckM3Pumps is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-17-2012, 05:28 PM   #2384
JustBeth
Amateur
 
JustBeth's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Chicago
Posts: 82
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by ELaken-Palmer View Post
I would like to add JustBeth to the list. Here's a link to her story "Teasing Little Brother Goes Too Far" http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=283713

She's fantastic!
So what is the "subliminal message" to this post?
__________________
xoxo
Beth
JustBeth is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-17-2012, 05:44 PM   #2385
ELaken-Palmer
Forum Porn Laureate
 
ELaken-Palmer's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Southwest Michigan FILTH AS LITERATURE Recommended XNXX Writer Multiple CAW Winner
Posts: 4,274
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by ELaken-Palmer View Post
I would like to add JustBeth to the list. Here's a link to her story "Teasing Little Brother Goes Too Far" http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=283713

She's fantastic!
Quote:
Originally Posted by JustBeth View Post
So what is the "subliminal message" to this post?
"She's fantastic!"
Comment on ALL the CAW12 stories.
__________________
"My aim is to put down on paper what I see and what I feel in the best and simplest way."

.
.
.
.
.
NEEDLESSLY VERIFIED: Pictures of my cock
Writing Wrongs
But Whom?
ELaken-Palmer is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-17-2012, 09:31 PM   #2386
JustBeth
Amateur
 
JustBeth's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Chicago
Posts: 82
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Prurient Purveyer View Post
Why? This story is of barely average quality.
I appreciate your thoughts on my story. Fuck you very much!
__________________
xoxo
Beth
JustBeth is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-18-2012, 12:09 AM   #2387
Prurient Purveyer
Porn Star
 
Join Date: May 2010
Location: New Zealand
Posts: 1,418
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by JustBeth View Post
I appreciate your thoughts on my story. Fuck you very much!
All class
__________________




Prurient Purveyer

Prurient Purveyer is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-18-2012, 12:19 AM   #2388
Dizzyworks673
Porn Star
 
Dizzyworks673's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2012
Location: Washington State
Posts: 1,373
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Prurient Purveyer View Post
Why? This story is of barely average quality.
Quote:
Originally Posted by JustBeth View Post
I appreciate your thoughts on my story. Fuck you very much!
Quote:
Originally Posted by Prurient Purveyer View Post
All class

Least you could have done PP is let her know why you felt this story was "barely average quality" if it were me I would respect your opinion but I would want to know what I could do to make it better.

I've said it a dozen times in forum posts but I feel we only truly learn through feedback and criticisim. So like I said I respect your right to dislike her story but at least give her something to think about.
__________________
Your never to old to become what your meant to be.....


Click here for Toy Store Boy the saga of Joey and Ashley.

For the links to The Wall and My Other Collected Works.
Dizzyworks673 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-18-2012, 12:44 AM   #2389
JustBeth
Amateur
 
JustBeth's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Chicago
Posts: 82
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Prurient Purveyer View Post
All class
You're right! Thank You.
__________________
xoxo
Beth
JustBeth is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-18-2012, 12:51 AM   #2390
Dizzyworks673
Porn Star
 
Dizzyworks673's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2012
Location: Washington State
Posts: 1,373
Default

If my opinion means anything, I really liked Beth's story. I think many writers are worthy of recommendation and don't get it. In my opinion there are a some on this list that don't deserve to be here. But we should be helping each other grow as writers not putting down people with talent.
__________________
Your never to old to become what your meant to be.....


Click here for Toy Store Boy the saga of Joey and Ashley.

For the links to The Wall and My Other Collected Works.
Dizzyworks673 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-18-2012, 01:03 AM   #2391
Prurient Purveyer
Porn Star
 
Join Date: May 2010
Location: New Zealand
Posts: 1,418
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dizzyworks673 View Post
Least you could have done PP is let her know why you felt this story was "barely average quality" if it were me I would respect your opinion but I would want to know what I could do to make it better.

I've said it a dozen times in forum posts but I feel we only truly learn through feedback and criticisim. So like I said I respect your right to dislike her story but at least give her something to think about.

"It was Friday afternoon. I was alone. Oh how I hated the West Coast road trip. You see, my husband is a professional athlete here in Chicago. We met at the University of Michigan. He was drafted, and moved us to Chicago.

I prefer not to travel with him on this trip. I really don't get along with the other wives/girlfriends. They all seem so shallow. Showing off their expensive clothes and jewelry. Me, I am a born and bred farm girl from Minnesota. I am comfortable in a pair of jeans and a t-shirt.

The phone rings. I see from the caller ID that it's from my family back home. It's my Mom on the phone. "Hello Bethy", she says. "Mom, it's Beth
B-E-T-H." "OK whatever", she says. "why don't you come up for the weekend?" " Mom, it's an eight hour drive." "I couldn't do that by myself."
"Then fly up", she said. "My treat" "OK, let me call and see what flights are available" Don't worry", she said, "I booked you on a 7:00 a.m. flight tomorrow." "Mom, what if I said no?", I asked. She knew I would never turn down an invitation to go home though. "

So,go on,tell me why you rate that.

It was a Friday afternoon.
The phone rings.

We can't even keep the sodding tense consistent.

It might be a riveting story- if you don't mind mediocre writing- but as far as I'm concerned if its going be on the list then it better be pretty bloody good and this crap sure as hell isn't.
__________________




Prurient Purveyer

Prurient Purveyer is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-18-2012, 01:04 AM   #2392
JustBeth
Amateur
 
JustBeth's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Chicago
Posts: 82
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dizzyworks673 View Post
If my opinion means anything, I really liked Beth's story. I think many writers are worthy of recommendation and don't get it. In my opinion there are a some on this list that don't deserve to be here. But we should be helping each other grow as writers not putting down people with talent.
It means a lot to me! Thanks Dizzy.
__________________
xoxo
Beth
JustBeth is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-18-2012, 01:20 AM   #2393
ejls
Siren of the Seaway
 
ejls's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: On the river in NY
Posts: 35,896
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dizzyworks673 View Post
If my opinion means anything, I really liked Beth's story. I think many writers are worthy of recommendation and don't get it. In my opinion there are a some on this list that don't deserve to be here. But we should be helping each other grow as writers not putting down people with talent.
I'm sorry, I would have to agree with PP on this one. I tried to read it but honestly the errors were too annoying. What I read showed some promise but it is a talent that needs major development.
__________________
Calling All Writers Creator, CAW 1,5, 10 & 14 Winner
MODERATOR-Making the world safe for pure porn
ejls is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-18-2012, 01:32 AM   #2394
Dizzyworks673
Porn Star
 
Dizzyworks673's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2012
Location: Washington State
Posts: 1,373
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by ejls View Post
I'm sorry, I would have to agree with PP on this one. I tried to read it but honestly the errors were too annoying. What I read showed some promise but it is a talent that needs major development.

Right there is what I'm talking about, when I read it I saw a writer with real talent and promise like you. I read through the story and liked it, but its your choice to disagree with me and that's cool.

PP I do see your point but I guess I don't see that when I read stories. For me to not like a story based off gramer and spelling it has to be REALY bad for me to notice it. When I read through Beths story I just didn't really processs it in the same terms I guess.

Beth don't give up on your writing. I can't spell to save my life(But I have learning disability) so I up graded my computer to try to bridge that gap. Before that I was hit with comment after comment about how my stories looked like they were written by a third grader. I didn't let it slow me down, please don't stop i want to see what you come up with next.

The the thread is recommended writers and I guess on the same side of the coin its about challenging those recommendations too. I hope to some day be on this list but I also don't think it means once you are you are above criticism.
__________________
Your never to old to become what your meant to be.....


Click here for Toy Store Boy the saga of Joey and Ashley.

For the links to The Wall and My Other Collected Works.

Last edited by Dizzyworks673; 08-18-2012 at 01:39 AM.
Dizzyworks673 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-18-2012, 01:45 AM   #2395
FuckM3Pumps
Newcumer
 
FuckM3Pumps's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2012
Location: North Carolina
Posts: 8
Smile Okay, well...

I will try this shameless 'promoting of myself' thing once more.

New author, only two stories but plenty more on the way, including a series.

Blood Red Wine is a lesbian vampire story, very short but I'm going to begin a series with that one, with an actual non-sexual story line! Of course the intense sex scenes will be an added bonus.

The Ruined Princess is very extreme, definitely read the tags beforehand, if that's not your cup of tea, then you'll hate it and probably suggest that I see a psychiatrist.

The link to my profile is on my signature. Merci!
__________________
Former account is CaptainHowdyy.

Verified XNXX girl.

FuckM3Pumps is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-18-2012, 01:50 AM   #2396
ELaken-Palmer
Forum Porn Laureate
 
ELaken-Palmer's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Southwest Michigan FILTH AS LITERATURE Recommended XNXX Writer Multiple CAW Winner
Posts: 4,274
Default

I read her story and thought that the writing improved greatly as the story progressed. By the most recent additions I thought it flowed very nicely. I (obviously) liked her story and her style of writing and that is why I recommended her.
Comment on the CAW12 stories and VOTE
__________________
"My aim is to put down on paper what I see and what I feel in the best and simplest way."

.
.
.
.
.
NEEDLESSLY VERIFIED: Pictures of my cock
Writing Wrongs
But Whom?
ELaken-Palmer is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-18-2012, 03:29 AM   #2397
snowleopard3200
Guardian of the Snow
 
snowleopard3200's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 3,550
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by ejls View Post
I'm sorry, I would have to agree with PP on this one. I tried to read it but honestly the errors were too annoying. What I read showed some promise but it is a talent that needs major development.
Ejls - that is why many new authors who are to become great ones listen to when honest critique is offered to them, and why many ask you and the other long term writers of the forum for such advice.

I will agree with you and PP as well, the talent is there, it just needs some refining which will come with time and work.

You offered me a few pointers as well, which I again thank you for back then, it provided the insight I needed to breach one more barrier that I knew was there and could not have figured out on my own.

Anyone seeing the grammatical and syntax disasters of some of my early stories will understand; and mind you, I see myself far below the level of the authors here such as ejls, elp, dizzy, wantsomefun, ahorsewithnoname and so many other true masters.

I receive more honest critiqes (such as I get) here in the forum, than in the main site; which is why few of my new stories in the works will ever go to the main site anymore - I get tired of mine being used as a dating request for the trolls.
snowleopard3200 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-18-2012, 05:35 AM   #2398
Wolf_Knight
Porno Junky
 
Wolf_Knight's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2011
Location: Sin City itself, Las Vegas
Age: 35
Posts: 289
Default

I got to agree with the annoyance of Dating Requests by trolls. When i get the honest feedback I try to take it into account.

I do admit the verb tense and sentence structure are important, however I have noticed as I read and then reread peoples stories that many of the mistakes i pass over as my mind restructures what I'm reading to make sense. That is probably where I miss the errors in my stories. The mind is capable of making sense out of jumbled words such as:

I cl'onudt bleivee that I cloud acllutay usadntenrd waht I was rnideag The phennamoel pwoer of the haumn mind Aidncorcg to a reascreh at Cmirabgde Uiresinvty, it den'sot mtetar in waht order the leertts in a wrod are, the only ipnoatrmt tinhg is taht the fisrt and lsat leettr be in the rhigt place. The rset can be a tatol mses and you can siltl read it woutiht a ploebrm. This is bscauee the hmuan mnid deos not read eevry letetr by ielstf, but the wrod as a whole. Anamizg huh? Yaeh and I aalwys tohguht spielnlg was ipnarotmt.

Now I;m not saying by any means that errors be about, but nit picking every error is going overboard as I have read published books that had spelling or grammatical errors in them either the editors or printers missed.

I'm going to keep writing either way, double and triple checking before posting. If I miss some errors and they make it through I apologize to those who must have perfect writing over a good story. I thank everyone who reads the stories and gives me feedback. When I leave a comment on a story, I'll tell the author and if there were things that needed work and if there were things I liked, giving the positive with the negative. If the story was good despite the errors I read, I leave a positive rating. the only time I give a negative rating is if the story was truly bad enough to deserve it. With much of the talent on this site, I have only given very few negatives, mostly when there was no story and the writing style was disconnected or disjointed.
Wolf_Knight is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-18-2012, 05:48 AM   #2399
snowleopard3200
Guardian of the Snow
 
snowleopard3200's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 3,550
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Wolf_Knight View Post
I got to agree with the annoyance of Dating Requests by trolls. When i get the honest feedback I try to take it into account.

I do admit the verb tense and sentence structure are important, however I have noticed as I read and then reread peoples stories that many of the mistakes i pass over as my mind restructures what I'm reading to make sense. That is probably where I miss the errors in my stories. The mind is capable of making sense out of jumbled words such as:

I cl'onudt bleivee that I cloud acllutay usadntenrd waht I was rnideag The phennamoel pwoer of the haumn mind Aidncorcg to a reascreh at Cmirabgde Uiresinvty, it den'sot mtetar in waht order the leertts in a wrod are, the only ipnoatrmt tinhg is taht the fisrt and lsat leettr be in the rhigt place. The rset can be a tatol mses and you can siltl read it woutiht a ploebrm. This is bscauee the hmuan mnid deos not read eevry letetr by ielstf, but the wrod as a whole. Anamizg huh? Yaeh and I aalwys tohguht spielnlg was ipnarotmt.

Now I;m not saying by any means that errors be about, but nit picking every error is going overboard as I have read published books that had spelling or grammatical errors in them either the editors or printers missed.

I'm going to keep writing either way, double and triple checking before posting. If I miss some errors and they make it through I apologize to those who must have perfect writing over a good story. I thank everyone who reads the stories and gives me feedback. When I leave a comment on a story, I'll tell the author and if there were things that needed work and if there were things I liked, giving the positive with the negative. If the story was good despite the errors I read, I leave a positive rating. the only time I give a negative rating is if the story was truly bad enough to deserve it. With much of the talent on this site, I have only given very few negatives, mostly when there was no story and the writing style was disconnected or disjointed.
One thing of all the authors on the forum is each of us has at least one unique style to our writings; yet its that variety which adds the true spice to the entire forum soup.

I know my own stories tend to be chaotic, sardonic, humorous and the classical nerd-princess/goddess in the flesh style. I have a hard time writing the usual story site of - first sentence they are off to bed style.

Its not my cup of tea as they would say.
snowleopard3200 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-18-2012, 12:20 PM   #2400
Dizzyworks673
Porn Star
 
Dizzyworks673's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2012
Location: Washington State
Posts: 1,373
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by snowleopard3200 View Post
I see myself far below the level of the authors here such as ejls, elp, dizzy, wantsomefun, ahorsewithnoname and so many other true masters.

WOW! I never in my life thought someone would use my name and the term "True Master" int the same sentance, that's just awsome. Thanks a lot Snow you made my whole day.
__________________
Your never to old to become what your meant to be.....


Click here for Toy Store Boy the saga of Joey and Ashley.

For the links to The Wall and My Other Collected Works.
Dizzyworks673 is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT. The time now is 06:37 PM.