Can you do me a favor?

CrimsonLegacy · 08-10-2012, 12:00 PM

Hey, so I'm a new member of this site, but have been coming here for a while now. I recently decided to try my hand at writing a bit of my own and was wondering if anyone could read my stories and give me some feedback. I only have three so far, plus one joke that to me is funny as hell. Two of them were a challenge from a friend, who wanted me to write something with homosexual themes because being straight its something I don't have any experience in. He said it would show my skill if I could write a good ay story when I have no memories to draw from. The third story is half true half fantasy of mine and my girlfriends.

I know people vote and comment here and there, but it sucks cuz you don't get the chance to find out what they liked/disliked and sometimes you get people that rate negatively when there is absolutely nothing wrong. So again, please check out my stories and give your feedback. Thanks.

Wolf_Knight · 08-11-2012, 12:08 PM

I'll read and take a look, give you my opinion. I'd ask you to do the same. I'me writing a somewhat longer story, not so much sex and erotica but I'd appreciate the feedback from others. Lost of votes from both sides, more positive then negative but only a few comments so i have no idea what people liked or disliked. If you choose to do so, please comment or send me a PM.

08-10-2012, 12:00 PM	#1
CrimsonLegacy Newcumer Join Date: Aug 2012 Location: New York Posts: 2	Can you do me a favor? Hey, so I'm a new member of this site, but have been coming here for a while now. I recently decided to try my hand at writing a bit of my own and was wondering if anyone could read my stories and give me some feedback. I only have three so far, plus one joke that to me is funny as hell. Two of them were a challenge from a friend, who wanted me to write something with homosexual themes because being straight its something I don't have any experience in. He said it would show my skill if I could write a good ay story when I have no memories to draw from. The third story is half true half fantasy of mine and my girlfriends. I know people vote and comment here and there, but it sucks cuz you don't get the chance to find out what they liked/disliked and sometimes you get people that rate negatively when there is absolutely nothing wrong. So again, please check out my stories and give your feedback. Thanks.

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08-11-2012, 12:08 PM	#2
Wolf_Knight Porno Junky Join Date: Dec 2011 Location: Sin City itself, Las Vegas Age: 35 Posts: 289	I'll read and take a look, give you my opinion. I'd ask you to do the same. I'me writing a somewhat longer story, not so much sex and erotica but I'd appreciate the feedback from others. Lost of votes from both sides, more positive then negative but only a few comments so i have no idea what people liked or disliked. If you choose to do so, please comment or send me a PM.