Peter with the amazing legs

[LukeM]

So I'll just give some information before I start my story. My name is Luke and I was 16/17 at the time and tall about 6"1 with rugged brown hair and brown eyes. Not completely ripped, just skinny. My friend, Peter was 15 at the time and he was a bit shorter than me about 5"9 with straight black hair with a front fringe and brown eyes. he was built and had amazing legs and a bubble butt

It was summer and it was a boiling day, I was in Year 11 at the time and I was sitting in my maths class, bored out of my brains then in walked this tanned student in shorts and a t-shirt with the most attractive legs I've ever seen in my life asking for paper for the printer next door. He walked out and I kept thinking "who is this kid". I wasn't fully aware of my sexuality and I was quite shy when it came to my sexuality. The bell went for lunch and I put all my books away and went to the school room list to see what class was in the room next to mine, it was 10F. Lucky enough, I had a friend Dylan in 10F who I played soccer with. I asked him, "who was the kid who came to my class for paper" and he said "Peter". I finally had a name for this mysteriously hot boy. I continued with the day like usual*

I was walking home from the back gate because the front entrance is full of students and beeping cars and it was all so annoying for me so I just walked by myself from the gate at the end of the oval. I walked in front of *this kid who had an amazing ass and had a red bag that wasn't even closed properly and his books just fell right out into the dirt. I picked the book up and called for the kid. He turned around and it was Peter! Funny that, the kid I was dreaming about in maths, thanking me for picking up his book. We walked together home for the next two weeks, just joking about school, becoming friends but as we became friends, I grew to wanting him more.*

My 17th birthday was coming up and I wanted to have a party, I invite all my friends and I asked Peter if he wanted to come and he said he would love too. I was wrapped with joy, Peter will be in my house, with me, partying. 3 days later on Peter and I's way home he asked me if he could sleepover after the party on Saturday because his parents are going away that night and it was either my house or his grandmas house, and I said that was perfectly fine (but on the inside I was screaming with excitement). Saturday came and it was time to party.*

All my friends came and Peter came last with his bag full of his spare clothes and DVDs we would watch later that night.*

The party finished and all my friends went home and I was totally stuffed so I said to Peter "let's go to bed, I'm wrecked". We went up to my room to change. Peter said that he usually sleeps in his underwear and if it was okay if he did it here and I had no arguments (trust me) and Peter took off his tight (that left nothing to the imagination) black jeans to reveal his black Calvin Klien briefs and his dick looked about 5 inchs. I didn't want it to be weird so I slept in my underwear too with my 7 inch dick. It got a bit chilly at night and I asked Peter if he'd sleep in my bed so we can keep warm, nothing weird and he seem to come with no hesitation. The boy I had been craving for weeks was in my bed, in his underwear and his amazing butt was rubbing against my cock. My dick started to get hard and I didn't know if Peter even reliesed. Peter started to giggle and turned over and said, "you alright there" and I was "yeah, haha". At of the blue, Peter leaned in and kissed me and i never thought of peter as the gay type but he did kiss me. I kissed him back with our tounges both rolling in each others mouth. The kiss broke and Peter giggled again and turned over.*

TO BE CONTINUED*
This is my first story writing so feedback is wanted please

[Prurient Purveyer]

If this is just your first story we writers might have to get a bit nervous.

You've told this well ( a few pointers, rapt rather than wrapped and tongue is spelled tongue not tounge - which would rhyme with lounge )

But you paced it well, not overdone and leading nicely into part 2 and we hope you remembered the lube

[buddha69]

good so far, keep going....

[Marvin65]

Well written so far, keep going.