Vote for my next story

[xxevanxx]

I'm giving you a list of stories I might write in the furture. I want you to vote for 1 of these stories. You can vote more than ounce if you want. Here is the list.


1. BroxSis-An incest story with me and my brother.

2. The Cruise Ship-A story about me having sex on the water with my brothers best friend.


3.My Mother-A mom and daughter incest story.


4.College Professor-A story that happens in college about an encounter with my professor.


5.Neighbor's Son-A story about me and a neighbor having sex.


That's the list please vote. I will not accept votes anytime after the first of September.

[aesopstails]

Here is a list of the attire I may possibly don on Friday. I want you to select one outfit. You can vote more than once if you want... I suppose I can change mid-way through the day if necessary. I will not accept any votes after Thursday.

1) Jeans, black tee shirt, sneakers

2) Black leather pants, red sequined halter top, red leather sandals

3) Short-shorts and a white tank top

4) Black lace teddy

5) Birthday suit

[Lioness]

I choose #2. I'd love to see you wearing that, you sexy Sis!!!

[I hate implants]

Originally Posted by Lioness

I choose #2. I'd love to see you wearing that, you sexy Sis!!!

Obvious choice is #3. Lioness I typically defer to your brilliance but I will fight you on this.

[xxevanxx]

this is a thread to vote on my next story not to vote on someones clothes.

[ELaken-Palmer]

Oh. I vote for the short shorts and the tank top.
Read AA the CAW12 stories and VOTE when you can

[I hate implants]

Elaken-Palmer's a bro

[aesopstails]

Originally Posted by xxevanxx

this is a thread to vote on my next story not to vote on someones clothes.

Next time you might wish to post in the proper (Stories) forum, and perhaps ask for input a bit more graciously (as opposed to: "I'm giving you a list"... I want you to vote"... "I won't accept votes after 9/1").

Now, would you be a dear and check on the weather forecast for Friday, so I'll know whether or not to wear a raincoat over those Daisy Dukes?

[Lioness]

Originally Posted by aesopstails

Next time you might wish to post in the proper (Stories) forum, and perhaps ask for input a bit more graciously (as opposed to: "I'm giving you a list"... I want you to vote"... "I won't accept votes after 9/1").

Now, would you be a dear and check on the weather forecast for Friday, so I'll know whether or not to wear a raincoat over those Daisy Dukes?

I still prefer the red sequins....

[xxevanxx]

Originally Posted by aesopstails

Next time you might wish to post in the proper (Stories) forum, and perhaps ask for input a bit more graciously (as opposed to: "I'm giving you a list"... I want you to vote"... "I won't accept votes after 9/1").

Now, would you be a dear and check on the weather forecast for Friday, so I'll know whether or not to wear a raincoat over those Daisy Dukes?

Sorry, I thought since it wasn't a story I should put it on this section. You are probably right about me doing better on these things though. This is my first one though. So use this thread to do whatever you want i guess. If you want to vote on one for my next story I'm not stopping you.

[Bend Over Backwards]

Given the level of your literacy as shown in your OP, are you really so surpised that people are taking the piss out of you:

I'm giving you a list of stories I might write in the furture. I want you to vote for 1 of these stories. You can vote more than ounce if you want. Here is the list.

If this is the standard to expect from your stories then, thanks, but I'll refrain from encouraging you to write and pass.

Good luck.

[Pandorius999]

Shameless publicity. If someone reads a story and feels like they'll vote otherwise they'll not. If you wanf to give a semi preview there's a thread for thay in stories. If you're gonna blatantly ask for votes (and this isn't even CAW) fuck off.

[Prurient Purveyer]

The site needs randy women writing stories so don't let a few comments get you down.

You do need to work on your writing because you are overdoing it (the sex) and when you do that your story just ends up looking a bit silly.

Take this passage from Lesbian 2:

I was in front of Marie's room. I opened her door. She was still awake, but was changing clothes. She had nothing on. She was completly nude. She masturbated until she saw me. She screamed and coverd herself with a blanket. My nipples were so hard. I

She was changing clothes
She had nothing on
She was completely nude

You were in front of Marie's door. Well you would have to have been to open it- so why tell us. Did you open the door without knocking? Or push it open slowly so you could sneak in without her knowing?

So she was awake, changing clothes, nude and masturbating- and your nipples were hard. Well who's wouldn't be?

You've got a lot to tell but not like that.

Key word: tease.

But whatever keep writing.

[darthel0101]

Originally Posted by aesopstails

Here is a list of the attire I may possibly don on Friday. I want you to select one outfit. You can vote more than once if you want... I suppose I can change mid-way through the day if necessary. I will not accept any votes after Thursday.

1) Jeans, black tee shirt, sneakers

2) Black leather pants, red sequined halter top, red leather sandals

3) Short-shorts and a white tank top

4) Black lace teddy

5) Birthday suit

anybody got a bucket of water?? preferably about 72° (wouldn't want it TOO chilled) BTW - that IS a sateen tank, isn't it?

[Dizzyworks673]

I vote shorts too. Darth, I'm standing by with the backup bucket incase you miss!

[JackassTales]

Originally Posted by aesopstails

Next time you might wish to post in the proper (Stories) forum, and perhaps ask for input a bit more graciously (as opposed to: "I'm giving you a list"... I want you to vote"... "I won't accept votes after 9/1").

Now, would you be a dear and check on the weather forecast for Friday, so I'll know whether or not to wear a raincoat over those Daisy Dukes?

I prefer bareback, but if you insist, I will wear a raincoat 'inside' your Daisy Dukes!

[wantsomefun]

That's where we want her eventually, right?

I mean, c'mon.

[darthel0101]

Originally Posted by wantsomefun

That's where we want her eventually, right?

I mean, c'mon.

sheer is so much more erotic than naked

[Dizzyworks673]

Originally Posted by wantsomefun

That's where we want her eventually, right?

I mean, c'mon.

Originally Posted by darthel0101

sheer is so much more erotic than naked

WSF I think you have the right idea but I would agree more with Darth, it's so much more fun to peel back the mystery slowly and enjoy getting to the birthday suit.

[caleb.christian]

I vote for the mother daughter sex story.

[xxevanxx]

Originally Posted by Bend Over Backwards

Given the level of your literacy as shown in your OP, are you really so surpised that people are taking the piss out of you:

I'm giving you a list of stories I might write in the furture. I want you to vote for 1 of these stories. You can vote more than ounce if you want. Here is the list.

If this is the standard to expect from your stories then, thanks, but I'll refrain from encouraging you to write and pass.

Good luck.

Sorry, I wrote this at night. I was really tired, and wanted to make it quick. This is not my normal writing style. I am more descreptive usually. Please remember I am also new at this writing thing. I am not that good and you probably weren't good either when you began writing stories.

[ejls]

Originally Posted by aesopstails

Here is a list of the attire I may possibly don on Friday. I want you to select one outfit. You can vote more than once if you want... I suppose I can change mid-way through the day if necessary. I will not accept any votes after Thursday.

1) Jeans, black tee shirt, sneakers

2) Black leather pants, red sequined halter top, red leather sandals

3) Short-shorts and a white tank top

4) Black lace teddy

5) Birthday suit

You overlooked a red lace bra. It's a fan favorite. Well, at least my fans seem to like it.

[xxevanxx]

Originally Posted by Pandorius999

Shameless publicity. If someone reads a story and feels like they'll vote otherwise they'll not. If you wanf to give a semi preview there's a thread for thay in stories. If you're gonna blatantly ask for votes (and this isn't even CAW) fuck off.

Why is everyone bitching about how I wrongly made a vote thread. I said sorry. I learned from my mistake. No need to get harsh or anything. I only joined this site 1 month ago. I still have a lot to learn. So you guys can stop your bitching. There is nothing to be mad about it is only a thread. I should also sat I didn't write this for publicity. I wrote it cause I care about people's opinion.

[xxevanxx]

Originally Posted by caleb.christian

I vote for the mother daughter sex story.

Thanks for voting.

[xxevanxx]

Originally Posted by Prurient Purveyer

The site needs randy women writing stories so don't let a few comments get you down.

You do need to work on your writing because you are overdoing it (the sex) and when you do that your story just ends up looking a bit silly.

Take this passage from Lesbian 2:

I was in front of Marie's room. I opened her door. She was still awake, but was changing clothes. She had nothing on. She was completly nude. She masturbated until she saw me. She screamed and coverd herself with a blanket. My nipples were so hard. I

She was changing clothes
She had nothing on
She was completely nude

You were in front of Marie's door. Well you would have to have been to open it- so why tell us. Did you open the door without knocking? Or push it open slowly so you could sneak in without her knowing?

So she was awake, changing clothes, nude and masturbating- and your nipples were hard. Well who's wouldn't be?

You've got a lot to tell but not like that.

Key word: tease.

But whatever keep writing.

Thanks, I really appreciate it. I know I need to be more descriptive in my stories. I will work on that. I really didn'y pay attention in english class. Thanks for reading my stories and telling me that I need to improve without being a jerk.

[wantsomefun]

Originally Posted by ejls

You overlooked a red lace bra. It's a fan favorite. Well, at least my fans seem to like it.

I'm partial to a red lace bra myself, but it won't work with choices 3, 4, or 5, which I believe would be fan favorites in this case.

Besides it's just one more thing in the way of what we all want.

[xxevanxx]

Okay guys. Because of this thread I will improve my writing. I also want to say sorry if I sounded like a jerk. I just get so mad over hateful comments that have no meaning. I've decided to close this thread so no one gets their feelings hurt again. Use this thread for whatever you want. I am sorry for putting this in the wrong section of the forum. I will try and put it in the correct one next time. I will improve my writing style as well. I will be a little more descriptive in future stories. Thank you and peace out.