Help editing

[cab321]

Hey, been a long time since I did any creative writing, and I'm an even worse proof reader than I was years past. I have a story that is close to complete, but I need some help with editing. I figure I'm not the first guy to have this problem, so I'm curious if there is any community help that could be offered. I've seen some people get suggestions as they go a long from members, but I'd rather not put something out unreadable just to have it finally corrected weeks later after everyone has written off the story as crap.

Thanks in advance.

[bubbles91]

id be happy to help. im good at editing text...but im new to the format.