Just looking for some feedback..

[FuckM3Pumps]

I am a new writer, so I only have two stories at the moment. I am mere paragraphs away from finishing another story, so I can post it and in the process of beginning a series for my story "Blood Red Wine". I haven't been able to get very much feedback, so I decided to look to the forums. I would really appreciate if someone, perhaps bored, with nothing better to do, or, better yet, a nice person with a willingness to help out a new writer would check out my stories and give me their opinions.

Blood Red Wine is a lesbian vampire story, very short but soon to be a series.

The Ruined Princess is a very extreme, intense story. If you prefer soft, romantic or vanilla stories, you probably shouldn't read that one. You'll hate it.

Without further ado, please read and many thanks to those who do so.

[FuckM3Pumps]

Also, I would have posted a link to my profile for convenience, but I'm afraid that the site won't allow me to do so, due to my nearly non-existent post count.

[FuckM3Pumps]

However, I can post part of the URL. It's stories.xnxx, the obvious 'com' and then /profile674070/ .

[ELaken-Palmer]

Why not just post your stories right here on the forum where we can easily read them and give you feedback?
Read ALL the CAW12 stories

[FuckM3Pumps]

That's a fantastic idea. I'm new to this, lol. Thank you.

[wantsomefun]

Originally Posted by ELaken-Palmer

Why not just post your stories right here on the forum where we can easily read them and give you feedback?
Read ALL the CAW12 stories

When you've made ten posts, you can add links on the forum (links aren't allowed on the Sex Stories site, http://stories.xnxx.com/). Post your stories here, like ELP suggested, and include links to the Sex Stories site versions so we can easily find them to vote there, too.

One question about your user name: Did you have a bad experience with the plumbing in a fast little BMW?

Welcome (again) to x!

[FuckM3Pumps]

My username is definitely shoe related, lol. As in 'fuck-me boots', 'fuck-me heels', 'fuck-me pumps'...I prefer pumps.

[darthel0101]

Originally Posted by FuckM3Pumps

Also, I would have posted a link to my profile for convenience, but I'm afraid that the site won't allow me to do so, due to my nearly non-existent post count.

have you tried putting the link to your profile in your sig?

[FuckM3Pumps]

Originally Posted by darthel0101

have you tried putting the link to your profile in your sig?

I did that, thanks!

[ejls]

Originally Posted by FuckM3Pumps

I did that, thanks!

I click that link and get "page not found".

[wantsomefun]

Originally Posted by ejls

I click that link and get "page not found".

Whatever the problem was then seems to be fixed now.

[snowleopard3200]

As many have suggested, any story you wish to have proofed post here in the forum; there are plenty of old hands who will offer honest critiques on what they see in the story.

Many have helped me out as well.

If you have a very long story, for the sake of critiques, say of more than ten pages, consider breaking it down into more than one part and posting each either in turn on the same thread, or as seperate threads.

This will allow more insight into the story; one thing too, many of the old hands here will also tell what you are doing right, which is good.

Welcome to the Forum, and best wishes.