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[Dark_Brother]

I made a mistake in this chapter, that is unforgivable. To you, my audience, I am humbly sorry.

When Derek was turned into a female, it was not intended as a slight against him, but rather the intent was to drastically change Derek so that he couldn't be the same person. It was a punishment to Derek, not an insult to females. For Derek (Whom I had always envisioned as masochistic, becoming a woman would be a nightmare.

So once more, please accept my apologies, and I will likely write an edited chapter 9, as soon as possible.

[vvn]

Amazing stories and pictures, keep it up

[Dark_Brother]

As promised, I have posted an edited version of the story. If you read the original, there weren't a ton of changes, just some spelling and grammar, and explaining more of why turning Derek into a woman was a punishment, and not a slant on women.

[Dark_Brother]

Chap 10 is up. Go click on it!

[Dark_Brother]

Found another pic for Summer, so decided to post.

[Dark_Brother]

Ha ha, I post that pic, then realize I didn't post the first one yet... So, here is Mom:

Summer 1:

And as requested, the cheerleaders:

[garbonzo607]

These chapters aren't out yet, Dark_Brother. People might be confused. xD

Anyway, Ch. 11 will have them.

I dunno about the cheerleaders, are they in Ch. 16/17? They are fucking HOT.

[Dark_Brother]

Oy! That's the problem with writing ahead. Oh well... Hopefully my editors will get 11 to me, and I can get it out.

The cheerleaders were around Lindsey. They aren't important, but someone asked for them.

Originally Posted by garbonzo607

These chapters aren't out yet, Dark_Brother. People might be confused. xD

Anyway, Ch. 11 will have them.

I dunno about the cheerleaders, are they in Ch. 16/17? They are fucking HOT.

[garbonzo607]

Originally Posted by Dark_Brother

Oy! That's the problem with writing ahead. Oh well... Hopefully my editors will get 11 to me, and I can get it out.

The cheerleaders were around Lindsey. They aren't important, but someone asked for them.

Huh. Does someone really have that low of an imagination? O.o It's not like they even needed to be visualized...

Now you had me anticipating some cheerleaders. haha

Btw, does mom have a name?

[Dark_Brother]

Chapter 11 was just posted... It usually takes a few minutes for it to show up.

The cheerleaders were requested, so I did what I could, lol. As for mom, the only name I have given her is either mom, or Mrs. Xavier. I decided to do this, because we usually don't think of our mom's by their first names, even when we know it. Since this story is first-person, I tried to get into his head, and write the way he would think. Nick knows his mother's name, but after the way his dad raised him, he would never use it.

Originally Posted by garbonzo607

Huh. Does someone really have that low of an imagination? O.o It's not like they even needed to be visualized...

Now you had me anticipating some cheerleaders. haha

Btw, does mom have a name?

[Dark_Brother]

Someone (Sorry, I lost the name to give credit) found a video of Amber from IFMSS in action.

http://video.xnxx.com/video1421032/i...-_pandas_movie

Hopefully you enjoy!

[garbonzo607]

Originally Posted by Dark_Brother

Someone (Sorry, I lost the name to give credit) found a video of Amber from IFMSS in action.

http://video.xnxx.com/video1421032/i...-_pandas_movie

Hopefully you enjoy!

WOW, she is SO hot! Thanks a bunch for the link, haha!

[Dark_Brother]

Okay, Chapter twelve should be up soon. Hope you all enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

FYI: It looks like this series is going to be 21 chapters long, by the way things are looking. My longest erotic story!

Thank you to everyone who has commented on this series. I have truly enjoyed reading all you've had to say.

[Dark_Brother]

Ch. 13 will be up soon. That is all...

[garbonzo607]

That is all...

rofl.

[BrishanSwords]

I have read every one of your storries and I love them all keep writting.

[xtremejump]

The story is great, however much of the story is becoming obvious. The erotica is great, is giving him the biggest dock, to win the girls over from him being a geek? I have no problems with the incest. I don't condone it outside of erotic fiction, but what man's fantasy hasn't been about having sex with twins. Who is going to win out in being nicks human boy.friend. Or is it going to end up like a poly family? Keep the story going for a long time if you can. Can you write two endings at the conclusion? Don't burn out. You are a shooting star on the way to immortality. Can't wait to read more!

[Dark_Brother]

The next chapter has just been submitted.

[dav31092]

Love your stories. That's all i can say.

[Dark_Brother]

Okay, so it looks like there will be a total of 21 chapters. They are all written, and just waiting for edits. I can't deny that some of it was rushed, but that was only because I am no longer able to write, and will only be a able to do fixes, and I needed to finish the story.

Thank you to everyone who has written, and offered their opinions/comments. I have appreciated them all.

[handparty]

Thank you for all of your hard work. I'm sure that even rushed, this story will be gold.

[Dark_Brother]

The next chapter is up!

[beirirangu]

All i want for christmass is chapter 17...

but the whole story would be the best gift

and a cat is fine too

[Dark_Brother]

The next chapter is up!
Here is Julia:


Also, concerning the reason for me quitting writing, I will soon be heading to a country where I will no longer be able to access this site, do to the laws there. So, as soon as I post the last chapter, I will be saying, adieu.

It has been fun, and good, but I have little choice, if I am going to live and do my job there.

[datturboguy]

Your a amazing writer, dont let anyone stop you from doing what you love. and dont make shanna a lesbian...shanna/shannon are my favorite.

[Smokescreen]

Moving to a country with blocks on certain sites?
Did you take a job to teach english as a second language in China?

I hope wherever you find yourself, even though you can't get here, you never stop writing.

[Dark_Brother]

Let's just say I work for the Gov't, and have to go somewhere that doesn't like my the U.S. very much...

Originally Posted by Smokescreen

Moving to a country with blocks on certain sites?
Did you take a job to teach english as a second language in China?

I hope wherever you find yourself, even though you can't get here, you never stop writing.

[beirirangu]

lol... that narrows it down to about half the world...

but i can't see how that could stop you from writting and saving your work for when you get back, because we all know everyone will want to read it

[Userstr]

Its called a proxy

[Dark_Brother]

Lol... I know about proxies. I also know that if I get caught with pornography of ANY kind I will lose my job. As much as I enjoy writing this type of material, it just isn't worth it.

Thank you all for your support, though.

[Dark_Brother]

Alright, chapter 18 will be up momentarily.

One quick question... I have been seeing a lot of comments on my chapters being short, but Chapter 17 clocked in at just over 10 pages, which is my norm. I know I had a couple of shorter ones (15 & 16) but I guess I am missing something...?

Well, at any rate, 18 comes in at just over 12. I know not much bigger, but still bigger than my usual.

Oh, and 21 is at 15 pages so far, but the sex needs some work... Oh well... I guess that's why it isn't up yet.

EDIT: I forgot to ask... Does ANYONE have a pic or drawing that they think would work for Lela & Harana? I can paint with words, but not so well with paint or markers.

[BrishanSwords]

There are many countries that don't like the US and sadly I've been to a few to many of them in my former line of work. I will say any muslim nation would be problematic for our friend DarkBrother and or China but I can't think of to many others where having porn durring your free time would cause problems.

[Dark_Brother]

Originally Posted by BrishanSwords

There are many countries that don't like the US and sadly I've been to a few to many of them in my former line of work. I will say any muslim nation would be problematic for our friend DarkBrother and or China but I can't think of to many others where having porn durring your free time would cause problems.

Unfortunately you hit the nail on the head...

[Dark_Brother]

Just finished posting the next chapter. A word of caution before you read, there is very little erotica, and more plot/character development in this chapter. Don't worry, though, as the next chapter comes back strong.

'Old' Mrs. Polkins:

[Zaber_Shurin]

i have read all your stories and i find them all incredibly entertaining. beyond the erotic elements your stories have so much plot and feel to them. i can picture the universes you have created and the deep and complex charecters that inhabit them. you are a brillient writer and i urge you to continue writing even if it is no longer in the erotic field. i would deffinatly read your stories even without the erotic element in it. i am a writer myself and i would love to get some imput from you on some of my non-erotic stories. looking foward to the last chapters of B&S, you have me on the edge of my seat!

[Dark_Brother]

Well, the second to last chapter is up. Hopefully you enjoy! I'm going to bed!

[thehilzey]

I really enjoyed reading your stories. Just finished up reading all of them (took nearly 13 hrs I might add) and cannot wait for the conclusion of BS. On a side note I actually found BS first at the wolf pub and really enjoyed your writings and just had to finished reading BS and continued from there. Sad to read that you will not be able to be writing these stories shortly. Hope to read the last chapter soon, but for now I need my sleep.

[Dark_Brother]

I wanted to take a slight break from editing the final chapter to say, "Thank you!"

I have read all of your comments, both in the forum, and in the comments on all of my stories, and really appreciate all of the positive & constructive comments and support I've received from all of you. I hope to be able to publish (likely a non-erotic) story some day, and thanks to all of your help, I have learned a lot over the last 7 months.

I hope to have the final chapter up this weekend, depending on how much time I have available to do my editing.

Here is a pic someone xtremejump for Lela, though in my story she is hairless, and has a larger head with big eyes.

[camcam83]

I just wanted to say thank you for all the wonderful writing you have done and that I hope you have a safe and fun time over seas. Take care and we will all be looking forward to the time in which you can come back to us!

[Dark_Brother]

Chapter 21 will be up momentarily.

[sc8or8pi8on]

I have read most of your bait and switch series.... i found it very entertaining and I wholeheartedly agree with the other readers in saying you should continue with your writing. I have read your earlier posts regarding this and have a pretty good idea as to what type of country you'll be moving to.

Now i'm not saying you should continue while in said country/area, but at least tinker around with some ideas for new stories... read some other Scifi stories erotic or not and see what pops into that brilliant little head of yours and write little tid bits so you can remember down the line......

This is assuming that you'll be leaving that country/area eventually (fingers crossed!!!)

as far as other scifi/erotic writings go.... I know you don't do the whole kiddie thing but there is a (i consider it a novel) story called CAMP... it can be found on this site but the original author has his own site called "wolfpub.org" (coincidentally where i first heard of you as a author). His style of having an epic plot while still keeping the sex steamy is amazing...

longest post ive ever written!!!!!!!!! woot

[Cryonic]

I wish you the best of luck with your job, and as you are well aware, you will be missed. You dealt well with the meme of one man trying to juggle many women, and still trying to make sure everyone is happy. You also had people forced to deal with the very real consequences of their actions, with is very refreshing in this genre.

I half want to give you a computer in the states you can remote into to continue your writing, but that and TOR are unlikely to be workable for you.

Thanks again for all your work. I finally was able to finish registration, and you and two other writers on here made me decide to write my own series, which I hope to post in the next couple weeks, once I get some free time.

Check in from time to time if you can. Best of luck.

[Dark_Brother]

Well, isn't it ironic? Two days after posting my final story, my computer HDD crashed, and I lost everything... Good thing I backed my stories up online, huh? At least I didn't have to delete them before I left in a couple days.

Anyway, Thank you for all of the support, you have given me. I truly appreciate it. I plan to keep writing (safer) material why I'm away, and look forward to the day I can return.

Once again, thank you!
Dark_Brother

[Manda Panda]

I have to say that I just finished reading the entire Bait and Switch series, in two days and nearly cumming non-stop . I absolutely loved it and I am rather sad that you have to stop writing but completely understand. I hope one day you will return and be able to give us another erotic tale.

Panda

[Lonelydad]

I saw that you are looking for some art to post. Have you searching through Fantasy art like Boris Vallejo.

[DastardlyDan]

great thread guy.

[DJR132]

i think you should do a continueation of the series ismss
it was a great series i think it was your best and id love to see more stories

[Playerofass]

I want to let you know. I am not one for reading. I terribly hate books. Tell ya the truth I just think they are stupid and a waist of time. But, your story's man. Idk what the hell it is but they pull me in. I hate books but I just read the entire bait and switch series. To be honest that was the best thing I have ever read. I was so grabbed by the plot and alway waiting to see what happened next. You definantly need to make more story's. The only authors I have actually grow to like is you and perv2. Your story's are just amazing. I just can never get into a real book. Even in high school I hated them. Congrats on all your fans and you amazing story's/novels they are amazing!

[PandaOrgy]

Once more, I'm out of things to read.

[2studdogs]

I have truly enjoyed all of your stories (Bait and Switch is next on my reading agenda). You have a great talent and I compliment you. I have one request however; even though I am a straight male (sexually speaking), I can not help wondering what the lucky men in your stories look like. You have posted pics of all the lovely ladies in your stories, but none of the men that are enjoying the fruits of all that female sexuality. Maybe you can humor me in the future, if not keep up the great work, as I will still be looking forward to any new stories you post.

Thanks,
2studdogs