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Old 12-11-2011, 03:51 AM   #51
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Great new entry and I agree with Cr00ker, what did you look like ?
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Absolutely beautiful Bella. Your story telling skills are first rate - and the detail is great, so please, don't change!

I played with my sister when we were kids, no where near as intense as your experiences, but you have brought back a whole range of memories for me that were previously forgotten (maybe engineered that way by my subconscious?)

My sister and I had some lovely innocent, but dirty play together that has been long forgotten, and never spoken of. Happy times!
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is it okay to ask what you looked like back then? like..hair colour, height etc? there's loads of detail about everything else, apart from the the people involved :P
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Great new entry and I agree with Cr00ker, what did you look like ?
I'm afraid I have to disagree.
I like that she let's me fill in those kind of details so that the people in the story can look pretty much however I want them to.
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You are an excellent writer. I love that you're taking your time, describing everything thoroughly, and, best of all, that you're sharing your thoughts. For me, the psychological side of this is every bit as exciting as the physical. Maybe even more so. Thank you for sharing so much of yourself.
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Part 22

Danny climbed through my bedroom window and closed it behind him. I stood there nervously, wondering what would happen, but sort of already knowing what was going to happen. Perhaps if, the first time he'd come into my bedroom, I'd been dressed more modestly, as I was now, and didn't have the wooden cock laying on my bed, things might have been different. I don't know. Danny just seemed to look at me, and I think we both knew what was going to happen next. It was almost like I was waiting for him to make his move or say something. Maybe things would have been different if I'd simply told him to get out, but I stood there in silence. Whether Danny took my silence as some sort of encouragement or not, I don't really know. Maybe he truly believed I was a cock-hungry slut and that he was somehow doing me a favour. Whatever was going through his mind, the end result was that he started to undo his belt again, and then his trousers. I was once more staring at his cock as he pushed his trousers and boxer shorts down around his knees. I knew what he wanted me to do, but even now I couldn't just drop to my knees and do it. Danny was slowly stroking his cock as I stared at it wide-eyed. Then, for the first time since he climbed through the window, one of us spoke.
 
"Come on, slut. Get sucking. You know you want it."
 
And there it was. I was suddenly down on my knees again, my head level with his growing cock.
 
"Wait, Bella. Get undressed first. I want to see you naked."
 
I was shocked to hear him say that. I had never been naked in front of a boy since I was little. I think Danny truly had this idea in his head that I was a sex-hungry slut. When I didn't respond immediately, he grabbed my hair and turned my head so I was looking up at him.
 
"I said, get undressed. We don't have all night."
 
I had never seen Danny looking so angry or menacing before. I quickly lifted my nighty up over my head and off. I know Ben had seen my breasts before, but only with the lights out, and it embarrassed me to have Danny look at them now. I wanted this to be over as quickly as possible, so I hurriedly pulled my panties down and off.
 
Danny smiled and said, "That's better."
 
Looking back, I can see that Danny misread my eagerness to get it over with as confirmation that I just loved sucking cock, and that I really was the slut he imagined me to be. I was naked and on my knees, taking his cock in my mouth. There wasn't the hesitancy of the first time, and I can imagine how it looked to Danny, having his kid sister sucking eagerly on his cock like a porn star. I remember glancing over and catching sight of myself in the dressing table mirror, just my head moving back and forward as Danny's cock moved in and out of my mouth. I had my hands on his thighs, just to steady myself. It's easy to look back and see why he thought I was a slut. He probably assumed I was doing the exact same thing with Ben every night, if not more. I was in such a hurry to get it over with that Danny actually told me to slow down and take it easy.
 
"Not so fast. Yeah, that's better. You really love that, don't you, Bella?"
 
Of course, I was in no position to answer him, having my mouth full of cock. At Danny's insistence, I was doing it slower now, and it was clear Danny was enjoying it more, from the noises he was making. I couldn't help glancing at my reflection every now and then, watching myself as I sucked my brother's cock. Danny was stroking my hair, brushing it back off my face, like you'd stroke a pet. As I was doing it slower, I was also taking it deeper each time, getting as much of it in as I could. I was no longer in a hurry, even though I was still scared that Ben might come down or Dad might have heard Danny climbing in through the window. I think, as with my afternoon games with Ben, I sort of mentally distanced myself from any blame or guilt, and if I got caught I was just the innocent victim of my brother's lust. It was my way of calming down, almost like I was accepting that I had no say in what was happening to me, so it didn't really matter if we were caught or not.
 
As with the previous time, Danny started to take control, grabbing my hair and fucking my mouth at his own pace, and I knew it wouldn't be long before he was cumming in my mouth again. He was rough with me, grunting with each thrust, but I couldn't do anything about it.
 
"I'm going to cum, Bella. Remember to swallow every last drop, or there'll be trouble."
 
And he did cum and I did swallow it all, even mananging to keep it all down this time, though I still coughed and spluttered a bit after he finally pulled out. Danny picked up my discarded panties and used them to wipe his cock clean, and then pulled up his trousers. I thought that he would just leave, like before, but he didn't.
 
"Stand up."
 
I did as I was told. I felt embarrassed, letting Danny see me totally naked like that, but I didn't see much point in trying to cover myself up. I just wanted Danny out of there so I could get cleaned up and wait for Ben's visit.
 
Danny's eyes were all over me, looking me up and down, seeing me standing there like that. I felt so small and helpless, and being naked made me feel even more vulnerable. I'm sure I was trembling, and it wasn't just because it was a chilly night. Danny moved towards me and I felt his hand on my pussy. I was so used to Ben doing it and spreading my legs for him, that I did the same for Danny almost instinctively, which must have reinforced his image of me as a slut. Before I realized my mistake, Danny had his fingers in my pussy and the fact that I was wet clearly didn't surprise him.
 
"Your cunt is soaking. You really are a dirty little slut."
 
In my defence, I don't think it was soaking, but I have no doubt I was wet. Despite everything, it had turned me on to see myself sucking Danny's cock, and even swallowing his cum again. I couldn't help it. Now, as he roughly pushed three fingers into me, it was turning me on even more. My body was betraying me. I didn't want Danny to see me like this, knowing that I was playing into his hands, and acting the way he expected me to act, but I couldn't help myself. He pulled my hair with his other hand, turning me to face him again as he looked into my eyes.
 
"Your cunt feels so tight. I can't wait to see how it feels around my cock."
 
Still gripping my hair tightly, holding me in place, he brought his other hand up and forced his fingers into my mouth and I licked them, tasting my own wetness. Danny had a look of triumph in his eyes. Then he wiped his fingers on my tits and left me there, not even bothering to close my bedroom door behind him. I felt disgusted with myself for allowing him to control me so easily, but I had other matters to attend to. Knowing Ben wouldn't be down for a while, I hurried into the front room naked and grabbed the wooden cock, as I desperately needed to cum, and I knew it wouldn't take much to finish me off.
 
Ben didn't come down that night anyway. It happened sometimes and I didn't think too much of it. I guess I had other things to occupy my mind.
 
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Thanks for all the nice comments and PMs, as always. For those of you interested in such things, I will be posting some seperate character descriptions soon. If you'd rather not know what we looked like back then, you can just ignore it.
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wow i finally caught up. Rather than say it is excellent i will say it is well written and that i am enjoyin g reading it. Is that politically correct enough lol.

But seriously. it's great, how much more to come?
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Last entry is quite depressing. So wish things hadn't gone like that. T_T
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When I write fiction, I very rarely describe characters physically, unless it's important somehow, like if they're overly tall, or very fat, or flat-chested, or whatever. I'll say if a girl is pretty, but what difference does it make whether she's a blonde or a red-head, unless it's somehow relevant to the plot? But, for the benefit of those who want/need physical descriptions I'm going to give some vague descriptions of the main players in this story, as we looked back then. Don't expect exact measurements regarding height and weight, because I'm truly hopeless at things like that.

Bella - small and slender, my breasts had yet to fully develop. I had very straight hair that barely touched my shoulders. My hair was very dark, like my mother's, but my skin was pale. I was a pretty girl but kinda plain, I guess. I didn't stand out from the crowd.

Ben - short and a bit chubby, but not fat. He had a mop of curly brown hair and a round face. He was pale too, probably from spending so much time indoors. Partly this was due to the fact that he had a skin condition which tended to flare up more in the summer, when the weather was hot.

Danny - big and solid looking. Not muscular but not fat either - just solid. Very big thighs. Had dark hair that he wore quite long.

Martin - tall and quite muscular, but still slender. Very tanned. Wore his dark hair very short, but not shaven yet.

George - his hair was very blond, which was unusual in our family. It was short and spiky. He was small back then and kinda skinny, but nicely tanned.

Mark - tallish and sort of average build. Had short dark hair and a slightly oriental look to his face.

I did warn you it would be vague, but hope it helps anyway. If you want more specific details or have other questions, just ask. Also, for those who have PM'd me showing concern for the way the story is heading, I did warn you way back in the beginning that there were dark times ahead, but theres's plenty to smile about too. I just hope you'll bear with me and see it through to the end. Part 23 should be finished soon, so look out for that. Comments always welcome, of course.
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When I write fiction, I very rarely describe characters physically, unless it's important somehow, like if they're overly tall, or very fat, or flat-chested, or whatever. I'll say if a girl is pretty, but what difference does it make whether she's a blonde or a red-head, unless it's somehow relevant to the plot? But, for the benefit of those who want/need physical descriptions I'm going to give some vague descriptions of the main players in this story, as we looked back then. Don't expect exact measurements regarding height and weight, because I'm truly hopeless at things like that.

Bella - small and slender, my breasts had yet to fully develop. I had very straight hair that barely touched my shoulders. My hair was very dark, like my mother's, but my skin was pale. I was a pretty girl but kinda plain, I guess. I didn't stand out from the crowd.

Ben - short and a bit chubby, but not fat. He had a mop of curly brown hair and a round face. He was pale too, probably from spending so much time indoors. Partly this was due to the fact that he had a skin condition which tended to flare up more in the summer, when the weather was hot.

Danny - big and solid looking. Not muscular but not fat either - just solid. Very big thighs. Had dark hair that he wore quite long.

Martin - tall and quite muscular, but still slender. Very tanned. Wore his dark hair very short, but not shaven yet.

George - his hair was very blond, which was unusual in our family. It was short and spiky. He was small back then and kinda skinny, but nicely tanned.

Mark - tallish and sort of average build. Had short dark hair and a slightly oriental look to his face.

I did warn you it would be vague, but hope it helps anyway. If you want more specific details or have other questions, just ask. Also, for those who have PM'd me showing concern for the way the story is heading, I did warn you way back in the beginning that there were dark times ahead, but theres's plenty to smile about too. I just hope you'll bear with me and see it through to the end. Part 23 should be finished soon, so look out for that. Comments always welcome, of course.
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Thanks for the descriptions Bella. It does help a little, at least for me to visualize all the characters. Hope you have a good holiday and can't wait for the next entry.
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Personally I agree with this post.
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I like that she let's me fill in those kind of details so that the people in the story can look pretty much however I want them to.
But hey, maybe that's just me.
That being said I'm very happy with the somewhat vague descriptions Bella.
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Part 23
 
After the latest incident with Danny, there was now no doubt in my mind that he would be back for more. As with his first visit, I was conflicted about how I felt about the whole thing. Simply put, part of me hated it and part of me liked it. It wasn't even that I could pick out the bits I liked from the bits I didn't. I could think about a certain part of it - being told to strip naked, for example - and love it and loathe it in almost equal measure. I found myself thinking about and mentally enjoying aspects of that night that I know I hated at the time they were happening. It was all very confusing.
 
And I knew Danny wanted to fuck me. More than that, I knew he intended to fuck me. In a way, I always suspected that Ben would eventually have sex with me. It was only a matter of time. It wasn't something I thought about too much at the time, but it seemed inevitable, the way things were going. One day, he would do it and I would let him, just as I'd let him do everything else to me over the years, ever since those earlier, more innocent times wrestling on the bed, and maybe even before then. On the rare occassion that I thought about it, I was again torn by conflicting thoughts of excitement and fear. And again, although I still didn't know the word, I knew my submissiveness would play a big part in it, as it always did. I always allowed Ben to do these things to me, just as I allowed George to tie me up, and just as I allowed Danny to dominate me so easily. I was weak and easily controlled. At the same time, I got pleasure out of what they did to me. Not just the sexual thrills I received from what the boys were doing to me or making me do to them, but the simple joy of pleasing Ben and George, of making them happy by playing games that they wanted to play. I took delight in being part of their happiness. The fact that they took advantage of my wilingness to please didn't alter that.
 
Over the next few days, I was more aware of Danny, of where he was at any given moment. I'd catch him looking at me in the mornings. I'd listen for when he came home at night. One time, he came home much earlier than usual, when me and Ben were playing on the computer in their room. We'd finished our sex games, of course, but I was very aware of my lack of panties and also that my pussy was still wet from Ben fucking me with the screwdriver handle. Normally, Danny would put on some Heavy Metal music and that would end our fun, as it would force us from the room, but this time he didn't. I had my back to him so I don't know what he was doing, but then I heard him getting changed. Then he did something he'd never done before - he came and sat beside me on the bed, sandwiching me between him and Ben.
 
We were in the middle of a football game. Ben always beat me, but he beat me at every game, so it was no big deal. I was okay on racing games, but hopeless on almost everything else. I think it was an indication of our drifting apart lately that we basically played in silence these days. Back when we were closer, Ben would keep up a running commentary, laughing as he easily ran past my players and scored, mocking my lack of ability, and just having fun. Now it seemed more of a chore, like we were doing it more out of habit than anything else. Like we were just filling the gap between our sex fun and Mum calling us down for tea.
 
Danny didn't say anything as he watched the action on the screen. I was very aware that he was closer than he needed to be, so I shifted slightly closer to Ben, but Danny just moved closer to me again, trapping me between them. Ben was thrashing me, as usual, and had just scored yet another goal, at which time Danny spoke for the first time.
 
"Well, I can see why you like playing with Bella."
 
His double meaning was obvious and it made me blush.
 
Ben just said, "I'll play you after, if you want."
 
Danny laughed and said, "Okay, but I think I'd rather play with Bella."
 
As if to emphasize this, his hand was touching my bum. Ben, as usual, was hunched forward slightly, so he couldn't see what was going on. Danny's hand on my bottom didn't affect my play, as I was so useless anyway. He was just lightly stroking me through my skirt. I felt powerless to do anything, so I tried my best to ignore it and carried on with the game. Then he slipped his hand up the back of my t-shirt and under my bra strap at the back. I wore a bra to school lately, but not always around the house. My breasts weren't yet developed enough to require one all the time. Then I was aware that he was trying to undo it. He was using his left hand, but he'd always been ambidextrous, so it wasn't a problem to him. Luckily at that time the game ended, so I jumped up and said I needed the toilet and hurriedly left the room.
 
I went back, but not before I made a detour to my room for some clean panties. I couldn't chance Danny finding out I wasn't wearing any. When I went back, Ben and Danny were playing together. It was weird to see Danny being so sociable, and Ben too, I guess. It was like when we were younger, everyone playing together. With nowhere else to sit, I found myself sitting between them again. With both of Danny's hands on the controller, there was no chance of him touching me anyway. I played Danny next and then Danny played Ben again (winner stays on) so Danny was always too busy to try anything, but I knew this wasn't over.
 
After that, Danny started touching me in the mornings, during the chaos of breakfast and getting ready for school. Not often, but every now and then, when the opportunity arose, he'd grab my bum or even put his hand up my skirt. It didn't seem to bother him that Mum or my other brothers were around. It wasn't done openly, but there was always the danger of being seen. I, of course, said nothing, not wanting to draw attention to it, which only encouraged him. I knew if I said anything, that it would open a whole can of worms and I didn't want to risk having everything come out. So I just stood there and let it happen.
 
At night, I'd lay awake and listen for when he came home. If he didn't come home, I'd lay in the darkness and await the tapping on my window. Sometimes he didn't come home at all, preferring to stay at a friend's house. In the meantime, things with Ben were moving along as normal - if normal is the right word. He had once more settled into a routine, adding a little variety here and there when he felt like it. Our non-sexual games saw us drifting apart a bit more. We rarely talked or made up stories together now, and seemed more and more to rely on computer games to fill the void. That one time with Danny joining in was actually a highlight that broke up the monotony of our after-sex time together.
 
Me and Mark were still kissing every day after school, except when he had football practice, or something else like that. It hadn't progressed beyond him groping my tits or ass through my clothes, although I was aware that he was getting aroused by it and could feel his hard cock pressing against me as we kissed. With the end of the school year coming up, we were talking about how we could see eachother during the holidays. We'd been to the cinema twice now, along with George and his friends, but only really got time alone during the film itself. With the summer holidays coming up, we knew we'd need George's help again to cover for us. We'd also be going away on holiday at different times with our respective families, and I would be away at my aunt and uncle's for another week or so too, so our time together would be limited anyway. I'm surprised Mark kept at it, as I'm sure he could have found less complicated girls to date.
 
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This is so real! The mood is a bit of a downer, I have this impending doom feeling, but the writing keeps me reading!
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Great. Thanks for descriptions too. Look f orward to the next part. FJ
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I really hope the next chapter is coming soon. I've been checking constantly hoping for it to be out already!
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very nice bella only thing is we neeed another installment im getting withdrawl symptoms lol
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I'll be writing and posting more soon. Just had a weird time lately and need to be in the right frame of mind to write, especially as the next few chapters are so important and I need to try and get the tone right. Thanks for all the nice words and comments, and hopefully I'll post more in a day or so.
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Part 24

Every night I went to bed wondering if tonight was going to be the night when Danny tapped at my window again. I don't think I was nervous or apprehensive about it - I think I accepted it as being inevitable and beyond my control. It's weird to think that I could be so calm about it, but that's the way my mind worked and still does, in certain situations. I would lay in bed in the darkness, waiting to hear Danny come home, waiting to hear the same old arguments he had with my Dad if he was late. I never thought that Danny would sneak down to my room in the night, as Ben did, although that was always a possibility, I guess.

Then, one night, it happened, as I guess I suspected it would. I was laying in bed and Danny wasn't home, and I heard Dad make his way upstairs to bed. The house was suddenly quiet. Danny might have been staying over at a friend's house, but there was no way for me to know that. Of course, I always had the options of ignoring Danny or refusing to open the window for him, but I don't think it ever crossed my mind. As I've said, as much as I hated the way Danny treated me, part of me liked it and even wanted more of it. I was very confused.

I don't know how long I lay there before I heard the tapping on my window. I ignored it at first, not wanting Danny to know that I was laying awake waiting for him, which in a way I was. I'm sure the tapping was light, as he didn't want to risk anyone else hearing it, but it sounded loud to me. I eventually switched on the bedside lamp and the tapping suddenly stopped. I was wearing the same yellow nighty as before. I went to the window and pulled back the curtain enough to see Danny's face. He didn't need to say anything. With only a slight hesitation, I opened the window for him and he climbed through. I closed the window and straightened the curtains, before turning to face him. He had a look in his eyes that I recognised instantly as lust. He was already taking off his jacket and undoing his jeans. I watched as he stripped from the waist down, even taking his socks off. His cock was already semi-hard. I knew from the fact that he had stripped that this was different to the past two times, but I just stood there dumbly, waiting to see what was going to happen.

"Don't just fucking stand there. Get undressed."

I pulled my nighty up over my head and off and then slipped my panties down around my ankles and stepped out of them. The whole time, I was staring at Danny's cock. My eyes seemed naturally drawn to it. Again, I was strangely calm, standing there naked, not even attempting to cover myself up. I guess I was waiting for Danny to tell me to suck his cock, as he had the previous times. Even though I'd done it before and even enjoyed it to a certain extent, I still needed to be told to do it, as if that somehow absolved me of all blame or guilt or whatever. I'm sure I didn't consciously think about things like that back then, but that's the way it was.

Danny was still speaking in a harsh whisper as he said, "Sit on the bed and spread your legs."

I hesitated, but only because it wasn't what I expected to hear and I was slightly confused for a moment. Danny obviously assumed I was just being disobedient.

"Do as you're told. Sit on the fucking bed and spread your legs."

I did as I was told, quickly sitting on the edge of the bed and spreading my legs as wide as they would go, offering my brother a clear view of my pussy. I was still staring at his cock as it grew harder and longer, twitching up and down.

"Don't just fucking sit there. I want to see you play with your pussy."

I didn't know what to do. I had never had much success at pleasuring myself, except when I used the wooden cock, and doing it in front of Danny was embarrassing. But I knew better than to make him angry, so I started fingering myself, using both hands, pulling my pussy lips apart and rubbing my clit with my thumb. I don't know if it was the idea of doing it in front of my brother, but it was having the desired effect on me and I knew if I kept it up I would reach orgasm. The whole time, I just stared at his cock, except for a few quick glances up at his arrogant, grinning face.

"Look at you, you dirty fucking slut - your cunt is soaking."

He grabbed me by my hair and pulled me off the bed, making me stumble down onto my knees. Without being told, I knew what he wanted and started to energetically suck on his cock. I'd been so close to cumming, but I didn't touch myself as I sucked his thick cock, my wet fingers smearing his thighs with my juices. He grabbed a fist full of my hair and pulled my head back, releasing his cock from my mouth and making me look up at him.

"It's time to fuck that slutty cunt of yours. Get on the bed."

I was really scared, but oddly excited too, knowing that this was it. I scrambled awkwardly up onto the bed and watched as he removed his t-shirt, so that we were both now totally naked. It was a Clash t-shirt - I remember that. I could see the excitement in his eyes. I didn't know then that he wasn't a virgin - he never had a regular girlfriend that I remember - but I remember he didn't look nervous as he approached me on the bed, even though he was about to commit incest with his kid sister. I had no idea what was going through his mind. He forced my legs apart and climbed on the bed between them, kneeling on the bed as he looked down at me. My pussy was spread wide and must have looked so inviting to him. It was already wet from earlier, when I'd touched myself. I was resigned to my fate, and stared blankly up at the ceiling Suddenly Danny was on top of me, his face above me, breathing hard. He was sort of leaning on one hand while his other hand fumbled with his cock, lining it up with my pussy. I felt it nudging against me several times before he started to push it in. I remember I had my head to one side, looking at the wallpaper, not wanting to look Danny in the eye as he pushed his cock in an inch or so. It was enough to hold it there while he repositioned himself, so he had his hands either side of my head. I remember there was only a brief pause before he forced his cock deep inside me, and he wasn't gentle. I think he honestly believed that Ben was fucking me already, so he saw no reason to take it easy with me. It hurt but I didn't make any sound above a whimper. I'm just grateful that Ben had prepared my pussy with the screwdriver handle, or it would have been a million times worse, and I'm sure I would have screamed the house down. Danny held his cock deep inside me, just looking down at me. His face showed a mixture of triumph and contempt. I really couldn't look at him for more than a second.

After a brief pause, Danny started fucking me for real, hard and fast. He was so much bigger and stronger than me and I felt small and helpless beneath him. I had my legs spread and my knees bent as he pounded my pussy. Mostly I stared at the wall, but would look up at him briefly, to see his face. He was sweating and his long hair was plastered to his reddened face. I don't think it lasted long. I think he was too excited to finally be fucking me, or maybe he just wanted to get it over with. Either way, I don't think I participated at all, except as some sort of living sex doll. Even though I'd been on the verge of cumming before, I never did. Like I say, it was over quickly, and he collapsed on top of me as he finally cum inside me. He was so big and heavy, I felt crushed beneath him. I remember laying there, still looking at the wall, with him on top of me and his cock still deep inside me. I don't know how long we stayed like that,. but he finally climbed off me and started getting dressed. I remained as I was, naked on the bed with my legs apart and my brother's cum inside me. I watched him dress but he never looked at me. He didn't bother putting all his clothes back on. Just as he was leaving, he turned to look at me, his eyes looking at my face and then travelling down my naked body, stopping as he looked at my wet, open pussy. Then he left.
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Old 01-12-2012, 04:51 AM   #82
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Same here. Seems kind of sad the way you describe it.

Thanks for sharing with us though, and I hope things got better.
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Well worth waiting for, not only erotic but very well written. You ought to look at your writing skills their may be more there than you think. You have done this very well and have inproved with every installment. Please don't make us wait as long for the next one.
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Wow Bella...stark reality. You're a very strong person to be sharing this with us. I anxiously await the next part.
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Old 01-13-2012, 08:51 AM   #85
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This is a very moving story, mainly because of the honesty and that requires a lot of bravery from Bella. I think Bella is a person who acknowledges how the past has made her the person she is today, but does not let it prevent her being the person she wants to be now and in future. Thanks for sharing and allowing us to bear witness.
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Bella what is the length of time that has elapsed from the start with Ben to currently in your story. I am guessing a year or so. It is absolutely the best thing that I have read that has been posted here.
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why would you tell about incest
Um because the Shit happens, she's telling her story
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Have to agree..always gets me so fuckin hard, bella getting used like that.
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I said at the very start that it would be written partly as a sex story, so it doesn't bother me that people are turned on by my adventures, as I am too at times. I'd be surprised if they weren't, to be honest. I think that's partly why there have been less comments lately, although I've received many PMs revealing both sympathy and also admitting that the stories are a turn-on.

On another matter... Even though the ban on under-age stories has been lifted, it shouldn't really affect this, as ages aren't really mentioned anyway. As many have guessed, I just added 10 years to the actual ages at the start. At this point, I had just had my 13th birthday about a month earlier. Anyway, I think I'm finally over my writer's block, so more to come soon.
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I'm very much looking forward to the next installment. Hopefully, all's well and it's just the writer's block that has us all eagerly waiting.
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Truely the hottest and well written story I read. It remind me of my sister and I and all that happen before the deed. It was the greatest sex I ever had.
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Hope this isn't dead, have enjoyed this story enormously!
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Just call me Forsaken dog the Necromancer. I would really love it if you continue this story bella as I've been follow it since before I became a member of this site.
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