Some Of My Personal Poems

[KnightLover1]

Starting a thread new to XNXX site, And I decided to post my personal hand written poems I have done over the past 3 years.. Now if your a lover of poetry, Would love some feedback and tell me what you think??

Good and Bad Criticism is welcomed, It will help me become a better writer.

Oh!, And if i get good reviews I will post more.

Take care to all

One of my poems

~Revelations~
It's a new day, And a new dawn, As i stay steady, And move on, Going through changes
as i stay strong, But its a fighting battle as i carry on.. I walk every step
swiftly it seems, Never rushing anything as you can see, But i stay humble in my
personality, Staying fresh an looking sharp, My charisma in tune like a musical
harp, Hitting the chords in perfect harmony, My lyrical words will set you free,
Float through your mind like the clouds above, Soaring in the skies like birds an
doves, With every note that escapes my lips, Is a heavenly song sealed with a kiss,
My words are deep and powerful, I speak with all my heart, Don't be a coward son,
I'll keep you guessing like a trivia game, You know my style changes, It never stays
the same., But i will remain fly like a jumbo plane.. I walk light like a ninja
fool, I stay creeping in the shadows, I'm invisible..They call me a legend, But i
call it luck, I was never talented when i was younger, I was the ugly duck, But i
turned into a swan an moving gracefully, My mind is an endless box of rhymes can't
you see, I hold a power few ever did, And the secret to that, Just be yourself kid..
Don't boast or brag about what you got, Just stay who you are and keep it hot..
Having things and losing them is a painful shot, Like getting your check up, Or
kicked in the crotch.. Yeah i know it never happened before, but for the fella's,
Well you know how it goes, And for the females who take a peek at this, Just think
back at your first terrible kiss.. But imagine this.. What would you do? if you
could make a wish, You only get one chance, So make it big.. If i had that
opportunity i'd wish for this, I'd wish for peace on earth and good will to men,
Give all the needy kids a pillow and blanket and a warm bed,.. Put all the veterans
in a shelter for risking there lives, Help all the homeless people for them to get
by.. And keep the predators all locked away, So no mother or sister or father or
brother would ever shed tears in there eyes day by day, You see its and easy thing
just say what you have to say.. Cause it could be you in there shoes, Living the
hard way.
~Written By Me~

[AZRIEL]

[BrandiDelicious]

Originally Posted by KnightLover1

Starting a thread new to XNXX site, And I decided to post my personal hand written poems I have done over the past 3 years.. Now if your a lover of poetry, Would love some feedback and tell me what you think??

Good and Bad Criticism is welcomed, It will help me become a better writer.

Oh!, And if i get good reviews I will post more.

Take care to all

One of my poems

~Revelations~
It's a new day, And a new dawn, As i stay steady, And move on, Going through changes
as i stay strong, But its a fighting battle as i carry on.. I walk every step
swiftly it seems, Never rushing anything as you can see, But i stay humble in my
personality, Staying fresh an looking sharp, My charisma in tune like a musical
harp, Hitting the chords in perfect harmony, My lyrical words will set you free,
Float through your mind like the clouds above, Soaring in the skies like birds an
doves, With every note that escapes my lips, Is a heavenly song sealed with a kiss,
My words are deep and powerful, I speak with all my heart, Don't be a coward son,
I'll keep you guessing like a trivia game, You know my style changes, It never stays
the same., But i will remain fly like a jumbo plane.. I walk light like a ninja
fool, I stay creeping in the shadows, I'm invisible..They call me a legend, But i
call it luck, I was never talented when i was younger, I was the ugly duck, But i
turned into a swan an moving gracefully, My mind is an endless box of rhymes can't
you see, I hold a power few ever did, And the secret to that, Just be yourself kid..
Don't boast or brag about what you got, Just stay who you are and keep it hot..
Having things and losing them is a painful shot, Like getting your check up, Or
kicked in the crotch.. Yeah i know it never happened before, but for the fella's,
Well you know how it goes, And for the females who take a peek at this, Just think
back at your first terrible kiss.. But imagine this.. What would you do? if you
could make a wish, You only get one chance, So make it big.. If i had that
opportunity i'd wish for this, I'd wish for peace on earth and good will to men,
Give all the needy kids a pillow and blanket and a warm bed,.. Put all the veterans
in a shelter for risking there lives, Help all the homeless people for them to get
by.. And keep the predators all locked away, So no mother or sister or father or
brother would ever shed tears in there eyes day by day, You see its and easy thing
just say what you have to say.. Cause it could be you in there shoes, Living the
hard way.
~Written By Me~

Keep writing.

[KnightLover1]

Originally Posted by BrandiDelicious

Keep writing.

Thanks Brandi.. Not sure if anyone will really pay much attention to this thread of mine.. But anyone who does see it.. It's much appreciated..

[ThisFNG]

so why don't you put it into the stories section and tag it as 'poetry'?

[snowleopard3200]

Not bad for a beginning; if you want some samples for good and bad, plus a disaster of one poem (to see what not to do) click on the link to my stories/poems in the main site below my signature.

It might give you some ideas again of what to do and not do.

[KnightLover1]

Thanks for the comments.. I will certainly do that, Would be nice to see what i can pick up on, And see how i can improve.. And i will move it to the stories section, I guess i wasn't aware of that at the time..

[KittensMcgee]

I'm new and certainly not a critic but in my personal opinion I thought it was good. Started strong and ended well, I got a little lost in the middle but I think it was mostly my fault. Keep it up :D

[AZRIEL]

Originally Posted by KittensMcgee

[KnightLover1]

You may not like me, And that's ok, I'm not here to please you, So judge away, I'm not here to start fights, Or a war, They call me the Knightlover and for that I soar.

You think your insults will hurt my image, But your only wasting your time at the line of scrimmage, Step up and if you got the guts, If you can write better than me then show me what's up? But understand this and read it well, I speak from the heart my deepest spell, My words are endless and break many bonds, I'll leap through the fire and many ponds, I'll float through air with my skill it's true, But i'm not even here to impress you.

My poems are expressed through many ways, They come to me through images every day, I'm not the greatest writer, but i do it anyways, My style is different and changes as i flow, I'm not a freestylist, Just an average joe. Watch and learn or read and see, But don't every think you can underestimate me. This style of write is what sets me free, Nothing you could say could ever distract me.

So this is my expression whether you like it or not. I'm not a bother to anyone, I just keep it hot. So any comments you wish to leave.
Go ahead please feel free.

~Written By Me~
Knightlover1

[AZRIEL]

[KnightLover1]

I write to release, I release my thoughts, My friendship is won, Can't be bought, I have learned a few lessons on this site you see, For one is never lose your temper so easily, But it can happen and it sucks it's true, But i apologized for what i did, Or what i do.

My mind is filled with turmoil some good and bad, Sometimes i just write when i feel real sad, Other times i do it when i'm really mad, But today i just feel like it, And that's my math..

It's nothing nice to make fun or laugh, But it doesn't bother me none, Cause this site is only half, Half of the critics who dish out the dirt, But couldn't deal with the same bullshit in return, Only know when to criticize and fill there minds with hatred inside.

But who are you to point and judge, Your not any better so I keep to myself. I do my own thing and stay low key, Never bother or harrass anyone just staying me., For you can say what you will, But your unwanted comments couldn't shoot to kill, I'm still standing and writing as i see fit.

For I write for whoever is interested to read through it. So keep being in denile and make your usual criticizing wiles, Nothing will stop me from being the usual person i am, Your comments are just fuel to fill my vile

[AZRIEL]

[XOXnaughtylittlegirlXOX]

Originally Posted by KnightLover1

Starting a thread new to XNXX site, And I decided to post my personal hand written poems I have done over the past 3 years.. Now if your a lover of poetry, Would love some feedback and tell me what you think??

Good and Bad Criticism is welcomed, It will help me become a better writer.

Oh!, And if i get good reviews I will post more.

Take care to all

One of my poems

~Revelations~
It's a new day, And a new dawn, As i stay steady, And move on, Going through changes
as i stay strong, But its a fighting battle as i carry on.. I walk every step
swiftly it seems, Never rushing anything as you can see, But i stay humble in my
personality, Staying fresh an looking sharp, My charisma in tune like a musical
harp, Hitting the chords in perfect harmony, My lyrical words will set you free,
Float through your mind like the clouds above, Soaring in the skies like birds an
doves, With every note that escapes my lips, Is a heavenly song sealed with a kiss,
My words are deep and powerful, I speak with all my heart, Don't be a coward son,
I'll keep you guessing like a trivia game, You know my style changes, It never stays
the same., But i will remain fly like a jumbo plane.. I walk light like a ninja
fool, I stay creeping in the shadows, I'm invisible..They call me a legend, But i
call it luck, I was never talented when i was younger, I was the ugly duck, But i
turned into a swan an moving gracefully, My mind is an endless box of rhymes can't
you see, I hold a power few ever did, And the secret to that, Just be yourself kid..
Don't boast or brag about what you got, Just stay who you are and keep it hot..
Having things and losing them is a painful shot, Like getting your check up, Or
kicked in the crotch.. Yeah i know it never happened before, but for the fella's,
Well you know how it goes, And for the females who take a peek at this, Just think
back at your first terrible kiss.. But imagine this.. What would you do? if you
could make a wish, You only get one chance, So make it big.. If i had that
opportunity i'd wish for this, I'd wish for peace on earth and good will to men,
Give all the needy kids a pillow and blanket and a warm bed,.. Put all the veterans
in a shelter for risking there lives, Help all the homeless people for them to get
by.. And keep the predators all locked away, So no mother or sister or father or
brother would ever shed tears in there eyes day by day, You see its and easy thing
just say what you have to say.. Cause it could be you in there shoes, Living the
hard way.
~Written By Me~

I would say that perhaps you should break up your lines a bit better, the more blank space on a page the more interesting your piece will become. Your poem sounded more like a rap lyrics then actual poetry. Of course poetry is part of lyrics but there is a slight difference. It was pretty good, not generally the type of poetry I read though.

[KnightLover1]

Originally Posted by XOXnaughtylittlegirlXOX

I would say that perhaps you should break up your lines a bit better, the more blank space on a page the more interesting your piece will become. Your poem sounded more like a rap lyrics then actual poetry. Of course poetry is part of lyrics but there is a slight difference. It was pretty good, not generally the type of poetry I read though.

Thanks for your comment hun Much appreciated and I will do that next time.

[AZRIEL]

[KnightLover1]

Turning a blind eye, Wishing I could fly,
But nothing is so easy, Just want to die.

Hard to stay steady, But i stay ready,
Wishing for my luck, Stress too heavy.

Why can't it be, Simple for me,
I never knew much, But yet I stay free.

I'm hard to catch, But I get let loose,
I've done the cat and mouse, And you've been goosed.

I'm in a league all my own, But i feel so cold and alone,
Throw me around, Or throw me a bone.

I will come back, Stronger than before.
Bring you to the floor, Show you that I'm here forevermore.

~Written By Me~

[KnightLover1]

My style is fresh, My game is hot,
You can't hold me down, Cause I blaze the spot.

You hate on me for the way I dress,
But you need to listen up, Cause I'm at my best.

I'm hotter than lava, Too hot to touch,
But watch out for my sparks, I'm blowing up.

My style is new and hot to the T,
I'm about to enter a new space oddyssey.

I've been loved and burned so many times,
I'm like a black cat with 9 million lives.

So keep yourself tuned in, And turn me up,
For i will surprise you when I burn it up.

I'm no other guy, Cause I stay fly.
But I will only be around so long, before I run out of time.

Written By Me

[justpassingthru]

Originally Posted by KnightLover1

My style is fresh, My game is hot,
You can't hold me down, Cause I blaze the spot.

You hate on me for the way I dress,
But you need to listen up, Cause I'm at my best.

I'm hotter than lava, Too hot to touch,
But watch out for my sparks, I'm blowing up.

My style is new and hot to the T,
I'm about to enter a new space oddyssey.

I've been loved and burned so many times,
I'm like a black cat with 9 million lives.

So keep yourself tuned in, And turn me up,
For i will surprise you when I burn it up.

I'm no other guy, Cause I stay fly.
But I will only be around so long, before I run out of time.

Written By Me

This one is not bad as a song. I could work with this one and might see about adding some sound to it. We have a female singer laying down tracks that could belt this out. Don't worry, we won't steal it from you.

PS ... btw, you basically just did a free copyright on it (if it really is you) because since this site keeps all it's threads, you just time stamped it.

[InTheMindsEye]

I think its brilliant that you are writing poetry that comes from your heart. The fact that I think it is absolute garbage is irrelevant. What do I know?

Your charisma in tune like a musical harp? That is the best worst line I have ever ever heard. What other types of harp are there? Dismissive harps? Miserable harps? Effervescent harps?

Your poetry offends my eyes
Each line you write a new demise

"Not bad as a song" one critic said
He should visit a shrink, so they can check his head.

Your childish rhymes score below zero
Rhyming 'up' with 'up'? That's a new low

So now I've upset not one but two
I'll run out the door yelling immaturely "Screw you!"

Keep writing you crazy poet!

[seeminglysatisfied]

And this thread belongs in the sex stories forum, unless stories too are being posted wherever a member sees fit. It's been here in GD since it was created.

[KnightLover1]

Originally Posted by justpassingthru

This one is not bad as a song. I could work with this one and might see about adding some sound to it. We have a female singer laying down tracks that could belt this out. Don't worry, we won't steal it from you.

PS ... btw, you basically just did a free copyright on it (if it really is you) because since this site keeps all it's threads, you just time stamped it.

Believe me it's all mine I originally come up with my own stuff.. I have it saved in my poems folder on my laptop..

[KnightLover1]

Originally Posted by InTheMindsEye

I think its brilliant that you are writing poetry that comes from your heart. The fact that I think it is absolute garbage is irrelevant. What do I know?

Your charisma in tune like a musical harp? That is the best worst line I have ever ever heard. What other types of harp are there? Dismissive harps? Miserable harps? Effervescent harps?

Your poetry offends my eyes
Each line you write a new demise

"Not bad as a song" one critic said
He should visit a shrink, so they can check his head.

Your childish rhymes score below zero
Rhyming 'up' with 'up'? That's a new low

So now I've upset not one but two
I'll run out the door yelling immaturely "Screw you!"

Keep writing you crazy poet!

Lol I write what I feel, And if no one likes it.. Than it's not my problem.. It doesn't bother me one bit about critics expressing themselves.. I'm glad they do.. I'm happy for them.. I'm no professional, So that's why i write.. Not for exposure, But cause i do it just to release some steam and vent.. I'm not offended by anyones comments.. lol So it doesn't bother me.. But thank you, I will keep writing..

[L+R]

Your loutish prose gives away your demeanour,
I see you're back again pretenting to be a senior...
Burnt before now back for more
Here for pleasure or to settle a score?

Your stale style stupifies, it's luke warm not hot,
Tepid's the definition now fuck off n show some contrition!
"But you need to listen up, Cause I'm at my best"
Well guess what son, (pardon the pun) you've failed the test
Run back to mummy and suckle her breast

[KnightLover1]

Originally Posted by L+R

Your loutish prose gives away your demeanour,

I see you're back again pretenting to be a senior...
Burnt before now back for more
Here for pleasure or to settle a score?

Your stale style stupifies, it's luke warm not hot,
Tepid's the definition now fuck off n show some contrition!
"But you need to listen up, Cause I'm at my best"
Well guess what son, (pardon the pun) you've failed the test

Run back to mummy and suckle her breast

Nice

[KnightLover1]

I don't feel your words, Cause there absurd,
It's doesn't bother me,
What you feel you see?

Cause all in all, Your just a critic roaming free,
So don't think you've cut a nerve,
From what I've heard.

You're no different from the bees or the birds,
Some squawk while others buzz,
But you're as bland as peach fuzz.

I don't come here to please, Or fill my ego,
You're lack of interest, Well it's a zero.

All I see is those who judge, But i'm not moving,
You can't make me budge, You opinions though,
Are just like fudge, Sticky and melted, And abrupt.

But that won't make me leave, For what I see,
Is in front of me, For what I write i through my own sight,
None of you know me, I'm like day and night.

You think your better, Well I disagree,
For none of you could ever know the real me.

So please keep chatting away,
For I only get stronger,
Day by day.

Written By
~KnightLover1~

[ejls]

These are lovely. Thank you for sharing them with us.

[KnightLover1]

Originally Posted by ejls

These are lovely. Thank you for sharing them with us.

Thank you Ejls I appreciate your kind your words and your post on my thread. hugs and hope to chat some more with you if you would like

[KnightLover1]

The road I travel, Where does it lead?
Broken and alone, My wounds still bleed.

Never been healed, Never been right,
Why do you ask?, The answer escapes me every night.

They say friends are forever, But that's a lie,
Nothing lasts forever, Now I know why?

Been down every path, Some good and bad,
Been through many emotions, From mad to sad.

Judge me or hate me, Love me or not,
But whatever you feel, My heart is bigger
than what you got.

Your lies are like wind chimes hanging outside,
For when the wind blows, You die a little each time.

Your heart turns cold, Nothing but Ice,
For I'm full of more personality,
And have more fight.

You say there is a line between love and friends,
But what does it matter, If there with you till the end.

I've made my peace and said what I have deep within,
But for whatever you once were, Your no longer my friend.

Written By
KnightLover1

[KnightLover1]

Time now, And time again,
So few real people, And fake friends.

It's really stupid, And immature,
If your not here, Then your a false cure.

No posion too deadly, The stress to heavy,
But if I'm such a burden, Then leave already.

Stop pretending, Like you care,
For goodness sake, Your just a fake you hear.

Go away and stay off my list,
Your nothing more then a death kiss.

You say you care, but It's nothing but a lie,
So long and farewell, And goodbye.

Your friendship faded with every action,
So get your bags and get the packing.

For I never want to see you near me again,
Cause your nothing more than a fake friend.

Written By
~KnightLover1~

[KnightLover1]

Moved on through a different time,
Moved through this world so sublime.

What may you ask or find?
Who knows whats in my mind?

Only I can unlock this truth,
To be better is all I can do.

To stay strong and make a wall,
To high to even crawl.

To thick to break down,
So tough all around.

My heart yearns to be loved,
But I'm cursed from up above.

Beend ditched through every try,
Just worthless, I want to die.

My existence is rare and rough,
No scientist, Or muscle buff.

My mind stays filled with many thoughts,
I will never let myself be bought.

For my time clock ticks away,
Till the very end I will stay.

Untill my very last breath,
For life is nothing but a test.

Written By
~KnightLover1~

[lacynobody]

My style is fresh, My game is hot,
You can't hold me down, Cause I blaze the spot.

You hate on me for the way I dress,
But you need to listen up, Cause I'm at my best.

I'm hotter than lava, Too hot to touch,
But watch out for my sparks, I'm blowing up.

My style is new and hot to the T,
I'm about to enter a new space oddyssey.

I've been loved and burned so many times,
I'm like a black cat with 9 million lives.

So keep yourself tuned in, And turn me up,
For i will surprise you when I burn it up.

I'm no other guy, Cause I stay fly.
But I will only be around so long, before I run out of time.

[pornlover2112]

Nice poems Knight, You do have talent. All i suggest is Don't be afraid to not rhyme on one or two. and write down if a good idea comes to mind. I have lost a few good starting lines because i failed to do so.

[KnightLover1]

Originally Posted by pornlover2112

Nice poems Knight, You do have talent. All i suggest is Don't be afraid to not rhyme on one or two. and write down if a good idea comes to mind. I have lost a few good starting lines because i failed to do so.

Thanks, Some of them were not my best work.. As I was only starting out.. But I have definitely gotten a little better at it. For I'm no pro that's for sure.. lol But it helps to have the proper feedback from a fellow poem writer.

[KnightLover1]

Bulletproof

Walking down a path, Full of nothing but waste
The destruction left before me, Feeling the heat upon my face.
The massacre I caused, The bodies on the ground,
There is no turning back, It's time to turn around.

My persona growing stronger, My eyes filled with rage.
The moment is drawing closer, The fire is a blaze.
Every second counts, The time is very near.
For when your backed in a corner, All you see is fear.

But have faith strong one, Stand your ground.
You are the last hope, time to move on out.
Strap on your armor and get ready to fight.
Your bulletproof now, So give it all your might.

Walk before your doomsday, Give them hell.
Rock your enemies, And ring their bell.
Be stealthy like a ninja, never seen or heard.
Move swiftly on your feet, Like wings on a bird.

Bulletproof forever now and more.
Super strength and hardcore.
Be bulletproof as you face the demon.
Walk from the ashes, Smoke rising and steaming.

Take out your foes from left to right.
Keep your head up, And fight.
Remember your goals, And stay in tune.
For all that you cause, Will lay in ruin.

Written By
~KnightLover1

[pornlover2112]

Very good. best so far. Again feel free to step away from Rhymes and Use a thesaurs. You will never find some more "powerful words" to aid in description. Just a hint not a critique

[wushuangpu]

Very good

[KnightLover1]

Originally Posted by pornlover2112

Very good. best so far. Again feel free to step away from Rhymes and Use a thesaurs. You will never find some more "powerful words" to aid in description. Just a hint not a critique

Thanks i appreciate it, I will surely take your advice on that. I guess i have a knack for rhyming.. lol, But definitely will look at one and see what i find.

Originally Posted by wushuangpu

Very good

Much Appreciated. Glad to have some followers.

[KnightLover1]

Doomsday Cometh

Doomsday approaches, with every second near,
Feel the earth shaking, As it rumbles and quakes,
No such power is greater than thee, For it's a sign,
That when all is lost on this planet, Your life is at an end.

Doomsday signals many forth coming woes.
A waste land awaiting you're souls.
The grim reaper by many names he is known,
He is the puppet master who pulls our strings.
An evil reincarnation of gods image from the dark depths.

What has doomsday done to this world,
For every human who walked among it,
No longer exists to be known, Gone and turned to ash,
Every stone crumbled, every building battered.

All the life has been drained, Nothing has survived,
For the future has come, As the past has died,
Doomsday is the fiend, He caused this chaos,
Destruction and torment is his way.

He feeds upon the weak and kills off the day,
The wreckage of this aftermath, left in dying ash,
Many fires a blaze, Though no rescue on in sight,
The roads all cracked and burned to tar.

Doomsday Cometh, You know my name,
Trouble is my fuel, Anguish is my game,
Spin the wheel of fate, Or roll the die,
For no mortal in my path shall survive.

Written By
~KnightLover1~

[KnightLover1]

Euphoria

Feel the breeze upon your skin,
Euphoria regins and life begins,
Look upon the land at day break,
Feel the rays upon your cheek.

The sunlight will wash away the pain,
Emotions will all be released,
As the winds pick up again,
Like a winter chill across the land.

Euphoria, Gentle and soft and sweet,
Many feelings collide through the streets,
Humanity is at it's best, rain down upon me,
Change my outlook and keep me blessed.

Listen as joy fills the air, euphoria is what they say.
Stand next to the gentle winds, bring about a fresh start.
Crash into the white clouds, break away to the sun.
Euphoria at peace again, Come all and rejoice.

For euphoria is a gentle kin, Next in line for happiness.
Singing sweet tunes of laughter, and smiles to be had.
Curse every bad beginning, and let euphoria be your friend.

Written By
~KnightLover1~

[siennapalfreyman]

Originally Posted by KnightLover1

Euphoria

Feel the breeze upon your skin,
Euphoria regins and life begins,
Look upon the land at day break,
Feel the rays upon your cheek.

The sunlight will wash away the pain,
Emotions will all be released,
As the winds pick up again,
Like a winter chill across the land.

Euphoria, Gentle and soft and sweet,
Many feelings collide through the streets,
Humanity is at it's best, rain down upon me,
Change my outlook and keep me blessed.

Listen as joy fills the air, euphoria is what they say.
Stand next to the gentle winds, bring about a fresh start.
Crash into the white clouds, break away to the sun.
Euphoria at peace again, Come all and rejoice.

For euphoria is a gentle kin, Next in line for happiness.
Singing sweet tunes of laughter, and smiles to be had.
Curse every bad beginning, and let euphoria be your friend.

Written By
~KnightLover1~

i like some of the above poems good work... keep goin

[pornlover2112]

Very Good, Euphoria is my favorite one to date

[KnightLover1]

Originally Posted by siennapalfreyman

i like some of the above poems good work... keep goin

Thank you, I'm growing with each poem I write, It's a better feeling then when I first started out.

Originally Posted by pornlover2112

Very Good, Euphoria is my favorite one to date

I appreciate it. Your poems are great as well. I'm glad this one is my best so far.. Will have more to share.

[KnightLover1]

Diminished

Standards, Is it really so hard,
Feeling diminshed or belittled,
Who plays there role or there part?
Increased hatred, Or just mixed emotions.

Having different feelings, Or confused notions,
Diminished from the rest, But admired by few.
Could anything be hurtful, Is it purposely or intentionally.
Can there be honesty, Or is it always lies.

Why should there be distance, Can a compromise be made.
Are people so ill fated, Or just cautious with strangers.
Some say it's fear, Others say natural instincts.
Grabbing hold of the truth is surely hard to do.

No one expresses what they feel or need,
Some stay bottle up, Like an unplanted seed.
Take time to look ahead, And focus for a change.
It's not how you succeed, but how well you play the game.

Diminshed from the beginning, But out from the shell.
For now I understand my outlook, Others not so well.
Don't let someone belittle your presence,
Your better then you think.

So within this world we stay, Living as we like.
Nothing lasts forever, Untill your laid to rest.
No more life left to breathe, Sleep and feel no pain.

Written By
~KnightLover1~

[KnightLover1]

Shattered Image

Look upon one's self
An image is what you see
But the reflection shown back
Is shattered beyond dreams

Broken from head to toe
Ruined from within, Hard to piece back
Filled with riddles and sin
Eyes with fury inside
And questions unanswered

Shattered from a past
Nothing feels right
Searching for a path
Something new and comforting

Lies of those who pretend to speak truth
But nothing is certain in a world so untrue
Deception and ignorance can destroy one's self
Shattered images on the ground
The pain does not help

For pills are the only escape
Take a dozen and drift
Sleep in a land of sorrow
Unbound in sweet bliss

Shattered to the core
Your time is done now
Look upon me as i fall
No throne, Or gold crown

Written By
~KnightLover1~

[KnightLover1]

Driven

Have you every pushed yourself
Strive to be great, Given all you got
No interuptions or distractions in your way
Driven to the edge, Pushed to the last mile.

Driven from a passion so strong, just to exist
To feel alive, to feel empowered, to just be
Making one decision to the next, but better then before
Seeing your accomplishments succeed, Achieving every goal.

Tell me what it feels like, Show me your will
Bring on any challenge, And I will overcome it
To drive to that limit, To see the end
To finish with such relief, To conquer myself

Give all I have to feel power, To withstand it all
Show my true strength, with spirit and mind so strong
Driven to a finish line, I can clearly see
For when your driven to your breaking point
You find out who you can be.

Over the top and give it all that you can
Nothing is impossible, Just give me your hand
Stand beside me and show me the way
For I am so driven, That I will never stray

Written By
~KnightLover1

[KnightLover1]

Hourglass

Time waits for no one
Just flows at its own pace
Slipping with every grain of sand
Loosing precious minutes as we go

As the hourglass counts down
As time slips through the vile
Draining slowly and never loosing speed
Calling upon memories from the past
Looking back at what we have done

Remembering all the good and bad
Slowly the sand draws down
Forming a hill at the bottom
Can you remember a time
When life was good?

Was there a mother or a father around?
How about a happy childhood?
All these questions make a memory
Whether we choose to like it or not
The hourglass knows our pain

Though it never forgets as it drains
But like that vile that holds the sand
We are like it as well, Our memories
Our experiences all kept in a box

But whether we like to admit it or not
The real question is tricky
Where will you be when it's your time?
Now that is the real mystery.

Written By
~KnightLover1~

[KnightLover1]

Forever Bliss

State of mind, State of stress
Feeling confused, Or am I blessed
Forever bliss, Or forever cursed
Is life worth living, Is there a reverse

Forever thinking, And sometimes lost
Hard to see truth, In a world of fog
Bliss does exist, But not in this era
Look into the mirror, As the reflection stares back

Forever and image, but nothing alike
The mirror sees different, What is he like
Does he feel pain, Or have troublesome times
Forever confused with difficult signs

See beyond truth and look through ones soul
Forever bliss lies beneath, So warm and not cold
So full of life and peaceful in time
For every heartache we've suffered
There is no cure to these rhymes

Forever bliss we shall sleep and be at rest
No more headaches or lies or personal test
Forever state of mind at ones will
Never understimate the excitment or thrill

For the air you breathe may be your last
Forever bliss will keep you safe
In your present, your future, and past.

Written By
~KnightLover1

[KnightLover1]

Rememberance

I remember such a thing called friends
The kind you could keep in touch with
The type who would always be there
But what happened to that word
Does anyone know?

I remember a time when people were true
Always showed there feelings and support
Friends who wouldn't hesitate to talk to you
Remembering what it was like to count on them

Rememberance of a past that never held lies
Remembering a time when people just appreciated you
Few people now have that quality
Lost in a world no longer here

Wrapped in a dimension blocked from reality
Remembering a time that you felt free
Why does it seem that friends aren't what they seem
Maybe a time of that nature no longer exists

I think in a world we once lived in
Will forever be clouded by technology
Where the meaning of a friend no longer is true
So remember those friends you once had

Because now, There nothing but a memory
Wrapped deep and tight in the past.

Written By
~KnightLover1

[KnightLover1]

Solitude

Pondering my trials,
The ups and downs,
Solitude in my thoughts,
Nothing left to try,
Just alone and friendless.

The many attempts at greatness,
Shot down each time,
Solitude in my life,
Nothing left to give,
Stripped of all armor.

Solitude from the world,
Holding on with nothing to own,
No one to care,
A burden to everyone,
Just myself is all I have.

What more can be done?,
Facing a wall of rejection,
Too many obstacles in my path,
Solitude is where I turn,
Cause that's all there is for me.

For every friend I had,
Only emptiness fills the void,
For everyone I thought I could trust,
Only lies are around me always,
No one left to trust.

Giving up on petty things,
Living in solitude to keep safe,
Putting a barrier around my heart,
And nothing more to give,
Time to say goodbye.

Written By
~KnightLover1