CAW 10 - Best Little Whorehouse: Virgins in the Whorehouse! - Page 2

Hornycountryboy · 03-16-2012, 11:14 PM

Wow very nice way to add people from the site into a story. Really enjoyed it! Great work!

Good luck in the vote!

ejls · 03-17-2012, 11:22 AM

Rutger5 · 03-17-2012, 11:00 PM

Noname:

Definitely a fun read, that's for sure. That ambassador should be a real politician the way he asks Jaime if she's sure after first giving her the dose of phermones and then screwing her.At least she got her student loans paid off in return.Good luck!
r5

clarise · 03-18-2012, 02:38 PM

I liked this story very much.I confess that I had not read Part One. Nevertheless, I was able to get into this story and enjoy it. "Part Two" did not read like a sequel.Oddly enough, since I did not read Part One, it took me awhile to realize the story is a (light-hearted and fun) lampoon of XNXX members and moderators. Thus, I was reading it as a political satire/lampoon. I do not know whether you have intended it, but I would suggest that the story can work well that way, too. I won't digress with examples, since obviously the primary intent is not political satire, and I would just belabor my own confusion. Suffice it to say it works on several levels. Well done.

ahorsewithnoname · 03-18-2012, 04:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by clarise

I liked this story very much.I confess that I had not read Part One. Nevertheless, I was able to get into this story and enjoy it. "Part Two" did not read like a sequel.Oddly enough, since I did not read Part One, it took me awhile to realize the story is a (light-hearted and fun) lampoon of XNXX members and moderators. Thus, I was reading it as a political satire/lampoon. I do not know whether you have intended it, but I would suggest that the story can work well that way, too. I won't digress with examples, since obviously the primary intent is not political satire, and I would just belabor my own confusion. Suffice it to say it works on several levels. Well done.

Thanks Clarise. It was a fun story to write. When you have the blessing of site members to utilize their screen names and such, it make the romp that much more enjoyable to write. Glad you liked it!

ELaken-Palmer · 03-18-2012, 11:59 PM

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ahorsewithnoname · 03-19-2012, 12:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rutger5

Noname:

Definitely a fun read, that's for sure. That ambassador should be a real politician the way he asks Jaime if she's sure after first giving her the dose of phermones and then screwing her.At least she got her student loans paid off in return.Good luck!
r5

Yep...$100 grand...that's a lotta' money for what she gave up.

Or was it?

Thanks for your comments!

ahorsewithnoname · 03-20-2012, 11:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hornycountryboy

Wow very nice way to add people from the site into a story. Really enjoyed it! Great work!

Good luck in the vote!

Thanks man. I enjoyed contacting everyone, getting their permission, talking about the story beforehand, so that I wouldn't offend someone...it was all good stuff.

Sahara907 · 03-21-2012, 01:39 AM

At The Best Little Horsehouse, it appears that customers are able to examine the merchandise.

Best_Little_Horsehouse.jpg

ELaken-Palmer · 03-21-2012, 01:46 AM

Checks and plaid?? Hmmm, somehow it works.

Hornycountryboy · 03-21-2012, 02:55 AM

BUMP

Sahara907 · 03-22-2012, 11:24 PM

When Heather's not servicing dicks, she likes reading about them.

Heather_Christensen.jpg

ahorsewithnoname · 03-23-2012, 01:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sahara907

When Heather's not servicing dicks, she likes reading about them.

Attachment 1770327

That's just tooooooo funny

Thanks darlin'.

curiousscouser · 03-27-2012, 09:32 PM

Another fabulous fun romp in the whorehouse Horse

Good luck in the CAW!

SW1 · 08-08-2012, 05:21 PM

Captivating, couldn't put it down.
Your graphic description of pleasureing is mouthwatering.
"Oh God, he IS going to cum in...ohhh...right now! And with that, the first spurt of warm semen landed in Jamie's mouth, her head bobbing faster and hands gently squeezing and pulling downward on the ball sack, milking it. A second spurt immediately followed, hitting the back of her mouth and dripping towards her throat, followed by several more spurts, Jamie swallowing and sucking, trying to keep pace with the ejaculations."
SW

03-16-2012, 11:14 PM	#51
Hornycountryboy Porn Star Join Date: May 2011 Location: Northeast United States Age: 31 Posts: 4,401	Wow very nice way to add people from the site into a story. Really enjoyed it! Great work! Good luck in the vote! __________________ CAW 15 Come read some stories and cast your vote for your favorite!! http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=342771 Things are heating up in Miami! (Role play with Gymgirl) Love and Death in Miami

03-17-2012, 11:22 AM	#52
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03-17-2012, 11:00 PM	#53
Rutger5 Sex Machine Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: At a payphone Posts: 732	Noname: Definitely a fun read, that's for sure. That ambassador should be a real politician the way he asks Jaime if she's sure after first giving her the dose of phermones and then screwing her.At least she got her student loans paid off in return.Good luck! r5 __________________ My stories: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile449095/Rutger5 My cryptozoology story: http://stories.xnxx.com/story/28383/...nd_the_Monster "I call you killer, 'cause you slay me" Alice Kramden Proud Blue Collar Writer - A Clique Of One "Are there no prisons? Are there no workhouses?" They who can give up essential liberty to obtain a little temporary safety, deserve neither liberty nor safety.

03-18-2012, 02:38 PM	#54
clarise Precious princess Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: ۩ Posts: 6,041	I liked this story very much.I confess that I had not read Part One. Nevertheless, I was able to get into this story and enjoy it. "Part Two" did not read like a sequel.Oddly enough, since I did not read Part One, it took me awhile to realize the story is a (light-hearted and fun) lampoon of XNXX members and moderators. Thus, I was reading it as a political satire/lampoon. I do not know whether you have intended it, but I would suggest that the story can work well that way, too. I won't digress with examples, since obviously the primary intent is not political satire, and I would just belabor my own confusion. Suffice it to say it works on several levels. Well done. __________________ . . . The first and greatest lie of every system of faith is that the Creator holds a scale of justice. ______________________________- Greta Elisabeta Westford . My novels (two here and a third on the way) - 740,000+ reads ( featuring God, Satan, and the Antichrist ) . . .

03-18-2012, 11:59 PM	#56
ELaken-Palmer Forum Porn Laureate Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Southwest Michigan FILTH AS LITERATURE Recommended XNXX Writer Multiple CAW wins Posts: 4,357	CAW10 BUMP __________________ "My aim is to put down on paper what I see and what I feel in the best and simplest way." . . . . . NEEDLESSLY VERIFIED: Pictures of my cock Writing Wrongs But Whom?

03-21-2012, 01:39 AM	#59
Sahara907 sugarnipples Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Florida Posts: 18,951	At The Best Little Horsehouse, it appears that customers are able to examine the merchandise. Best_Little_Horsehouse.jpg __________________ I will not be just a tourist in the world of images, just watching images passing by which I cannot live in, make love to, possess as permanent sources of joy and ecstasy. ~Anais Nin My stories Some of my favorite pics XNXX CL CUNNING LINGUIST

03-21-2012, 01:46 AM	#60
ELaken-Palmer Forum Porn Laureate Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Southwest Michigan FILTH AS LITERATURE Recommended XNXX Writer Multiple CAW wins Posts: 4,357	Checks and plaid?? Hmmm, somehow it works. __________________ "My aim is to put down on paper what I see and what I feel in the best and simplest way." . . . . . NEEDLESSLY VERIFIED: Pictures of my cock Writing Wrongs But Whom?

03-21-2012, 02:55 AM	#61
Hornycountryboy Porn Star Join Date: May 2011 Location: Northeast United States Age: 31 Posts: 4,401	BUMP __________________ CAW 15 Come read some stories and cast your vote for your favorite!! http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=342771 Things are heating up in Miami! (Role play with Gymgirl) Love and Death in Miami

03-22-2012, 11:24 PM	#62
Sahara907 sugarnipples Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Florida Posts: 18,951	When Heather's not servicing dicks, she likes reading about them. Heather_Christensen.jpg __________________ I will not be just a tourist in the world of images, just watching images passing by which I cannot live in, make love to, possess as permanent sources of joy and ecstasy. ~Anais Nin My stories Some of my favorite pics XNXX CL CUNNING LINGUIST

03-27-2012, 09:32 PM	#64
curiousscouser Porn Star Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Wirral Age: 39 Posts: 19,923	Another fabulous fun romp in the whorehouse Horse Good luck in the CAW! __________________ Verified real woman of XNXX: http://forum.xnxx.com/showpost.php?p=4067575&postcount=8121 My stories: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile515535/

08-08-2012, 05:21 PM	#65
SW1 Porno Junky Join Date: Mar 2012 Location: NH & SC, planning to see the country. Posts: 389	War and Peace Captivating, couldn't put it down. Your graphic description of pleasureing is mouthwatering. "Oh God, he IS going to cum in...ohhh...right now! And with that, the first spurt of warm semen landed in Jamie's mouth, her head bobbing faster and hands gently squeezing and pulling downward on the ball sack, milking it. A second spurt immediately followed, hitting the back of her mouth and dripping towards her throat, followed by several more spurts, Jamie swallowing and sucking, trying to keep pace with the ejaculations." SW __________________ "We are fools whether we dance or not - so we might as well dance." Japanese proverb

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