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Old 04-10-2012, 03:24 PM   #1
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We laid her down on the bed. She was absolutely beautiful. Both of our hands were shaking as we began to strip off her clothes. Caliegh grabbed her shoes and pulled them off of her feet, then she slid off her socks. I helped undo her belt, unbuckle her jeans, pulled down the zipper, to reveal her light pink cotton panties. Caliegh and I looked at each other and grinned, as we slid the jeans down her legs. We took a few steps back to admire this beauty before us.

Looking at this girl my mind drifts back to when I came here. It was by mistake really, I was never meant to be here. I was walking home from school, staring at the most sexy ass in tight jeans, but from a distance. Apparently from a further distance than most guys checking out a girls ass, because I was never noticed, which was a mistake on his part. I was following A.J, the girl who in my opinion is the hottest girl in school. Of course I was too shy to ever ask her out, although we did talk on occasion, but on that day the events of me walking behind her changed both of our lives.

We lived on the same street, so me following her, or even next to her wasn't uncommon. I knew she was about to turn down a side street soon, so I picked up my pace so I can continue to look at her. As I turned down I saw this guy standing over her, I don't know what he did but she was laying on the ground not moving. He then bent down to pick her up when I yelled "hey!"

I am not a big guy, I can't even say I am good at sports, but I would like to think that I gave this guy a couple of good hits, however that would be a lie. Truth is I ended up getting my ass kicked, pretty fast too.

When I woke up I hadn't a clue where I was, nor did I know how A.J was. What I did know was the side of my face was in pain, and I had a fat lip. I checked my surroundings, and realizing I was on a floor, as I stood up and began to walk to the wall where I saw a mirror I checked the damage to my face. Fortunate for me it hurt a lot more than it looked, I had a small black eye and a few scrapes, I am guessing when I fell on the ground.

That's when I heard the door open behind me. The same man before was standing there in front of me, knowing I was too weak to try to fight him again, I stood there scared at what he might do to me.

"I wasn't expecting to run into trouble today." The man said to me. "I prepared this place for years, and planned who I was going to pick for months, and not once did I ever suspect someone would show up to ruin what I have been planning."

I thought for sure this man was going to kill me, possibly slowly.

"Now that I have had some time to think, I can use you. That girl you tried to help, she is okay, I wouldn't hurt her... well not too much anyways, she will feel some pain later, but she is going to want it. I am going to use you to help me, I can't be here all the time, I am going to need someone to cook meals for her, to bathe her, and to discipline her when she is bad."

My mind was spinning! What the hell was this guy saying? I was going to feed her, bathe her and discipline her? I didn't understand at that time, but was glad I decided to speed up when I did to follow her down that street, or I would never be here now.

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Caliegh was excited and began to take off her own shirt, when I stopped her.

"Not so fast, we have to prepare her first."

"Sorry, I am just so excited, and she is so hot!"

"I know, but don't forget you were in her position not too long ago."

(And so wasn't A.J)

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This man that stood before me handed me a towel and told me to clean my face. I was still confused at what he had told me. He then led me down a long corridor to a room he had A.J in, I went to run to her when the man grabbed my neck to stop me.

"We have to prepare her first." He told me.

That's when I realized she was unconscious still. "What did you do to her!?" I demaned to know.

"I told you she is fine. I didn't hurt her, but we have to get her ready before she wakes."

I don't know if it was because I feared for my life or even A.J's but I did as I was told. That's when I found myself undressing this magnificent beauty that I had always admired from a distace, and before I knew it she was laying there naked except for her bra and panties.

The man, who was talking to me throughout what we were doing, had instructed me to call him Sir, and only Sir, was walking over to a door that led to a bathroom, he filled up a bucket with warm soapy water. He handed me a washcloth, and we began to wash A.J from her face all the way down to her toes, and everywhere in between except the areas that were covered by her bra and panties.

It sickened me to think this man was planning to rape her, but I was helpless, so I thought if a familiar face was here with her it might make it easier for her, what I didn't expect was falling in love with her, let alone what really happened.

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Very good and highly interesting start. I, of course, want to know what the man's intentions are. Hope you continue this soon.
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Thanks Blue and ELP still a work in progress don't know how long I will make this but I hope to keep everyone wanting more with each chapter I write.
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This has mystery and great potential, good work for the beginning.
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Thanks Elle, Seincanan, and Virtuous Poizyn I do enjoy the comments even if they are just a few words. I should have the next chapter up soon!
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Getting the next chapter ready, hopefully it will be up later tonight or tomorrow morning.
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After we had cleaned A.J in every area that wasn't still clothed the "Sir" then went back into the bathroom, and when he returned he was carrying a pair of scissors a can of shaving cream and a disposable razer. He placed them down and went back into the bathroom only to return with a small dish of warm water and a towel.

I watched as he grabbed the waistband of her panties and start to slide them down. Every bit of anger went though my body as I looked away. I wanted to hit him with something so hard, but had nothing to do that with. I also didn't want another ass kicking, so I tried not to watch what he was about to do, when I felt his hand slap the back of my head.

"You need to watch and help if you want to stay here."

Who said I wanted to stay here? Who said I wanted to be here in the first place? These questions went though my head as I looked down and saw for my first time the sex of a girl that wasn't on a glossy magazine page, or on a computer screen.

"I am not going to help you rape someone I consider a friend." I said fearing what would happen to me next, but not taking my eyes off of the beauty of A.J's hair that surrounded her area of secrecy.

"Rape her? I am not going to rape her. Right now we are pampering her, we gave her a sponge bath and now we are going to shave her legs then trim her pubic hairs. I am not going to have sex with someone who isn't awake, no when the time is right she is going to be begging for one of us to take her, and to make her scream in ecstasy."

I had no idea what he was talking about, all I knew was for some reason I had shaving cream in my hand lathering one of her legs to be shaved.

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When Caliegh and I finished washing down our new bueaty, Caliegh was too excited that I caught her with her fingers deep inside herself. She was sitting on the floor legs spread, her skirt hiked up, and her panties pulled to the side, with her middle finger working in and out.

I knew what she was doing, it was something I taught her just a few months ago, how to turn me on with out me or anyone else touching me. She learned that I was a sucker for a girl who actually fingered herself, not just rubbing the clit to get off but actually inserting their finger.

I don't know why but it was a huge turn on for me, something I could almost never resist. Caliegh gave me that look that told me what she wanted. I looked up at the clock saw we had some time, so I walked over to her as I pulled out my cock for her.

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After "Sir" and I had finished shaving A.J's legs and gave her pubic area a real nice trim, "Sir" told me she should be waking soon. I didn't know how he knew then, but he told me that I was to stay with her that night, that she was going to need a friendly face. As he left he locked the door behind him.

I then looked at my surroundings, and realized this room was set up similar to my uncle's one room efficiency apartment. It had a kitchen with the cabinets full of different types of food, the fridge was stocked with milk, eggs, and different fruits and vegetables. It also had a television that was mounted on the wall.

I was searching for the remote when I heard A.J start to wake. Oh my lord I didn't even think of trying to get her dressed, how was I going to explain why she was more than half naked?

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Thanks Wush, and Aa7777! Maybe I could put them on a train at some point.
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Alright not going to be able to post the next chapter till after the weekend. I will be too busy, I hope e everyone will be patient. I do appreciate and welcome any comments, so feel free to do so thanks.
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As soon as I pulled my cock out Caliegh reached up with her free hand and took a hold of it. She stroked the full length of it a few times before she wrapped her lips around in and buried it down her throat. Her nose laying just under my naval, I watch as she looks up at me and opens her mouth and then feel her tongue lick my sac.

I flinch a little as it sends a chill up my spine. Caliegh would then pull back take a few breathes lick around the head of my cock before taking the whole length, holding it there, looks up at me before opening her mouth to lick my balls. This was her pattern that she repeated for the next five minutes or so, all the while she continued to finger fuck herself.

I slowed her down to a stop, and pulled her up onto her feet, her hand still under her skirt, as I lean forward to kiss her. As we are kissing I reach down to pull her hand away from her dripping snatch, and slowly bring it up to our faces.

We separate from our kiss and look at her fingers, seeing them dripping with her wetness. I look in her eyes and she tries to smile her million dollar smile to get me to forget about what she had done. I place one of her fingers into my mouth and lick up her juices, and let it roll around on my tongue before allowing in to slide down my throat.

As I am licking her fingers I look up to see the worried look in her eyes, knowing that I knew what she did. I then release her fingers from my mouth, and in one quick motion I tear open her white button shirt allowing her small tits to feel the air. I turn her around trapping her arms in the material of her shirt and tying her hands together with it, bending her over, and laying her on top of our sleeping beauty. I kicked Caliegh's feet closer together as I flipped up her skirt revealing her tight ass in her white cotton panties, that were soaked from the bottom of her ass to the front of her pussy.

"I am so sorry Brian! I couldn't help it I was so turned on, I just had to! Please, please spank me hard, I deserve it!"

I pull her panties down to her knee and then line my cock up to her pussy and shove it in all the way in one quick and hard thrust. I hear Caliegh cry out in both pain and pleasure. I reach up and grab ahold of her blonde ponytail and pull her head back hard, lean down to speak into her ear.

"You asking for punishment isn't really a punishment now is it? Now you had an orgasm with out permission, now you will take the punishment I give you. Do you understand?"

"Yes, Briaaaaan!" Was all she could say as I pushed two fingers into her very small, and tight ass.


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As I quickly try to find A.J's clothes, which I soon realized were no longer in here. I didn't even see him take them, when he left. So many things went through my head, how was I going to explain that the only article of clothing she had on was her bra, let alone how we even got here. Which in all honesty I didn't know. I wasn't very good at trying to lie on the spot, so when I saw her eyes begin to open I decided to tell her the truth.

"Angela are you okay?" I figured if I used her first name it may relax her to know someone she knew was with her. I still don't know what the "J" stands for, but it didn't matter now.

"Brian? Where am I? What happened to your face? Brian what is happening? Oh my god! Why am I naked?"

"Angela I know its not going to be easy but we were kidnapped."

"Kidnapped!? What do you mean?"

"Try to stay calm I will try to explain all that I know, and remember. Let me see now, we were walking home from school. I was behind you a distance, I saw you turn down High street, and as I turned down the street I saw this guy standing over you, you were out cold I remember yelling out to him and running at him then next thing I remember is waking up here with a black eyes and a fat lip."

"So you tried to save me?" She asked as she gave me this little smile, I knew the smile wouldn't last when she found out I helped strip her down and wash her, and shaved her legs, and even helped trim her pubic hair. Granted I didn't want to do those things, but I did them.

"Yeah I tried, apparently not very well. I woke up in a different room, the man who took us brought me in here with you. Angela I am sorry, but I was afraid of what he would do to me or you, so I did what he wanted me to do."

"Which was what?"

"Well I helped him take off your clothes, then helped him give you a sponge bath, then we shaved your legs, then well... we...umm... well we trimmed your pubic area." I said as I hung my head in shame. I saw in the corner of my eye that with all that was being said A.J momentarily forgot she was near nude, and since I couldn't find her clothes I took off my shirt, and handed it to her.

Now I am a skinny guy, but I am tall, and I like to tuck my shirts into my pants, so I always get extra large t-shirts, so it managed to cover her completely.

"Thank you Brian. What do you think he wants to do to us?"

" I don't know A.J, I really don't know."

But something kept running though my head. What did this man mean when he said "when the time is right she will be begging one of us to have sex with her?


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This story is very good and building momentum as it goes. I know that A.J. is the kidnapped girl and "Sir" is the bad kidnapper and Brian is the guy telling the story but I'm a bit confused as to who Caliegh is and where she came from (but I know that she has a juicy, tasty pussy). I must have missed something along the way. All in all this continues to be very good.
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The story is getting better and better with each chapter.
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This story is very good and building momentum as it goes. I know that A.J. is the kidnapped girl and "Sir" is the bad kidnapper and Brian is the guy telling the story but I'm a bit confused as to who Caliegh is and where she came from (but I know that she has a juicy, tasty pussy). I must have missed something along the way. All in all this continues to be very good.
Yeah I am slowly introducing how everyone got there, but don't forget the sleeping beauty that Brian and Caliegh are preparing. If you remember in the first chapter Brian had said to Caliegh that she was in the same situation as the girl they were getting ready, as well as A.J. Also note that the scenes with Brian and Caliegh are present tense and the scenes with A.J as of right now are flash backs.

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HCB. I will try to offer my honest opinion of this story. I read it twice to try to follow your train of thought. The first time I was a little confused on the characters. I realize now, A.J. was first, Caleigh somewhere in the middle, and a new girl third.
It is slightly confusing on the time of each scene. Clarafication of the different sequences would help. Also one sentence says he is seeing a womans sex for the first time. Next he is saying he likes to watch Caleigh finger herself. I lost my track here. Maybe starting with a little more detail or filler would help.
Brian does not really act like someone who has been kidnapped and held prisoner. Too accommodating and compliant.
Your layout and presentation is good. I only saw a couple of spelling errors. Very good for a quick post.
Now take all this with a grain of salt. I don't write anything and do not profess to be a literature critic. I do love to read many different types of stories. I am more of an old romantic, and love that genre more than bondage and submission. I know! I am married, and you ask "What's the difference?" Probably not much.
Keep going with this one. I think I have it finally figured out.
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Well I totally appreciate criticism of any kind. Now I don't know if you read any of the comments but I had said to ELP that as of right now the scenes with A.J is past tense and the scene with Caliegh is happening now is the present. So Brian is flashing back kind of got the idea from the show Lost where it will all come together at some point.

As for Brian not seeming he has been kidnapped I actuallu thought that too, but also thought how I would handle that situation which would be more calm than try to fight and getting my ass kicked. Now I am a married man also so I know exactly where you are coming from.

Thanks for the comment, I will definitely take some of what you said into consideration as I move forward.
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Letting everyone know I should have the next chapter up in the next day or so.
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Old 04-26-2012, 05:19 PM   #32
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I apologize for the delay looks like I wont be able to post the next chapter till after the weekend. Still would love comments to see how everyone is liking or not liking the story so far.
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could AJ be Caleigh????lol....silly me!!!:D

nice story by the way its been a while since I've read any of your stories, hasn't had the time to do it..
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could AJ be Caleigh????lol....silly me!!!:D

nice story by the way its been a while since I've read any of your stories, hasn't had the time to do it..
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Hey sweetie been awhile since we had some fun in the games. I hope you are doing well, glad you are enjoying this story so far, and I assure you A.J and Caliegh are two separate people.
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Good one HCB

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Thank you Mimi! Hopefully tomorrow I will have the next chapter ready for everyone to read.
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Thank you Mimi! Hopefully tomorrow I will have the next chapter ready for everyone to read.
You better... I get excited reading back on your previous chapters!
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Thanks I will try my best!
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Hi, Hcb I am enjoying this story so far! It has an interesting start as ELaken-Palmer mention in his reply. I like how you have this mysterious man kidnaps this girl and a friend tries to save her, but ends up getting his ass kicked, coming along to this secret place with them. I can't wait to see what the mysterious kidnapper plans are for A.J.
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