Can't find an old story serie

[thenxtgate]

The plot of the story is about an old man age 55, who work with 3 teen girls (17+) at a super market store. And I know it has 10+ chapters, but I can't find it anywhere in stories.xnxx. =/ If anyone know the story link, or the title, it would be appreciated.

[DoyleGentry]

Have you looked through the 'Older Male/younger females' category?

[thenxtgate]

only found through Group Sex, Older Male/ Female, Threesome, Young, Lesbian, Male/Female Teens, still cant find it =/ Rating 100% to 65%

[DoyleGentry]

That's really the only thing I can think of. Keep looking and best of luck. Sorry I couldn't help more.

[donb9033]

Originally Posted by thenxtgate

The plot of the story is about an old man age 55, who work with 3 teen girls (17+) at a super market store. And I know it has 10+ chapters, but I can't find it anywhere in stories.xnxx. =/ If anyone know the story link, or the title, it would be appreciated.

The story you are looking for, I believe, is 'The Girls at the Store' written by Wantsomefun. The story has been deleted (all chapters), I think because of the anti-'underage' venom being sprayed around. Great series and it is missed.

[wantsomefun]

Originally Posted by donb9033

The story you are looking for, I believe, is 'The Girls at the Store' written by Wantsomefun. The story has been deleted (all chapters), I think because of the anti-'underage' venom being sprayed around. Great series and it is missed.

You always flatter me, Don.

Yes, it was mine.

There was something of a witch-hunt around here a little while back. A pronouncement was made that any story containing a sexually active character under the age of eighteen was not welcome. A "report" button was installed on the Sex Stories site, so that readers could flag all the evil stuff like seventeen-year old neighbor kids falling in love and doing what kids do (not murder, or rape, or torture, or cannibalism). Admittedly, my series of stories involved a number of underage girls and an adult man. I pulled the thing rather than having random chapters removed or, in the extreme, having ALL my shit tossed, along with me.

Could I re-post the series?

Not without a hell of a lot of work. Looking back, I don't think they were all that well-written. I'd like to think I could write a better series than that if I were to take up the story line again, but I have so much other stuff going that, frankly, I don't see myself doing it any time in the near future. After all, it was twenty-four chapters, one of which was in two parts. That's a LOT of revising, folks.

Sorry.

[donb9033]

IMHO, the series was very well written. All were based, not on sex, but on caring and love. Miss them.

[thenxtgate]

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[thenxtgate]

Found all 24 chapters using web archive :D

[donb9033]

Happy to hear it - enjoy.

[DoyleGentry]

Originally Posted by thenxtgate

Found all 24 chapters using web archive :D

Hey...*chuckles* Care to share the link via PM?

[darthel0101]

Originally Posted by DoyleGentry

Hey...*chuckles* Care to share the link via PM?

ditto - I would like to see the original

[thenxtgate]

Just copy/paste wantsomefun profile url to webarchive and go back in time to Feb 2010.

[nigel101]

Found it here if anyone is interested....

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-girl...he-store-ch-01

[ejls]

Originally Posted by nigel101

Found it here if anyone is interested....

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-girl...he-store-ch-01

wantsomefun pulled most of his stories, due to age limitation. He's still here and writing fabulous stories.

http://stories.xnxx.com/profile219629/

[wantsomefun]

Originally Posted by nigel101

Found it here if anyone is interested....

Yes, I changed the ages of the players in the first three chapters and posted it on another site.

Please don't read it. It's the first thing I ever wrote. A lot of people apparently liked it. Looking back, I don't.

IF I were ever to try to re-do the thing, I would do a total re-write. A lot of it would be necessary to correct ages, since I not only stated every girl's age, I wrote specific back-story which centered around her being that age. All that would need to be re-written, and then, I'd try to streamline and improve the stories, which basically means starting from scratch.

Read my new shit. It's better.

[donb9033]

Originally Posted by wantsomefun

Read my new shit. It's better.

Sorry to say: I disagree most emphatically. Loved the series and still enjoy it. Your technique has improved, but the story line was a keeper.

[OneNineNineThree]

I really don't understand why xnxx is a bitch about underage stuff. It isn't porn it's fictional writing! To me, banning stories like that is banning people from having certain fantasies even if they are JUST FANTASIES. Honestly, xnxx sucks for stories. The only thing I really like about it is that you can comment. Asstr has a great search engine, and absolutely ANY topic. Some of the topics are a little messed up for my tastes like when a dad influenced by some futuristic drug fucks his 5 year old daughter to death ripping her body apart inside, but it also has great stories involving underage characters (OH NO!) I really suggest the great authors of xnxx to submit their collections to asstr.

[Prurient Purveyer]

Originally Posted by thenxtgate

Just copy/paste wantsomefun profile url to webarchive and go back in time to Feb 2010.

what web archive?

[ejls]

Originally Posted by OneNineNineThree

I really don't understand why xnxx is a bitch about underage stuff. It isn't porn it's fictional writing! To me, banning stories like that is banning people from having certain fantasies even if they are JUST FANTASIES. Honestly, xnxx sucks for stories. The only thing I really like about it is that you can comment. Asstr has a great search engine, and absolutely ANY topic. Some of the topics are a little messed up for my tastes like when a dad influenced by some futuristic drug fucks his 5 year old daughter to death ripping her body apart inside, but it also has great stories involving underage characters (OH NO!) I really suggest the great authors of xnxx to submit their collections to asstr.

His stories were not banned. Wantsomefun chose to remove them.

[wantsomefun]

Originally Posted by ejls

His stories were not banned. Wantsomefun chose to remove them.

My initial reason for petitioning the admins to remove that series plus two other postings (twenty-eight stories in all), was that the nearly forty female characters ranged in age from mid-teens to mid-thirties. Over half of them were under eighteen. SOMEONE was going to report those atrocities, and I'd get tossed, or so I thought.

Once they were gone, I realized I was stupid to have posted them in the first place. The "Girls" series was written in the style of an autobiography. As back-story and setting, I described what I saw in my daily life. Some of the female characters bore more than a passing resemblance to actual people who could, possibly, read my shit.

When I try to create a character, I find it's easier if I think of someone I know who is that age and background. That helps me "hear" how they would talk, and "see" how they would act in a situation. If I've done my job, these people seem real enough that you might be able to recognize them.

The problem is that I'm most comfortable writing in the first person, so "I" am the center of attention -- everything is from "my" P.O.V. Inevitably, there's a lot of me in the "me" character. Some people I know in real life read porn.