My wet dream

[partybob6]

This is my first time writing so please be nice..


It's 11 p.m. and I just hot done watching some porn, now I'm tired for bed. I get in my fee and start to fall asleep. I start to dream. It's me in a crappy basement with 2 rooms, both rooms have bunk beds. I go outside and drive to my friend Jakes house. He lives in a nice house out in the desert. I get there and there are 2 beautiful girls with him. One girl is a brunette with a very tight yellow shirt and nice black panties on. She had the best body I have ever scene, she was tan and had perkie double d tits and that's when I noticed she didn't have a bra on. The other girl was a blond with, a tan body, black panties, and a black bra on. Both girls instantly smiled when I walked in, and Jake made a stupid face. I went over to Jake and asked him what he was doing with these girls, and he said " there just old friends of mine, and I invited them over for a good time." I was amazed he knew these girls, so I asked him if he wanted me to leave and he said "no I have to to a business meeting in town, would u mind staying with the girls, I can tell they like you alot." I was in shock, I couldnt believe what he was asking me. I looked over at the girls and I saw the brunettes nipples getting hard through her shirt, I started to smile. Jake looked at me and asked "so r u up for it?" I looked at him and instantly said "yes!" Jake gave me a hug and then started walking to the door, as he opend the door he turned around and said " you three have fun now" then left. Now I'm standing there with my cock getting hard. I walk over to the girls and they both come and kiss me. I kiss them back and and we start making out. I took my left hand and put it in the back of the brunettes panties. I could feel her nice ass, then I could feel her asshole. I started rubbing it, then she moaned. I start to do the same thing to the blond with my other hand. Then I had them both moaning. After a couple minutes of that I stopped kissing and fingering, and both girls latex on the ground looking up at me. I took both there panties off, and they both had perfect shaved pussies. I went to the blond first and popped her bra off. Her large double d's latex out and I started kissing them. I kissed her nipple then licked it, and she let out another moan. I started kissing my way down her body till I reached her pussie. I then kissed her pussie all over her lips, and started licking it. I could taste her juice, and it was so sweet. I found her clit and started licking it in small but fast circles. She was breathing really deep now . So I opens her pussie with my fingers and started fucking her with my tong. I could feel her humping my face. Then she screamed " Oh Fuck, Fuck I'm.... Gona Cum!!" I put my lips around her pussie and, squirt after squirt shot into my mouth. She was jerking all over. Her cum tasted Soo good and sweet. I swallowed all of it and then got up and kissed her. She told me she had never felt like that before. I looked over at the brunette, and she was sitting there fingering herself the whole time watching us. I stood up and took my shirt off, and they got up and took my pants and underwear off. At that point I had a huge boner, they both got on there knees and the brunette started kissing my cock. Her lips where so warm and moist it felt so great....




I have more let me know if u want me to write the rest!!

[Twistedsister]

Didya accidently press a button twitch?

[heather416]

hot bb

[Twistedsister]

I hope you don't mind but I edited your story and I hope you get a better response from it, now....I tried to keep it as close to your original as possible. Do what you want with it....


It's 11 p.m. and I just finished watching some hot porn.
I was dead tired and was ready for bed.
It didn’t take me long to drift off to sleep.
I still had sexy images in my head and started to dream about them.

I was in a crappy basement that had two bedrooms; with bunk beds in both of them.
So I decide to drive to my friends Jake’s house.
He lived in a nice house out by the desert.

When I finally get to his place, I find out that he is not alone. Two beautiful girls are with him.

There was a brunette who was wearing very little; a shirt with no bra and black panties only. She wore a very tight yellow shirt, with which her nipples could be seen protruding through the material. She had the best looking tanned body I had seen. My eyes were glued to her perky double-D tits that seemed to want to break free of her shirt.

The other girl was a blonde, with also a nicely tanned body. She also only wore black panties, but no shirt but a black sports bra.

When I arrived both girls instantly smiled. Jake pulled a stupid face at me.

I walked over to Jake and also pulled a stupid face at him. I mimed a “Wow,” at Jake.

“Who are these babes,” I whispered to Jake, while looking on the ground at their unwanted leather pants, jackets and boots.

“Oh, there just old friends of mine, that I invited over,” Jake said.
I was amazed he even knew any girls, let alone two of the most beautiful girls I had seen.


“Do you want me to leave mate, so you could have some time with these hotties,” I asked.

“No mate, I have a business meeting to attend too, would you mind staying and looking after the girls while I’m gone,” Jake asked.
I stood stunned.

I looked over at the girls and smirked to myself. I could see the brunette’s nipples poking through her tight top, from where I stood.

“Can you do that for me,” Jake asked, again. I smiled at Jake, but still had my attention on the brunette.
“Sure,” I said.

Jake gave me a quick hug and then, gathered his work statements and opened the front door.
He glanced back at us.

“Now you three go and have some fun without me now,” He said, and then smiled and left.

My cock was hardening by what he said.

I turned around and walked towards the girls. They both stood up and kissed me. I sat down on the couch and the three of us started making out.


While I made out with the brunette, I had my hand down the back of her black panties.


I was feeling up her nice smooth ass, with my right hand.
All the while I inched my fingers near her anal passage, before rubbing her entrance.

She began to moan as I did so.

Then I began to do so to the blonde, with my other hand.

I my index finger inside both girl’s anal passage while the kissed my neck.

After several minutes we stopped kissing and I stopped fingering the girl’s assholes. I instead grabbed hold of the backs of their panties and maneuvered them off, with a little help from them.

I had a smile from ear to ear, when I noticed their perfectly shaved pussies.

“Nice,” I said.
The giggled and snickered amongst themselves.


The blonde got my attention first and I roughly rubbed her breasts while we kissed. Her bra was the first casualty of our lust for each other. I tore her bra in half and out popped her double-D implanted breasts.

I immediately began licking and then kissing them. This made her moan. This encouraged me and I began kissing her belly, until I reached her smooth pussy.

She moaned once again, as I kissed and licked her pussy lips. Her juices were flowing and it tasted sensational.

I found her clit and started licking small quick circles. This made her squirm and moan. The blonde began breathing heavily.

It was then that I opened her pussy and inserted two fingers; while licking her wet pussy.

She began to slowly hump into my face as I did so. Eventually she humped faster, as she reached an orgasm.

“Oh fuck, oh fuck, I am going to cum, oh fuck,” She groaned out.

I pushed my lips around her pussy as she began to squirt her orgasm into my open mouth. Her body started shaking like she was having an epileptic fit, as it gave in to it.

Her juices tasted so good and sweet. I swallowed what I could and then I got up. I planted a kiss on her lips and gave her a taste of herself.

“I never felt like that before,” She said, then gave me a sexy giggle. I smiled and kissed her.


I looked at the brunette, and I realized she must have felt neglected. She was sitting there fingering herself, while watching me feast on her friend.

I stood up and took my shirt off and then my pants. My boxers were next, and out popped my big boner. Both girls seemed to lick their lips at once, as they looked eagerly at it.

They both crawled on their knees toward me and my hard cock. The brunette was the first to it and started kissing my cock. Her warm moist lips felt so good on my cock…

[belizelarry]

Twistedsister. That is the biggest improvement and help, I have ever seen given. That is the difference between a lot of words on a page and a good story. That also shows your true talent, and compassion, as a writer. Taking the same idea, and with a few careful changes, and making it presentable and readable. I wish this could be used for all the other new writers to show how to do it better. Good job.

[Twistedsister]

Originally Posted by belizelarry

Twistedsister. That is the biggest improvement and help, I have ever seen given. That is the difference between a lot of words on a page and a good story. That also shows your true talent, and compassion, as a writer. Taking the same idea, and with a few careful changes, and making it presentable and readable. I wish this could be used for all the other new writers to show how to do it better. Good job.

I ain't no good writer, i just thought as they were new; that they could see the difference between a wall of words and an average release. I didn't change his story but as a novice writer like myself, i have copped my share of flack and i think i have learnt from it. But like i said, i am not perfect, ELP,Eljs,Horse would do a better job then me. But in saying that i hope the OP can use my edit as a template for future attempts.