Chase Me ((Story))

PrincessQuillow · 07-19-2012, 06:59 PM

Chapter one

It was one of the most beautiful nights Leah had ever seen in her 19 years of life. The stars were twinkling, and the gentle laps of lake against the dock were tempting her to fall into a peaceful trans. Every now and then, a fish would leap out of the water and leave a small disturbance on the glass like surface of the lake.

The night was perfect. It couldn’t have been any better. Except maybe if Chase was there with her. It has been months since the car accident that took his life, but to her, if could have been just seconds ago. She could still feel his heat when she slept. She could still see his blue eyes every time she closed hers. She still had the ring on her finger that he had given her on the same dock the night before he died.

The rustling of leaves falling from the colorful fall trees picked up, and Leah felt the first small drop of cold rain against her white skin. She took one last long look at the lake. The small dimples created from the sprinkle of tears from the sky prompted her to get back to the lake house she lived in with her parents since Chase’s passing. She climbed the small path to the old log cabin, thinking of how they used to stumble up this path when they snuck the liquor out to the dock. The memory almost made her smile.

“Leah...want some hot chocolate?” Her mother asked, with a concerned note in the tone of her voice. She had noticed her vibrant and playful daughter slipping away more and more lately. Leah spent most of her time in quiet solitude, pondering her life and her situation. The crying had stopped a few weeks ago, but Leah was still nowhere near her old self.

“No thanks, I’ll be heading up to bed. Good night, Mom.” Leah replied as she climbed the old stairs. the same stairs Chase used to climb with her. Everything about the house was comforting and familiar to Leah, she had spent every summer here since she was a very young kid.

Leah shut the door behind herself and pulled her clothes off, pausing at the bathroom door to grab a towel off her towel rack before stepping into the hot shower. She ran her fingers through her long brown hair and tilted her face towards the strong torrent of water. She felt the numbness washing away under the scorching stream of water pulsing into her being. Leah squeezed her eyes shut and ran her hands down her athletic body. Goosebumps rose on her supple flesh with the memory of Chase’s hands caressing every millimeter of her. Chase had loved her body. He used to tell her all the time.

Their first time had been magical for Leah. It was her first time, and Chase’s, too. It was soft and slow and passionate and barely painful for her at all. He was so gentle, and she remembered how wonderful she felt when he first entered her. She couldn’t describe it. She was whole and safe and loved, all from that small amount of contact. She melted into him as he tore through her innocence and filled her.

Leah was raised catholic, and was ingrained from her youth that sex was made for a man and his wife. It was a dirty thing for unmarried girls to do. Good girls did nothing sexual in any manner, in order to retain their virginity for their married life. But on that wonderful night, Leah wasn’t thinking about how ‘dirty’ she would be in God’s eyes, or anybody else’s for that matter. All she cared about was Chase, and how she wanted him. How she needed him. How it was the next step in their relationship, and how she had to give him everything she had.

Leah opened her eyes to find the water had gone cold. She shut it off and wrapped herself in her cozy towel, and headed to her room. It wasn’t long before she was sound asleep in Chase’s old T-Shirt, dreaming about him.

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*Note:

Hi! Nice to meet you all. I’ve been mostly a reader enjoying the stories all of you talented people fill this website with. I have quite a few favorites that I regularly follow.

(HUGE kudos to Dizzyworks673, my current favorite author of ‘Toy Store Boy.’ As a lesbian myself, I find it brings positive energy to that side of things.) I wanted to write a little something of my own, I know it’s pretty damn depressing but I promise it will get better. I hope you all liked it and let me know if you think it would be worth finishing?

I also want to start a story from a diary POV, let me know what you guys think about that. I would like to write the whole series here, then post it in the stories just because I think 5,000 characters is too much for one chapter, hehe.

Ciao!
~PrincessQuillow

ELaken-Palmer · 07-19-2012, 07:03 PM

Very good beginning. You, of course, need to build on this and post more.

_________

PrincessQuillow · 07-19-2012, 07:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ELaken-Palmer

Very good beginning. You, of course, need to build on this and post more.

_________

Thank you

I plan on it.

PrincessQuillow · 07-20-2012, 04:02 AM

bump

PrincessQuillow · 07-20-2012, 04:03 AM

bumppppy bump

PrincessQuillow · 07-20-2012, 04:06 AM

Bumping this to the top

PrincessQuillow · 07-20-2012, 04:06 AM

Loved writing this...feedback?

deepdiver24 · 07-20-2012, 05:23 AM

Its a great a great beginning, but I am not sure where this story might be heading. You are a good writer so I will be looking out for the rest of the story

knFML · 07-20-2012, 06:14 AM

Good start. Some details such as who or what is chase could be explained a little would be nice.
And car accidnt? R u going into more details of that? Some stories like using " flashbacks" to tell the story...

Catholic? R u going into detail about religious? I believe its not really wise to go in details, most of the " religious stories" never get any attention just saying.

I like your intro paragraph, very well written. Good job with the spelling and grammar too. Btw i am thinking and typing so didnt bother checking on my grammar..... Head hurting fml.....

Pls continue ur story, dont let a good start goto waste

pornversion · 07-20-2012, 03:20 PM

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ELaken-Palmer · 07-20-2012, 03:50 PM

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PrincessQuillow · 07-20-2012, 06:06 PM

I dont know who enslavedprincess is. Nobody else is allowed to use the word 'princess' around here? He also told me I look like a man and im ugly.

07-19-2012, 06:59 PM	#1
PrincessQuillow Porn Surfer Join Date: Jul 2012 Location: By a great lake <3 Posts: 24	Chase Me ((Story)) Chapter one It was one of the most beautiful nights Leah had ever seen in her 19 years of life. The stars were twinkling, and the gentle laps of lake against the dock were tempting her to fall into a peaceful trans. Every now and then, a fish would leap out of the water and leave a small disturbance on the glass like surface of the lake. The night was perfect. It couldn’t have been any better. Except maybe if Chase was there with her. It has been months since the car accident that took his life, but to her, if could have been just seconds ago. She could still feel his heat when she slept. She could still see his blue eyes every time she closed hers. She still had the ring on her finger that he had given her on the same dock the night before he died. The rustling of leaves falling from the colorful fall trees picked up, and Leah felt the first small drop of cold rain against her white skin. She took one last long look at the lake. The small dimples created from the sprinkle of tears from the sky prompted her to get back to the lake house she lived in with her parents since Chase’s passing. She climbed the small path to the old log cabin, thinking of how they used to stumble up this path when they snuck the liquor out to the dock. The memory almost made her smile. “Leah...want some hot chocolate?” Her mother asked, with a concerned note in the tone of her voice. She had noticed her vibrant and playful daughter slipping away more and more lately. Leah spent most of her time in quiet solitude, pondering her life and her situation. The crying had stopped a few weeks ago, but Leah was still nowhere near her old self. “No thanks, I’ll be heading up to bed. Good night, Mom.” Leah replied as she climbed the old stairs. the same stairs Chase used to climb with her. Everything about the house was comforting and familiar to Leah, she had spent every summer here since she was a very young kid. Leah shut the door behind herself and pulled her clothes off, pausing at the bathroom door to grab a towel off her towel rack before stepping into the hot shower. She ran her fingers through her long brown hair and tilted her face towards the strong torrent of water. She felt the numbness washing away under the scorching stream of water pulsing into her being. Leah squeezed her eyes shut and ran her hands down her athletic body. Goosebumps rose on her supple flesh with the memory of Chase’s hands caressing every millimeter of her. Chase had loved her body. He used to tell her all the time. Their first time had been magical for Leah. It was her first time, and Chase’s, too. It was soft and slow and passionate and barely painful for her at all. He was so gentle, and she remembered how wonderful she felt when he first entered her. She couldn’t describe it. She was whole and safe and loved, all from that small amount of contact. She melted into him as he tore through her innocence and filled her. Leah was raised catholic, and was ingrained from her youth that sex was made for a man and his wife. It was a dirty thing for unmarried girls to do. Good girls did nothing sexual in any manner, in order to retain their virginity for their married life. But on that wonderful night, Leah wasn’t thinking about how ‘dirty’ she would be in God’s eyes, or anybody else’s for that matter. All she cared about was Chase, and how she wanted him. How she needed him. How it was the next step in their relationship, and how she had to give him everything she had. Leah opened her eyes to find the water had gone cold. She shut it off and wrapped herself in her cozy towel, and headed to her room. It wasn’t long before she was sound asleep in Chase’s old T-Shirt, dreaming about him. ---------------------------------------- *Note: Hi! Nice to meet you all. I’ve been mostly a reader enjoying the stories all of you talented people fill this website with. I have quite a few favorites that I regularly follow. (HUGE kudos to Dizzyworks673, my current favorite author of ‘Toy Store Boy.’ As a lesbian myself, I find it brings positive energy to that side of things.) I wanted to write a little something of my own, I know it’s pretty damn depressing but I promise it will get better. I hope you all liked it and let me know if you think it would be worth finishing? I also want to start a story from a diary POV, let me know what you guys think about that. I would like to write the whole series here, then post it in the stories just because I think 5,000 characters is too much for one chapter, hehe. Ciao! ~PrincessQuillow

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knFML Amateur Join Date: Apr 2012 Posts: 88	Good start. Some details such as who or what is chase could be explained a little would be nice. And car accidnt? R u going into more details of that? Some stories like using " flashbacks" to tell the story... Catholic? R u going into detail about religious? I believe its not really wise to go in details, most of the " religious stories" never get any attention just saying. I like your intro paragraph, very well written. Good job with the spelling and grammar too. Btw i am thinking and typing so didnt bother checking on my grammar..... Head hurting fml..... Pls continue ur story, dont let a good start goto waste

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