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08-03-2012, 09:49 PM
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Porn Surfer
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The Ultra God
would a story about an Ultra God interest people? i am currently working on it and wanted to know if it would be worth posting.
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08-03-2012, 09:52 PM
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Porn Star
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Define "Ultra God"
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08-03-2012, 09:56 PM
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Porn Star
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Exactly.
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08-03-2012, 09:56 PM
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Porn Surfer
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a being more powerful then God and Satan combined. he can interfere with free will where God and Satan can't. but he won't in this story. guess i should just post it see how people respond?
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08-03-2012, 09:58 PM
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Porn Star
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a being more powerful than God . . . would be God . . .
just sayin' |
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08-03-2012, 10:00 PM
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Porn Surfer
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i was think mostly story and possibly a series. unsure may need help with the sex scenes seem more generic and bland to me.
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08-03-2012, 10:02 PM
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Porn Star
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good Lord
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08-03-2012, 10:02 PM
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Porn Surfer
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yea still working on it though.
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08-03-2012, 10:06 PM
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Porn Surfer
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thanks i am grateful. will send what i have via pm ok?
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08-03-2012, 10:16 PM
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Porn Surfer
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read part one seem cool.
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08-03-2012, 10:26 PM
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Guardian of the Snow
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ChrisKing - a suggestion you may want to consider if your doing an UltraGod series; do them as short stories, and maybe the main character can have a kind of split in personality, where each part is vying to win out in the end for good or evil.
As an example, when the devil is in control, he robs a bank; then God takes control and donates the money to a needy family, to the absolute disgust of the devil. |
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08-03-2012, 10:31 PM
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Porn Surfer
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hmm i might re do this as that is a good suggestion i was having the Deity himself as the main character but might change it
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08-05-2012, 12:05 PM
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I agree
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