Recommended writers on XNXX - Page 10

x__orion · 09-06-2009, 10:08 PM

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Originally Posted by ivo13

screw the spelling,after all, we are typing.

Oh, that must explain all the typos I keep finding in modern novels. After all, the authors typed those.

You know what? For some of us, spelling euqivalent to a five year old on a mobile phone is severely damaging to the readability of a story, and therefore to our enjoyment of it.

donb9033 · 09-07-2009, 02:04 AM

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Originally Posted by ivo13

please people, look at the story! what was the object? you seem to be so up with the writer. screw who wrote it, enjoy the contents of the story. screw the spelling,after all, we are typing. love the story, and forget your schooling!

What's the point of this comment? I am confused (probably stupid by the lights of this commenter) and happy to stay that way. Writers, like ball players, exhibit certain traits, or track records, that tend to cause me to look for their stories. Any other questions?

HornyTeen2 · 09-07-2009, 07:33 AM

My second story is now online!! I've already gotton a few comments that I need to work on details (

), but if you read the first part, this is a HUGE improvement.

freethinker · 09-08-2009, 04:27 AM

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Originally Posted by ivo13

please people, look at the story! what was the object? you seem to be so up with the writer. screw who wrote it, enjoy the contents of the story. screw the spelling,after all, we are typing. love the story, and forget your schooling!

I don't care who wrote it, if the spelling and grammar are off, it detracts from my enjoyment of the story. I have thrown books out, unread, because the first chapter(s) were so full of errors, I couldn't concentrate on what I was reading. If you want to write stories people will read, proper spelling and grammar are a must.

ejls · 09-08-2009, 09:54 AM

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Originally Posted by Daddycums

I have a suspicion that the negative comments and votes are all coming from the same troll. Probably the same guy who attacked ejls, accused me of gaming the system, and ran off lubutt17 (who I hope isn't gone for good). There are probably a few people that genuinely didn't like the story and downvoted it, but my theory is that there's a single person who's making the scores artificially low.

Maybe we'll get lucky and he'll get hit by a bus. Okay, I don't like to wish death upon anyone, so I'll qualify that. Maybe he'll get hit by a bus and wake up in the hospital with amnesia, not remembering ever coming to this site, or even having heard of it. There. That's about as much charity as I can muster up.

This honestly makes me feel less alone. I was sure that I had pissed off someone (well, and very likely have). I'm just sorry people I know are now no longer putting their names on their comments, or are pm-ing me, because of personal attacks on them.

I will say, the troll is very creative in pretending to be people we know. I wonder if he realizes he has a very distinctive characteristic, that helps us see through his facade.

I'm done answering his tirades. I know the work I have submitted is of good quality, and that is the reason I write it. If you don't like stories about adults, or romance, then steer clear of my work. But I know, and this has taken a very long time for me to admit, I am a good writer.

Daddycums · 09-08-2009, 01:54 PM

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Originally Posted by ejls

This honestly makes me feel less alone. I was sure that I had pissed off someone (well, and very likely have). I'm just sorry people I know are now no longer putting their names on their comments, or are pm-ing me, because of personal attacks on them.

I will say, the troll is very creative in pretending to be people we know. I wonder if he realizes he has a very distinctive characteristic, that helps us see through his facade.

I'm done answering his tirades. I know the work I have submitted is of good quality, and that is the reason I write it. If you don't like stories about adults, or romance, then steer clear of my work. But I know, and this has taken a very long time for me to admit, I am a good writer.

Yes you are. Of course, I can only judge by the one story of yours that I read, but I'll assume that the others are of similar quality. To quote from a character from one of my own stories: "[Worthless people] try to make everyone around them feel even worse than they do. It's the only way they can feel good about themselves."

As long as you understand that you're a good writer, you can laugh off the attacks.

On a completely unrelated note, I plan to put up an updated list later today, so if you have any last-minute recommendations, this is a good time to mention them.

donb9033 · 09-08-2009, 04:41 PM

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Originally Posted by ejls

This honestly makes me feel less alone. I was sure that I had pissed off someone (well, and very likely have). I'm just sorry people I know are now no longer putting their names on their comments, or are pm-ing me, because of personal attacks on them.

I will say, the troll is very creative in pretending to be people we know. I wonder if he realizes he has a very distinctive characteristic, that helps us see through his facade.

I'm done answering his tirades. I know the work I have submitted is of good quality, and that is the reason I write it. If you don't like stories about adults, or romance, then steer clear of my work. But I know, and this has taken a very long time for me to admit, I am a good writer.

Yes, Ellen, you are a good writer and I admire your stand on this issue. Please keep the faith as there are a lot of us "mature" people out here that love your stories. Don

JackassTales · 09-08-2009, 06:29 PM

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Originally Posted by Daddycums

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On a completely unrelated note, I plan to put up an updated list later today, so if you have any last-minute recommendations, this is a good time to mention them.

There is a writer called Luvbroker who seems too be very good. I haven't checked your last list yet, but if his name is not already there then it should be. Here is his location;
http://stories.xnxx.com/profile323571/

donb9033 · 09-08-2009, 11:24 PM

I don't know if anyone has mentioned her yet, and if not, why, but check out the stories by sarahhh at http://stories.xnxx.com/profile326461/. Very well written and a marvelous sense of humor. Love all of her stories, some more than others. She and goodsamantha really are bookends that I would love to fit between.

goodsamantha · 09-09-2009, 01:18 AM

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Originally Posted by donb9033

I don't know if anyone has mentioned her yet, and if not, why, but check out the stories by sarahhh at http://stories.xnxx.com/profile326461/. Very well written and a marvelous sense of humor. Love all of her stories, some more than others. She and goodsamantha really are bookends that I would love to fit between.

Hmmm, now that would be interesting. Are you 'up' to it Don?

Daddycums · 09-09-2009, 01:47 AM

Daddycums · 09-09-2009, 01:59 AM

goodsamantha:

I just noticed that your sig doesn't actually point to your stories. It just points to the generic author's account page. An understandable mistake, since it does list your stories when you're logged in. But you might want to change it, since the current link only works for you.

Since you're now officially a recommended author (you can thank donb9033, perhaps with the aforementioned "bookend" position), you can find the correct link right next to your name under Recommended Authors above.

goodsamantha · 09-09-2009, 02:24 AM

thanks for the info!

seeminglysatisfied · 09-14-2009, 05:38 AM

lubutt17, read the first chapter you posted as Invictus and I give my approval

Excellent descriptions, definitely worth the time to read it all. Going to read the rest of the chapters very soon

donb9033 · 09-17-2009, 06:11 PM

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Originally Posted by goodsamantha

Hmmm, now that would be interesting. Are you 'up' to it Don?

I'm 'up' to it, but it would probably do me in. What a way to go. In the interim, I will be content to read the very good, very hot stories by two of my favorite ladies. Not, however, my only favorite lady writers. Don.

jayjaydee · 09-18-2009, 06:16 PM

Have i got it wrong, or does one just have to click on a 'positive' or 'negative' button in order to register liking or otherwise of a story. Ive put a story up, had about 2000 readings, but only 7 or so votes. What this does is strand the story on 70% on page 3 or 4 of the theme, where obviously it will receive less readings.

Does the click of a button constitute too much effort on behalf of a reader. The writer has given of him/herself in sweat and sometimes tears; if not exactly in blood. Surely they deserve one click on a button.

I have also invited comments; at this stage i'll even take abuse instead of constructive criticism. We are all striving to better ourselves. How can we do this without some feedback.

Does anyone have any comments on these points (fingers crossed.)

nikki1979 · 09-18-2009, 06:39 PM

Hi everyone,
After reading the above comments I guess that I need to say Sorry.

I am not a great writer, probably not even a very good one, but I feel the need to, so I do.

What I do is attempt to take a portion of my life and condence it down into something that allows you, the reader, to experiance part of my life. If you find my spelling or grammer more important than the overall story of my life, so sorry.

Nikki

David58 · 09-18-2009, 06:58 PM

Nikki1979 love your stories.Hot rearing about how cute young girl sell them selfs and work for pimps.Keep the stories coming

Daddycums · 09-20-2009, 12:53 PM

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Originally Posted by nikki1979

Hi everyone,
After reading the above comments I guess that I need to say Sorry.

I am not a great writer, probably not even a very good one, but I feel the need to, so I do.

What I do is attempt to take a portion of my life and condence it down into something that allows you, the reader, to experiance part of my life. If you find my spelling or grammer more important than the overall story of my life, so sorry.

Nikki

A few spelling errors are forgivable. I'm somewhat of a perfectionist, and even I let a few technical problems slip through now and then.

What's not forgivable is writing a story, knowing that you're not the greatest speller in the world, and then not even bothering to run it through a spell checker. It's not about ability or talent; it's about effort. If an author can't be bothered to proofread, I assume (perhaps uncharitably) that they have no pride in their work and therefore it's always going to be inferior. I'd rather read something from someone who tried to write a masterpiece and failed than from someone who just threw a couple of erotic sentences together because it helped them get off.

Note that I'm not directing this at you, Nikki. I haven't had the pleasure of reading your stories yet so I can't judge them. And I agree that the story itself is more important than the story or grammar.

Daddycums · 09-20-2009, 01:05 PM

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Originally Posted by jayjaydee

Have i got it wrong, or does one just have to click on a 'positive' or 'negative' button in order to register liking or otherwise of a story. Ive put a story up, had about 2000 readings, but only 7 or so votes. What this does is strand the story on 70% on page 3 or 4 of the theme, where obviously it will receive less readings.

Does the click of a button constitute too much effort on behalf of a reader. The writer has given of him/herself in sweat and sometimes tears; if not exactly in blood. Surely they deserve one click on a button.

I have also invited comments; at this stage i'll even take abuse instead of constructive criticism. We are all striving to better ourselves. How can we do this without some feedback.

Does anyone have any comments on these points (fingers crossed.)

Unfortunately, the layout and design of XNXX is working against you. Newer stories always have an advantage over older ones. The first week or so, you'll get almost all of your votes and comments, then as soon as it vanishes off of the "Newest Stories" list, it's lost to obscurity. I consider this a serious design flaw in the site, but maybe it's what the webmaster intended. The only solution is to keep writing and posting new stories.

Let me give you one suggestion that might help boost traffic to your stories: You made the all-too common mistake of linking to the author account page in your sig. See my comment to goodsamantha above.

The link to the list of your stories should be:

http://stories.xnxx.com/profile116628/jayjaydee

By the way, I'll take a look; I always like a good blackmail story.

SexWriter · 09-20-2009, 01:37 PM

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Originally Posted by freethinker

I don't care who wrote it, if the spelling and grammar are off, it detracts from my enjoyment of the story. I have thrown books out, unread, because the first chapter(s) were so full of errors, I couldn't concentrate on what I was reading. If you want to write stories people will read, proper spelling and grammar are a must.

I completely agree. You're not a writer if you cannot or will not make every effort to write properly simple typos not-with-standing.

That said some take exception to my style of writing because of my long advertising background. It has a definite impact on my creative writing style. Remember however that style is far different than error. Style is not the defense of ignorance.

It is not fair to compare professional writer's works technically with novice efforts because publishers have armies of editors trained and well paid to catch errors. If it wasn't necessary they would not spend the money on them ...even the very best writers make mistakes.

It is appropriate to expect each of us who want to write stories regardless of topic for others to read, to do the work required to be a writer; go to school, learn proper form, spelling, sentence structure, tense. Write. Do not text!

Merely having a great idea for a story is not enough. Conceiving a ham and cheese omelet is very different than preparing one. Try it. Untrained you will probably end up with ham and cheese scramble eggs; tasty perhaps but not an omelet.

Ghost Writer · 09-20-2009, 03:42 PM

Hello everyone

I'm glad to see such a thread on the forum. This will definitely help people, such as myself, make better choices about what's worth reading and what isn't. I've read many authors on the list and I agree, they are top notch.

I see someone was kind enough to suggest me for the list, and I greatly appreciate that, and I am pleased someone enjoyed the meager stories I've put up so far enough to suggest them for such a list. Thank you very much to all that have read them.

I must say I agree with those rebutting the poster who admonished us for paying attention to "schooling," in other words grammar, spelling and syntax, and even style. Everyone making mistakes, true, but I refuse to read stories with passages such as this:

O baby, u so hot, I want cum 4 u so bad. Give me ur pussy and suk my dik

And to be honest, that's improved over some I've seen on the net, which is sad. If I can't read it or decipher it, I sure as hell can't enjoy it. I'm sure there are many others that feel the same. You can watch the best movie in the world, but if you can't understand what's being said (like its in a language from across the world from your native language, for example), then you really just can't enjoy it. That's especially true for writing. If you can't follow it, its just a bunch of squiggly lines on a page or screen with no meaning. If it has no meaning, you can't tell if its "hot" or just plain shit. More often than not, its just plain shit.

So, without a doubt, I definitely concur and agree with the idea that grammar, spelling, syntax, style, etc are all important, just like content is important.

Anyway, I've read quite a few stories on this site and have enjoyed a great number of them. Most of them are by authors that have already been mentioned in this thread. Thank you all, ladies and gentlemen, for such wonderful tales. I've greatly enjoyed reading all of them and hope to read more.

Ironically, the author I came to recommend, now that I skim back through posts to check for who to thank specifically for my recommendation to this list, is the same one that recommended me. How's that for a happily weird coincidence? *chuckles* So, without further delay, first I thank Purple Chick for her generous and kind recommendation of my work to this list (I've got more projects in the works, by the way, just my schedule doesn't permit me to write as often as I'd like to at the moment).

Secondly, I'd like to suggest Purple Chick for addition to this list. I've caught the first couple of chapters of her story, and they are frankly exceedingly good in my opinion. She's still presumably working on the rest of it, but what she's got up so far is well worth the read, I believe. I think anyone that reads them will enjoy her style and her rather brilliant characterization.

Until next time, take it easy! I'm back off into the sordid land of hippie inspired web porn (yes, I run and design porn sites at the moment *chuckles*)

donb9033 · 09-20-2009, 06:04 PM

I thoroughly agree with your comments with one exception: one of our favorite authors, in his first story posted, exhibited major failures in spelling, continuity, syntax, etc. I stuck with the story simply because it was very hot and the writing showed some promise. His next story showed much improvement and so did the next. Now that author has a collection of very hot, pretty well written stories worth reading. Sometimes when he gets very excited about one of his stories his spelling, etc. grows weak, but I think he knows that and is trying hard to correct that failure. Because I was patient and saw promise and because of some fairly kind comments about his weaknesses, his name has become one of those I routinely look for on the new stories listing. Some writers need pointing in the right direction and deserve our help and patience. Maybe? Don

nate556 · 09-20-2009, 08:13 PM

I started off pretty bad at writing too. I find, telling the story from a first person perspective is much easier, since it allows me to put it easier in my own words, and i can tell the story subjectively through the characters eyes. I don't have to worry about trying to be objective with the story, as if i were a third person observer explaining what I was seeing.

donb9033 · 09-21-2009, 01:53 AM

Another new writer to the stories site. http://stories.xnxx.com/profile179391/Qlick Only one so far, but it's a good story. I'm keeping an eye out for other stories by Qlick and strongly recommend him to all. Check him out.

freethinker · 09-21-2009, 04:00 PM

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Originally Posted by nikki1979

Hi everyone,
After reading the above comments I guess that I need to say Sorry.

I am not a great writer, probably not even a very good one, but I feel the need to, so I do.

What I do is attempt to take a portion of my life and condence it down into something that allows you, the reader, to experiance part of my life. If you find my spelling or grammer more important than the overall story of my life, so sorry.

Nikki

There's no need to apologize, really. If you feel the need to write, write, by all means, even if you are not a great writer, or even very good at it. Use a spelling and grammar checker once you've finished a story to help edit it; I do. Pay attention to what it is telling you about why it recommends such and such a change, but bear in mind even the best of them aren't 100 percent right all the time. You are the final authority.

As you write more and more, and perhaps read more and more of others writing, you will gradually improve yourself...you will see what works, how grammar is best used, how to spell even, and that will begin to show in your own writing. I try not to be harsh criticising people here, because most are, like myself, amateurs; my harshest comment in the previous post, about throwing books out, was meant for supposedly professional writers, who write books that are supposed to be proofread and edited, and still read like they were written by third graders. Here, it is actually a pleasure to see someone who keeps plugging away at it, and keeps improving each time, because you can see they have a true interest in writing, and improving their abilities.

So please, don't apologize; just keep getting better. You may never be a great writer, but that doesn't mean you have to stifle that urge to write.

donb9033 · 09-21-2009, 05:16 PM

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Originally Posted by nikki1979

Hi everyone,
After reading the above comments I guess that I need to say Sorry.

I am not a great writer, probably not even a very good one, but I feel the need to, so I do.

What I do is attempt to take a portion of my life and condence it down into something that allows you, the reader, to experiance part of my life. If you find my spelling or grammer more important than the overall story of my life, so sorry.

Nikki

Nikki, I must echo the comments of freethinker. Please continue writing. Use all of these comments as a learning moment. We have lost too many writers because of comments. We need you. Don

Ghost Writer · 09-22-2009, 06:04 AM

Hello again everyone

I have to apologize if my comments seemed too barbed or anything like that. They weren't intended to be. I more than understand someone starting off "slow" in regards to "good writing" and making strides towards improvement. Everyone has room for improvement, especially me.

I only meant to say there's a difference between a "slow starter," for want of a better way to put it, and someone just grinding out story after story without any attempt at improving their craft and skill, or anything of that nature. I'm an easy going kind of guy, and if something shows potential and promise, even if that promise or potential is well hidden, I'm more than willing to give it a shot, and try the next one as well.

When it comes to stuff like that, I, like Daddycums, am a bit of a perfectionist, but I do try very hard not to be overly critical. Everyone has different tastes, however, and this pertains as much to technical finesse and style as it does to content and delivery. I'm not attempting to bad mouth anyone or make anyone feel bad or down about anything they've written, or their "quality as a writer," or any of that sort of thing. I'm sorry if it seemed that way.

I meant it more in the vein of constructive criticism than anything else, and it was a broad and general statement, not aimed at anyone specifically, and certainly not aimed at anyone I've seen that's posted in this thread. It was probably more an expression of opinion and taste than anything else, to be honest.

So, again, I reiterate, I meant no hard feelings or offense by anything I said. I meant no part of it to be taken as a slap against anyone.

And again, I'd like to recommend Purple Chick for addition to your list (in case I forgot to my last post). Her profile can be found at the site's root, and her profile number is profile284861 and hopefully she'll be adding to it soon. I've really enjoyed what she's done so far.

Thanks everyone and take care.

nate556 · 09-22-2009, 07:12 AM

I would also like to add. Research is important, especially if you are writing about a position or something you havn't done first hand. I find myself even researching a few things I have done before. Finding your little grove as a writer can be difficult. A friend once told me that writing out stories on the internet is a lot like writing in college. It's all about critique and review. Review review review.

It's really easy to get offended when someone points something out and goes, "That's dumb." But I find that a perfect opportunity to try and figure out what's wrong with it. Sometimes, it even helps to ask the person, 'what's wrong with it ?' often, the cure could simply be your wording. I try to think of many different ways to word something before typing out a description, and I just sort of file it away in the back of my head in case I change my mind or someone thinks what i chose looks silly.

I try not to be overly-wordy in my descriptions, plus, I personally have a problem with details, which I suppose is why I seem to prefer 1st person writing. I can just type, "I looked out the window and it was raining outside." I don't have to try and explain the shade of gray the sky is, or how big the drops of water are.

I also like vague descriptions of some things, like my characters. I tend to leave their descriptions fairly vague and allow the imaginations of my readers to fill in the blanks with what they want. It's tricky, because you can be too vague, or your readers may not have such vivid and creative imaginations to fill in the blanks.

One problem I noticed I have personally, is when it comes to character names. I find myself not using their names until they either introduce themselves, or someone else calls them by names. So, I end up typing things like "The old man did this" and "the old man did that"... a lot. I don't know where I picked the habbit up, but I do it in so many of my stories without even thinking, and when I go back and read it sometimes I'll be like, "Holy shit, I didn't even say what the old man's name was!" which, of course since the old man is important to the plot, i need to mention his name! Especially if there are a lot of old mans in the story.

Honestly, I've written a lot of stories before, but this board is the first one that I've actually written them for an audeince. I kind of like it this way, since people can hop on right away and tell me "That's good, I like it" or "ohh man, that sucks!" right away, and I can find ways to adjust my stories. Even if it's simply adding an extra line between paragraphs.

So.. yeah. Even if your stories aren't on the same level as, say, Stephen King or (insert name of famous author here), keep at it. If it's something you want to do, and enjoy... do it. I've always had a wild imagination, and I can picture things very vividly in my head, so creating stories is something I love to do. I have entire worlds and lives with deep meaningful stories in my head. Learning how to tell those stories however, can be quite difficult. Finding the right words can be hard, but with practice and repetition, it'll come easier, and you'll find the way to get your stories told the best and easiest way for you.

Nat.

ThunderedEchoes · 09-22-2009, 07:17 AM

Research != experience.
Experience >>>> research.

nate556 · 09-22-2009, 07:32 AM

They do go hand in hand, no argument there.

Just wanted to say ThunderedEchos, it was your Perverted Dad stories that inspired me to even start posting here. I enjoyed them a lot, and I thought, 'I wonder if I can create a good story that'll make people cream their jeans like that ?' You just really inspired me to flex my brain muscles a little more to get the stories out of my head... and for that, you have my thanks.

nikki1979 · 09-22-2009, 01:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Daddycums

A few spelling errors are forgivable. I'm somewhat of a perfectionist, and even I let a few technical problems slip through now and then.

What's not forgivable is writing a story, knowing that you're not the greatest speller in the world, and then not even bothering to run it through a spell checker. It's not about ability or talent; it's about effort. If an author can't be bothered to proofread, I assume (perhaps uncharitably) that they have no pride in their work and therefore it's always going to be inferior. I'd rather read something from someone who tried to write a masterpiece and failed than from someone who just threw a couple of erotic sentences together because it helped them get off.

Note that I'm not directing this at you, Nikki. I haven't had the pleasure of reading your stories yet so I can't judge them. And I agree that the story itself is more important than the story or grammar.

Thanks for the comments, really.
I do attempt to spellcheck and edit my stories but I do make mistakes which is how we all learn, I was just posting a blanket "so sorry" to all the people out there that want to rip me apart for little bo-bo's. hehehe
In fact, yesterday I posted chapter 16, then almost instantly noticed that I had screwed up big time in the very last paragraph so I have requested it to be deleted before I get flamed for my error. See, I am trying.

Nikki

Daddycums · 09-22-2009, 02:20 PM

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Originally Posted by nikki1979

Thanks for the comments, really.
I do attempt to spellcheck and edit my stories but I do make mistakes which is how we all learn, I was just posting a blanket "so sorry" to all the people out there that want to rip me apart for little bo-bo's. hehehe
In fact, yesterday I posted chapter 16, then almost instantly noticed that I had screwed up big time in the very last paragraph so I have requested it to be deleted before I get flamed for my error. See, I am trying.

Nikki

That's fine. I think people can tell the difference between an author who puts an honest effort into it, and an author who just throws something together without really thinking about it. I will always take that into consideration when scoring or commenting on a story. That doesn't mean I won't give my honest opinion; if I just plain don't like it, I'll come right out and say it. But in those cases I still try to be constructive with my criticism.

Speaking of screwing up in the last paragraph, I find it ironic that in my post talking about proofreading that you quoted above, I said, "And I agree that the story itself is more important than the story or grammar." The bolded word should be "spelling." As a self-proclaimed perfectionist, I hate it when I do that. It's been bugging me for a couple of days now.

goodsamantha · 09-22-2009, 02:31 PM

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Originally Posted by nikki1979

Thanks for the comments, really.
I do attempt to spellcheck and edit my stories but I do make mistakes which is how we all learn, I was just posting a blanket "so sorry" to all the people out there that want to rip me apart for little bo-bo's. hehehe
In fact, yesterday I posted chapter 16, then almost instantly noticed that I had screwed up big time in the very last paragraph so I have requested it to be deleted before I get flamed for my error. See, I am trying.

Nikki

Don't you just hate when that happens. I've finished three stories in the past two weeks, and I'm not done editing the first one yet. I'm always making slight changes and finding words that don't quite fit. And yes Don, I'm watching my commas too. lol

Ooops was there a comma in that last tiny sentence?

donb9033 · 09-22-2009, 08:04 PM

Sammie, you always leave me with a smile on my face. There's another comma for you. Love you and love your avatar. Don

ejls · 09-23-2009, 10:53 AM

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Originally Posted by goodsamantha

Don't you just hate when that happens. I've finished three stories in the past two weeks, and I'm not done editing the first one yet. I'm always making slight changes and finding words that don't quite fit. And yes Don, I'm watching my commas too. lol

Ooops was there a comma in that last tiny sentence?

I use spellcheck, and have two other people read my stuff before I post. Ultimately, there will still be errors. That's the human side of us. If you enjoy writing - write - and damn the trolls.

donb9033 · 09-24-2009, 04:25 AM

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Originally Posted by donb9033

Another new writer to the stories site. http://stories.xnxx.com/profile179391/Qlick Only one so far, but it's a good story. I'm keeping an eye out for other stories by Qlick and strongly recommend him to all. Check him out.

He did it again. For all of us guys with fond memories of older women, his new story is a major hit. Try it, you'll like it.

donb9033 · 09-24-2009, 07:22 PM

Another recommendation: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile326913/JackEds. The only one of his stories that I've read is the latest 'Stickin It' and really enjoyed it. Pretty well written and only one spelling error! As a warning, there's some gay in his stories, but what the hell?

anon y mouse · 09-24-2009, 07:36 PM

It is good to get feedback good or bad and if i never make the top list I have no issues I write anyway. I have posted some rubbish and I know it I but I try and learn. As well as rating I wish more people would comment.

donb9033 · 09-24-2009, 08:12 PM

Basically the same comment JackEds had on his thread. I'm trying to read something from everyone, but find myself falling back on my favorite authors. I will try. Don't lose the faith.

donb9033 · 09-28-2009, 09:15 PM

I've been reading some stories by anon y mouse
http://stories.xnxx.com/profile324744/ and really like a lot of them. Also some great threads on the forum. Check her out.

goodsamantha · 09-28-2009, 09:19 PM

See what you do to me, Don...

donb9033 · 09-28-2009, 09:54 PM

Sammie, you have, in the immortal words of Clint, made my day. I will save that picture for future reference and hope I can do that again. Thanks, doll. By the way, what prompted that? My recommendation of anon y mouse? If so, I'll see if I can find some more hot ones to recommend. Love you.

donb9033 · 09-29-2009, 01:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by nikki1979

Thanks for the comments, really.
I do attempt to spellcheck and edit my stories but I do make mistakes which is how we all learn, I was just posting a blanket "so sorry" to all the people out there that want to rip me apart for little bo-bo's. hehehe
In fact, yesterday I posted chapter 16, then almost instantly noticed that I had screwed up big time in the very last paragraph so I have requested it to be deleted before I get flamed for my error. See, I am trying.

Nikki

Your later stories are showing much improvement, Nikki. Especially Dreams. Keep writing - you'll never get everyone to love your stories, so love them yourself. Lots of us will follow along with you. Thanks for your efforts. Don

anon y mouse · 09-29-2009, 09:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by donb9033

I've been reading some stories by anon y mouse
http://stories.xnxx.com/profile324744/ and really like a lot of them. Also some great threads on the forum. Check her out.

Thank you for your comments most appreciated. I try and get them right but sometimes tiredness overtakes in a dash to complete while still in the head. To all my readers if you find fault please use the comments box or praise it does help us authors.

subkittehslut · 09-29-2009, 05:52 PM

Hopefully I'm not repeating anyone elses recommendations, but if you haven't read zenmackie's work...

http://stories.xnxx.com/story/19751/...llowed%2C_Pt.1

you're REALLY missing out. That's the first part, I think he has 7 up and is validating part 8.

I also would appreciate any comments on my own stories; they are not perfect, and I write them on my sidekick usually so I have no spellcheck. That's the only way I can keep them private in my house... but I do the best I can to proofread. =D

Daddycums · 09-30-2009, 03:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by subkittehslut

Hopefully I'm not repeating anyone elses recommendations, but if you haven't read zenmackie's work...

http://stories.xnxx.com/story/19751/...llowed%2C_Pt.1

you're REALLY missing out. That's the first part, I think he has 7 up and is validating part 8.

I also would appreciate any comments on my own stories; they are not perfect, and I write them on my sidekick usually so I have no spellcheck. That's the only way I can keep them private in my house... but I do the best I can to proofread. =D

I'll have to take a look at zenmackie's and your own work. Don't worry about the lack of spellcheck; if it's a choice between manually proofreading and running through a spellchecker, I'd much rather have you proofread it manually.

donb9033 · 09-30-2009, 04:25 AM

DC, I'm glad you are going to check out the stories by subkittehslut - I just can't get into pain, forced sex, and stuff. Sorry, little kitty, but that's the way I am. More of an old romantic who does not believe in forcing a woman to do my bidding (or whatever). If you ever get into softer, more loving stories, please let me know.

thegame07 · 09-30-2009, 04:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by nate556

I also like vague descriptions of some things, like my characters. I tend to leave their descriptions fairly vague and allow the imaginations of my readers to fill in the blanks with what they want. It's tricky, because you can be too vague, or your readers may not have such vivid and creative imaginations to fill in the blanks.

I noticed that in "Sweet Little Sister".

From the first entry to the most recent, I've been able to picture exactly what the sister looks like without the details to correct me. It's pretty amazing.

Well done.

dormireclan · 09-30-2009, 04:37 AM

I like the story.

09-07-2009, 07:33 AM	#453
HornyTeen2 Amateur Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Bellingham, WA Posts: 65	My second story is now online!! I've already gotton a few comments that I need to work on details (), but if you read the first part, this is a HUGE improvement. __________________ Lookin' to hook up!! I'm a bi guy lookin' for hot men. I live in WA, so...message me guys!! Stories Page: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile313366/HornyTeen2

09-08-2009, 11:24 PM	#459
donb9033 Porn Star Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Somewhere over the mountain Posts: 2,585	I don't know if anyone has mentioned her yet, and if not, why, but check out the stories by sarahhh at http://stories.xnxx.com/profile326461/. Very well written and a marvelous sense of humor. Love all of her stories, some more than others. She and goodsamantha really are bookends that I would love to fit between. __________________ "The freedom and happiness of man...[are] the sole objects of all legitimate government." --Thomas Jefferson "Were we directed from Washington when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread." --Thomas Jefferson "The government is best which governs least." --Thomas Jefferson XNXXOIAATILORAL IS ALMOST ALL THAT IS LEFT or XNXXHODHORNY OLD DOG?

09-09-2009, 01:47 AM	#461
Daddycums Porn Star Join Date: May 2009 Location: In the bushes outside your bedroom window. Posts: 1,943	Here's the new list. You'll note that I rearranged the "Recommended Authors on the Forums" list a little. This was due to the inclusion of goodsamantha on the list this time. She has so many stories on the forums that it just wasn't convenient to list them all, so instead I ran a search for all threads started by each of the mentioned authors on the Sex Stories forum. Then I put a link to the search results page, along with any stories by that author specifically mentioned in this thread. Stories that were already on the list were grandfathered in, even if they weren't mentioned in this thread. I hope the new style isn't too confusing. 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09-09-2009, 01:59 AM	#462
Daddycums Porn Star Join Date: May 2009 Location: In the bushes outside your bedroom window. Posts: 1,943	goodsamantha: I just noticed that your sig doesn't actually point to your stories. It just points to the generic author's account page. An understandable mistake, since it does list your stories when you're logged in. But you might want to change it, since the current link only works for you. Since you're now officially a recommended author (you can thank donb9033, perhaps with the aforementioned "bookend" position), you can find the correct link right next to your name under Recommended Authors above. __________________ Read my CAW 14 Entry: A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to the Fertility Ritual. And many more erotic tales of Daddycums! For those who like their smut served hot with a side order of plot.

09-09-2009, 02:24 AM	#463
goodsamantha Porno Junky Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Twin Cities Posts: 457	thanks for the info! __________________ *Erotica by Samantha G.* Ah, got a few hours? I still need a kiss*GOODNIGHT

09-14-2009, 05:38 AM	#464
seeminglysatisfied Интеллектуальные крестьянских Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Where poppies and daisies grow Posts: 13,171	lubutt17, read the first chapter you posted as Invictus and I give my approval Excellent descriptions, definitely worth the time to read it all. Going to read the rest of the chapters very soon __________________ Мой цветок; AAlways in my heart If I had those golden dreams of my yesterdays, I would wrap you in the Heavens Til I’m dyin on the way.

09-18-2009, 06:16 PM	#466
jayjaydee Porn Star Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Scotland Posts: 1,755	Pissed Off!! Have i got it wrong, or does one just have to click on a 'positive' or 'negative' button in order to register liking or otherwise of a story. Ive put a story up, had about 2000 readings, but only 7 or so votes. What this does is strand the story on 70% on page 3 or 4 of the theme, where obviously it will receive less readings. Does the click of a button constitute too much effort on behalf of a reader. The writer has given of him/herself in sweat and sometimes tears; if not exactly in blood. Surely they deserve one click on a button. I have also invited comments; at this stage i'll even take abuse instead of constructive criticism. We are all striving to better ourselves. How can we do this without some feedback. Does anyone have any comments on these points (fingers crossed.) __________________ 'Better to remain silent and be thought a fool than to speak out and remove all doubt.'-- Abraham Lincoln. 'It's nice to be nice.'--Jayjaydee. Being tolerated is different to being accepted.

09-18-2009, 06:39 PM	#467
nikki1979 Porn Star Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,142	Sorry for the Typo's Hi everyone, After reading the above comments I guess that I need to say Sorry. I am not a great writer, probably not even a very good one, but I feel the need to, so I do. What I do is attempt to take a portion of my life and condence it down into something that allows you, the reader, to experiance part of my life. If you find my spelling or grammer more important than the overall story of my life, so sorry. Nikki

09-18-2009, 06:58 PM	#468
David58 Porn Star Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 2,042	Nikki1979 love your stories.Hot rearing about how cute young girl sell them selfs and work for pimps.Keep the stories coming

09-20-2009, 03:42 PM	#472
Ghost Writer Newcumer Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 4	Hello everyone I'm glad to see such a thread on the forum. This will definitely help people, such as myself, make better choices about what's worth reading and what isn't. I've read many authors on the list and I agree, they are top notch. I see someone was kind enough to suggest me for the list, and I greatly appreciate that, and I am pleased someone enjoyed the meager stories I've put up so far enough to suggest them for such a list. Thank you very much to all that have read them. I must say I agree with those rebutting the poster who admonished us for paying attention to "schooling," in other words grammar, spelling and syntax, and even style. Everyone making mistakes, true, but I refuse to read stories with passages such as this: O baby, u so hot, I want cum 4 u so bad. Give me ur pussy and suk my dik And to be honest, that's improved over some I've seen on the net, which is sad. If I can't read it or decipher it, I sure as hell can't enjoy it. I'm sure there are many others that feel the same. You can watch the best movie in the world, but if you can't understand what's being said (like its in a language from across the world from your native language, for example), then you really just can't enjoy it. That's especially true for writing. If you can't follow it, its just a bunch of squiggly lines on a page or screen with no meaning. If it has no meaning, you can't tell if its "hot" or just plain shit. More often than not, its just plain shit. So, without a doubt, I definitely concur and agree with the idea that grammar, spelling, syntax, style, etc are all important, just like content is important. Anyway, I've read quite a few stories on this site and have enjoyed a great number of them. Most of them are by authors that have already been mentioned in this thread. Thank you all, ladies and gentlemen, for such wonderful tales. I've greatly enjoyed reading all of them and hope to read more. Ironically, the author I came to recommend, now that I skim back through posts to check for who to thank specifically for my recommendation to this list, is the same one that recommended me. How's that for a happily weird coincidence? chuckles So, without further delay, first I thank Purple Chick for her generous and kind recommendation of my work to this list (I've got more projects in the works, by the way, just my schedule doesn't permit me to write as often as I'd like to at the moment). Secondly, I'd like to suggest Purple Chick for addition to this list. I've caught the first couple of chapters of her story, and they are frankly exceedingly good in my opinion. She's still presumably working on the rest of it, but what she's got up so far is well worth the read, I believe. I think anyone that reads them will enjoy her style and her rather brilliant characterization. Until next time, take it easy! I'm back off into the sordid land of hippie inspired web porn (yes, I run and design porn sites at the moment chuckles)

09-20-2009, 06:04 PM	#473
donb9033 Porn Star Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Somewhere over the mountain Posts: 2,585	I thoroughly agree with your comments with one exception: one of our favorite authors, in his first story posted, exhibited major failures in spelling, continuity, syntax, etc. I stuck with the story simply because it was very hot and the writing showed some promise. His next story showed much improvement and so did the next. Now that author has a collection of very hot, pretty well written stories worth reading. Sometimes when he gets very excited about one of his stories his spelling, etc. grows weak, but I think he knows that and is trying hard to correct that failure. Because I was patient and saw promise and because of some fairly kind comments about his weaknesses, his name has become one of those I routinely look for on the new stories listing. Some writers need pointing in the right direction and deserve our help and patience. Maybe? Don __________________ "The freedom and happiness of man...[are] the sole objects of all legitimate government." --Thomas Jefferson "Were we directed from Washington when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread." --Thomas Jefferson "The government is best which governs least." --Thomas Jefferson XNXXOIAATILORAL IS ALMOST ALL THAT IS LEFT or XNXXHODHORNY OLD DOG?

09-20-2009, 08:13 PM	#474
nate556 Porno Junky Join Date: Sep 2008 Age: 29 Posts: 449	I started off pretty bad at writing too. I find, telling the story from a first person perspective is much easier, since it allows me to put it easier in my own words, and i can tell the story subjectively through the characters eyes. I don't have to worry about trying to be objective with the story, as if i were a third person observer explaining what I was seeing. __________________ Foot in mouth and head up ass-hole Whatcha talkin' 'bout? Difficult to dance 'round this one 'til you pull it out.

09-21-2009, 01:53 AM	#475
donb9033 Porn Star Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Somewhere over the mountain Posts: 2,585	Another new writer to the stories site. http://stories.xnxx.com/profile179391/Qlick Only one so far, but it's a good story. I'm keeping an eye out for other stories by Qlick and strongly recommend him to all. Check him out. __________________ "The freedom and happiness of man...[are] the sole objects of all legitimate government." --Thomas Jefferson "Were we directed from Washington when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread." --Thomas Jefferson "The government is best which governs least." --Thomas Jefferson XNXXOIAATILORAL IS ALMOST ALL THAT IS LEFT or XNXXHODHORNY OLD DOG?

09-22-2009, 06:04 AM	#478
Ghost Writer Newcumer Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 4	Hello again everyone I have to apologize if my comments seemed too barbed or anything like that. They weren't intended to be. I more than understand someone starting off "slow" in regards to "good writing" and making strides towards improvement. Everyone has room for improvement, especially me. I only meant to say there's a difference between a "slow starter," for want of a better way to put it, and someone just grinding out story after story without any attempt at improving their craft and skill, or anything of that nature. I'm an easy going kind of guy, and if something shows potential and promise, even if that promise or potential is well hidden, I'm more than willing to give it a shot, and try the next one as well. When it comes to stuff like that, I, like Daddycums, am a bit of a perfectionist, but I do try very hard not to be overly critical. Everyone has different tastes, however, and this pertains as much to technical finesse and style as it does to content and delivery. I'm not attempting to bad mouth anyone or make anyone feel bad or down about anything they've written, or their "quality as a writer," or any of that sort of thing. I'm sorry if it seemed that way. I meant it more in the vein of constructive criticism than anything else, and it was a broad and general statement, not aimed at anyone specifically, and certainly not aimed at anyone I've seen that's posted in this thread. It was probably more an expression of opinion and taste than anything else, to be honest. So, again, I reiterate, I meant no hard feelings or offense by anything I said. I meant no part of it to be taken as a slap against anyone. And again, I'd like to recommend Purple Chick for addition to your list (in case I forgot to my last post). Her profile can be found at the site's root, and her profile number is profile284861 and hopefully she'll be adding to it soon. I've really enjoyed what she's done so far. Thanks everyone and take care.

09-22-2009, 07:12 AM	#479
nate556 Porno Junky Join Date: Sep 2008 Age: 29 Posts: 449	I would also like to add. Research is important, especially if you are writing about a position or something you havn't done first hand. I find myself even researching a few things I have done before. Finding your little grove as a writer can be difficult. A friend once told me that writing out stories on the internet is a lot like writing in college. It's all about critique and review. Review review review. It's really easy to get offended when someone points something out and goes, "That's dumb." But I find that a perfect opportunity to try and figure out what's wrong with it. Sometimes, it even helps to ask the person, 'what's wrong with it ?' often, the cure could simply be your wording. I try to think of many different ways to word something before typing out a description, and I just sort of file it away in the back of my head in case I change my mind or someone thinks what i chose looks silly. I try not to be overly-wordy in my descriptions, plus, I personally have a problem with details, which I suppose is why I seem to prefer 1st person writing. I can just type, "I looked out the window and it was raining outside." I don't have to try and explain the shade of gray the sky is, or how big the drops of water are. I also like vague descriptions of some things, like my characters. I tend to leave their descriptions fairly vague and allow the imaginations of my readers to fill in the blanks with what they want. It's tricky, because you can be too vague, or your readers may not have such vivid and creative imaginations to fill in the blanks. One problem I noticed I have personally, is when it comes to character names. I find myself not using their names until they either introduce themselves, or someone else calls them by names. So, I end up typing things like "The old man did this" and "the old man did that"... a lot. I don't know where I picked the habbit up, but I do it in so many of my stories without even thinking, and when I go back and read it sometimes I'll be like, "Holy shit, I didn't even say what the old man's name was!" which, of course since the old man is important to the plot, i need to mention his name! Especially if there are a lot of old mans in the story. Honestly, I've written a lot of stories before, but this board is the first one that I've actually written them for an audeince. I kind of like it this way, since people can hop on right away and tell me "That's good, I like it" or "ohh man, that sucks!" right away, and I can find ways to adjust my stories. Even if it's simply adding an extra line between paragraphs. So.. yeah. Even if your stories aren't on the same level as, say, Stephen King or (insert name of famous author here), keep at it. If it's something you want to do, and enjoy... do it. I've always had a wild imagination, and I can picture things very vividly in my head, so creating stories is something I love to do. I have entire worlds and lives with deep meaningful stories in my head. Learning how to tell those stories however, can be quite difficult. Finding the right words can be hard, but with practice and repetition, it'll come easier, and you'll find the way to get your stories told the best and easiest way for you. Nat. __________________ Foot in mouth and head up ass-hole Whatcha talkin' 'bout? Difficult to dance 'round this one 'til you pull it out.

09-22-2009, 07:17 AM	#480
ThunderedEchoes Screaming Infidelities Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: The Distant Stars Posts: 5,985	Research != experience. Experience >>>> research. __________________ My Stories: Incest: Perverted Dad(8 Chapters) Rape: Rachael(Completed, 2 Chapters) \|\| Lust: Forbidden (Completed,4 Chapters) RECOMMENDED WRITER

09-22-2009, 07:32 AM	#481
nate556 Porno Junky Join Date: Sep 2008 Age: 29 Posts: 449	They do go hand in hand, no argument there. Just wanted to say ThunderedEchos, it was your Perverted Dad stories that inspired me to even start posting here. I enjoyed them a lot, and I thought, 'I wonder if I can create a good story that'll make people cream their jeans like that ?' You just really inspired me to flex my brain muscles a little more to get the stories out of my head... and for that, you have my thanks. __________________ Foot in mouth and head up ass-hole Whatcha talkin' 'bout? Difficult to dance 'round this one 'til you pull it out.

09-22-2009, 08:04 PM	#485
donb9033 Porn Star Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Somewhere over the mountain Posts: 2,585	Sammie, you always leave me with a smile on my face. There's another comma for you. Love you and love your avatar. Don __________________ "The freedom and happiness of man...[are] the sole objects of all legitimate government." --Thomas Jefferson "Were we directed from Washington when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread." --Thomas Jefferson "The government is best which governs least." --Thomas Jefferson XNXXOIAATILORAL IS ALMOST ALL THAT IS LEFT or XNXXHODHORNY OLD DOG?

09-24-2009, 07:22 PM	#488
donb9033 Porn Star Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Somewhere over the mountain Posts: 2,585	Another recommendation: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile326913/JackEds. The only one of his stories that I've read is the latest 'Stickin It' and really enjoyed it. Pretty well written and only one spelling error! As a warning, there's some gay in his stories, but what the hell? __________________ "The freedom and happiness of man...[are] the sole objects of all legitimate government." --Thomas Jefferson "Were we directed from Washington when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread." --Thomas Jefferson "The government is best which governs least." --Thomas Jefferson XNXXOIAATILORAL IS ALMOST ALL THAT IS LEFT or XNXXHODHORNY OLD DOG?

09-24-2009, 07:36 PM	#489
anon y mouse The Mouse that Roars Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: in a house Posts: 4,534	It is good to get feedback good or bad and if i never make the top list I have no issues I write anyway. I have posted some rubbish and I know it I but I try and learn. As well as rating I wish more people would comment. __________________ http://stories.xnxx.com/profile324744/ If you ask me for sex the answer is NO If you don't ask me I am dissapointed. No I said I'm Bi-sexual not a bicycle Sometimes I think "Why is that Frisbee getting bigger?" Then it hits me......

09-24-2009, 08:12 PM	#490
donb9033 Porn Star Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Somewhere over the mountain Posts: 2,585	Basically the same comment JackEds had on his thread. I'm trying to read something from everyone, but find myself falling back on my favorite authors. I will try. Don't lose the faith. __________________ "The freedom and happiness of man...[are] the sole objects of all legitimate government." --Thomas Jefferson "Were we directed from Washington when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread." --Thomas Jefferson "The government is best which governs least." --Thomas Jefferson XNXXOIAATILORAL IS ALMOST ALL THAT IS LEFT or XNXXHODHORNY OLD DOG?

09-28-2009, 09:15 PM	#491
donb9033 Porn Star Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Somewhere over the mountain Posts: 2,585	I've been reading some stories by anon y mouse http://stories.xnxx.com/profile324744/ and really like a lot of them. Also some great threads on the forum. Check her out. __________________ "The freedom and happiness of man...[are] the sole objects of all legitimate government." --Thomas Jefferson "Were we directed from Washington when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread." --Thomas Jefferson "The government is best which governs least." --Thomas Jefferson XNXXOIAATILORAL IS ALMOST ALL THAT IS LEFT or XNXXHODHORNY OLD DOG?

09-28-2009, 09:54 PM	#493
donb9033 Porn Star Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Somewhere over the mountain Posts: 2,585	Sammie, you have, in the immortal words of Clint, made my day. I will save that picture for future reference and hope I can do that again. Thanks, doll. By the way, what prompted that? My recommendation of anon y mouse? If so, I'll see if I can find some more hot ones to recommend. Love you. __________________ "The freedom and happiness of man...[are] the sole objects of all legitimate government." --Thomas Jefferson "Were we directed from Washington when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread." --Thomas Jefferson "The government is best which governs least." --Thomas Jefferson XNXXOIAATILORAL IS ALMOST ALL THAT IS LEFT or XNXXHODHORNY OLD DOG? Last edited by donb9033; 09-28-2009 at 09:56 PM.

09-29-2009, 05:52 PM	#496
subkittehslut Porno Junky Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: southern us Posts: 332	Hopefully I'm not repeating anyone elses recommendations, but if you haven't read zenmackie's work... http://stories.xnxx.com/story/19751/...llowed%2C_Pt.1 you're REALLY missing out. That's the first part, I think he has 7 up and is validating part 8. I also would appreciate any comments on my own stories; they are not perfect, and I write them on my sidekick usually so I have no spellcheck. That's the only way I can keep them private in my house... but I do the best I can to proofread. =D __________________ Music = Life :: Maynard = God. "We are all brothers under the skin... and I, for one, would be willing to skin humanity to prove it." ~Ayn Rand Sapiosexual: (adj) a form of sexual orientation characterized by a strong attraction to intelligence in others, often regardless of gender and/or conventional attractiveness. ~Verified XNXX Girl~ My Stories http://stories.xnxx.com/profile286610/ Last edited by subkittehslut; 09-29-2009 at 05:55 PM.

09-30-2009, 04:25 AM	#498
donb9033 Porn Star Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Somewhere over the mountain Posts: 2,585	DC, I'm glad you are going to check out the stories by subkittehslut - I just can't get into pain, forced sex, and stuff. Sorry, little kitty, but that's the way I am. More of an old romantic who does not believe in forcing a woman to do my bidding (or whatever). If you ever get into softer, more loving stories, please let me know. __________________ "The freedom and happiness of man...[are] the sole objects of all legitimate government." --Thomas Jefferson "Were we directed from Washington when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread." --Thomas Jefferson "The government is best which governs least." --Thomas Jefferson XNXXOIAATILORAL IS ALMOST ALL THAT IS LEFT or XNXXHODHORNY OLD DOG?

09-30-2009, 04:37 AM	#500
dormireclan Porn Surfer Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 10	I like I like the story.

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