Recommended writers on XNXX - Page 13

Daddycums · 11-03-2009, 01:55 PM

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Originally Posted by ejls

Interesting thought - although I really can't see you doing it. Sex isn't about the science, it's about pleasure and emotion. Well, at least the way I see it. Don't do it DC. We need your descriptive scenes.

Don't worry; if I did it, it wouldn't mean I would stop writing. This would just be for fun. I agree with you that emotions are a big part of what makes sex so great, to engage in and to read/write about. Besides, the random sex scene generator wouldn't read like a technical manual; it would be more descriptive, and perhaps even a little emotional, though I fear it would probably fall short of what I intend.

Anyway, I have far more important things to occupy my attention right now. I'm working on half a dozen different stories, but none of them is near completion yet. Since I haven't posted a new story in a couple of months, I figure it's high time I finished something.

BiStander · 11-03-2009, 03:07 PM

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Originally Posted by Daddycums

Since I haven't posted a new story in a couple of months, I figure it's high time I finished something.

The best logic you have used in this thread

Sorry, I couldn't resist.
Your idea is good, but it would be old too quickly. "He shoved it in her tight hole." Even if you came up with fifty ways to say that and gave options for emotion so the right one came out, after a while it would be the same boring, "He shoved it in her tight hole."
Get to work on a story and leave these hard technical things to the geeks who still can't make my grammar checker find all my mistakes!!

Daddycums · 11-03-2009, 06:53 PM

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Originally Posted by BiStander

The best logic you have used in this thread

Sorry, I couldn't resist.
Your idea is good, but it would be old too quickly. "He shoved it in her tight hole." Even if you came up with fifty ways to say that and gave options for emotion so the right one came out, after a while it would be the same boring, "He shoved it in her tight hole."
Get to work on a story and leave these hard technical things to the geeks who still can't make my grammar checker find all my mistakes!!

Point taken. I'm not abandoning the idea, but I do need to get a few more stories finished first.

lesley_tara · 11-04-2009, 12:46 AM

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Originally Posted by Daddycums

Since I haven't posted a new story in a couple of months, I figure it's high time I finished something.

I’m glad I’m not the only one to have been in this position - especially as it’s not listed in my Kama Sutra as being any fun!

I just wanted to let you good folks know that it’s no longer ‘All Quiet on the Lezzie Front’ (I’ve got to resist these movie-title puns

). After several frustrating months of work overload and not being able to finish any stories,

there is a new batch going through validation now. Over the next few days, there should appear:

Chapter 2 in ‘The Cheerleader’ series – no coercion in this instalment
‘The Backing Singers’ – threesome in a recording studio
‘Ashley & Christina’ – adventures on buses and bikes
‘New Girl at School’ – I think that one speaks for itself!!
‘The Stable Girls’ – riding each other at the horse stables

and, not too long after, for those of you who like a story with a lot of character build-up and a dash of romance, a long-ish story called ‘The Majorettes’ that I’m working on right now (and getting pretty horny and wet about too!) – sweet teen babes in a marching pipe-and-drum band.

Anyhow, my thanks to everyone who has liked and been supportive about my previous stories, apologies for the wait, and I sincerely hope y’all enjoy these!

luv from Lesley

BiStander · 11-04-2009, 01:01 AM

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Originally Posted by lesley_tara

Chapter 2 in ‘The Cheerleader’ series – no coercion in this instalment
‘The Backing Singers’ – threesome in a recording studio
‘Ashley & Christina’ – adventures on buses and bikes
‘New Girl at School’ – I think that one speaks for itself!!
‘The Stable Girls’ – riding each other at the horse stables

luv from Lesley

That's an impressive list of accomplishments!
I'll be looking forward to them.

donb9033 · 11-04-2009, 01:17 AM

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Originally Posted by BiStander

That's an impressive list of accomplishments!
I'll be looking forward to them.

Me, too. Welcome back to the important work, Lesley.

lesley_tara · 11-04-2009, 01:53 AM

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Originally Posted by Daddycums

Since I haven't posted a new story in a couple of months, I figure it's high time I finished something.

This is a supplement to the post I made a little while ago (called 'the Return of the Lesi' - ha,ha

) - but which seems to have disappeared!!!

Anyway, the first two of the new stories have literally just been validated, so for those who like my stuff, please take a look!

luv from Lesley

(PS I don't mean to be a pest, it's just so nice to be back in the writing groove, stories flowing ... juices flowing

... getting stuff FINISHED, without which what's the point!! Thanks for indulging me, LT

)

donb9033 · 11-04-2009, 02:20 AM

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Originally Posted by lesley_tara

This is a supplement to the post I made a little while ago (called 'the Return of the Lesi' - ha,ha

) - but which seems to have disappeared!!!

Anyway, the first two of the new stories have literally just been validated, so for those who like my stuff, please take a look!

luv from Lesley

(PS I don't mean to be a pest, it's just so nice to be back in the writing groove, stories flowing ... juices flowing

... getting stuff FINISHED, without which what's the point!! Thanks for indulging me, LT

)

Reading them now. Thanks.

Daddycums · 11-04-2009, 02:29 AM

Daddycums · 11-04-2009, 02:31 AM

And to get back to the previous discussion:

Yay! New stories from Lesley!

donb9033 · 11-04-2009, 04:40 AM

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Originally Posted by lesley_tara

This is a supplement to the post I made a little while ago (called 'the Return of the Lesi' - ha,ha

) - but which seems to have disappeared!!!

Anyway, the first two of the new stories have literally just been validated, so for those who like my stuff, please take a look!

luv from Lesley

(PS I don't mean to be a pest, it's just so nice to be back in the writing groove, stories flowing ... juices flowing

... getting stuff FINISHED, without which what's the point!! Thanks for indulging me, LT

)

Very, very nice stories. Chapter 2 of the Cheerleaders is, in my opinion, much nicer than chapter 1. As you know, I don't care for the nasty, rough side. Loved the Backer Singers story. Even though you have been silent for far too long, you have not lost your touch. Thanks. Don

donb9033 · 11-04-2009, 04:42 AM

Thanks, DC, for your continuing efforts in updating the list. Your the man.

ejls · 11-04-2009, 10:06 AM

I would like to thank donb9033, for his recommedations and those of everyone else. I have used DC's list to find some great stories. You are all so talented.

donb9033 · 11-04-2009, 04:32 PM

Thanks, Ellen. You have made my day.

pineapplelovers69 · 11-04-2009, 11:03 PM

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Originally Posted by donb9033

Just got a recommendation from ejls that I read The Rabbit Died - ch.1 by http://stories.xnxx.com/profile308651/pineapplelovers69. For all of us 'mature' readers on this site, my recommendation is the strongest possible. The first part of it is funny as hell (if you have that kind of sense of humor) then it turns into a lovely romance. Check it out. I will be on the lookout for stories from this couple from now on. Thanks Ellen.

Thank you very much for your vote of confidence. We were very surprised to see our names appear on a list that has some of the most talented writers around, including the owner of the list, Daddycums, and our friend, ejls.

We submitted our second chapter this morning, and hope to finish the story in the third chapter. We hope you enjoy this one, too. This has been a fun exercise, but also exhausting.

donb9033 · 11-04-2009, 11:56 PM

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Originally Posted by pineapplelovers69

Thank you very much for your vote of confidence. We were very surprised to see our names appear on a list that has some of the most talented writers around, including the owner of the list, Daddycums, and our friend, ejls.

We submitted our second chapter this morning, and hope to finish the story in the third chapter. We hope you enjoy this one, too. This has been a fun exercise, but also exhausting.

Like I said, I just appreciate Ellen recommending you to me. I love stories like that and will continue to watch for your name. I hope you don't stop writing just because your story is finished - you are too good to lose. Thanks. Don

lesley_tara · 11-05-2009, 12:14 AM

I've just finished the final read-through of 'The Stable Girls', and sent it in for validation. That's the last of the current batch of five - two were posted yesterday, and the others should appear each about a day apart.

A big thank you to everybody who responded so nicely to my posts here, and to the two new stories. It is a big encouragement to keep writing and to try and raise one's own bar a little higher each time.

It's sometimes been a while between when I can get time to catch up with the posts, and I just wanted to add a comment on something said in passing a while back:

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Originally Posted by Daddycums

pet peeve: describing a woman's chest by using her bra size

One of the good things is that we all have and like different styles, and I agree with DC that bra size is often used crudely as a substitute for more imaginative description.

But - speaking as someone who wears one

- I find it really useful as part of a description, because it brings to my mind exactly what we're talking about here, not just in breast volume but in body size and shape as well. For that reason, I've actually been using it more and more in my newer stories.

Personally, one reason I like it is that it adds precision to a description, and so for me it gives greater conviction and sense of reality. In that way, it is similar to giving a specific height ("five feet seven inches") rather than a vaguer term ("medium height").

Of course, giving cup size on its own is meaningless, and a lot of stories do that. Guys writing stories generally don't understand how bra sizing works - but then, a lot of women don't either, which results in surveys constantly finding that something amazing like three-quarters of us are wearing the wrong fitting!

Cup size is not a constant - it changes with the band size (this is the figure obtained from measuring around the body just below the breasts). The volume of a particular letter cup-size gets bigger with each step up in the band size: so 32C is not the same volume as 30C, but is bigger - to obtain the same volume, you would go down a cup size, to 32B.

In other words, these all have the SAME volume:

28E = 30D = 32C = 34B = 36A

That's why descriptions like 36D are not just big, they're VAST!

Here endeth the tutorial from Dr Lesley, with sincere apologies to the many of you (male and female) who already knew all this.

sharonb · 11-05-2009, 12:17 AM

There are alot of stories to read and catch up on but i do enjoy a well written piece of work

el_hanes · 11-05-2009, 12:45 AM

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Originally Posted by lesley_tara

But - speaking as someone who wears one

- I find it really useful as part of a description, because it brings to my mind exactly what we're talking about here, not just in breast volume but in body size and shape as well. For that reason, I've actually been using it more and more in my newer stories.

The thing with this is that I'd guess that the majority of the people reading these stories don't know much about bra sizes, including me. So to use this a measurement and leave it at that is like introducing a foreign word to describe a key aspect of someone, and just assuming that everybody knows what you mean.

I don't mind the size being used, just as long as it is in conjunction with a reference that I can understand. It's like telling someone almost anywhere in the world, outside of the US, to give you a quart of water. They don't know what a quart is. You have to convert it into something that they can understand. And by using the two references in conjunction, you actually teach people a little bit.

donb9033 · 11-05-2009, 12:47 AM

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Originally Posted by lesley_tara

Here endeth the tutorial from Dr Lesley, with sincere apologies to the many of you (male and female) who already knew all this.

Lesley, in spite of the fact that, like most of my gender, I am enthralled by a lovely chest, that was almost more information than I could digest. Thanks for it anyway, but I'll just continue filling a bra in my mind. Thank God for the most erotic of the sex organs. Love you and love your writing. Don.

sharonb · 11-05-2009, 12:50 AM

I think most women know there bra sizes .its just the guys that dont

donb9033 · 11-05-2009, 01:15 AM

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Originally Posted by sharonb

I think most women know there bra sizes .its just the guys that dont

Us guys don't have to because we don't need to buy one. All we need to do is appreciate a well filled one. Sorry if I sound sexist, but this is a sex site. Welcome to our thread.

BiStander · 11-05-2009, 05:14 AM

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Originally Posted by lesley_tara

In other words, these all have the SAME volume:

28E = 30D = 32C = 34B = 36A

That's why descriptions like 36D are not just big, they're VAST!

Lesley,

Thank you so much! If you have read any of my stories you will quickly realize I don't mention bra size. As a matter of fact, Joe had to buy a bra for his Halloween costume, and he said something like, I don't know, it had some E's on it and fit around my waist
Beyond that I know I like D's. Thanks to you, I have a new way to describe the women with giant, massive, huge, bigger than the one who is massive.
Unfortunately, I am still confused. So, can I consult with you if I need a reference?
Great story about the singer. I so enjoy reading aboutwomen doing it when it is written by a woman.
Thanks

Daddycums · 11-05-2009, 02:53 PM

I had no idea I'd get such a large response to that comment about bra sizes.

I'm not completely opposed to mentioning bra sizes in a story, if it's done well. It just sometimes seems too technical. It can certainly enhance a description, but too many authors just mention the number and leave it at that, as if that's supposed to tell me everything I need to know.

Of course, I'm not a big fan of mentioning exact height or weight, either. Sure it's precise, but you're not being judged on precision. Instead of mentioning an exact weight, I'd prefer if the women are described as petite, delicate, slender, buxom, Amazonian, statuesque, or voluptuous. 115 pounds doesn't tell me anything, because more important than the number is how it's distributed.

Basically, if it fits the situation, I say go ahead and use it. Two guys sitting in a bar watching the women who walk by and guessing their bra sizes is just fine, because sometimes men do that. A teenage girl standing in front of a mirror and wishing she was a little bigger in the chest and mentioning her A cups in the process is just fine. But a man sitting in a board meeting when in walks the 36E female vice president just makes me groan. How the hell does he know she's 36E?

That's another one of my pet peeves, by the way. Why do the women in these stories all seem to have such gigantic chests? That big is fine on Jessica Rabbit, but on a real woman, I would think that that steps way over the line of the ideal size.

BiStander · 11-05-2009, 08:49 PM

Is the story site messed up for everyone?

SpaceMountain · 11-05-2009, 08:53 PM

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Originally Posted by BiStander

Is the story site messed up for everyone?

It is for me.

amanuensis · 11-05-2009, 09:14 PM

Same here

Says this: "SQL Problem (Main Db)"

donb9033 · 11-05-2009, 10:00 PM

Yeah, me, too.

amanuensis · 11-05-2009, 10:13 PM

it is back up and working now

donb9033 · 11-05-2009, 10:59 PM

Sort of but pretty slow and clunky.

LordExia · 11-06-2009, 05:45 AM

this threads a good idea. hi i'm new. i just submitted a story, but its waiting for validation, how long does it actually take to be online? when it is could you go take a look?

thanks

seeminglysatisfied · 11-06-2009, 05:48 AM

anywhere from 3 days to a week at maximum

welcome to the site

lesley_tara · 11-07-2009, 02:41 AM

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Originally Posted by LordExia

this threads a good idea. hi i'm new. i just submitted a story, but its waiting for validation, how long does it actually take to be online? when it is could you go take a look?

thanks

They're coming through quite quickly just at the moment

- I put 2 stories in on Sunday night, and one each on Monday, Tuesday and Wednesday - they all appeared about 48 hours later.

Unfortunately, it's been a bit too quick in the case of the last one ... see my next post!

Lesley

lesley_tara · 11-07-2009, 02:52 AM

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Originally Posted by lesley_tara

Unfortunately, it's been a bit too quick in the case of the last one ... see my next post!

Lesley

Hi everybody,

This is a real nuisance

- Murphy's Law strikes again!!

Although I read every story over at least half-a-dozen times before putting it in for validation, I guess a gremlin was bound to get in sometime. Just after submitting the last story of my recent batch of five - "The Stable Girls" - I noticed a small but really ANNOYING continuity error.

To try and stop it going on the site, I sent a PM to the moderator asking him NOT to validate this version, and I submitted a corrected version (which should appear soon, because it was only a couple of hours behind).

Unfortunately, it seems the message wasn't seen in time.

Please don't bother recording votes on the present wrong version because (I very much hope) it is going to be deleted.

kicking myself in the butt - apologies from Lesley

PS if you're curious as to what the goof in the story was, when it was first drafted the dildo-substitute that Molly reaches for was going to be a trowel; I then realised that a brush handle would be much better and more believable, so I changed it ... BUT I forget to do so where it turns up again a little further on, so the brush turns into as trowel. Like I said, small but irritating!

BiStander · 11-07-2009, 03:10 AM

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Originally Posted by lesley_tara

Hi everybody,

This is a real nuisance

- Murphy's Law strikes again!!

Although I read every story over at least half-a-dozen times before putting it in for validation, I guess a gremlin was bound to get in sometime. Just after submitting the last story of my recent batch of five - "The Stable Girls" - I noticed a small but really ANNOYING continuity error.

To try and stop it going on the site, I sent a PM to the moderator asking him NOT to validate this version, and I submitted a corrected version (which should appear soon, because it was only a couple of hours behind).

Unfortunately, it seems the message wasn't seen in time.

Please don't bother recording votes on the present wrong version because (I very much hope) it is going to be deleted.

kicking myself in the butt - apologies from Lesley

PS if you're curious as to what the goof in the story was, when it was first drafted the dildo-substitute that Molly reaches for was going to be a trowel; I then realised that a brush handle would be much better and more believable, so I changed it ... BUT I forget to do so where it turns up again a little further on, so the brush turns into as trowel. Like I said, small but irritating!

I feel your pain! Oh, I emailed him, and PM'd him and begged him, but my wrong version went up. I tried to get it deleted before the revised version came on line. No, not happening. When I first got here I could get something done by the admin, but those days are gone.
I saw your comment, but it's after everyone reads the story. You might try putting a comment on other stories, and maybe you can head a few off. I tried that too, but still got all the negative comments about the mistake I clearly explain.
I'm currently trying to get some of my old stories deleted.

donb9033 · 11-07-2009, 03:14 AM

Warning read and accepted. Will wait for the corrected version.

lesley_tara · 11-07-2009, 03:58 AM

Looking back, I didn’t mean to go on quite so much about bra sizes – it comes from doing these posts late at night, one gets carried away sometimes!

But I have been interested in the comments in response, which make some very relevant points. In particular, I agree with el_hanes that the measurement doesn’t communicate as much to male readers (and I assume the majority of readers here are male), and with DC that it’s not enough as a description on its own and an adjectival description permits much more subtlety and variety.

I think I’ll be a little more cautious about how I use this in future stories. However, one particular way bra size can be helpful is when it is comparative – rather than saying that Jane’s figure is a bit bigger, or fuller, etc., than Mary’s, if you put that Jane is a 32D to Mary’s 30C, it conveys a ratio or relationship between the two that can be appreciated, whether the reader is male or female.

Anyway, just my tuppeny-worth.

luv to all, Lesley

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Originally Posted by donb9033

Sort of but pretty slow and clunky.

I was glad to see people posting that - at first, I thought it was something wrong with my computer or internet connection, so slow and frustrating

LordExia · 11-07-2009, 09:13 AM

it always happens. your brain always finds new ways to improve the submitted one, once you're done. go read mine please! Unfathomable Fantasies. Should be online soon.^^

amanuensis · 11-07-2009, 06:11 PM

I'd like to recommend Exakta66
http://stories.xnxx.com/profile337746/Exakta66

Especially this:
Beginner's Meeting, A Play (Third Stab At Humor)
http://stories.xnxx.com/story/20390/...ab_At_Humor%29

Young Lust, First Lust, Sweet Devotion
http://stories.xnxx.com/story/20555/...Sweet_Devotion.

While not your average run of the mill "wham bam thank you ma'am", these stories do deserve to be read especially. They are very unique and worth the few minutes or so that it takes to read them.

donb9033 · 11-07-2009, 07:25 PM

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Originally Posted by amanuensis

I'd like to recommend Exakta66
http://stories.xnxx.com/profile337746/Exakta66

Especially this:
Beginner's Meeting, A Play (Third Stab At Humor)
http://stories.xnxx.com/story/20390/...ab_At_Humor%29

Young Lust, First Lust, Sweet Devotion
http://stories.xnxx.com/story/20555/...Sweet_Devotion.

While not your average run of the mill "wham bam thank you ma'am", these stories do deserve to be read especially. They are very unique and worth the few minutes or so that it takes to read them.

Just finished the two you especially recommended and I must agree with you. The Beginner's Meeting cracked me up and Young Lust, First Lust, Sweet Devotion was very, very well written and poignantly romantic. Reminds me a lot of 'back in the day'. Thanks for recommending this author and I intend reading some of his other stories soon. Thanks.

LordExia · 11-08-2009, 02:18 AM

the beginning was a laugh haha. please read my story its up already! =) its my first one. i cant post a link yet, its under the fantasy section. Unfathomable fantasies. hope you'd leave some critical advice too. ^^

lesley_tara · 11-08-2009, 02:21 AM

Just to say that the corrected version of my "The Stable Girls" story is now on-line.

I was interested to see BiStander's comments on similar problems, because my PMs and emails to the moderators seem to have gone into a black hole, with the result that we now have BOTH versions of the story on the site!!

I hope the old gets removed - but in case it doesn't, here's an idea. I now it seems odd to ask this, but could a few kind folk please give the old one negative votes, so that it sinks from view? You'll know which one it is because it has my warning comments at the end. Just a thought, anway.

Meantime, back to writing ... got a story called "The Majorettes", about teen girls in a marching band, that's just hot and bubbling away

...

luv to all (but not to sundry - there's definitely no sundries on THIS thread!),

Lesley

LordExia · 11-08-2009, 03:42 AM

cant find your story les. link? go read mine too!

http://stories.xnxx.com/story/20864/...i_%28Part_1%29

donb9033 · 11-08-2009, 03:59 AM

Just read a story by Lonelyandlost; http://stories.xnxx.com/profile331272/Lonelyandlost that I think some of you might like. Only the one story, but I have hopes for more. Only 1 grammatical error and 4 spelling errors, but very, very hot and well written.

candylicker25 · 11-09-2009, 03:20 AM

I enjoy stories by fbailey da most. Neva disappoints me...

BiStander · 11-09-2009, 05:46 PM

This might come off as shameless self promotion, but being most who visit this thread already know my stories, I'll take my chances.
This is normally where I complain about the stupid comments, but in this case I was so impressed with the thought and time put into the commentary, I thought a praise was due:

nineball
2009-11-09 12:37:12

I love your story. You are a truly gifted writer. You manage to evoke the chaotic delirium of hormone-charged adolescent love/lust just perfectly. Your pacing is masterful; enough detail to allow the reader to care about every character and relationship, and savor every moment of every hot encounter. ONE SMALL PIECE OF HOPEFULLY CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM: How about an occasional reset? This has become a novella spread out over a few months reading time; hard to hold on to earlier details and intrigue. Not much time for re-reading earlier stories in most peoples lives, so maybe here and there you could spend a paragraph on relevant backstory. If you ever go back and edit a final draft of the whole saga, this would be a sublime improvement to an already tremendous work of erotic art.

I'd welcome nineball's comments on any of my stories! I agree with his suggestion.

Daddycums · 11-09-2009, 06:35 PM

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Originally Posted by BiStander

This might come off as shameless self promotion, but being most who visit this thread already know my stories, I'll take my chances.
This is normally where I complain about the stupid comments, but in this case I was so impressed with the thought and time put into the commentary, I thought a praise was due:

nineball
2009-11-09 12:37:12

I love your story. You are a truly gifted writer. You manage to evoke the chaotic delirium of hormone-charged adolescent love/lust just perfectly. Your pacing is masterful; enough detail to allow the reader to care about every character and relationship, and savor every moment of every hot encounter. ONE SMALL PIECE OF HOPEFULLY CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM: How about an occasional reset? This has become a novella spread out over a few months reading time; hard to hold on to earlier details and intrigue. Not much time for re-reading earlier stories in most peoples lives, so maybe here and there you could spend a paragraph on relevant backstory. If you ever go back and edit a final draft of the whole saga, this would be a sublime improvement to an already tremendous work of erotic art.

I'd welcome nineball's comments on any of my stories! I agree with his suggestion.

Send him my way! I wouldn't mind a few comments on my stories like that.

Just kidding. (mostly)

By the way, we're getting close to a new page (this thread is moving fast!) so everyone get in your last-minute recommendations now before the page turns over and I post a new list.

JackassTales · 11-09-2009, 09:25 PM

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Originally Posted by Daddycums

By the way, we're getting close to a new page (this thread is moving fast!) so everyone get in your last-minute recommendations now before the page turns over and I post a new list.

This is not a recommendation; instead, it's sort of a curious observation. In looking over this thread and the recommended authors list, I saw no mention of a writer named THE GREEK... YET, for the past 3+ WEEKS, his story about his daughter's friend has dominated the ratings. And, unbelievably perhaps, the story has garnered 250,000 hits in this short time span. Yeah, I guess it could be the 'real-deal', but I'm just curious.

Here is a recommendation; Readers, if you search Google for Daddycum...you will find his personal website. It's fun, it's informative, and it's very-well done!!! Congrats, DC

LordExia · 11-09-2009, 09:32 PM

Daddycums is good, but so underated. DC did you insult anyone around here?

BiStander · 11-09-2009, 09:41 PM

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Originally Posted by JackassTales

This is not a recommendation; instead, it's sort of a curious observation. In looking over this thread and the recommended authors list, I saw no mention of a writer named THE GREEK... YET, for the past 3+ WEEKS, his story about his daughter's friend has dominated the ratings. And, unbelievably perhaps, the story has garnered 250,000 hits in this short time span. Yeah, I guess it could be the 'real-deal', but I'm just curious.

Here is a recommendation; Readers, if you search Google for Daddycum...you will find his personal website. It's fun, it's informative, and it's very-well done!!! Congrats, DC

Did you read that story? It's amazing what staying on page one does for your read count.

11-04-2009, 02:29 AM	#609
Daddycums Porn Star Join Date: May 2009 Location: In the bushes outside your bedroom window. Posts: 1,946	The List The last page sure went fast. Here's the latest list. Disclaimer: I just compiled this from the posts on this thread, so if you're on it, I'm not the one you should thank. Most of these recommendations are from someone else. Recommended Authors anon y mouse: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile324744/anon+y+mouse BiStander: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile299316/BiStander Britney: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile81282/Britney brokenwing: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile271661/brokenwing Cha Cha: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile201233/Cha+Cha Chris fantasizer: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile172892/Chris+fantasizer Chagrin: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile3879/Chagrin Daddycums: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile306065/Daddycums doz: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile10624/doz ejls: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile229479/ejls el hanes: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile63204/el_hanes fantasyra: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile130735/fantasyra fbailey: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile67590/fbailey firstimewonder: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile52669/firstimewonder George in Cincy: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile42611/George+in+Cincy Ghost Writer: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile141170/Ghost+Writer ghostwriter59: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile284545/ghostwriter59 goodsamantha: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile319086/goodsamantha Imp Again: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile233487/Imp+Again invictus: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile181905/invictus iwthswy69: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile308733/iwthswy69 JackassTales: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile81823/JackassTales JackEds: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile326913/JackEds jayjaydee: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile116628/jayjaydee jl317: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile260651/jl317 jmiller: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile9776/jmiller Kathy: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile602/Kathy Kimiko: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile3491/Kimiko Kountrygal: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile105376/Kountrygal lesley tara: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile298027/lesley_tara lollylover: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile117120/lollylover lubutt17: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile171528/lubutt17 Luvbroker: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile323571/Luvbroker Magpie Amy: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile1735/Magpie+Amy Mark Twayn: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile52318/Mark+Twayn Micheal Sharpe: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile3699/Micheal+Sharpe MintyKisses: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile6441/MintyKisses nikki1979: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile26788/nikki1979 patlaborvi: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile63538/patlaborvi pineapplelovers69: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile308651/pineapplelovers69 pocketAA: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile282038/pocketAA Purple Chick: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile284861/Purple+Chick Qlick: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile179391/Qlick RRS: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile308301/RRS Ruth38: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile208402/Ruth38 Sahara907: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile129595/Sahara907 Sarahhh: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile326461/Sarahhh Sinturian: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile89126/Sinturian Slippery Saddle Bum: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile13662...ery+Saddle+Bum smcaaphd: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile108177/smcaaphd SpaceMountain: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile335835/SpaceMountain storyteller2653: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile155855/storyteller2653 Styxx: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile148976/styxx tony b: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile232776/tony_b unlocked23: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile293866/unlocked23 Von Armond: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile72421/Von+Armand w1drng: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile299716/w1drng wantsomefun: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile219629/wantsomefun x__orion: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile14193/x__orion Yvonne: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile277068/Yvonne zenmackie: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile330470/zenmackie Recommended Stories by Unknown Authors Double Trouble: http://stories.xnxx.com/story/10929/Double_Trouble Recommended Authors on the Forums, with sample stories Fallen Angel: http://forum.xnxx.com/search.php?searchid=5471800 - My first time... with a girl (true story): http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=91843 - I had a dream... why the fuck did I wake up!: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=89194 - It was my night!: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=93284 - Birthday Fun (classical style): http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=91822 goodsamantha: http://forum.xnxx.com/search.php?searchid=5471814 - Fascination: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=94977 - Sweet Surrender: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=96850 makemetakeit: http://forum.xnxx.com/search.php?searchid=5471825 - The Fate of a Rose: http://forum.xnxx.com/member.php?u=68678 nate556: http://forum.xnxx.com/search.php?searchid=5658422 - Sweet Little Sister: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=99121 stumbler: http://forum.xnxx.com/search.php?searchid=5471888 styxx: http://forum.xnxx.com/search.php?searchid=5471773 - Styxx's stories on the forums: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=47107 Taurus/Aquarius: http://forum.xnxx.com/search.php?searchid=5471829 - Submissive Slut: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=81859 ThunderedEchoes: http://forum.xnxx.com/search.php?searchid=5658343 - Perverted Dad: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=17532 - Rachael: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?p=330441 - Forbidden: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=46002 x__orion: http://forum.xnxx.com/search.php?searchid=5471833 - The Rider, Part One: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=37216 - The Rider, Part Two: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=37512 - Sarachan: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=93991 - Camorra: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=94536 YoungDaddyDom: http://forum.xnxx.com/search.php?searchid=5471837 - Kate: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=77171 - Airman Brown: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=79041 - Kate, Chapter 2 - The Bookstore: http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=82194 As usual, any errors or omissions are honest mistakes and not malicious. __________________ Read my CAW 14 Entry: A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to the Fertility Ritual. And many more erotic tales of Daddycums! For those who like their smut served hot with a side order of plot.

11-04-2009, 02:31 AM	#610
Daddycums Porn Star Join Date: May 2009 Location: In the bushes outside your bedroom window. Posts: 1,946	And to get back to the previous discussion: Yay! New stories from Lesley! __________________ Read my CAW 14 Entry: A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to the Fertility Ritual. And many more erotic tales of Daddycums! For those who like their smut served hot with a side order of plot.

11-04-2009, 04:42 AM	#612
donb9033 Porn Star Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Somewhere over the mountain Posts: 2,585	Thanks, DC, for your continuing efforts in updating the list. Your the man. __________________ "The freedom and happiness of man...[are] the sole objects of all legitimate government." --Thomas Jefferson "Were we directed from Washington when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread." --Thomas Jefferson "The government is best which governs least." --Thomas Jefferson XNXXOIAATILORAL IS ALMOST ALL THAT IS LEFT or XNXXHODHORNY OLD DOG?

11-04-2009, 10:06 AM	#613
ejls Siren of the Seaway Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: On the river in NY Posts: 35,896	I would like to thank donb9033, for his recommedations and those of everyone else. I have used DC's list to find some great stories. You are all so talented. __________________ Calling All Writers Creator, CAW 1,5, 10 & 14 Winner MODERATOR-Making the world safe for pure porn

11-04-2009, 04:32 PM	#614
donb9033 Porn Star Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Somewhere over the mountain Posts: 2,585	Thanks, Ellen. You have made my day. __________________ "The freedom and happiness of man...[are] the sole objects of all legitimate government." --Thomas Jefferson "Were we directed from Washington when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread." --Thomas Jefferson "The government is best which governs least." --Thomas Jefferson XNXXOIAATILORAL IS ALMOST ALL THAT IS LEFT or XNXXHODHORNY OLD DOG?

11-05-2009, 12:17 AM	#618
sharonb Sex Lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: uk Posts: 167	There are alot of stories to read and catch up on but i do enjoy a well written piece of work

11-05-2009, 12:50 AM	#621
sharonb Sex Lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: uk Posts: 167	I think most women know there bra sizes .its just the guys that dont

11-05-2009, 02:53 PM	#624
Daddycums Porn Star Join Date: May 2009 Location: In the bushes outside your bedroom window. Posts: 1,946	I had no idea I'd get such a large response to that comment about bra sizes. I'm not completely opposed to mentioning bra sizes in a story, if it's done well. It just sometimes seems too technical. It can certainly enhance a description, but too many authors just mention the number and leave it at that, as if that's supposed to tell me everything I need to know. Of course, I'm not a big fan of mentioning exact height or weight, either. Sure it's precise, but you're not being judged on precision. Instead of mentioning an exact weight, I'd prefer if the women are described as petite, delicate, slender, buxom, Amazonian, statuesque, or voluptuous. 115 pounds doesn't tell me anything, because more important than the number is how it's distributed. Basically, if it fits the situation, I say go ahead and use it. Two guys sitting in a bar watching the women who walk by and guessing their bra sizes is just fine, because sometimes men do that. A teenage girl standing in front of a mirror and wishing she was a little bigger in the chest and mentioning her A cups in the process is just fine. But a man sitting in a board meeting when in walks the 36E female vice president just makes me groan. How the hell does he know she's 36E? That's another one of my pet peeves, by the way. Why do the women in these stories all seem to have such gigantic chests? That big is fine on Jessica Rabbit, but on a real woman, I would think that that steps way over the line of the ideal size. __________________ Read my CAW 14 Entry: A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to the Fertility Ritual. And many more erotic tales of Daddycums! For those who like their smut served hot with a side order of plot.

11-05-2009, 08:49 PM	#625
BiStander Porno Junky Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Deep South, USA Posts: 273	Story site Is the story site messed up for everyone? __________________ Open a new window to my stories.

11-05-2009, 09:14 PM	#627
amanuensis Banned! Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Right here Posts: 115	Same here Says this: "SQL Problem (Main Db)"

11-05-2009, 10:00 PM	#628
donb9033 Porn Star Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Somewhere over the mountain Posts: 2,585	Yeah, me, too. __________________ "The freedom and happiness of man...[are] the sole objects of all legitimate government." --Thomas Jefferson "Were we directed from Washington when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread." --Thomas Jefferson "The government is best which governs least." --Thomas Jefferson XNXXOIAATILORAL IS ALMOST ALL THAT IS LEFT or XNXXHODHORNY OLD DOG?

11-05-2009, 10:13 PM	#629
amanuensis Banned! Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Right here Posts: 115	it is back up and working now

11-05-2009, 10:59 PM	#630
donb9033 Porn Star Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Somewhere over the mountain Posts: 2,585	Sort of but pretty slow and clunky. __________________ "The freedom and happiness of man...[are] the sole objects of all legitimate government." --Thomas Jefferson "Were we directed from Washington when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread." --Thomas Jefferson "The government is best which governs least." --Thomas Jefferson XNXXOIAATILORAL IS ALMOST ALL THAT IS LEFT or XNXXHODHORNY OLD DOG?

11-06-2009, 05:45 AM	#631
LordExia Banned! Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 130	this threads a good idea. hi i'm new. i just submitted a story, but its waiting for validation, how long does it actually take to be online? when it is could you go take a look? thanks

11-06-2009, 05:48 AM	#632
seeminglysatisfied Интеллектуальные крестьянских Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Where poppies and daisies grow Posts: 13,171	anywhere from 3 days to a week at maximum welcome to the site __________________ Мой цветок; AAlways in my heart If I had those golden dreams of my yesterdays, I would wrap you in the Heavens Til I’m dyin on the way.

11-07-2009, 03:14 AM	#636
donb9033 Porn Star Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Somewhere over the mountain Posts: 2,585	Warning read and accepted. Will wait for the corrected version. __________________ "The freedom and happiness of man...[are] the sole objects of all legitimate government." --Thomas Jefferson "Were we directed from Washington when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread." --Thomas Jefferson "The government is best which governs least." --Thomas Jefferson XNXXOIAATILORAL IS ALMOST ALL THAT IS LEFT or XNXXHODHORNY OLD DOG?

11-07-2009, 09:13 AM	#638
LordExia Banned! Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 130	it always happens. your brain always finds new ways to improve the submitted one, once you're done. go read mine please! Unfathomable Fantasies. Should be online soon.^^

11-07-2009, 06:11 PM	#639
amanuensis Banned! Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Right here Posts: 115	I'd like to recommend Exakta66 http://stories.xnxx.com/profile337746/Exakta66 Especially this: Beginner's Meeting, A Play (Third Stab At Humor) http://stories.xnxx.com/story/20390/...ab_At_Humor%29 Young Lust, First Lust, Sweet Devotion http://stories.xnxx.com/story/20555/...Sweet_Devotion. While not your average run of the mill "wham bam thank you ma'am", these stories do deserve to be read especially. They are very unique and worth the few minutes or so that it takes to read them.

11-08-2009, 02:18 AM	#641
LordExia Banned! Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 130	the beginning was a laugh haha. please read my story its up already! =) its my first one. i cant post a link yet, its under the fantasy section. Unfathomable fantasies. hope you'd leave some critical advice too. ^^

11-08-2009, 02:21 AM	#642
lesley_tara Amateur Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: East Coast Age: 42 Posts: 72	corrected "Stable Girls" on-line - but wrong one still there too!!!! Just to say that the corrected version of my "The Stable Girls" story is now on-line. I was interested to see BiStander's comments on similar problems, because my PMs and emails to the moderators seem to have gone into a black hole, with the result that we now have BOTH versions of the story on the site!! I hope the old gets removed - but in case it doesn't, here's an idea. I now it seems odd to ask this, but could a few kind folk please give the old one negative votes, so that it sinks from view? You'll know which one it is because it has my warning comments at the end. Just a thought, anway. Meantime, back to writing ... got a story called "The Majorettes", about teen girls in a marching band, that's just hot and bubbling away ... luv to all (but not to sundry - there's definitely no sundries on THIS thread!), Lesley __________________ "It's just my imagination, running away with me ..." (Jagger/Richards) If you like lesbian stories, with some set-up and detail, you might enjoy these: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile298027/lesley_tara

11-08-2009, 03:42 AM	#643
LordExia Banned! Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 130	cant find your story les. link? go read mine too! http://stories.xnxx.com/story/20864/...i_%28Part_1%29 Last edited by LordExia; 11-08-2009 at 03:44 AM.

11-08-2009, 03:59 AM	#644
donb9033 Porn Star Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Somewhere over the mountain Posts: 2,585	Just read a story by Lonelyandlost; http://stories.xnxx.com/profile331272/Lonelyandlost that I think some of you might like. Only the one story, but I have hopes for more. Only 1 grammatical error and 4 spelling errors, but very, very hot and well written. __________________ "The freedom and happiness of man...[are] the sole objects of all legitimate government." --Thomas Jefferson "Were we directed from Washington when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread." --Thomas Jefferson "The government is best which governs least." --Thomas Jefferson XNXXOIAATILORAL IS ALMOST ALL THAT IS LEFT or XNXXHODHORNY OLD DOG?

11-09-2009, 03:20 AM	#645
candylicker25 Porn Surfer Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Bryan, Tx Age: 29 Posts: 32	I enjoy stories by fbailey da most. Neva disappoints me... __________________ "If it smells like fish, eat as u wish. If it smells like colonge, leave it da fk alone!"

11-09-2009, 05:46 PM	#646
BiStander Porno Junky Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Deep South, USA Posts: 273	User Comments This might come off as shameless self promotion, but being most who visit this thread already know my stories, I'll take my chances. This is normally where I complain about the stupid comments, but in this case I was so impressed with the thought and time put into the commentary, I thought a praise was due: nineball 2009-11-09 12:37:12 I love your story. You are a truly gifted writer. You manage to evoke the chaotic delirium of hormone-charged adolescent love/lust just perfectly. Your pacing is masterful; enough detail to allow the reader to care about every character and relationship, and savor every moment of every hot encounter. ONE SMALL PIECE OF HOPEFULLY CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM: How about an occasional reset? This has become a novella spread out over a few months reading time; hard to hold on to earlier details and intrigue. Not much time for re-reading earlier stories in most peoples lives, so maybe here and there you could spend a paragraph on relevant backstory. If you ever go back and edit a final draft of the whole saga, this would be a sublime improvement to an already tremendous work of erotic art. I'd welcome nineball's comments on any of my stories! I agree with his suggestion. __________________ Open a new window to my stories.

11-09-2009, 09:32 PM	#649
LordExia Banned! Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 130	Daddycums is good, but so underated. DC did you insult anyone around here?

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