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11-17-2009, 03:05 AM
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I didn't have anything to say, I just wanted to see if I could send this back to the top where I like to see it.
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11-17-2009, 03:15 AM
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Mission accomplished.
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11-18-2009, 01:26 AM
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You da man. Thanks DC.
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11-18-2009, 11:09 PM
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Found this really useful... Recognise some names, so I'm glad I have taste!
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11-18-2009, 11:33 PM
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"The freedom and happiness of man...[are] the sole objects of all legitimate government." --Thomas Jefferson "Were we directed from Washington when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread." --Thomas Jefferson "The government is best which governs least." --Thomas Jefferson XNXXOIAATILORAL IS ALMOST ALL THAT IS LEFT or XNXXHODHORNY OLD DOG?
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11-19-2009, 03:14 AM
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Recommendation: try this http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php...91#post2413575 for a very sad, but very hot story. Well written and hot as hell. Someone named Tom J. This link may not be the very best it could be, but try it anyway then go to the top of the page and read. Hope you all like it.
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"The freedom and happiness of man...[are] the sole objects of all legitimate government." --Thomas Jefferson "Were we directed from Washington when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread." --Thomas Jefferson "The government is best which governs least." --Thomas Jefferson XNXXOIAATILORAL IS ALMOST ALL THAT IS LEFT or XNXXHODHORNY OLD DOG?
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11-19-2009, 07:25 AM
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thanks for the links
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11-19-2009, 06:07 PM
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You are very welcome. I hope the thread is useful to you.
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11-20-2009, 12:37 AM
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Like to recommend mishmash.
http://stories.xnxx.com/profile331469/mishmash I like what I've seen from her so far.
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11-20-2009, 11:11 PM
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11-21-2009, 03:21 AM
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Daddycums, did you get that? As good as 'Her Story' is, even though it was a bit much for me, that has to go on the list of forum recommendations.
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11-22-2009, 01:48 PM
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On the other hand, I noticed that there are a couple of other authors listed in both the Authors and the Forums sections, so since you asked me, I'll add you and Her Story to the Forums section on the next list.
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11-22-2009, 08:10 PM
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Nothing has changed in the process to submit a story. No addtional options are given. I wasn't going to submit anything, until the reform had gone through, but that may take a while.
The story I have submitted has been trashed on another site. Funny ... moralistic anonymous comments from a porn site. Who knew? Anyway, it's a little different, but I hope you'll be honest and let me know what you think. Feel free to pm me, if you don't want your name attached to one of my submissions. It should be validated by Thursday. Thank you for your consideration, and happy holidays.
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11-22-2009, 08:19 PM
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I'd be honored to have my name appear in your comments. Having my stories voted down just increases my desire to write two and threefold. Love your stories so far ejls
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11-22-2009, 08:52 PM
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11-22-2009, 10:03 PM
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11-24-2009, 02:55 AM
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Just trying to make it clear so that nobody else interprets it wrong like I did.
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11-24-2009, 03:04 AM
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Right - I don't write. Love Ellens writing and her stories. Yours also, in case you were wondering.
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11-24-2009, 05:08 PM
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Don't worry, I won't give you any moralistic anonymous comments. That is the purview of cowardly asshole trolls. I'll proudly sign my name to any comment I make, too!
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11-25-2009, 04:01 PM
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Anyone who has net yet read "Noel" by ejls, what are you waiting for? A thoroughly wonderful love story - dare I say it - better than I expected even though I always expect lovely stories from her.
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11-25-2009, 07:44 PM
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Noel-my public response
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It is a beautiful romance with and unexpectedly wonderful ending. The love of a man and wife was kept intact while the love of a sister for a sister could find inspired closure through and act of selfless surrender. Love conquers all, life is created, and hearts are mended. I agree with others. You should become a romance writer. With or without the explicit sex you spin a romantic web which draws one in and captures the imagination. P.S. Damnit, this story should be getting higher ratings and more readers!
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11-26-2009, 03:50 AM
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I would like to recommend someone:
http://stories.xnxx.com/profile647/ Very detail oriented stories, in particular "a Dream Come True"
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11-26-2009, 04:15 AM
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11-26-2009, 04:25 PM
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Noticed all the writers here wrote similar genres. Probably why some genres are hard to find. Even if it can be found it isnt nice to read. Like good rape is hard to find. Incest for example is in abundance.
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11-27-2009, 04:27 PM
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Then scroll through the high rated ones and pick titles that get your attention. You will surely find something that floats your boat, or smokes your shorts. Rape isn't my thing, even though I wrote a rape story once. I hope this is helpful. 
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11-29-2009, 12:38 AM
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11-29-2009, 02:31 AM
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11-30-2009, 03:48 AM
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One of my strongest recommendations is given for Tom Js stories on the Forum. I normally do not read stories on the forum because of the disjointed nature, but the stories by Tom J are (mostly) very, very, very good. Try 'em, you'll like 'em.
DC, I don't know how to do the trick you do about collecting several Forum stories on one link, so I'll leave that to you. Thank you.
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11-30-2009, 11:50 AM
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11-30-2009, 02:12 PM
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11-30-2009, 04:40 PM
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I wish he posted his stories on the stories site so we wouldn't have this problem, but that is his choice. Thanks.
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In all the months I have been here, I have only read one story on the forum. I think every good story on the forum should be moved to the story site.  That's just the way it is for me. Take that to the subway and you better have a token also.
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11-30-2009, 06:04 PM
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I recommend MICHAEL MILLER as an excellent writer. His 'true-life' stories recall his many years of sexual adventures as a traveling male masseuse. He gets his hands on lots of titties and pussies. Best of all, he gets paid for it! Wow, what a job! Read him and get all the juicy details.
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12-01-2009, 01:07 AM
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I agree with all the writer you put on your list. I truly enjoy reading JackassTales I also find myself re-reading alot of his work. Good work JackassTales
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12-01-2009, 09:39 PM
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I could not agree more!! Jackass has the time and energy it takes to wring out the best from a story........Keep it up---you ol dawg! michael_miller195041@yahoo.com....
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12-03-2009, 11:46 PM
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Jackass is good but he writes too similar stuff sometimes. No offence meant. And its predictable. Good writing, not too good plotting. Sorry, just trying to help. And i still cant find a good rape story that doesnt end the crappy way.
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12-04-2009, 06:49 PM
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 Sorry, but your "no offence (spelling) meant" won't cut it here! This is a tread to recommend writers, not to cut them down. Mister, you bet your bleeping ass I am taking offense! I checked out your profile and your (2) stories. Your age is listed as 'secret' but in one of your explanatory defensive comments you stated that your writing errors were a result of rushing because your parents were coming home. So, young fella, you had best pick a battle of writing skills with someone you can beat. You have posted your stories over the past month. You have a combined hit-list of about 9,000 readers. You have made repeated efforts on this forum and this thread in particular to 'BEG' readers to checkout your stories. You have strongly hinted that you belong on the 'recommended writers' list. Your name is still not there!!!! On the other hand, my name was among the first put on this esteemed list. I have posted 44 stories over the past 2 1/2 years. My stories have a hit-list of over 5 MILLION + readers! 28 of these stories have more than 100,000 hits each! Yes, predictable and similar, my stories might be, but as far as plotting and story structure go, I believe my readers think I'm doing fairly well. As for your complaint about not being able to find a good rape story that doesn't end a crappy way, well youngster are you insulting the many, many writers who post stories under the Rape genre? Rape is a violent, non-consensual act. Nobody lives happily-ever-after. Hell, it's supposed to have a crappy ending. So, my young nemesis, let us agree to disagree. If we argue further let's do so in private PMs. Sorry if I've stepped on your toes, but you started it by kicking my ass here! This is not the proper forum for whipping out our dicks and seeing who's is bigger!
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12-04-2009, 08:41 PM
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A few days ago, Ellen (ejls) recommended that I read the story "For the Love of Holly" written by wantsomefun. Well, my friends, I have, twice, and cried both times. It is a wonderful, moving story of the development of love between two lovely young people and the unselfish devotion of some people trying to provide for their fellow man. Truly a beautiful Christmas story. If you have time, I most strongly recommend you all read it. http://stories.xnxx.com/story/21289/..._Love_of_Holly You'll love it as I did. A very strong and heart-felt thank you to Ellen for the recommendation and to wantsomefun http://stories.xnxx.com/profile219629/wantsomefun for the story.
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And in case you're wondering, they both include sex scenes. So yes, they do belong on this site.
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12-05-2009, 12:45 AM
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Both of you are very nice for mentioning these submissions. In the spirit of the season, I wrote one more Christmas story. KATE should be up on Sunday. Sorry, but it's sweet and romantic (DC, she's only 21) - but there is a sex scene.
Happy Holidays, everyone!
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12-05-2009, 12:45 AM
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L.E. took on the big dog and got his bum-bum bit. Ouch. L.E., why are you grasping so desperately for citation on this thread, given your obvious contempt for the company you would keep? Rhetorical question, so don't sweat coming up with an answer. To expand a bit on J.A.T.'s remarks with respect to rape stories with happy endings, the Web is teeming with thousands of bad ones. They are easy enough to find. You simply don't find them here. Bad writers write the bad ones. Good writers - the sort one tends to find here - don't bother trying to write a "good" rape story with a "happy" ending, because it cannot be done. The plotline fails on its premise, because it hinges on an oxymoron. Remember how your Daddy taught you never to hit girls? Well, that golden rule extends to rape. Rape is a no-no, because it wrecks the victim permanently. Crushes the spirit, irremediably. Equates her (or sometimes him) with dirt, until the last breath. The hurt never heals. Rape stories with any other outcome fail the plausibility test, and by definition, suck. A.P. P.S., I'm not listed on this thread, either, because my stories are filth. But I check in once in a while, to see how the better half lives and to hang with the other newbies. Peace! |
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Someday I must read some of your stories just for the education.
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Don't bother. Holydays coming up.
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My story (there is only one) is rather long. More than I would read, if I had a choice. Honestly, I am not here to troll. Just having fun with my new-newbie-friend, Lord Exia. On another thread (MySql Problem), I took the trouble to tell J.A.T. that I love his stories, so L.E.'s thoughtful comments feel like a mugging in a meadow. Ouch, indeed. Peace, A.P. |
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12-05-2009, 03:46 AM
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I'm going to take an unpopular stand here and defend Lord Exia. Re-reading his post, I don't think he was trying to be insulting to JackassTales. It sounds to me like his only complaint is a lack of variety in JackassTales' stories. I think he just picked a poor choice of words that ended up sounding like an insult when he was probably just trying to give a little constructive criticism.
Note that I'm neither agreeing nor disagreeing with his opinion that the stories lack variety. I only know that some of them are among my favorites on this site. ("My Little Sis and Her Friends" is probably in my top 5)
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12-05-2009, 01:25 PM
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As I've said, L.E. is my new-newbie-friend. He is correct that J.A.T.'s stories are all the same. And let's face it, they're not literature. If one seeks literature, with an orgasm or two tucked in, there is always Nobel Prize winning porn by Gabriel Garcia Marquez (Innocent Erendira), Pulitzer Prize winning porn by Mary Gaitskill (Bad Behavior), or even the puerile semi-literate trash that passes for literature in North America these days, by Bret Easton Ellis (American Psycho). I love J.A.T.'s stuff not because it is literature (it is not), or because it has variety (it does not), but because it makes me all squishy inside, every time. The good L.E. should reflect upon the biomechanics of his own libido and realize that cheap porn must be the same every time, because he cums the same, each and every bleepity-bleeping time. Sheesh! The other reason why I love JackassTales' puerile filth is that it does exhibit craft. He is certainly capable of writing literature, and perhaps he even does, with his secret alter ego, just as others among us do, with ours. That said, there is a way to say it. And L.E. is supposed to be some kind of writer. If he were just one of the readers, putting his swill in the story comments, he might be excused. But writers should know better. Right? Sheesh. (kiss) A.P. Last edited by aesexual pseudonym; 12-05-2009 at 01:28 PM. |
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I get an edgimacation reading your comments. Quote:
Hey, I just noticed your signature. I like it.
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At jackass. I am very sorry if i had insulted you. I had no malice intended in my content. I was just trying to say that you ought to try different varieties since your good writing can make good erotica. Try different plots, that's all i am saying. I admit, i didnt read all your stuff, and i do want to be popular, but my comment was meant to be constructive, nothing else. Thanks dc for seeing it my way, and on a final note, i have realized that my first story's chosen genre was not favourable, so i'd write another before 'pushing' it again. Again ty dc.
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