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Old 04-21-2009, 03:42 AM   #51
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i recomend minty, stories witten by hot girls are awsome
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Old 04-21-2009, 03:48 AM   #52
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I'll second the endoresment of the Von Armand stories. I've been a fan for awhile. The sex with your sister in the Ashley stories isn't my thing (I find the whole idea a bit disturbing) but the writing is so good that I guess I just ignore that part. I'll have to check out some of the other authors listed above...

Oh yeah...Minty's stories are pretty good too

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You have said though that you do not like "rough" stories, and his are... Although the affection is there too, just a different kind.
Checked out his Kate, Kate 2, and Airman Brown stories and I agree with you. Kate I found to be much more likeable than the other two. Airman Brown was really not to my taste. Good stories, good writing, but not to my taste. Thanks for your help in keeping this thread going.
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Anyone reading this post, I have a very strong recommendation for you all. Read two threads on this forum - "The babysitter came too" and "Without love" by Styxx. My earlier comments about Styxx, as evidenced by these stories, were totally wrong. These stories are, in a word, wonderful. Full of love with just the right amount of sex. Great reads. Try them.
Thank you for the promo Don. Good to see a serious thread.

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That album should be labeled "hazardous to your health" for us older guys. So very hot. Her stories are pretty damned good, too.
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Old 04-21-2009, 06:54 PM   #57
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Haha, I made that list!? Well well my heart swells. Much appreciated donb and looking back on what I've done, I can see where you're coming from with the bdsm stuff. My ideas have since changed and I'm struggling with new material.

I agree with most of your list too. I haven't heard of a few but intend to check em out.

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Haha, I made that list!? Well well my heart swells. Much appreciated donb and looking back on what I've done, I can see where you're coming from with the bdsm stuff. My ideas have since changed and I'm struggling with new material.

I agree with most of your list too. I haven't heard of a few but intend to check em out.

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*blushes* you guys are too kind...
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*blushes* you guys are too kind...
We may be too kind, but you are too hot. Thank you for making an old guy happy.
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I don't think I will recommend nikola_les. It looks like there is not much imagination and/or intelligence there.
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It seems like all of our favorites were really turned off by the potty-mouth posting on all of the forum sites and have pretty well stopped posting. Too bad. It looks like this thread is finished. It's been fun.
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Any Recommended writers that deals primary with Mother/son and Grandma/grandson, that built up the eroticism and NOT wham Bam kinda stuff, I will appreciate the recommendation.?????........ Thanks
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will you write me a sex story if i give you names of characters and the kind of stuff to write about please
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An idea from Fluffy McNoo from the thread complaining about a lot of negative ratings on stories (undeserved negatives at that). My idea of good writers on the XNXX site are as follows:

JackassTales - lots of stories, all good, most about sex with younger girls (and mostly young guys). Well worth reading. I keep re-reading most of his stories. Lots of fun and lots of good sex.

fbailey - very prolific writer, over 300 stories. Some much better than others, but I find myself re-reading a lot of his stories over and over again. Most of his stories are believable and (theoretically) could happen to anyone.

Mark Twain - holy shit. great stories if you keep with them. I find that I have to ration myself with these stories, but I really do love them. Lots of sex and lots of love.

doz - fairly new writer that shows lots of promise. Some very good stories.

jl317 - young love - very moving. Love all of his work but wish he had not removed the Camping with Sis stories.

storyteller2653 - love stories. Very nice if you want to read something that pretty much restores your faith in humanity.

patlaborvi - what can I say about this one? A very prolific writer that can maintain continuity and keep your interest like few can. Great stories if they are your cup of tea (they are mine).

Von Armond - Great stories, some with more BDSM than I care for, but overall well worth looking for and sticking with.

jmiller - now, here's a list of stories that is sure to grab anyones attention. I find myself re-reading most of these stories several times a year. Well worth finding and reading.

Anyway, this is a partial listing of some of my favorite authors. The order in which they are listed does not necessarily mean anything. Just for the record and to give you all an idea from which I come; I don't care too much for BDSM or for snuff stories. Love sex and love love. Looking forward to hearing from others about their favorite writers on this site.

By the way, I know that I have left out a lot of very good writers that I really like to read, but maybe, if I can keep the old age at bay, I will mention you in the next message.
I'm fairly new to xnxx and would appreciate your input on some of my stories.
Most are in the true section, but also have some in the fantasy, massage sections..
Dano is my nickname .. Winter at Beech Mountain series, Have Hands--Will Travel series, and Jamie in the fantasy series.Thanx a lot
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This is where I think not being able to moderate against the trollers and idiots definitely works against the Xboards story section.

I really wish something could be done about that, but all you can do at present is develop rhino skin and let the insults bounce off you!

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An idea from Fluffy McNoo from the thread complaining about a lot of negative ratings on stories (undeserved negatives at that). My idea of good writers on the XNXX site are as follows:

JackassTales - lots of stories, all good, most about sex with younger girls (and mostly young guys). Well worth reading. I keep re-reading most of his stories. Lots of fun and lots of good sex.

fbailey - very prolific writer, over 300 stories. Some much better than others, but I find myself re-reading a lot of his stories over and over again. Most of his stories are believable and (theoretically) could happen to anyone.

Mark Twain - holy shit. great stories if you keep with them. I find that I have to ration myself with these stories, but I really do love them. Lots of sex and lots of love.

doz - fairly new writer that shows lots of promise. Some very good stories.

jl317 - young love - very moving. Love all of his work but wish he had not removed the Camping with Sis stories.

storyteller2653 - love stories. Very nice if you want to read something that pretty much restores your faith in humanity.

patlaborvi - what can I say about this one? A very prolific writer that can maintain continuity and keep your interest like few can. Great stories if they are your cup of tea (they are mine).

Von Armond - Great stories, some with more BDSM than I care for, but overall well worth looking for and sticking with.

jmiller - now, here's a list of stories that is sure to grab anyones attention. I find myself re-reading most of these stories several times a year. Well worth finding and reading.

Anyway, this is a partial listing of some of my favorite authors. The order in which they are listed does not necessarily mean anything. Just for the record and to give you all an idea from which I come; I don't care too much for BDSM or for snuff stories. Love sex and love love. Looking forward to hearing from others about their favorite writers on this site.

By the way, I know that I have left out a lot of very good writers that I really like to read, but maybe, if I can keep the old age at bay, I will mention you in the next message.

I enjoy reading Minty and YDD. And if I might add:

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Most are in the true section, but also have some in the fantasy, massage sections..
Dano is my nickname .. Winter at Beech Mountain series, Have Hands--Will Travel series, and Jamie in the fantasy series.Thanx a lot
I'll check them out. Always looking for something worth reading.
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This is where I think not being able to moderate against the trollers and idiots definitely works against the Xboards story section.

I really wish something could be done about that, but all you can do at present is develop rhino skin and let the insults bounce off you!

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*quietly bumping the topic, so that those who wish to suggest writers to look out for, can do so*

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I don't know about rhino skin, for me I read the comments and if someone has a legitimate problem with my story I consider what their saying (sometimes their complaint was something I put in intentionally and already have plans to work on). If all their doing is mouthing off about me or making generalizations about the story I ignore them because I figure their just mouthing off.
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Most of the comments on your stories are above the average. As for the rest, they must be pretty good training for what you want to accomplish. At least I hope so. Wish you well with the hope that, if things do work out for you, you will not forget to occasionally entertain us.
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One last gentle bump to see if there is any interest.
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I still rate Magpie Amy and Kimiko... there are others, I must go back and remember some of them...
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Have not read Magpie Amy and only some of Kimiko (by the way that is my wifes name) but appreciate the recommendations. We all need to share. That is the purpose of this thread. Thanks.
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I was amazed at a comment left by another author who publishes on the site. He has something like 351 stories, mostly about a five minute read and mostly variations on a theme. I have bothered to read a few of his works, but thought "no comment" was the way to go.

His vitriolic gush, suggested that I write for writings sake alone and was not very supportive in the least. I couldn't help thinking that the comment was some kind of jealousy going on or fear that he might get toppled from his lofty perch. But, if writers are going to rubbish each other, then the reader is given carte blanche to do the same.

I do not profess to be the best writer on here, hell, a long way from it. I tell stories, pure and simple, some people like them and some don't. Would be a boring place if there were no room for uniqueness. As a writer, I support other authors if I can. Nothing wrong with constructive critisism, it helps us to develop, evolve and become an even better story teller. Trashing someone's work is just crass, but in the case of fbailey, is just downright bizare.

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I was amazed at a comment left by another author who publishes on the site. He has something like 351 stories, mostly about a five minute read and mostly variations on a theme. I have bothered to read a few of his works, but thought "no comment" was the way to go.

His vitriolic gush, suggested that I write for writings sake alone and was not very supportive in the least. I couldn't help thinking that the comment was some kind of jealousy going on or fear that he might get toppled from his lofty perch. But, if writers are going to rubbish each other, then the reader is given carte blanche to do the same.

I do not profess to be the best writer on here, hell, a long way from it. I tell stories, pure and simple, some people like them and some don't. Would be a boring place if there were no room for uniqueness. As a writer, I support other authors if I can. Nothing wrong with constructive critisism, it helps us to develop, evolve and become an even better story teller. Trashing someone's work is just crass, but in the case of fbailey, is just downright bizare.

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I find it very disturbing and disappointing that fbailey would trash your work. In the messages that we have passed back and forth, he has always impressed me as a decent person. Remember, the number of stories is not the deciding factor - the quality is. Love your work and wish you were still writing. I guess I discovered you too late.

Your stories can also be found here: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile148976/styxx
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Just finished reading "The babysitter came too" again. http://stories.xnxx.com/story/12884/...itter_came_too
Loved it again, love it still, and for the record, I only found one typo. You should keep writing forever.
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Loved it again, love it still, and for the record, I only found one typo. You should keep writing forever.
I can't think why he would have left such a message. It is possible that someone used his handle. Most of the authors on here are supportive and a thread such as this just goes to demonstrate ecactly that.

Cheers.

PS, I have enjoyed phrenetic Ice's work as well as the author. For pure stroke stuff, scouting4girls is hard to beat and shaggybob5 constructs some very good stories that carry a very good average.
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Wantsomefun has a series well worth reading. "Girls at the store" has some interesting scenarios.

El Hanes is worth a read. has a couple of series and recommend Maeghan Wrist series.

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I was amazed at a comment left by another author who publishes on the site. He has something like 351 stories, mostly about a five minute read and mostly variations on a theme. I have bothered to read a few of his works, but thought "no comment" was the way to go.

His vitriolic gush, suggested that I write for writings sake alone and was not very supportive in the least. I couldn't help thinking that the comment was some kind of jealousy going on or fear that he might get toppled from his lofty perch. But, if writers are going to rubbish each other, then the reader is given carte blanche to do the same.

I do not profess to be the best writer on here, hell, a long way from it. I tell stories, pure and simple, some people like them and some don't. Would be a boring place if there were no room for uniqueness. As a writer, I support other authors if I can. Nothing wrong with constructive critisism, it helps us to develop, evolve and become an even better story teller. Trashing someone's work is just crass, but in the case of fbailey, is just downright bizare.

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i believe it is possible to type anyname into the username box for leaving an 'anonymous' comment when someone is not logged in. so it may just have been a poser who dislikes you and fbailey

on another note, I very much agree on el hanes. just wish he would put out another story soon. also another, he's only released one two part story, but 123FakeStreet is very good.
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i believe it is possible to type anyname into the username box for leaving an 'anonymous' comment when someone is not logged in. so it may just have been a poser who dislikes you and fbailey

on another note, I very much agree on el hanes. just wish he would put out another story soon. also another, he's only released one two part story, but 123FakeStreet is very good.
According to the authors listing on XNXX stories, el hanes has posted 45 stories. Check out the listing at: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile63204/el_hanes. Looks interesting, but no stories since Aug. 08. Maybe another who gave up.
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Without encouragement, Authors will move on to other sites where they can publish their stories and get regular feed back. I publish on several sites including storiesonline. I find the feeback from there is rather more encouraging and engaging.
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Without encouragement, Authors will move on to other sites where they can publish their stories and get regular feed back. I publish on several sites including storiesonline. I find the feeback from there is rather more encouraging and engaging.
Sorry it took so long to reply, but I have been deeply involved in the e.l. hanes stories. What an imaginative writer. A great loss to us all that he was not encouraged to continue writing on this site. Same story, different writer. Happens to too many. That's why I am trying so earnestly to encourage writers on this site to continue. Even the mediocre writers will improve and become a point of great interest to someone. If the writer quits, no improvement or interest is possible. It behooves us all to do the same.

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Sorry it took so long to reply, but I have been deeply involved in the e.l. hanes stories. What an imaginative writer. A great loss to us all that he was not encouraged to continue writing on this site. Same story, different writer. Happens to too many. That's why I am trying so earnestly to encourage writers on this site to continue. Even the mediocre writers will improve and become a point of great interest to someone. If the writer quits, no improvement or interest is possible. It behooves us all to do the same.
You are to be applauded for the effort and I am sure many of the writers on here appreciate it. I do.
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You know, I am sort of new but I have writen two stories called Our Secret. the problem I had was not so much that there was negitive feedback, deserved or not, but that there was a suprising lack of feedback. The comments I got where good but felt that the lack of response made it difficult to keep writing.

anyhow, I posteded both stories on one thread called Our Secret. I try and post some when read, which I admit I dont do as much as I write. I would have to agree with the list though as they are the better authors I have seen on here when I do read.
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You know, I am sort of new but I have writen two stories called Our Secret. the problem I had was not so much that there was negitive feedback, deserved or not, but that there was a suprising lack of feedback. The comments I got where good but felt that the lack of response made it difficult to keep writing.

anyhow, I posteded both stories on one thread called Our Secret. I try and post some when read, which I admit I dont do as much as I write. I would have to agree with the list though as they are the better authors I have seen on here when I do read.
Like I said in an earlier posting, I normally don't care for reading stories on a Forum thread. Mostly I concentrate on those that are posted on the Stories side of XNXX. I will try to find your thread and check it out, but whatever you do, don't be discouraged by lack of response. Keep writing. Thanks.
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You know, I am sort of new but I have writen two stories called Our Secret. the problem I had was not so much that there was negitive feedback, deserved or not, but that there was a suprising lack of feedback. The comments I got where good but felt that the lack of response made it difficult to keep writing.

anyhow, I posteded both stories on one thread called Our Secret. I try and post some when read, which I admit I dont do as much as I write. I would have to agree with the list though as they are the better authors I have seen on here when I do read.
There is no such thing as a better author. Every one of us has an imagination that is different, not better or worse, just different. There are hundreds of readers to each author and what appeals to one, is really not appreciated by the next. The reader is just as different.

Some writers have a greater lexicon than others, some are better at sentence structure and some are way better with puncuation than I am, but every author has a value and is a part of the whole that is XNXX.

Keep it up and good luck.
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There is no such thing as a better author. Every one of us has an imagination that is different, not better or worse, just different. There are hundreds of readers to each author and what appeals to one, is really not appreciated by the next. The reader is just as different.

Some writers have a greater lexicon than others, some are better at sentence structure and some are way better with puncuation than I am, but every author has a value and is a part of the whole that is XNXX.

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Couldn't have said it better myself. What a nice way to explain things to a young (starting up) writer. Thanks. By the way, your puncuation is fine.
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Couldn't have said it better myself. What a nice way to explain things to a young (starting up) writer. Thanks. By the way, your puncuation is fine.
I work hard enough at it and still get the green wavy lines all over the place. I think I must have forgotten the rules of English Comprehension, or never learned them in the first place. So frustrating when you write a line only to see the green promt telling you the sentence is not right and you haven't the first idea why it isn't.
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Mark Twayn's latest is very entertaining, well worth a read.
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TO STYXX: I feel your frustration when your computer tells you you have written something incorrectly. I use Microsoft Word and I've been told that many people remove the Office Assistant because it is so often wrong. I find the assistant very useful, but I often choose to ignore its advice.

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