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Old 05-12-2009, 07:04 PM   #101
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There is no such thing as a better author. Every one of us has an imagination that is different, not better or worse, just different. There are hundreds of readers to each author and what appeals to one, is really not appreciated by the next. The reader is just as different.

Some writers have a greater lexicon than others, some are better at sentence structure and some are way better with puncuation than I am, but every author has a value and is a part of the whole that is XNXX.

Keep it up and good luck.
Very well said, I will definietly keep that in mind. I may start writing again. Thanks for the input guys and girls.
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Very well said, I will definietly keep that in mind. I may start writing again. Thanks for the input guys and girls.
Please start writing again. I don't believe I have ever read anything of yours, but I will look around. I personally find value and entertainment in virtually every story I read. Looking forward to it.
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Old 05-12-2009, 07:33 PM   #103
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is ridiculous. It is true, individual taste is a factor. I loved Thomas Hardy's writing and couldn't stand Hemingway., but they were both competent authors.Mastery of technical skills in important, and they both had it.

There are several xnxx authors who stand out in my mind, but one of the newest, ejls should be particularly noted. She has only three stories and one poem so far, but I would say she bears watching. Check her out. One of her storie is in the current favorites list, and the others can be found under her title.
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is ridiculous. It is true, individual taste is a factor. I loved Thomas Hardy's writing and couldn't stand Hemingway., but they were both competent authors.Mastery of technical skills in important, and they both had it.

There are several xnxx authors who stand out in my mind, but one of the newest, ejls should be particularly noted. She has only three stories and one poem so far, but I would say she bears watching. Check her out. One of her storie is in the current favorites list, and the others can be found under her title.
I have to agree with you about her writing. I just finished Karen and am going on to the other 2. Anyone interested, click here: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile229479/ejls. A power of description that is hard to match. Hope she keeps writing for us. By the way, I don't care that much for Hemingway, either. Thanks for the tip on a gifted writer.
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Strong recommendation for http://stories.xnxx.com/profile130735/ fantasyra. Good stories. Well worth the time to read.
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Kudos to my favorite writers ... I've read their stories multiple times and I'm a hard judge of character when it comes to reading and movies. Story lines must catch my attention quickly or I just simply cannot carry on with the story.

Personally I don't mind the 'negative' comments when they are constructive critism but when they are more attacking like then they are worthless points of view. For example my latest story posted was written by request and addmittingly not my best of work so I am not suprised by the low rating but some of the comments leave something less than tasteless, says alot about the reader posting the comments.

I would recommend Chagrin or Lollylover.
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*warmly* I think that's a valid point Rosy, and worth reiterating. There is a world of difference between constructive criticism, and destructive criticism!

For those who aren't sure of the difference, take a look at the following two examples;

CONSTRUCTIVE: Hey there Red, I was reading your story, and noticed that the lead character was red-headed at the start, but raven haired at the end. Also, you might want to check your punctuation; there are times when you're using commas, just a bit, too often, for smooth, reading... if you can see what's wrong with my example above, you'll understand the problem!

DESTRUCTIVE: YOU STORY SUX!!!! YOU SUCK!!! YOU FUKN WERDIO! GETA LIFFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

One encourages the writer to make improvements, and discuss how they might make the story better for all. The other... makes them want to throw something through your bedroom window late at night. Like a stick of dynamite.

By the way don, kudos to you for doing such a fine job of keeping this thread active and interesting!

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And kudos to you Fluffy for the original idea. It has born more fruit for me (at least) than I ever thought was possible. I have found a lot of new favorite writers. Maybe not favorite, but at least favorable. This has been a very good experience and we owe it all to you. Thanks.
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I have to agree with you about her writing. I just finished Karen and am going on to the other 2. Anyone interested, click here: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile229479/ejls. A power of description that is hard to match. Hope she keeps writing for us. By the way, I don't care that much for Hemingway, either. Thanks for the tip on a gifted writer.
Just read "Karen" by Eils which I enjoyed very much and admired the descriptive narration. What puzzled me was the relatively low score it received at 82.7. It puzzled me for a few minutes, wondering why quality such as this is didn't rank higher. Then it dawned on me, the writing is not the stroke stuff generally posted, so those who are loooking for a quick release would either not bother to read it or rate it lowly because they didn't get off on it. That is a shame really and promotes a culture where excellence is shunned in favour of mediocre.

It caused me to look at my scores. I have an average of 83%. Highest at 91% Lowest at 59.1% over 47 stories. The funny things is, the lowest score is an attempt at humour, not overtly sexual in content and a story I actually like. So, it may go towards proving that stroke stories will rank the highest and hang the quality. I do find that a shame.
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The thread is fast becoming a seperate forum for authors, I like that. Perhaps we should request it becomes a sticky thread.

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Two writers I really like reading are smcaaphd and Sahara907.

smc has a great style of writing and her Isabella Dupree story (eight chapters but don't know if there's more to come) is fantastic. It's not a stroke story by any means but it is really well written. I can't believe it's scoring so low but maybe the content of the story has more to do with that than anything.

smc can be found here: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile108177/smcaaphd

Sahara907 is also really good. I prefer stories that transport you into the middle of them, maybe the descriptions are better or something, I'm not sure. Anyway, she can be found here.

Sahara907: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile129595/

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The thread is fast becoming a seperate forum for authors, I like that. Perhaps we should request it becomes a sticky thread.

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JackassTales: Why didn't you tell us about IrishPassion and installment 1 of Babysitting Sis? http://stories.xnxx.com/story/17413/Babysitting_Sis# Good read and looking forward to continuation.
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I like the collaboration of this thread and it displays great gratitude for some real hidden talents that one can not simply share openly ... well for the most part.
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I just wanted to get in my 2 cents worth in here. As I told donb a couple weeks ago I'm an unpublished writer and put most of my time into the stories I'm trying to get published. When I started writing my adult stories I made the decision to do them for fun and practice so when I post them I do it raw, without editing them. With that in mind, when I get the occasional comment about my editing I just kind of grin about it (a private joke you might say) most of the other negative comments I get aren't what I'd call constructive, they're mostly about how stupid I am or how boring my story is, which I consider a personal opinion and not an actual comment on me or my stories.
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You might ask Lemark, he maybe able to help.
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Sent the question to Lemark - will let everyone know. Once again, thanks to everyone for helping me make this thread meaningful.
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Let this be a lesson to us all - just today I asked Lemark to stick this thread and it's already done. Thanks again. Only twice have I had a request/question of Lamark and have been satisfied both times. We are not too likely to find that on any other site. Thanks.
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Anyone liking young, try this http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=40809 by lollylover. Really hot.
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In this day and age, I am totally bowled over that a suggestion produced a result. Well done Don and Lemark.
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Well, I try to do my best to satisfy everybody.
But this thread is an idea of Don, thanks Don for this good idea
By the way, I would like to apologize for all my PMs which are still waiting for my answer, I have lots of work these last few days...
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Thanks, your highness. After we got the thread stuck I thought the it was going to die. Thanks for keeping it alive at least for a little while.
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Micheal Sharpe has a series copied from another site. He openely announces that it isn't his work so no problem there.

His own story is quite good, "Horny Voyeur Schoolgirls", but "CAMP", a fantasy piece over many chapters is well found and really quite a good read.

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Micheal Sharpe has a series copied from another site. He openely announces that it isn't his work so no problem there.

His own story is quite good, "Horny Voyeur Schoolgirls", but "CAMP", a fantasy piece over many chapters is well found and really quite a good read.

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Wantsomefun has a series well worth reading. "Girls at the store" has some interesting scenarios.
I'll second that; I've been working my way through those lately. Morning After was good, too.

And may I say - this thread was a great idea.
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Thanks for the recommendations styxx, hashbrowns2, and donb9033. I'm releasing a story I wrote a little while ago but that had gotten hung up from my editors. It should be on the main site in a day or two. It's not my best by any means, but it's still entertaining.
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I'll be keeping an eye out for it. Glad you haven't given up.
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.... I decided to count the amount of downloads on my 47 stories. The facts amazed me:

Over 1.6 million people have read my stories. Wow!

Of which, 520 have left a comment. Hmm

I received 7871 positive votes. No comments left

and 1026 negative votes. Again, no comments left.

It is somehow, a little humbling to know that so many have read the words that have spewed out of this little brain. To think that I have touched, in a small way, so many people across the globe just blows me away and that is just on this site.

The power of the written word eh?
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Some of that 1.6 million are double and triple counts for me (and I'm sure others) reading some of your stories over and over again. It seems like sometimes there is a real drought in the new stories world so I am forced to re-read my favorite stories. I am honored to let you know that some of your stories fall into my favorite category.
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That's true, there are some stories I go back to time and time again. The Kate series by YDD being one of the few. I find that the actaully good stories being put out these days is dwindling. But there is always the gems that I do find. But I know one story in particular, that although not well written, is a fantasy of mine, so I have gone back to it many many times.
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That's true, there are some stories I go back to time and time again. The Kate series by YDD being one of the few. I find that the actaully good stories being put out these days is dwindling. But there is always the gems that I do find. But I know one story in particular, that although not well written, is a fantasy of mine, so I have gone back to it many many times.
Not going to share with us your fantasy? If I knew the name of the story, maybe I could guess. By the way, welcome back - haven't heard from you for a while.
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Never mind. I just read The Naughtiness Continues and think I have figured out one of your fantasies. Love you.
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Hey, all. Red letter day today. New stories by fbailey, JackassTales, leslie tara, ejls, and doz. Check 'em out. Something for everyone.
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I'm still reading L/T's Lawyers and Interns!! As the tart said to the vicar - it's long, but it's good!!
Just checked out your list of stories and will read them soon. If you like Lawyers and Interns, you've just got to check out the Hotel Maid learns the ropes and Detention Sucks. Good read while tending the sheep. Thanks for your input as I am always on the lookout for leads to stories that I have not read.
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Just checked out your list of stories and will read them soon. If you like Lawyers and Interns, you've just got to check out the Hotel Maid learns the ropes and Detention Sucks. Good read while tending the sheep. Thanks for your input as I am always on the lookout for leads to stories that I have not read.
Thanks!! I've got a couple more to put up on there, that are on the forum!! I'm planning on reading through the other stories of L/T's - if they're anything like the lawyer one, they're going to be brilliant!!
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Not going to share with us your fantasy? If I knew the name of the story, maybe I could guess. By the way, welcome back - haven't heard from you for a while.
A lot of the stories I like are not for everyone. So I just keep it to myself mainly. And thanks I've been lurking a bit here. Wanted to put my two cents in again.

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Never mind. I just read The Naughtiness Continues and think I have figured out one of your fantasies. Love you.

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(Oh, and I read a new one by JT that was hotttttt (two times over hot *blushes*) I remember in the intro that it was his 38th story (or is my mind deceiving me and was it his 37th...) and I would recommend it to everyone who is into the subject matter that JT writes about)
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(Oh, and I read a new one by JT that was hotttttt (two times over hot *blushes*) I remember in the intro that it was his 38th story (or is my mind deceiving me and was it his 37th...) and I would recommend it to everyone who is into the subject matter that JT writes about)
Number 38. That was so hot. Very descriptive. Can you believe 3 years writing on this site? Don't understand the negative comments, though.
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I know, it's really unfortunate. I think he is one of the best writers on the site. And he warns everyone in the beginning about the subject matter. *shakes head* some people just like to be pains I think
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I just wanted to say that I've finished the Leslie Tara stories and they are totally brilliant!! My favourite one is the lawyer story though - Leslie, if you're reading this, can I just say MORE!! MORE!!

Didn't think I'd enjoy the story content so much, and if it had been written by anyone without the 'discipline' to actually write so well, it would have fallen flat and not been as enjoyable all the way through!!

Keep writing Leslie and well done ewe!!
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Agree with your comments. Strongly recommend a new story by el hanes
http://stories.xnxx.com/story/17609/Pre_Mature%3A_C01 Captivating. Can't wait for the continuation.
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Check out ejls stories. They are written from the viewpoint of a mature woman, but this mature male gets plenty turned on. Dhe is also a 1000 poster on General Interest forum, and post lots of great pictures,
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Check out ejls stories. They are written from the viewpoint of a mature woman, but this mature male gets plenty turned on. Dhe is also a 1000 poster on General Interest forum, and post lots of great pictures,
I've left several very favorable comments about ejls and her stories - love them. Shows there may be hope for us older guys. Her latest, Carol, is very well written and, for me, very believable. Love it.
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