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Old 05-24-2009, 05:00 AM   #151
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Found this short story bt "Makemetakeit" on the forum and thought Wow!

http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=87379

Great short story, perfect length for the forum and very well constructed.

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Old 05-24-2009, 01:54 PM   #152
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That is a huge one.


(Oh, and I read a new one by JT that was hotttttt (two times over hot *blushes*) I remember in the intro that it was his 38th story (or is my mind deceiving me and was it his 37th...) and I would recommend it to everyone who is into the subject matter that JT writes about)
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Old 05-24-2009, 02:44 PM   #153
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A bit sad I didn't make the list. Seems like I've got a few die hard fans out there. But, alas, it seems around here no one actually looks around. They just read the latest stories and anything older falls to the wayside.


Almost makes a girl wanna just keep her stories to herself.

and I might have missed it but did no one mention Kimi?! OMG her stories are fucking GREAT!
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A bit sad I didn't make the list. Seems like I've got a few die hard fans out there. But, alas, it seems around here no one actually looks around. They just read the latest stories and anything older falls to the wayside.


Almost makes a girl wanna just keep her stories to herself.

and I might have missed it but did no one mention Kimi?! OMG her stories are fucking GREAT!
The reason I started this thread is not only share my opinions of the stories/writers on this site, but to learn from others who/what they like. I admit that I am biased against certain types of stories, but love to read and will try almost anything. I promise that I will look for your stories and check them out. I will say that since I've started this thread, my list of favorite writers has grown substantially. Thanks for your input and please, please don't keep your stories to yourself. Kimi was indeed mentioned and I agree. Keep in touch.
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(Oh, and I read a new one by JT that was hotttttt (two times over hot *blushes*) I remember in the intro that it was his 38th story (or is my mind deceiving me and was it his 37th...) and I would recommend it to everyone who is into the subject matter that JT writes about)

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Old 05-24-2009, 04:42 PM   #156
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Old 05-25-2009, 02:34 AM   #157
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I just wanted to say that I've finished the Leslie Tara stories and they are totally brilliant!! My favourite one is the lawyer story though - Leslie, if you're reading this, can I just say MORE!! MORE!!

Didn't think I'd enjoy the story content so much, and if it had been written by anyone without the 'discipline' to actually write so well, it would have fallen flat and not been as enjoyable all the way through!!

Keep writing Leslie and well done ewe!!
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Old 05-25-2009, 06:21 AM   #158
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A bit sad I didn't make the list. Seems like I've got a few die hard fans out there. But, alas, it seems around here no one actually looks around. They just read the latest stories and anything older falls to the wayside.


Almost makes a girl wanna just keep her stories to herself.

and I might have missed it but did no one mention Kimi?! OMG her stories are fucking GREAT!
There are many good writers on the site and many will have been missed already, but given time, they will get their recognition.
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Old 05-25-2009, 06:33 AM   #159
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Amen, cuz. I'm finding new ones every day and will let everyone know what I find.
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Old 05-25-2009, 02:35 PM   #160
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Old 05-25-2009, 04:18 PM   #161
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Sounds like an interesting story subject. It also appears that you have pretty good command of the language. Will be looking for your stories.
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Old 05-25-2009, 05:32 PM   #162
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For anyone interested, I just finished a series: http://stories.xnxx.com/profile299716/w1drng that you all might enjoy. Very entertaining and pretty well written. Check them out.
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Old 05-26-2009, 03:27 AM   #163
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Just finished reading Submissive Slut. That was really a great story. Obviously a labor of love for you. If you continue like that, it is obvious you will make anyones list. Like I have said before, I personally don't care for BDSM, but the quality of that story was really superb. Do you only post your stories on the forum or do you ever post them on the stories side? I normally don't read stories on the forum because of the format, but have been on the lookout for anything from you. Thanks.

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I have only written the two I mentioned, so no, I havent quite figured out what the stories side. Its all so new to me and I find that I'm fighting with the computer alot of the time, trying to navigate my way around the net is sometimes frustrating.

You know what? Since I've been with my boyfriend - I love him so much, I'm just not into bdsm any more either. I have started to steer right away from anything negative or violent in bed, its weird. Seeing it written in a story was such a turn on at first, but the more I read it, the more the whole bdsm thing becomes cheap and nasty. I dont know that I'll get to write any more on Submissive Slut. Particularly since I noticed that I'd inadvertantly plagiarised someone with the title, lucky the stories are rather different.

Anyway, thanks for the input, its nice to know I'm not alone.

Do people read romance any more? Maybe I'll give that a go next...
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I have only written the two I mentioned, so no, I havent quite figured out what the stories side. Its all so new to me and I find that I'm fighting with the computer alot of the time, trying to navigate my way around the net is sometimes frustrating.

You know what? Since I've been with my boyfriend - I love him so much, I'm just not into bdsm any more either. I have started to steer right away from anything negative or violent in bed, its weird. Seeing it written in a story was such a turn on at first, but the more I read it, the more the whole bdsm thing becomes cheap and nasty. I dont know that I'll get to write any more on Submissive Slut. Particularly since I noticed that I'd inadvertantly plagiarised someone with the title, lucky the stories are rather different.

Anyway, thanks for the input, its nice to know I'm not alone.

Do people read romance any more? Maybe I'll give that a go next...
As for the difficulty with the computer - don't give up, just keep pounding away. Perseverance is the key.

For the rest of your message; isn't it strange what love can do to a mind. Even a mind with dark corners. Some of my favorite stories on the stories site are romance/love. Sroke stories are fun for a while, but if I find meaning and soul in the story, I love it more and find myself returning often.

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1. Fluffy McNoo has started a thread http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=87626 that is very interesting. Insight into the mindset of readers/writers. No major surprises, but very interesting.

2. Just finished re-reading Mark Twayn's stories http://stories.xnxx.com/profile52318/Mark+Twayn. Again, wow. Very interesting and very moving.
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1. Fluffy McNoo has started a thread http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=87626 that is very interesting. Insight into the mindset of readers/writers. No major surprises, but very interesting.
*warmly* Thank you for mentioning my thread here Don, that's very much appreciated.

I'd like to make a suggestion about this thread, if I may? I've noticed that quite a lot of people have been recommended for people to read, and as this topic grows in posts, it's inevitable that some mentioned on the earlier posts won't be looked at by people new to the thread.

It might be an idea to trawl through the various posts, cut and paste the authors and stories mentioned, group them all together, and post them all as a single post. Kind of like this?

MrCool - My hot night with Emma. (MF BDSM)
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You get the idea! *grins*

By keeping the list up to date from time to time, people can quickly see what's interesting, and also - optionally? - what kind of genres, those writers write in. The genre would depend on what kind of work would be involved on posting the information.

Anyway, you're doing an awesome job with the topic, whatever you decide.

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A bit sad I didn't make the list. Seems like I've got a few die hard fans out there. But, alas, it seems around here no one actually looks around. They just read the latest stories and anything older falls to the wayside.


Almost makes a girl wanna just keep her stories to herself.

and I might have missed it but did no one mention Kimi?! OMG her stories are fucking GREAT!
Awww....that's sweet of you, hun. And for the record, I've always enjoyed your writing too.

I'm sure I wasn't mentioned because I haven't "published" anything in a pretty long time. I'm sure that's it. But writers sometimes have a way of coming back into vogue, after long periods of neglect. One never knows.
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Awww....that's sweet of you, hun. And for the record, I've always enjoyed your writing too.

I'm sure I wasn't mentioned because I haven't "published" anything in a pretty long time. I'm sure that's it. But writers sometimes have a way of coming back into vogue, after long periods of neglect. One never knows.
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Thank you, sweetie...

If I had that story to do over, I think I'd make her the REAL bride...kind of a mafia wife thing, you know, initiated into the Corleone family.
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Thank you, sweetie...

If I had that story to do over, I think I'd make her the REAL bride...kind of a mafia wife thing, you know, initiated into the Corleone family.
I quite like the fact that she's not the real bride. Gives more to the imagination.. Just imagine what happens during the wedding night!
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I said it before and I'll say it again; Kimiko was mentioned earlier in this thread. We are now to the point that the thread is too long for new readers to have seen it all. Some merit to Fluffy's suggestion, but I don't know where/how to start. All good information for me though, I have found an entirely new list of favored writers (you notice I did not say favorite). Love you all.
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I said it before and I'll say it again; Kimiko was mentioned earlier in this thread. We are now to the point that the thread is too long for new readers to have seen it all. Some merit to Fluffy's suggestion, but I don't know where/how to start. All good information for me though, I have found an entirely new list of favored writers (you notice I did not say favorite). Love you all.
Sorry, donb, I see that you're right. I have too short an attention span sometimes to read through long threads.
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Sorry, donb, I see that you're right. I have too short an attention span sometimes to read through long threads.
I, also, think this thread is getting too long, but it has been a very interesting experience. I truly have learned a lot and want to thank everyone who has participated and especially thank the writers who provide us all so much entertainment.
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I, also, think this thread is getting too long, but it has been a very interesting experience. I truly have learned a lot and want to thank everyone who has participated and especially thank the writers who provide us all so much entertainment.

Entertainment? Nahhh, we were just trying to get you off.
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Found this short story bt "Makemetakeit" on the forum and thought Wow!

http://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=87379

Great short story, perfect length for the forum and very well constructed.

Enjoy.
Thank you.

Yippee. I made the list. Pardon me while I do the happy dance now.
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Sshhhhhhh! Don't tell them that. They'll figure out it's part of the plot for political and economic world domination by short women.
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Sshhhhhhh! Don't tell them that. They'll figure out it's part of the plot for political and economic world domination by short women.

Ooooo, how short? Can I join? I'm only 5' 1"!!!


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Old 05-29-2009, 11:12 PM   #183
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Short women already dominate the world (at least in my home). My wife of 34 years is 4'10".
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Old 05-30-2009, 05:00 PM   #184
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Mine is only 4' 11" and spitting hell if ya cross her. Fortunately, I have learned where the line is and never ever cross it. I like my balls exactly where they are.
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Old 05-30-2009, 06:04 PM   #185
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Mine is only 4' 11" and spitting hell if ya cross her. Fortunately, I have learned where the line is and never ever cross it. I like my balls exactly where they are.
I thought you were bragging there for a minute!!
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Old 05-31-2009, 06:00 AM   #186
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A 4' 11" Schlong, what a thought, would make going to fancy dress parties easy, could go as a gas pump. Ha ha!
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For those of you who love women, I strongly recommend two new stories by Lesley Tara; 'The Cheerleader' (first of a series) and 'Try it on for size'. Both stories are 'first time' and very well written. 'Try it on for size' is truly lovely. I must admit that, but for a minor technicality, I could be a lesbian. I am a man. Anyway, both are very good stories and are evidence of a very gifted story-teller.
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Actually, I just wanted to thank everyone for these great suggestions. Looks like I've got a lot of reading to catch up on.
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I made the list! I made the list! (Joins makemetakeit in the Happy Dance)

Actually, I just wanted to thank everyone for these great suggestions. Looks like I've got a lot of reading to catch up on.
Why in the hell are you so surprised that you made the list after the job you did on the new daughter story? I just finished reading the series again and was as impressed and moved as I was the first time.
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Because if I said "Well of COURSE I made the list," I would sound snooty and stuck-up.

Actually, judging by the few stories I've read so far from the authors mentioned in this thread, it's an honor to be numbered among them.
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I'm new to the site, and waiting on the first two parts of the monster I'm writing that was supposed to be a cute, short little story to be validated.

Getting to the topic at hand, though he's only got two stories posted on this site that I know of, Ghost Writer is a damned good and talented writer. You should check him out. I don't understand the negative votes he's gotten, unless its because he actually uses words longer than five letters, and tells an actual story. There are many good writers here that do the same, and I enjoy reading all of them, but you guys have already mentioned most of them.

You should check his stories out at his profile. His username is Ghost Writer just like that, with the space in between. I'd post the link, but it won't let me yet. I think you may find yourself pleasantly surprised.

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Thanks for the tip. I'll check Ghost Writer's stories out and be on the lookout for yours. We all are interested in reading good stories (and most of the time I can even handle words longer than 5 letters). Thanks.
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You've got to try this: http://stories.xnxx.com/story/17761/...ts_a_Handy_Man. Once again jl317 has hit it out of the park.
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I have put out the first two chapters of the Janitor, something I am working on.

If you find it and read it, let me know what you think.

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I still rate Magpie Amy and Kimiko... there are others, I must go back and remember some of them...
Bless you Helena! I've posted on this site for 5 years and only just found this part! Wahay! I've even uploaded some photos.
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I love reading your stories!! I found the Fairy story the other day!! And I've read the Janitor - both chapters!! You're a really talented writer!!

Oh - the Interview with a Rapist was brill too!! Couldn't not comment on that one!!
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The first two parts of the monster sized story are finally validated, so in a shameless plug for those who are interested, its called "Young Exploration Part 1" and "Young Exploration Part 2." Constructive criticism is appreciated if you read it, as well as comments in general.
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Oh - the Interview with a Rapist was brill too!! Couldn't not comment on that one!!

Not many people got that one, a onesided conversation, but if you listen to someone on a phone for instance, is exactly like that.

I can't understand why the Dupree series only scores low to mid 80's. Starting with the ending is an art few understand. I liked it very much.
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Oh - the Interview with a Rapist was brill too!! Couldn't not comment on that one!!

Not many people got that one, a onesided conversation, but if you listen to someone on a phone for instance, is exactly like that.

I can't understand why the Dupree series only scores low to mid 80's. Starting with the ending is an art few understand. I liked it very much.
Thanks Styxx!! I think the Dupree story is rating low, because of the lack of sex in it - I think there's only two descriptions of sex in the story, and people obviously want more!! But whatever, I'm not bothered, I enjoyed writing it!!

Your rapist story was great, because you could imagine the guy being interrupted with questions by the interviewer!! Those bits made me laugh a little!! Are you thinking of adding any more chapters? Because, if I remember correctly, he got 'interrupted' didn't he? Or spotted at any rate, by the daughter?
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Nikki, you write well - you do have talent! Good story line, excellent descriptions and detail. I suspect you were getting flack for writing an interracial story? I get negative comments all the time for writing Daddy/daughter stuff but those are offset by the emphatic positive comments or the PMs of interest and story requests.

You can never please everyone, in which case you should only worry about pleasing yourself. Rape stories get complaints, incest stories too, interracial is going to get it as well - hell you could write a story about a man and a woman that meet, like each other and have sex and someone will complain.. Don't let it get to you, you've got a knack for story telling and I wouldn't mind seeing more of your work.
Thank you for your encouragement, after a several year break due to my laziness and well..just trying to keep a low profile, I have decided to continue on with my diary posts. I have just posted the next 2 installments everyones review. Truth is sometimes stranger than fiction.
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