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Old 07-04-2009, 11:30 PM   #301
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Woooooooohooooooooooooo I made the list..lmao thanks Don... I have 3 of the top rated stories on the main site now too. Yipppppppeeeeeeeeeeee IM on a roll. lol
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I came across a really good story by someone called Fallen Angel a few weeks ago. Truthfully, I hoped she'd make more. And now she has. I especially like her second story, very well detailed and erotic to read.. Then again, all her stories are.
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Woooooooohooooooooooooo I made the list..lmao thanks Don... I have 3 of the top rated stories on the main site now too. Yipppppppeeeeeeeeeeee IM on a roll. lol
Just because you made the list, don't stop trying to improve. Keep working on it. Just a suggestion.
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I came across a really good story by someone called Fallen Angel a few weeks ago. Truthfully, I hoped she'd make more. And now she has. I especially like her second story, very well detailed and erotic to read.. Then again, all her stories are.
Where did you find the stories, on the story site or on the forum site. Please let us know some detail. I think I have also read something under that name.
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Where did you find the stories, on the story site or on the forum site. Please let us know some detail. I think I have also read something under that name.
Oh, sorry. I should have provided links to the stories.
In chronological order from 1 to 3

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Oh, sorry. I should have provided links to the stories.
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Thanks. I'll read them as soon as I finish re-reading the first 35 chapters of daddycums Allison story. This is good input and I appreciate it.
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Does anyone know how the average ratings are calculated, because it doesn't seem to be done the traditional way, i.e. sum of individual ratings divided by number of stories. You know, the average. It seems to be weighted either to longevity on the site, or quantity of stories, or something, but even then, they really don't make any sense.

Also I'd just like to say that I in no way boost my own ratings. In fact, Lemark can attest to the fact that when I started posting a few months back I emailed him to change the voting to one per story per person (IP address, most likely, but I have no idea how they did it). My issue came from an author who was at the time consistently at the top with a number of stories, and any time anyone else's got near, they were oddly hit with several of negative votes all at once, except those authors who wrote favorable comments about him. It was all quite transparent, and as soon as the new voting came in, the author has somehow ceased to be at the top.

I'm not one of these guys who has to be at the top all the time. I write what I know, and I'm not trying to impress anyone. Admittedly I really like it when they're popular, but you know, it doesn't kill me it they aren't well received. Some of the stuff I've posted that I thought was really good kinda fell flat. Nor do I negative vote others unless, like Don and BiStander said, it really is poorly written or of a dismal nature. The whole point of this site it to express whatever you want, so write and let write I generally say.

Anyway, I'm rambling now, sorry. I still feel like I'm outside the writers loop, even though I really like what people are doing here, and love that it's generally very supportive.

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Sorry to resurrect a dead conversation, but I've been on vacation and haven't had a chance to post lately, and I just had to address this.

If anyone has the right to question the accuracy of the "Average Rating" category, it's you. With all of your stories in the nineties except one 89% (at the time I posted this), you should definitely be in the first page, if not the top 10.

I'm pretty certain the calculation involves the number of stories posted. My evidence for this was watching my own name on the Average Rating list. A couple of weeks ago I was on the second page, and I noticed that every single one of my stories outscored the highest rated story of the person right above me. The difference was that he had over 40 stories posted and I only had a few. Yes, I admit I've been vain enough to pay attention to how I scored compared to the other authors on the site.

I now have over 50 stories posted and I'm in the top 10, even though most of the ones I've posted since then have scored lower than my previous average.

My guess is that instead of averaging the scores of all your stories, it totals the scores of all your stories. For instance, two stories with a 55% will together outscore a single story with a 98%.

Is it fair? I don't know. Should someone with a single masterpiece outscore a more prolific writer with consistent quality? Or should a writer who's posted 800 pieces of garbage beat someone like Imp Again who has a dozen really good stories?

All I know is that if I'm correct in my guess, fbailey will probably keep the top spot for a long time. And rightfully so. Not only has he written over 300 stories, but most of them are scoring in the 80's. That's what I mean by a prolific writer with consistent quality.

By the way, Don, thanks for posting the list again to keep it on the last page.
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By the way, Don, thanks for posting the list again to keep it on the last page.
You're welcome. I figured you were out of touch and thought I would fill the breach. Someone must man the trenches.

Also, thanks for your very nice conversation with Imp Again. Great writer and I hope he/she does not give up.

By the way, re-reading the first 35 chapters the second time. Still love the story.
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He - he - he - Sorry, Imp Again. I note from your profile page that you are a male. Bottom line, take the comments from Daddycums to heart and write to satisfy yourself and your loyal readers. Don't worry about some cumulative score. Someone who can write stories like Watching Little Casey Next Door is someone we don't want to lose. don
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Sorry to resurrect a dead conversation, but I've been on vacation and haven't had a chance to post lately, and I just had to address this.

If anyone has the right to question the accuracy of the "Average Rating" category, it's you. With all of your stories in the nineties except one 89% (at the time I posted this), you should definitely be in the first page, if not the top 10.

I'm pretty certain the calculation involves the number of stories posted. My evidence for this was watching my own name on the Average Rating list. A couple of weeks ago I was on the second page, and I noticed that every single one of my stories outscored the highest rated story of the person right above me. The difference was that he had over 40 stories posted and I only had a few. Yes, I admit I've been vain enough to pay attention to how I scored compared to the other authors on the site.

I now have over 50 stories posted and I'm in the top 10, even though most of the ones I've posted since then have scored lower than my previous average.

My guess is that instead of averaging the scores of all your stories, it totals the scores of all your stories. For instance, two stories with a 55% will together outscore a single story with a 98%.

Is it fair? I don't know. Should someone with a single masterpiece outscore a more prolific writer with consistent quality? Or should a writer who's posted 800 pieces of garbage beat someone like Imp Again who has a dozen really good stories?

All I know is that if I'm correct in my guess, fbailey will probably keep the top spot for a long time. And rightfully so. Not only has he written over 300 stories, but most of them are scoring in the 80's. That's what I mean by a prolific writer with consistent quality.

By the way, Don, thanks for posting the list again to keep it on the last page.
It may also have something to do with downloads per story. There are writers on here with more stories than mine, seem to have about the same kind of average, but are way down the list. Comparing the reads, I see the numbers are quite different.

Also been on vacation, so have been somewhat quiet lately.
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Is anyone as enchanted as I am with Allison and the Primdales? Lovely story with something for almost everyone. Try it. The first 35 chapters are out and I'm now reading them for the second time - even better.
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It may also have something to do with downloads per story. There are writers on here with more stories than mine, seem to have about the same kind of average, but are way down the list. Comparing the reads, I see the numbers are quite different.

Also been on vacation, so have been somewhat quiet lately.
That could very well be it. It might be something as simple as adding up all of the positive votes, perhaps subtracting the negative votes. That could explain why I suddenly jumped up to near the top of the list.
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I hope everyone forgives me for disappearing for a few days. Too much reading to do. What a great day on the new stories list.
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Just for info - I opened chapters 36 through 50 of the Allison, et al stories just a very few minutes after they were posted on the new stories list. To my surprise, the very, very hottest of the chapters (young, lesbian, hot, love) had rec'd only one or two votes and they were negative. Looks like someone cares not a whit for the content of the story, but only for knocking down a good, talented writer. Fug'm. Daddycums, these 15 chapters are looking like the icing on the cake of the story so far. I just hope you don't pay any attention to the asshole who tries to load the rating towards the negative and just continue to entertain us.
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Just for info - I opened chapters 36 through 50 of the Allison, et al stories just a very few minutes after they were posted on the new stories list. To my surprise, the very, very hottest of the chapters (young, lesbian, hot, love) had rec'd only one or two votes and they were negative. Looks like someone cares not a whit for the content of the story, but only for knocking down a good, talented writer. Fug'm. Daddycums, these 15 chapters are looking like the icing on the cake of the story so far. I just hope you don't pay any attention to the asshole who tries to load the rating towards the negative and just continue to entertain us.
Looks like I've made myself a few enemies here on XNXX. That's fine; the first vote has to be positive or negative after all, so every story is going to be either 100% or 0% for a while. It usually takes a week or two before the trolls disappear and the score settles down to an accurate representation of how well it's received.

I'm more bothered by the fact that nobody's left comments in the thread I started for the story. There are some comments that people left on the individual chapters that I'd like to respond to, but I can't respond to my own stories.
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Looks like I've made myself a few enemies here on XNXX. That's fine; the first vote has to be positive or negative after all, so every story is going to be either 100% or 0% for a while. It usually takes a week or two before the trolls disappear and the score settles down to an accurate representation of how well it's received.

I'm more bothered by the fact that nobody's left comments in the thread I started for the story. There are some comments that people left on the individual chapters that I'd like to respond to, but I can't respond to my own stories.
As I ran my H.S Newspaper and yearbook for 2 years -- plus personel experience. Feel free to pm them to me or ask for email later. A good writer listen's to feedback wheather good or bad which makes for a GREAT story.

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???I reply to my own stories in the comments all the time. Is that wrong?
I only tried it once, and the comment never appeared, so I assumed that I couldn't respond.

I guess I was wrong.
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I only tried it once, and the comment never appeared, so I assumed that I couldn't respond.

I guess I was wrong.
You can't do it from your story page, but from the regular story list. Must have been a time out issue or something.

It took me a month to write the next chapter of My Neighbor's incest and really I wrote most of it this week. Spent twenty five hours working on it. I only did it because people have been hounding me for it and I said I would. But, I realized Joe in this story is becoming Daniel from my other story. I can't maintain both stories, I'm too slow.(I type about ten word a minute)
Chapter VII could very well suck and nobody will care if it dies, but I left so many dangling stories lines throughout and introduced three new characters in part VII.
So, for the sake of the people who have followed it, I thought I'd throw this out there. Imp_Again or Daddycums, you want to keep this one going?

I finished part VII with the last truth as it actually happened. So from here out, anything goes. Not that it hasn't been that way all along. But, I actually married Susan, and part VII ends with the details of our first time. The only difference was it wasn't Gatorade and there were no math lessons. Oh, and her name isn't Susan.
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Maybe it's me, but lately it seems that the really good pieces are getting trashed in the voting. A very wise person told me to read the comments and stop looking at the numbers.

And by the way, is anyone else having a hard time having a real life, and getting all this reading done? It's summer. I'm supposed to be outside. Thank you all for your creativitiy.
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Maybe it's me, but lately it seems that the really good pieces are getting trashed in the voting. A very wise person told me to read the comments and stop looking at the numbers.

And by the way, is anyone else having a hard time having a real life, and getting all this reading done? It's summer. I'm supposed to be outside. Thank you all for your creativitiy.
Anyone who is an average or below writer has to resort to something to get there stories to show up. Call all your friends to vote DC's stories down.
I know what you mean about needing to get out. I spent twenty five hours this week working on two stories. I just want to finish so I can enjoy all of the good ones out there.

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Maybe it's me, but lately it seems that the really good pieces are getting trashed in the voting. A very wise person told me to read the comments and stop looking at the numbers.

And by the way, is anyone else having a hard time having a real life, and getting all this reading done? It's summer. I'm supposed to be outside. Thank you all for your creativitiy.
Darling, there are some comments on Lubutt17's Canon stories that no one should read, much less pay attention to. Really stupid, especially in view of the lovely story he/she is trashing. Shame, shame.
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And that commentor was put in his place by a couple more. There is justice out there.
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And that commentor was put in his place by a couple more. There is justice out there.
It took long enough, but you're right, the commentor was well put in place. I knew, when I was a young man, a fine gentleman of 68 who, because of love, married a young woman of 23. Before they married, he went to the doctor to get a vasectomy because he didn't want to take a chance with leaving her with a young child. They lived happily together for another 15 years and have always provided a wonderful example for me. Lubutt17 has a marvelous talent that really shines in Canon and I'm still grateful to you for pointing me in his direction. don
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Default Rally to the defense of writers who are being bashed!

I don't spend much time on the forum, and I seldom post, as my count shows, but I find this thread interesting. When I tried to make a list of my own personal favorites, my brain started to hurt, since there are so many truly excellent writers on this site.

Of course, there is a lot of dreck -- that is to be expected, since most of us are amateurs who do this as a hobby. I, personally, have a lot of trouble reading authors who can't spell, or who write in text message style. Many of those people are rewarded with abysmal ratings, although, surprisingly to me, some of those people actually get decent scores.

Ratings and comments: Can anyone answer these questions for me? What is the flaw in character that compels some people to write mean-spirited, character-assassinating comments (anonymously, of course)? Everyone who writes decent stories seems to have at least one hater who posts drivel such as, "u suk this is stubid yur an asshole u shud die." What the fuck is the point of that? If you must say something negative, and I'm not sure why that is necessary, why not say something that could also suggest improvements?

I've had a few of those comments. At first, they hurt me. I was pretty timid about putting myself out there, having seen the grossly rude and hateful comments some pin-heads write. Now, I have come to expect it, although I still don't like it. Comments from people who just don't seem to understand the point of a story aren't really much better. Why, on a story tagged "incest" and "young" would someone post a negative comment about the morality of the content? Why, on a beautiful, delicate, mature romance story would someone write, "Get her pregnant and then do anal?" Huh? Did you even read the story?

There have been a few times when I have felt compelled to come to the defense of a fellow writer who has been victimized by one of these cowards. It upsets me to know that this kind of vicious negativity has actually caused some people to stop posting their work.
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"yea thier wernt any" That's one of my favorites!
I cannot answer your questions, except to say there are very sad people on this planet. They must be so unable to communicate that they lash out to try and get people stirred up. Makes them feel better, maybe.
Every site I have been on that required login to make a comment, had very few comments.

Why would some be on a porn site anyway, questioning right and wrong subject matter? Isn't that the pot and kettle thing?



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I'm willing to forgive a certain number of spelling or grammar errors, as long as it looks like the author took the time to proofread it. What I don't like is when authors write the story as quickly as they can and then post it without even reading it over once to see if it's even readable. Especially, as you mentioned, when they write it in Text-Message style. Ugh!

I have found, however, a few gems that would make great stories if the author just took the time to clean them up. That's the saddest of all, when the stories have so much potential but are ruined by the author's laziness.

Speaking of malicious comments, I think some are just trolls; they're trying to get a reaction out of people. Others are jealous fellow-writers who think their own stories should be scoring higher. I've had a few accuse me of rigging the vote and posting a whole bunch of positive comments to my own stories. Maybe they really believe that and maybe they're just trolls. Finally, there are some legitimate complaints when you write a story that's not to their taste, but they can't understand that it's all a matter of preference.

For instance, suppose someone is going through this thread looking for authors that might interest them. They come across my name, and see that several people have recommended me. So they open up one of my stories and read. If all they're looking for is a good stroke story, they're going to be disappointed. They'll believe that my writing doesn't live up to the hype, and they'll vote it down or leave a nasty comment. You're right that they need to look at the tags first, but sometimes the tags don't tell the whole story. Where's the "Tasteful" or "Slow Buildup" or "Upbeat" or "Love Story" tag, for instance?

BiStander:

I've never continued a story from another author before, so I don't know if I could do it justice. At this point I won't rule it out, but I'll need to read through the whole thing first. I haven't read it yet because I generally don't like to read unfinished stories, but I'll make an exception in this case to see if it's a project that might interest me.
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I've never continued a story from another author before, so I don't know if I could do it justice. At this point I won't rule it out, but I'll need to read through the whole thing first. I haven't read it yet because I generally don't like to read unfinished stories, but I'll make an exception in this case to see if it's a project that might interest me.
Part VII should be up in a day or two. Depends on how many you have ahead of it
I know this is strange and undertsand if it's not something you want to do. BTW, if I keep working on it, it will never be finished. I left so many possible story lines in the last four parts.
You'll see Joe change in part VII, but I started on part VIII and he's back to his old ways. Not completely, just some times Jasmine undoes him. She's so hot!
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I have another one nearly finished - it's a lesbian rape story, so it won't appeal to everyone who likes the other ones. It's a dark fantasy of mine from way back, and I'll put it in that genre (like 'Lawyers') as a warning signal. Anyway, it should be up in about a week or so.
Hi everyone!

Just wanted to let you know that I have just completed the lesbian rape story (which is set in a school, and inter-racial, so ticking at least three boxes for me, anyway!), and have put it in for validation. I'm sending this message now, because tomorrow we're off for our holidays (maybe not sea and sand, but hopefully a lotta sex), and so I won't be around when it gets posted - probably middle of next week - and be able to reply to any reactions or PMs.

I hope you like it - the story grew in the writing, which is why it took longer to finish. Now the first half is the rape scene (which is not too violent - more of a coercion), and the second half the domination and submission which follow afterwards. So some folk who like my other stories might like that part, if not the first.

After the hols, I'll get down to some sequels ....

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Just wanted to let you know that I have just completed the lesbian rape story (which is set in a school, and inter-racial, so ticking at least three boxes for me, anyway!), and have put it in for validation. I'm sending this message now, because tomorrow we're off for our holidays
have fun, everyone - luv from Lesley
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I hope you check back here when you return. I would just send a PM, but after writing a PM to you, I got a 504 error and all my text went to the endless stock pile of unsent messages.
I would be very interested in your opinion on my story Quieting the Storms for Katie. (Title sucks I didn't plan to write it, and I didn't have time to write it, but every time I went to the store or opened my refrig. I thought about Katie. It's the first time I have written a story with no men or boys. Girls only! It could very well suck like the title, but please your thoughts would be appreciated.
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I only tried it once, and the comment never appeared, so I assumed that I couldn't respond.

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DC, by all means, YES reply to nasty comments!!! Some asshole readers can post 'nit-picky' comments or downright derogatory insults with no basis in fact.

Thankfully, most of my comments are positively slanted, but every once in a while I'll get a doosy I just can't let slip by without a retalitory response. I'm pretty thick-skinned, but if offended badly enough, I can give out as good as I get. About a year ago, a fellow writer did this to me and after my scathing response he had the good grace to acctually apoligise.

Post your responding comments as soon as you can in the comment box below your own story. Yes below your own story. It usually takes ten minutes or so for your comment to appear.

BTW, I'm one of those fellow writers of yours who's jealous of your writing skills. I'm not as prolific as you, but I'm very proud if one of my tales appears on the same page as one of yours.
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DC, by all means, YES reply to nasty comments!!! Some asshole readers can post 'nit-picky' comments or downright derogatory insults with no basis in fact.

Thankfully, most of my comments are positively slanted, but every once in a while I'll get a doosy I just can't let slip by without a retalitory response. I'm pretty thick-skinned, but if offended badly enough, I can give out as good as I get. About a year ago, a fellow writer did this to me and after my scathing response he had the good grace to acctually apoligise.

Post your responding comments as soon as you can in the comment box below your own story. Yes below your own story. It usually takes ten minutes or so for your comment to appear.

BTW, I'm one of those fellow writers of yours who's jealous of your writing skills. I'm not as prolific as you, but I'm very proud if one of my tales appears on the same page as one of yours.
I generally ignore the negative comments because they're usually trolls, and don't deserve my time. Besides, I think they actually do me a favor by causing others to rally to my defense. For every trolling comment there are five comments denouncing it.

It's ironic that you should say you're jealous of me, because when I first started posting here, I was jealous of you. I saw you on the front page of the highest rated authors list and noticed how everyone in this very thread was talking about you, and wondered if I would ever be in a similar position. So I guess you could say you're kind of inspiration to me.

Funnily enough, I haven't read a single one of your stories. Not because I don't want to; I have them all downloaded and plan to go through them all one of these days. But with vacations and visiting family, finalizing Allison and the Primdales, and just going through the tedium of posting the darn thing, I haven't had time to read much. But you're at the top of my list as soon as things around here start to settle down. The titles and story codes intrigue me, so I suspect quite a few of your stories are going to end up into my private collection. I'll definitely let you know what I think of them when I read them.
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It's funny that I read these entries earlier, and now find myself in the same position, a defensive one. I rarely receive bad comments, but tonight was forced to answer back.
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It's funny that I read these entries earlier, and now find myself in the same position, a defensive one. I rarely receive bad comments, but tonight was forced to answer back.
Sorry to hear that! Keep your chin up, you're good! I hate bad comments, but normally see them as someone wanting attention. I usually ignore them. But sometimes I fire back a smart ass comment for fun.
What really makes me mad, are the comments about my mistakes! I'm not mad at the commentor, but me for continuing to miss these things! I can't possible try any harder.
I even run the story through software for one layer of proofing.
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I am frankly amazed at the attention paid to a story/author being on the front page of the top stories/30 days listing. I have, needless to say, spent far more time than is reasonable on this site and have not paid the slightest attention to that listing. I only (repeat, only) pay attention to the name of the author. That is the reason I love this thread so much - I'm learning of a lot of writers that I did not know before.

For DC - I strongly recommend you read JackassTales stories from earliest to latest as soon as you have time. Very entertaining and energizing (sort of like the bunny).

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I am frankly amazed at the attention paid to a story/author being on the front page of the top stories/30 days listing. I have, needless to say, spent far more time than is reasonable on this site and have not paid the slightest attention to that listing. I only (repeat, only) pay attention to the name of the author. That is the reason I love this thread so much - I'm learning of a lot of writers that I did not know before.
don - I think, as I did when first visiting this site, that the top list is what opens, so that is what you read. People assume if the story is on top, it must be good. Most probably don't even come here. I didn't look at the forum until I found this thread. By mistake more than plan.
Not even sure when I realized I could click on the list and find all the author's stories. So, if you can stay on the top list for a day or two your story gets lots of reads. If not, a good writer falls by the wayside.
On another note. Can everyone help me out? Is there an attraction to a story that continues and ones that are just one shot get kicked aside? Or, are my one shot stories that weak? I thought Quieting the Storm for Katie was a pretty hot story. Not great. Not a series, but what people seem to like. Sex stuff. Yet, it came out yesterday like my neighbor's story and it gets a 70% and a couple of reads only. Someone be honest and tell me if it sucks, is ok or is pretty good. I don't want to waste time writing stuff people aren't going to enjoy. Thanks.
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For me at least, it seems to be just the opposite. I find that my short stories tend to score a little higher than my novellas.

But I also think that the first few days are critical. There are fans who'll vote up anything you write and there are trolls who'll vote down anything you write, but the biggest group consists of people who will score it according to their honest opinions. Over time, the fans and the trolls get swallowed up in the larger group. If, like you mentioned, a story stays in the Top lists for a couple of days, it gets more reads and therefore that balance comes sooner. If, however, the trolls get to it first and it scores low, then it doesn't get as many reads and so the trolls have a greater impact on the overall score.

By the way, I'll take a look at Quieting the Storm for Katie and tell you what I think.
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For me at least, it seems to be just the opposite. I find that my short stories tend to score a little higher than my novellas.

But I also think that the first few days are critical. There are fans who'll vote up anything you write and there are trolls who'll vote down anything you write, but the biggest group consists of people who will score it according to their honest opinions. Over time, the fans and the trolls get swallowed up in the larger group. If, like you mentioned, a story stays in the Top lists for a couple of days, it gets more reads and therefore that balance comes sooner. If, however, the trolls get to it first and it scores low, then it doesn't get as many reads and so the trolls have a greater impact on the overall score.

By the way, I'll take a look at Quieting the Storm for Katie and tell you what I think.
DC, sounds like sound logic.
Thanks for having a look at that for me. I'm hoping lesley_tara will get my message and have a look at it. I think she can give good feed back.

I finally realized I can't judge my stories. Part VII that I thought was going to suck. Comments are completely opposite. I also threw a comment out there saying I thought it would stop after part VIII, and I needed someone to take it. Thanks to some unnamed writer, dc, someone said, there is a writer who just put out part 63! You got to keep this one going.

Thanks for setting the bar so high. I threw in a chair reference in Part VIII. Sorry it also includes that thing you don't like. There is a reason for that, but it probably will not continue to show up, if i continue.
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Thanks for having a look at that for me. I'm hoping lesley_tara will get my message and have a look at it. I think she can give good feed back.

I finally realized I can't judge my stories. Part VII that I thought was going to suck. Comments are completely opposite. I also threw a comment out there saying I thought it would stop after part VIII, and I needed someone to take it. Thanks to some unnamed writer, dc, someone said, there is a writer who just put out part 63! You got to keep this one going.

Thanks for setting the bar so high. I threw in a chair reference in Part VIII. Sorry it also includes that thing you don't like. There is a reason for that, but it probably will not continue to show up, if i continue.
I think I set the bar a little too high, even for me. I think novella-sized stories are the perfect match for me, because I don't have time to develop the characters as well as I would like in short stories, but novels are too much work. Allison and the Primdales was really just a fluke.

Like you, I'm surprised by which of my stories people seem to like the most. I mentioned before that I don't consider Shelter From the Cold to be my best work, but it's my highest scoring story. On the other hand, New Daughter is my favorite other than Allison and the Primdales, but it's scored a little lower than most of my others.

By the way, I read and commented on Quieting the Storms for Katie, although the comment won't show up until a moderator validates it. In short, I really liked it.
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I hope you don't mind if I get this off my chest. I apologize in advance, to the wonderful writers here.

I am not a great writer - but I'm learning. I write characters that I know and am comfortable with. With my recent story, I've come under attack from someone that either thinks he knows me, or is stalking me. He knows what I have posted on other stories, and follows me on the forum. If he doesn't like me or my stories, that's fine. I can take it.

But he has chosen to attack my friends. That is not right. I don't stack my stories with bogus comments. I don't mindlessly post to other's stories, just to make them look good. This man has attacked my integrity, as well as that of my friends. And he is too cowardly to post his name.

I thought of doing a lot of things. Never submit here again, change my user id and submit under a new name, deny comments or just never come back to the site. But, I am not a coward. I will keep writing and submitting, because I enjoy my new hobby and someday I hope to get really good at it. I dare this person to tell me who he is. Come to me privately, I dare you. But leave my friends alone. They don't deserve whatever anger you feel towards me.
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I hope you don't mind if I get this off my chest. I apologize in advance, to the wonderful writers here.

I am not a great writer - but I'm learning. I write characters that I know and am comfortable with. With my recent story, I've come under attack from someone that either thinks he knows me, or is stalking me. He knows what I have posted on other stories, and follows me on the forum. If he doesn't like me or my stories, that's fine. I can take it.

But he has chosen to attack my friends. That is not right. I don't stack my stories with bogus comments. I don't mindlessly post to other's stories, just to make them look good. This man has attacked my integrity, as well as that of my friends. And he is too cowardly to post his name.

I thought of doing a lot of things. Never submit here again, change my user id and submit under a new name, deny comments or just never come back to the site. But, I am not a coward. I will keep writing and submitting, because I enjoy my new hobby and someday I hope to get really good at it. I dare this person to tell me who he is. Come to me privately, I dare you. But leave my friends alone. They don't deserve whatever anger you feel towards me.
I applaud you, but I do differ with one opinion you have. I think your stories are wonderful. Please continue to write for us and know that your friends are our friends also. Look at my opinion of Lubutt17 and the Canon story. I only know of him because of you and for that, I am very grateful. Please take heart and continue with us. don
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Old 07-21-2009, 01:56 PM   #347
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I hope you don't mind if I get this off my chest. I apologize in advance, to the wonderful writers here....
A person who has legitimate criticisms of your work will generally post them and let it go at that.

Snipers and stalkers will persist; their agenda has nothing to do with your writing. It has to do with attacking you, personally, and hurting you as much as possible - probably in an effort to inflate their own egos and compensate for their own inadequacies.

Attacking the honesty and character of those who disagree with them is a dead giveaway. This person's criticisms boil down to "Your stories don't give me a hard-on," which he equates with "You're a lousy writer." That's pretty good evidence that we're not dealing with the brightest bulb on Broadway here. But then he goes on to assume that anyone who disagrees with him and LIKES your writing must be lying. We may be dealing with a mental defective as well as a character-challenged sadist. Either that, or a 13-year-old with more pimples than friends.

Anonymity is another clue. These people can SAFELY say things behind the curtain of the Internet that they would never dare to say to another person's face. Legitimate critics aren't afraid to give their names and stand by their criticisms - because legitimate criticisms are honest, well-meaning and genuinely constructive. Cowardly little pricks ARE afraid to give their names, because their "criticisms" are none of those things. They are intended to hurt and provoke a reaction and nothing more.

Which brings us to the one mistake you ARE making, which is to react at all. This little asshole's object is to upset you, and you are letting him know he is being successful. Best call is to ignore him. Entirely. It's like an obscene phone call; best strategy is to just hang up. If you don't react, they don't call back.

Thought patterns indicqte we are probably dealing with a middle-schooler with low intelligence and poor self- esteem anyway; "If I don't like it, it must suck" and "I'm only a loser because everyone cheats but me" are "insights" characteristic of 12-year-olds.

Don't you dare let this annoying, insignificant little prick run you off this site. You are an outstanding writer who has the talent and skill to bring characters to real, feeling, and fully drawn life and make us care about them. That's rare. Your work stretches and gets better with every story you post, and it already stands head, shoulders and body above the semiliterate fuck & suck cartoons that are so common here.

Yes, you like to write about women "of a certain age" of generous proportions who find true love. So what's wrong with that? You write what turns you on. We all do. You don't have to read much of my stuff to find out what puts lead in my pencil - and here's a news flash for your annoying fan: If you don't like it, nobody's forcing you to read it. Read something else more to your taste. Like the men's room wall at the bus station.

Here in Texas we have an expression appropriate for people like this:

"Fuck you, and the horse you rode in on."

And then we ignore them.

Keep writing. You touch my heart. And don't waste another keystroke on this cowardly little weenie.

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Aaaaww ejls that sucks - I haven't read your stories, but I have seen your role play and love it. Don't let some ignorant idiot upset you. I'm sure you have many admirers...
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