Sweet Little Sister - Page 4

Baddog_WOOF · 10-22-2009, 06:44 AM

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Originally Posted by SoCalChargerFan

Looks like he died ):

Like the Bolts going 14-2 in the regular season and choking at home to a wild card team in the playoffs?
That was dying! LOL

Unlike the Bolts, Nate will be back

Baddog_WOOF · 10-22-2009, 06:45 AM

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Originally Posted by 2 Inch Jake

Shit I guess he did, the poor bastard had a stroke in the middle of writing his epic incestual saga. I for one, was entralled with it and hoped for more. RIP Nate, we hardly knew ye.

You mean enthralled, right Sparky?

2 Inch Jake · 10-22-2009, 07:04 AM

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Originally Posted by Baddog_WOOF

You mean enthralled, right Sparky?

shit, i only had 1 beer and let that slip by, i'll edit.

2 Inch Jake · 10-22-2009, 07:06 AM

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Originally Posted by 2 Inch Jake

shit, i only had 1 beer and let that slip by, i'll edit.

what a pos forum, it won't even let me edit old posts, fuck xnxx lol

2 Inch Jake · 10-22-2009, 07:07 AM

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Originally Posted by Baddog_WOOF

Like the Bolts going 14-2 in the regular season and choking at home to a wild card team in the playoffs?
That was dying! LOL

Unlike the Bolts, Nate will be back

Take your sports to a sports forum, no one cares here, unless it's mma, kickboxing or boxing, then that's completely welcome

nate556 · 10-22-2009, 08:12 AM

The next few days passed as we settled back into our usual pattern. The week passed, and Thanksgiving was coming up. I would greet her at the door with a kiss, and we would sit around until mom got home. The week passed, and the weekend came. I didn't go meet Kelly at the park to give his knuckle back to him. I'd grown to like it. I kept it in my back pocket almost constantly.

The next week rolled by, and Thanksgiving came without Dad making it home like he promised. Mom was disappointed, we all were. It wasn't the first he missed, but our little thanksgiving was a lot less lively without him. Sometimes, we would go visit his family and have Thanksgiving with them, sometimes my mom's side. But often enough, we would just have it among ourselves.

Thanksgiving dinner was quiet, we only made small talk, and then it passed. That next weekend, my sister talked my mother into letting Shelly and Kit come over again. They were coming over Friday night, and staying until Sunday. For some reason. I didn't want to see them, or be around them. I didn't know why at the time, but looking back, I can see that they complicated things. They made things much more interesting, and I just wasn't interested in being around them, all weekend.

Friday night started with them letting themselves in. Maybe my dad was rubbing off on me, but that irritated the hell out of me.

"Hi!" Kit said giving my sister a hug.

Shelly dropped her book bag, which was now full of clothes instead of books. Can you really call it a book bag if it's not full of books ? That question irritated me. Shelly was wearing a strong perfume, which also irritated me. I often wonder why women wear perfume ? They always seem to smell good to me. Even after they work out and are sweaty, they still smell good. So, why perfume ? I've pondered this a lot in my captivity, and even now I don't know the answer.

Shelly sat down and lit a cigarette. "Hey." She said.

"Yo." I replied.

"Ahem." My mother said from the kitchen looking at Shelly.

Shelly looked at her, "I'm sorry." She said and put it out.

"How's school ?" I asked her, making conversation.

"It sucks." She told me. It appears I wasn't the only one in a bad mood.

Kit and my sister joined my mother in the kitchen, helping her cook and bake. Kit really took a shine to cooking, she seemed to enjoy doing it, as well as learning the little tricks my mother had to making delicious food.

"No matter how much I try, I can never make food like my mom." She said. "I do everything exactly like she does, but it never tastes the same, or as good."

"It'll come with experience." my mother told her.

I stood up and started walking up to my room. Shelly was on my heels, and I couldn't stop her from following me. She pushed my door shut and learned against it, taking out the cigarette she put out and lit it again.

"What's wrong ?" I asked her.

"Nothing. Just one of those days." She told me. "I needed to escape for a little bit."

She looked around my room, touching and looking at my things. The last time she was in here, she didn't take much time for sightseeing. She went through my music collection.

"Where's your porn ?" She asked me.

"What ?" I asked her, arching my eyebrow.

"All guys have porn. Where is yours ?" She asked.

"I don't have much." I pulled my matress out and slid a playboy and a couple old hustlers out. "I havn't had much need for them lately."

"Gross." She said. She sat down and looked at them. "This is so fake." She said. "Most of these girls are fake. What do guys look at this for ?"

"Well." I said to her, "Not every man has a couple of good looking women to keep him company, and so we think about those girls, and all the naughty things they would do to us if they were here, and then we spurt."

She arched an eyebrow at me, "spurt, huh ?"

"Yes." I told her with a grin. She leaned over and dropped the dirty magazines back between my bed and wall, and crept up straddle me.

"I want to make you spurt." She said and bit my lip.

I put my hands on her waist and held her hips, "Do that again, and I'll spurt in my pants."

She smiled down at me, and said, "I need this."

Her kiss tasted like cigarette, but I didn't care. She slid her hips back and fourth, and side to side on me, dry humping me as she kissed me. She pulled her head up and slid her hands under my shirt and over my stomach and chest muscles.

"What if we get caught again ?" I asked her with my heart pounding in my cheeks.

"I don't care," she said without stopping. "I need this."

I arched my back and she pulled my pants down. She unbutton and unzipped her and kicked them off. She leaned foreward and kissed me again, biting my lip again as she finished. I reached down and held my penis as she slid down on top of it.

I enjoyed her gasp. She started rocking her hips, and I decided to do more than just lay there. I started rocking and thrusting with her. I looked at her as the wave of pleasure washed over her, the way her face contorted in her passion.

She held in a loud moan, and it was then that something profound happened. Something that has never happened to me before, and never happened since. We both came at exactly the same time. She did let out a moan with that, then she smiled down at me. She leaned down and kiss me again, and then kissed my neck as she whispered in my ear.

"Ohh god, I needed that. Thank you, I so needed that." I ran my fingers through her dark hair. She sat up and put her legs over the side of the bed. She learned over and kissed me on the lips again.

"If you could fuck a famous person, who would it be ?" She asked me.

"I don't know. Who would you ?" I asked her.

"You first." She said, using my blanket to wipe herself between her legs.

There were so many to choose from. Selena Gomez, Natalie Portman, Meghan Fox, and it took me a minute to choose one. "Shakira."

"Yeah," Shelly said smiling, "She is hot."

"And you ?" I asked, pulling my own pants on.

"Henry Fonda." She said.

"He's old!" I said with a laugh. "And dead."

"Well, when he was younger. He was a total stud when he was younger." She said.

I continued to laugh for a minute, she only frowned down at me. "I'm just teasing you, it's fine."

She smiled and flipped her hair, and one last kiss she walked out of my room.

Not even a half hour, and I'd already done it once. The weekend, was only just beginning.

nate556 · 10-22-2009, 08:14 AM

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Originally Posted by 2 Inch Jake

Shit I guess he did, the poor bastard had a stroke in the middle of writing his epic incestual saga. I for one, was entralled with it and hoped for more. RIP Nate, we hardly knew ye.

LOL. I didn't die. But... I did sleep like the dead, which is why this is a little late.

SoCalChargerFan · 10-22-2009, 08:37 AM

He's alive! Glad to see the latest addition. it was good

fanatic_boy · 10-22-2009, 11:14 AM

and his stil alive

. huray

firmnx · 10-22-2009, 01:30 PM

Great story

ekx · 10-22-2009, 03:28 PM

yay! thank you

Alliierter88 · 10-22-2009, 11:08 PM

more, more, more, more, more pleaaaaaaseeeeee... fill us with ur brilliant mind. your chapters are like drugs. sweet, sweet drugs

nate556 · 10-23-2009, 04:55 AM

(I've made a big error in my story that I just realized. I didn't even have Fall Break happen. Most schools give kids a few weeks off for Fall Break, and I didn't even think about that, lol)

As I sat back in bed, I thought for a moment, this is what they mean when they say a celebrity is over-sexed. I wondered if it was even possible for a man to run out of juice. I didn't pay too close attention in health class, but I did know at the time that a man's body never stops producing the stuff. I wondred what exactly jizz was made of, and I thought about the organ inside the body that stores it. I was thinking entirely too much of cum.

I clicked my TV on, then went down stairs to get a drink. Shelly was asleep on the couch, or she was pretending to be asleep. I wasn't about to shake her to find out. Mom, Kit, and my sister were sitting at the table, and judging from the looks I got when I stepped in to get a pepsi, they were girltalking. Without a word, I took my can up stairs and clicked the TV on. I didn't feel safe in a house full of women.

I sat back and settled the channel on a biker movie called "Wild Hogs". It had it's funny moments, but I smirked at the end when the guy's weren't stomped to death in 5 minutes. That's the way it really happened, at least. It had Sam Elliot in it though, and he automatically makes a movie good. My mother really had a thing for him, but I saw him as a symbol of coolness. A sigil of masculinity to aspire to. I think, perhaps, maybe my mother liking him was the reason I viewed him as such ? Odd concept.

I sat there watching my movie, and I had a very good calm going. I could have really used a jaw full of dip, that would have been perfect. At some point my mother opened my door and said, "I'm off to bed."

"Good night." I replied to her.

"You be good." She told me, giving me the knowing look that only a mother can.

"I'll try." I told her with a grin.

She arched her eyebrow and went to her room, leaving my door open. Some time later, I got up to go to the bathroom, and I heard the girls down in the living room giggling. It was one of the rare times where a man gets to make a choice: go to bed, or go spend time with a group of cute girls. I, like any man under 40, chose to go surround myself with giggling girls.

I silently crept down the hallway and the stairs, and entered the living room undetected. They were laying on the floor side by side, their heads together in what I assumed was more girltalk. I was sneaky, and slowly stepped closer and closer, like an indian or a tiger stalking my prey.

I was thinking of shouting boo... but decided it against it, and chose to grab a leg or a foot instead. Now, I had to make another decission. There were 6 legs, which one to grab ? I decided to grab my sisters.

I got down on my hands and knees and crept up on their legs, and then I grabbed her calf in a hard grip that made her call out and jump. She turns around and then they all three fell into a fit of giggles.

I stood up and plopped down on the couch, smiling.

"What's on TV ?" I asked.

"Junk," My sister replied.

"So, you want to fuck Shakira ?" Kit asked me with a smile on her face.

"Of course!" I replied, "She can do some amazing things with her hips and legs."

"So can I." My sister said, and they fell into another fit of giggles.

"Have you ever sat back and wondered... "I said, drawing out a small silence, "How do sharks fuck ?"

This brought a round of laughter, and Shelly said, "Scorpions have sex with their faces." More giggles.

"So do we." I said with a grin.

"I saw on TV once, where they showed these wolves having sex, and they were doing it backwards. And, while they were doing it, these other wolves kept attacking them, so they were fighting while doing it backwards." Kit said in a single breath.

"Wow." Shelly said. "We should try that sometime."

"I don't bend that way." I said, which brought another round of giggles from the girls.

"Why don't you come down here with us ?" Kit asked smiling up at me.

Ohh, I wanted to. God I wanted to! "I'm sorry, I can't." I said, shaking my head.

"Aww. Why not ?" She asked.

"He doesn't want to get caught and get in trouble." My sister said.

"hmmm." Kit said.

"What are you guys doing tomorrow ?" I asked.

"Shopping." My sister answered.

"Okay. Well... I'm going to go on to bed now." See you in the morning.

"Good night." They all three said at once, then giggled about it.

I went back to my room and fell asleep.

(small update, sorry.)

ekx · 10-23-2009, 05:08 AM

Thank you

aobafmty · 10-23-2009, 06:00 AM

been on here for so long read everything finally found something worthy to post about
most amazing story ive ever read
i can picture every part of it

Iliekpei · 10-23-2009, 08:46 AM

Love it

2 Inch Jake · 10-23-2009, 10:07 PM

I'm a bit dissapointed, I just discovered this thread recently and read it all in one sitting except for the last couple posts. Can't you take like a couple days off of work and just finish the entire thing? lol keep up the good work.

fanatic_boy · 10-24-2009, 07:46 PM

super story

nate556 · 10-26-2009, 10:02 AM

I woke up the next morning, and did the stumbling sleepy shuffle to the bathroom. When I got out, I went to my room and selected my clothes for the day: jeans and a black t-shirt. I took them down stairs, only sparing a glance at the sleeping girls. Mom was already in the kitchen making breakfast.

"Good morning." She said.

"Mornin'" I told her. "They're still asleep ?"

"Yes." She said, "They were up very late giggling and laughing."

I had a minor panic attack, thinking she might have heard me too. "I slept like a log." I told her, and went into the bathroom to shower. I showered, and didn't jerk off, and didn't have any girls barge in for my love juice. I wondered, for not the first time if it's possible for a man to run out. Then I brushed my teeth, put on my deodorant, shaved, and got dressed.

When I finally got out, Shelly was sitting at the kitchen table chatting with my mother. She gave me a smile and went into the bathroom after me, running a hand across my chin and neck as she passed. Mother saw it and raised her eyebrow.

"She's trouble." She told me.

I couldn't think of a reply so I went back up to my room. I kicked my music on and laid back in my bed wishing for not the first time I had some skoal, or kodiak, to pack a in a lip. I kicked on my TV, and flipped it around looking for a decent show, but settled on saturday morning cartoons. It wasn't like I could hear the TV over the stereo anyways.

It was only about 20 minutes before my door opened up and my sister walked in to tell me good morning, and that they would be leaving soon. She asked if I would come too... and I agreed. I couldn't say no to her.

I got up and went back downstairs to get a plate of eggs and sausage. I sat down next to Kit on the couch and dug in. Even though they started eating before me, I still finished first. I'm a very no-nonsense guy when it comes to food. I'm also the kind who would eat anything, as long as it was cooked and wouldn't kill me.

The TV was still on the animal channel, and everyone seemed bored by it. It wasn't long until we were dressed up in our winter gear and headed out the door. I took a seat in the back, and Kit jumped in the back with me. Shelly drove, since it was her car, and my sister sat in the front.

Kit was on me before we were even out of the driveway, taking my hand and putting her head on my shoulder. She touched my face where I'd shaved the same way Shelly had. She smiled and I smiled back at her pretty face. Shelly put her music on, which I hated. I tolerated it, for their sake, but I didn't enjoy it.

While we were passing through town, I saw Kelly out walking with his young cousin. "That's Kelly. Stop the car."

"Why ?" Shelly asked.

"Stop the car." I told her sharply.

"Fine." She pulled off to the side, and I waved Kelly over. They crossed the street and walked up the car.

"What's goin on ?" I asked him.

"Just out for a walk." He told me.

"We're headed to the mall, do you two want to come ?" I asked him.

"I don't think we should." He said.

"C'mon man, it'll be a blast." I told him.

He looked at his cousin and asked her. She only shruged and tilted her head. She motioned with her hands, and Kelly put his face back in the window and said, "She said it looked crowded in there."

"Kit can sit on my lap." I said, and she slid over and at on me, quite joyfully, i might add.

Kelly turned back to his cousin and spoke quietly again. She motioned with her hands again, and he opened the door and got in. She sat on his lap too. She gave him a kiss on the cheeck as they tried to pull the seatbelt out far enough to latch it. Kit had to help them with it, and his sister helped with ours.

"Comfortable back there ?" My sister asked twisted to look back at us.

"Very." I said with a grin. She only sat down and looked out the window.

Shelly rolled her eyes and put the car back on the road. I reached into my back pants pocket, which pushed my hips into Kit, who loved it, and took out the brass knuckles and held them out for Kelly.

"Here, you can have these back." I told him.

He looked down at them and said, "You keep them. I already got another pair."

"Where do you get them ?" I asked him.

"I make them." He said.

"What ? How ?" I asked.

"It's easy, you just need a tool and die, which I have an uncle who does, and some brass. Those aren't true brass, but bronze. I hate the way brass smells." He told me.

His cousin motioned with her hands again, and he gave her a nudge on the neck with his nose.

"What happened ? Why is she using sign language ?" I asked him.

She motioned with her fingers, and Kelly explained, "She just recently had to have surgery on her throat."

I frowned and asked, "Why ?"

"She had a tumor in her throat, they had to take it out, she lost her voice from it." HE explained. She lifted her chin and pointed at a small healing scar on her neck.

"I'm sorry to hear that." I told her. "Is it permanent ? Or will she get it back ?"

She shook her head, and I could tell from her face it was permanent. Kit wiggled in my lap, and I wished she'd stop, because I was getting hard from it.

"Is she good now ? Will it come back ?" My sister asked from the front seat.

"We don't think so. It's a problem she's had a while, she never was much of a talker anyways." Kelly explained. He kissed her on her neck and said, "I don't need a voice when I can read your body anyways."

She smiled and blushed, glancing around at us like she was embarassed. I put my arm around Kit's waist and blew in her ear and she suppressed a giggle and wiggled in my lap.

I almost shot my load there in my pants by the time we got to the mall.

(I know there is little sex in this leg of the story, but things are getting pretty routine. Just bear with me. Every story has a boring part... this is my story's boring part, LOL)

Alliierter88 · 10-26-2009, 11:50 AM

boring part?????
ther is nothing boring in the whole story...
until now

i think nothing you write is boring... never

SoCalChargerFan · 10-26-2009, 05:56 PM

Noticed a small mistake which might confuse some.

"Kit had to help them with it, and his sister helped with ours."
I'm assuming you're talking about Kelly's cousin, not sister, right?

SilkMarshmallow · 10-26-2009, 06:09 PM

Got to agree with the multiple positive posts- this story is incredibly good. Hell I joined the forum just to comment on this hah. Not into the whole incest thing too much but, you cant beat whats written here- im always waiting for the next part lol.

Big.John · 10-26-2009, 08:52 PM

If this is boring, I must LOVE boring stoies. Keep up the good work.

nate556 · 10-26-2009, 09:16 PM

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Originally Posted by SoCalChargerFan

Noticed a small mistake which might confuse some.

"Kit had to help them with it, and his sister helped with ours."
I'm assuming you're talking about Kelly's cousin, not sister, right?

Ahhh! Yes! his cousin. I feel so dumb for missing that.

ekx · 10-27-2009, 05:54 AM

:D

aobafmty · 10-27-2009, 08:42 AM

i like the boring parts it makes it feel more real
more the real the better

tastymelissa · 10-28-2009, 02:51 AM

great story

ScottGeneva · 10-28-2009, 04:24 AM

incredible story so far

fanatic_boy · 10-28-2009, 07:00 AM

amazing

Ilikepie · 10-29-2009, 08:50 PM

Nate You have us waiting/wanting More!!!!

Chaziboy · 10-30-2009, 01:28 AM

Sooo, what's going on? Keeping us waiting you bloody tease :P

SilkMarshmallow · 10-30-2009, 05:08 AM

Nate, we love you- now don't make us eat those words and hang your ass, we need more

THIS is the boring part lol, the wait for the next installment :P

sploder1992 · 10-30-2009, 09:12 AM

I completely agree, that it sucks waiting for the next one, checking every night to see if you wrote a new portion.. But, I'm sure we all understand that you have a life too.

nate556 · 10-31-2009, 10:06 AM

When we got inside the mall, which was the biggest around, but compared to some of the malls in the big cities, it was small. The first thing we did was hit JC Penny. For me, this was insanely boring... until we got to their lingerie department. Watching the girls pick out panties and bras and other underwear was exciting. I even imagined Kelly's little cousin in her underwear.

I felt weird being around her, too. Not because she was his, those kind of boundaries are clear to men, and only a man looking to get his ass kicked knows not to cross that line. It was her muteness. Even though she didn't talk much at halloween, she did have a lovely voice. I felt guilty talking to her, and not knowing sign language made understanding her worse. Then, I would feel guilty for not talking to her. Like I was excluding her somehow.

She had a good time though, and smiled a lot at the antics that took place between Kit and Shelly. She had a beautiful smile that made her cheek bones stand out.

After JC Penny, we hit Old Navy, and that was more of a bore for me. Kelly watched the girls interact with a smile on his face that would always look out of place to me. He was simply not the kind of man who smiled much, and when he did, it was kind of scary. It was a lot like a mix between a smirk and a grin, like he knew a joke no one else did.

After Old Navy, we slipped into the music store, which was a lot more exciting to me. I am a very musical person. To me, Music is a kind of magic. Music can make sad people happy, happy people sad, and at concerts it can move thousands of people to take out their lighters all at once and wave them in the air in unison... if that isn't some kind of magic spell, I don't know what is!

I actually found a Sonata Arctica album, and introduced Kelly to their amazing music. He'd never heard of them before, but as soon as he heard "The Power of One", he was hooked. He, in turn, had his cousin listen to it, and she also fell in love with their songs. She particularly liked "The End of this Chapter".

I didn't end up getting anything, since I already had all the albums that I liked. After the music store, we went to the book store. I think everyone except Kit and Kelly were bored there. I was never much of a book reader. The books I like have pictures of naked women in them. Kelly ended up getting 4 books in total there, and his cousin got two of them herself. Kit got a book on tarot card reading, as well as a pack of tarot cards. Shelly didn't have any problems expressing how dumb she was for spending money on, "oooo magic picture cards".

I personally thought it was interesting. Of course, the only thing I knew about tarot at that time was basically what I'd seen in horror movies. Teenage girl entering a spooky shop of an old crone, all giggly and ask about the guy she likes, but doesn't like her back, of course. And then the old Crone putting a gnarled finger on the Death card, and then you insert dramatic spooky music...

But, I learned through Kit there was a lot more to it than that. It was very interesting, really. Maybe a little kooky, but still fun. So, after the book store, we went to the toy store. We actually ended up getting ourselves kicked out of that shop. My sister, Kit, and Kelly's cousin, found some of those nerf toys that were already opened, and had themselves a little war right there in the middle of the store over the heads of little kids.

Me and Kelly ended up hurling a football back and fourth from one end of the store to another. Shelly ended up watching us all and telling us how dumb we were and that we would get in trouble. She was right, as the store manager asked us to leave, then summoned security to get us out. The funniest part, was that some of the kids in the store decided to emulate our behavior and play with the toys directly in the store like we were. It was some kind of miracle we didn't get thrown out of the mall completely.

When we were tossed out of the toy store, we went to the leather shop. It was one of my favorite places, as the smell of leather was intoxicating. Kelly bought himself a pair of gloves, and got a Harley Davidson bandana for his cousin. No one else bought anything, as everything was very expensive, but looking and touching was fun. His cousin took the bandana out, and and Kelly folded it so it would cover her head. She put it on, and was instantly made cuter.

So, after the leather shop, we hit what I can only describe as a Hippy shop. It was full of weird little decorations, like dream catchers, and little statuettes. It allowed you to make bracelets and necklaces and sold all kinds of semi-religious items. It had a wall full of scented candles and incense. Kelly got his cousin a cinnamon scented candle, and the other three girls got all kinds of different incense and candles.

I decided to get my sister a gift as well, but I couldn't get just 1 gift, I needed to get something for Kit and Shelly as well. I went to the counter and had three necklaces made. One was the word Mind between two stars. Another was the word Body between two hearts, and the third was the word Spirit, with a heart on one side and a star on the other.

I gave the Mind necklace to Kit, the Body necklace to Shelly, and the Spirit necklace to my sister. They each loved them. We decided to go to the food court and relax before taking another walk around the Mall. We were on our way to the food court when we ran into Randy. I stopped to talk to him for a moment, and told the others to go on, i would catch up.

"Looks like you're pretty busy." He said to me watching the group go. "Who's that dark haied girl ?"

"Kelly's cousin." I told him.

He looked again and saw the way she held his arm with her head on his shoulder. "Ohh, weird." he said.

"What are you doing here ?" I asked him.

"Just walking. I had to get away from my family, they were driving me nuts." He answered.

"Do you have any dip on you could buy ?" I asked him. "I ran out some time ago, and almost got myself kicked out of a gas station buying it."

"Here..." he said and pulled a tin of Kodiak Wintergreen out of his back pocket. "I havn't dipped much from it, but 5 bucks and it's yours."

"5 bucks ?" I asked riasing my eyebrow.

"Yeah. I'm broke." He told me.

I dug out the 5 bucks and bought the tin from him.

"Sweet!" He said. "If you run out, call me. I'll give you your next tin free, since you did me this favor."

"Allright." I said, "I need to go catch up with them. I'll catch you later."

I stuffed the tin in my back pocket and power walked to the food court. I rejoined my group as they were deciding on what to get on the Pizza.

"Pepperoni." I said.

"And sausage." Shelly said.

"I just want cheese." Kit chimed in.

"We'll eat whatever." Kelly said and his cousin nodded.

"Pepperoni..... and sausage... with pineapple." My sister said. That last part made everyone laugh.

We just ended up getting individual slices, instead of a whole pizza.

When we got our pizza, we sat down. I sat next to my sister, and Kit and Shelly sat down the other side of her. Kelly and his cousin sat scross from us, Kelly in front of my sister, me in front of his cousin.

"Having fun ?" I asked her.

She looked at me with her soft brown eyes and nodded with a smile. She was very cute.

"So, did you get more of that nasty stuff off Randy ?" My sister asked.

"Of course." I told her.

"You should have seen when he tried to buy it at the gas station," Kit told her.

"Ohh ?" My sister said raising an eyebrow at me. "What happened ?"

"Nothing," I told her. "They guy just told me no. A lot."

We made small talk for the rest of the meal, then got up to walk around the mall again. Nothing else happened, and it was time to go home.

Kristten · 10-31-2009, 11:48 PM

Wow, that's exactly what Ive looking for

2 Inch Jake · 11-01-2009, 11:28 PM

MOAR!

SilkMarshmallow · 11-02-2009, 07:52 AM

That's a fatass cat my friend!

THANK YOU NATE :D:D:D

mypono · 11-02-2009, 10:09 PM

wow oh wow just an amazing story with many twists and turns its very addicting!!

Keep em cumming!

HornyTrucker · 11-03-2009, 02:54 AM

Well got to admit..... I'm hooked too! Took me a couple of evenings to read it all and now I wait in anticipation for the next episode.
Great talent here.... Keep it up

SoCalChargerFan · 11-03-2009, 04:48 AM

Good update from Halloween. Much better than candy!

fanatic_boy · 11-04-2009, 07:02 PM

more please:D

DeepinsideXXx · 11-04-2009, 07:45 PM

I agree with the MOAR cat up there.

2 Inch Jake · 11-04-2009, 10:55 PM

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Originally Posted by DeepinsideXXx

I agree with the MOAR cat up there.

I hope nate realizes that he has infuriated the MOAR cat by not providing MOAR in a timely fashion.

funfun3 · 11-04-2009, 11:57 PM

Is this a true story??? I luv it so much, I've been reading for hours! Also, I don't get this.

I woke up a short time later in the darkness, and I couldn't move. I felt my dad standing over me ready to plunge a knife into my guilty back. I couldn't move, and I couldn't do anything to stop him. Any second now he was going to plunge that knife into my back. I screamed inside my head and yelled cuss words at him. Any minute, that knife would plunge in and kill me. I tried to move my arms, but they wouldn't budge. I was still screaming at him in my head when sleep carried me away....

nate556 · 11-05-2009, 01:58 AM

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Originally Posted by funfun3

Is this a true story??? I luv it so much, I've been reading for hours! Also, I don't get this.

I woke up a short time later in the darkness, and I couldn't move. I felt my dad standing over me ready to plunge a knife into my guilty back. I couldn't move, and I couldn't do anything to stop him. Any second now he was going to plunge that knife into my back. I screamed inside my head and yelled cuss words at him. Any minute, that knife would plunge in and kill me. I tried to move my arms, but they wouldn't budge. I was still screaming at him in my head when sleep carried me away....

It was a sleep-paralysis episode.

and i'll get the next little episode up here in a few hours. I'm waiting for my headache to go away before I kick back and stare at the screen for a few hours.

funfun3 · 11-05-2009, 03:15 AM

Is this story true?

But I love it either way!

wael150 · 11-05-2009, 05:01 AM

awesome!
1st post on second page, btw

ekx · 11-05-2009, 06:46 PM

thanks hun

Chaziboy · 11-06-2009, 01:08 AM

Nooooo, it's been 6 days and no new part

HornyTrucker · 11-06-2009, 04:12 AM

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Originally Posted by funfun3

Is this story true?

But I love it either way!

My understanding is that this is fiction... He had a beginning and knows how it will end... It's unfolding to us in episodes and can turn and twist in any direction... If I remember correctly... the author early on asked for suggestions to include in this GREAT story.

Keep it up Nate... I'm loving it.
HT

10-22-2009, 08:12 AM	#156
nate556 Porno Junky Join Date: Sep 2008 Age: 29 Posts: 449	The next few days passed as we settled back into our usual pattern. The week passed, and Thanksgiving was coming up. I would greet her at the door with a kiss, and we would sit around until mom got home. The week passed, and the weekend came. I didn't go meet Kelly at the park to give his knuckle back to him. I'd grown to like it. I kept it in my back pocket almost constantly. The next week rolled by, and Thanksgiving came without Dad making it home like he promised. Mom was disappointed, we all were. It wasn't the first he missed, but our little thanksgiving was a lot less lively without him. Sometimes, we would go visit his family and have Thanksgiving with them, sometimes my mom's side. But often enough, we would just have it among ourselves. Thanksgiving dinner was quiet, we only made small talk, and then it passed. That next weekend, my sister talked my mother into letting Shelly and Kit come over again. They were coming over Friday night, and staying until Sunday. For some reason. I didn't want to see them, or be around them. I didn't know why at the time, but looking back, I can see that they complicated things. They made things much more interesting, and I just wasn't interested in being around them, all weekend. Friday night started with them letting themselves in. Maybe my dad was rubbing off on me, but that irritated the hell out of me. "Hi!" Kit said giving my sister a hug. Shelly dropped her book bag, which was now full of clothes instead of books. Can you really call it a book bag if it's not full of books ? That question irritated me. Shelly was wearing a strong perfume, which also irritated me. I often wonder why women wear perfume ? They always seem to smell good to me. Even after they work out and are sweaty, they still smell good. So, why perfume ? I've pondered this a lot in my captivity, and even now I don't know the answer. Shelly sat down and lit a cigarette. "Hey." She said. "Yo." I replied. "Ahem." My mother said from the kitchen looking at Shelly. Shelly looked at her, "I'm sorry." She said and put it out. "How's school ?" I asked her, making conversation. "It sucks." She told me. It appears I wasn't the only one in a bad mood. Kit and my sister joined my mother in the kitchen, helping her cook and bake. Kit really took a shine to cooking, she seemed to enjoy doing it, as well as learning the little tricks my mother had to making delicious food. "No matter how much I try, I can never make food like my mom." She said. "I do everything exactly like she does, but it never tastes the same, or as good." "It'll come with experience." my mother told her. I stood up and started walking up to my room. Shelly was on my heels, and I couldn't stop her from following me. She pushed my door shut and learned against it, taking out the cigarette she put out and lit it again. "What's wrong ?" I asked her. "Nothing. Just one of those days." She told me. "I needed to escape for a little bit." She looked around my room, touching and looking at my things. The last time she was in here, she didn't take much time for sightseeing. She went through my music collection. "Where's your porn ?" She asked me. "What ?" I asked her, arching my eyebrow. "All guys have porn. Where is yours ?" She asked. "I don't have much." I pulled my matress out and slid a playboy and a couple old hustlers out. "I havn't had much need for them lately." "Gross." She said. She sat down and looked at them. "This is so fake." She said. "Most of these girls are fake. What do guys look at this for ?" "Well." I said to her, "Not every man has a couple of good looking women to keep him company, and so we think about those girls, and all the naughty things they would do to us if they were here, and then we spurt." She arched an eyebrow at me, "spurt, huh ?" "Yes." I told her with a grin. She leaned over and dropped the dirty magazines back between my bed and wall, and crept up straddle me. "I want to make you spurt." She said and bit my lip. I put my hands on her waist and held her hips, "Do that again, and I'll spurt in my pants." She smiled down at me, and said, "I need this." Her kiss tasted like cigarette, but I didn't care. She slid her hips back and fourth, and side to side on me, dry humping me as she kissed me. She pulled her head up and slid her hands under my shirt and over my stomach and chest muscles. "What if we get caught again ?" I asked her with my heart pounding in my cheeks. "I don't care," she said without stopping. "I need this." I arched my back and she pulled my pants down. She unbutton and unzipped her and kicked them off. She leaned foreward and kissed me again, biting my lip again as she finished. I reached down and held my penis as she slid down on top of it. I enjoyed her gasp. She started rocking her hips, and I decided to do more than just lay there. I started rocking and thrusting with her. I looked at her as the wave of pleasure washed over her, the way her face contorted in her passion. She held in a loud moan, and it was then that something profound happened. Something that has never happened to me before, and never happened since. We both came at exactly the same time. She did let out a moan with that, then she smiled down at me. She leaned down and kiss me again, and then kissed my neck as she whispered in my ear. "Ohh god, I needed that. Thank you, I so needed that." I ran my fingers through her dark hair. She sat up and put her legs over the side of the bed. She learned over and kissed me on the lips again. "If you could fuck a famous person, who would it be ?" She asked me. "I don't know. Who would you ?" I asked her. "You first." She said, using my blanket to wipe herself between her legs. There were so many to choose from. Selena Gomez, Natalie Portman, Meghan Fox, and it took me a minute to choose one. "Shakira." "Yeah," Shelly said smiling, "She is hot." "And you ?" I asked, pulling my own pants on. "Henry Fonda." She said. "He's old!" I said with a laugh. "And dead." "Well, when he was younger. He was a total stud when he was younger." She said. I continued to laugh for a minute, she only frowned down at me. "I'm just teasing you, it's fine." She smiled and flipped her hair, and one last kiss she walked out of my room. Not even a half hour, and I'd already done it once. The weekend, was only just beginning. __________________ Foot in mouth and head up ass-hole Whatcha talkin' 'bout? Difficult to dance 'round this one 'til you pull it out.

10-22-2009, 11:14 AM	#159
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10-23-2009, 04:55 AM	#163
nate556 Porno Junky Join Date: Sep 2008 Age: 29 Posts: 449	(I've made a big error in my story that I just realized. I didn't even have Fall Break happen. Most schools give kids a few weeks off for Fall Break, and I didn't even think about that, lol) As I sat back in bed, I thought for a moment, this is what they mean when they say a celebrity is over-sexed. I wondered if it was even possible for a man to run out of juice. I didn't pay too close attention in health class, but I did know at the time that a man's body never stops producing the stuff. I wondred what exactly jizz was made of, and I thought about the organ inside the body that stores it. I was thinking entirely too much of cum. I clicked my TV on, then went down stairs to get a drink. Shelly was asleep on the couch, or she was pretending to be asleep. I wasn't about to shake her to find out. Mom, Kit, and my sister were sitting at the table, and judging from the looks I got when I stepped in to get a pepsi, they were girltalking. Without a word, I took my can up stairs and clicked the TV on. I didn't feel safe in a house full of women. I sat back and settled the channel on a biker movie called "Wild Hogs". It had it's funny moments, but I smirked at the end when the guy's weren't stomped to death in 5 minutes. That's the way it really happened, at least. It had Sam Elliot in it though, and he automatically makes a movie good. My mother really had a thing for him, but I saw him as a symbol of coolness. A sigil of masculinity to aspire to. I think, perhaps, maybe my mother liking him was the reason I viewed him as such ? Odd concept. I sat there watching my movie, and I had a very good calm going. I could have really used a jaw full of dip, that would have been perfect. At some point my mother opened my door and said, "I'm off to bed." "Good night." I replied to her. "You be good." She told me, giving me the knowing look that only a mother can. "I'll try." I told her with a grin. She arched her eyebrow and went to her room, leaving my door open. Some time later, I got up to go to the bathroom, and I heard the girls down in the living room giggling. It was one of the rare times where a man gets to make a choice: go to bed, or go spend time with a group of cute girls. I, like any man under 40, chose to go surround myself with giggling girls. I silently crept down the hallway and the stairs, and entered the living room undetected. They were laying on the floor side by side, their heads together in what I assumed was more girltalk. I was sneaky, and slowly stepped closer and closer, like an indian or a tiger stalking my prey. I was thinking of shouting boo... but decided it against it, and chose to grab a leg or a foot instead. Now, I had to make another decission. There were 6 legs, which one to grab ? I decided to grab my sisters. I got down on my hands and knees and crept up on their legs, and then I grabbed her calf in a hard grip that made her call out and jump. She turns around and then they all three fell into a fit of giggles. I stood up and plopped down on the couch, smiling. "What's on TV ?" I asked. "Junk," My sister replied. "So, you want to fuck Shakira ?" Kit asked me with a smile on her face. "Of course!" I replied, "She can do some amazing things with her hips and legs." "So can I." My sister said, and they fell into another fit of giggles. "Have you ever sat back and wondered... "I said, drawing out a small silence, "How do sharks fuck ?" This brought a round of laughter, and Shelly said, "Scorpions have sex with their faces." More giggles. "So do we." I said with a grin. "I saw on TV once, where they showed these wolves having sex, and they were doing it backwards. And, while they were doing it, these other wolves kept attacking them, so they were fighting while doing it backwards." Kit said in a single breath. "Wow." Shelly said. "We should try that sometime." "I don't bend that way." I said, which brought another round of giggles from the girls. "Why don't you come down here with us ?" Kit asked smiling up at me. Ohh, I wanted to. God I wanted to! "I'm sorry, I can't." I said, shaking my head. "Aww. Why not ?" She asked. "He doesn't want to get caught and get in trouble." My sister said. "hmmm." Kit said. "What are you guys doing tomorrow ?" I asked. "Shopping." My sister answered. "Okay. Well... I'm going to go on to bed now." See you in the morning. "Good night." They all three said at once, then giggled about it. I went back to my room and fell asleep. (small update, sorry.) __________________ Foot in mouth and head up ass-hole Whatcha talkin' 'bout? Difficult to dance 'round this one 'til you pull it out.

10-26-2009, 10:02 AM	#169
nate556 Porno Junky Join Date: Sep 2008 Age: 29 Posts: 449	I woke up the next morning, and did the stumbling sleepy shuffle to the bathroom. When I got out, I went to my room and selected my clothes for the day: jeans and a black t-shirt. I took them down stairs, only sparing a glance at the sleeping girls. Mom was already in the kitchen making breakfast. "Good morning." She said. "Mornin'" I told her. "They're still asleep ?" "Yes." She said, "They were up very late giggling and laughing." I had a minor panic attack, thinking she might have heard me too. "I slept like a log." I told her, and went into the bathroom to shower. I showered, and didn't jerk off, and didn't have any girls barge in for my love juice. I wondered, for not the first time if it's possible for a man to run out. Then I brushed my teeth, put on my deodorant, shaved, and got dressed. When I finally got out, Shelly was sitting at the kitchen table chatting with my mother. She gave me a smile and went into the bathroom after me, running a hand across my chin and neck as she passed. Mother saw it and raised her eyebrow. "She's trouble." She told me. I couldn't think of a reply so I went back up to my room. I kicked my music on and laid back in my bed wishing for not the first time I had some skoal, or kodiak, to pack a in a lip. I kicked on my TV, and flipped it around looking for a decent show, but settled on saturday morning cartoons. It wasn't like I could hear the TV over the stereo anyways. It was only about 20 minutes before my door opened up and my sister walked in to tell me good morning, and that they would be leaving soon. She asked if I would come too... and I agreed. I couldn't say no to her. I got up and went back downstairs to get a plate of eggs and sausage. I sat down next to Kit on the couch and dug in. Even though they started eating before me, I still finished first. I'm a very no-nonsense guy when it comes to food. I'm also the kind who would eat anything, as long as it was cooked and wouldn't kill me. The TV was still on the animal channel, and everyone seemed bored by it. It wasn't long until we were dressed up in our winter gear and headed out the door. I took a seat in the back, and Kit jumped in the back with me. Shelly drove, since it was her car, and my sister sat in the front. Kit was on me before we were even out of the driveway, taking my hand and putting her head on my shoulder. She touched my face where I'd shaved the same way Shelly had. She smiled and I smiled back at her pretty face. Shelly put her music on, which I hated. I tolerated it, for their sake, but I didn't enjoy it. While we were passing through town, I saw Kelly out walking with his young cousin. "That's Kelly. Stop the car." "Why ?" Shelly asked. "Stop the car." I told her sharply. "Fine." She pulled off to the side, and I waved Kelly over. They crossed the street and walked up the car. "What's goin on ?" I asked him. "Just out for a walk." He told me. "We're headed to the mall, do you two want to come ?" I asked him. "I don't think we should." He said. "C'mon man, it'll be a blast." I told him. He looked at his cousin and asked her. She only shruged and tilted her head. She motioned with her hands, and Kelly put his face back in the window and said, "She said it looked crowded in there." "Kit can sit on my lap." I said, and she slid over and at on me, quite joyfully, i might add. Kelly turned back to his cousin and spoke quietly again. She motioned with her hands again, and he opened the door and got in. She sat on his lap too. She gave him a kiss on the cheeck as they tried to pull the seatbelt out far enough to latch it. Kit had to help them with it, and his sister helped with ours. "Comfortable back there ?" My sister asked twisted to look back at us. "Very." I said with a grin. She only sat down and looked out the window. Shelly rolled her eyes and put the car back on the road. I reached into my back pants pocket, which pushed my hips into Kit, who loved it, and took out the brass knuckles and held them out for Kelly. "Here, you can have these back." I told him. He looked down at them and said, "You keep them. I already got another pair." "Where do you get them ?" I asked him. "I make them." He said. "What ? How ?" I asked. "It's easy, you just need a tool and die, which I have an uncle who does, and some brass. Those aren't true brass, but bronze. I hate the way brass smells." He told me. His cousin motioned with her hands again, and he gave her a nudge on the neck with his nose. "What happened ? Why is she using sign language ?" I asked him. She motioned with her fingers, and Kelly explained, "She just recently had to have surgery on her throat." I frowned and asked, "Why ?" "She had a tumor in her throat, they had to take it out, she lost her voice from it." HE explained. She lifted her chin and pointed at a small healing scar on her neck. "I'm sorry to hear that." I told her. "Is it permanent ? Or will she get it back ?" She shook her head, and I could tell from her face it was permanent. Kit wiggled in my lap, and I wished she'd stop, because I was getting hard from it. "Is she good now ? Will it come back ?" My sister asked from the front seat. "We don't think so. It's a problem she's had a while, she never was much of a talker anyways." Kelly explained. He kissed her on her neck and said, "I don't need a voice when I can read your body anyways." She smiled and blushed, glancing around at us like she was embarassed. I put my arm around Kit's waist and blew in her ear and she suppressed a giggle and wiggled in my lap. I almost shot my load there in my pants by the time we got to the mall. (I know there is little sex in this leg of the story, but things are getting pretty routine. Just bear with me. Every story has a boring part... this is my story's boring part, LOL) __________________ Foot in mouth and head up ass-hole Whatcha talkin' 'bout? Difficult to dance 'round this one 'til you pull it out.

10-31-2009, 10:06 AM	#184
nate556 Porno Junky Join Date: Sep 2008 Age: 29 Posts: 449	When we got inside the mall, which was the biggest around, but compared to some of the malls in the big cities, it was small. The first thing we did was hit JC Penny. For me, this was insanely boring... until we got to their lingerie department. Watching the girls pick out panties and bras and other underwear was exciting. I even imagined Kelly's little cousin in her underwear. I felt weird being around her, too. Not because she was his, those kind of boundaries are clear to men, and only a man looking to get his ass kicked knows not to cross that line. It was her muteness. Even though she didn't talk much at halloween, she did have a lovely voice. I felt guilty talking to her, and not knowing sign language made understanding her worse. Then, I would feel guilty for not talking to her. Like I was excluding her somehow. She had a good time though, and smiled a lot at the antics that took place between Kit and Shelly. She had a beautiful smile that made her cheek bones stand out. After JC Penny, we hit Old Navy, and that was more of a bore for me. Kelly watched the girls interact with a smile on his face that would always look out of place to me. He was simply not the kind of man who smiled much, and when he did, it was kind of scary. It was a lot like a mix between a smirk and a grin, like he knew a joke no one else did. After Old Navy, we slipped into the music store, which was a lot more exciting to me. I am a very musical person. To me, Music is a kind of magic. Music can make sad people happy, happy people sad, and at concerts it can move thousands of people to take out their lighters all at once and wave them in the air in unison... if that isn't some kind of magic spell, I don't know what is! I actually found a Sonata Arctica album, and introduced Kelly to their amazing music. He'd never heard of them before, but as soon as he heard "The Power of One", he was hooked. He, in turn, had his cousin listen to it, and she also fell in love with their songs. She particularly liked "The End of this Chapter". I didn't end up getting anything, since I already had all the albums that I liked. After the music store, we went to the book store. I think everyone except Kit and Kelly were bored there. I was never much of a book reader. The books I like have pictures of naked women in them. Kelly ended up getting 4 books in total there, and his cousin got two of them herself. Kit got a book on tarot card reading, as well as a pack of tarot cards. Shelly didn't have any problems expressing how dumb she was for spending money on, "oooo magic picture cards". I personally thought it was interesting. Of course, the only thing I knew about tarot at that time was basically what I'd seen in horror movies. Teenage girl entering a spooky shop of an old crone, all giggly and ask about the guy she likes, but doesn't like her back, of course. And then the old Crone putting a gnarled finger on the Death card, and then you insert dramatic spooky music... But, I learned through Kit there was a lot more to it than that. It was very interesting, really. Maybe a little kooky, but still fun. So, after the book store, we went to the toy store. We actually ended up getting ourselves kicked out of that shop. My sister, Kit, and Kelly's cousin, found some of those nerf toys that were already opened, and had themselves a little war right there in the middle of the store over the heads of little kids. Me and Kelly ended up hurling a football back and fourth from one end of the store to another. Shelly ended up watching us all and telling us how dumb we were and that we would get in trouble. She was right, as the store manager asked us to leave, then summoned security to get us out. The funniest part, was that some of the kids in the store decided to emulate our behavior and play with the toys directly in the store like we were. It was some kind of miracle we didn't get thrown out of the mall completely. When we were tossed out of the toy store, we went to the leather shop. It was one of my favorite places, as the smell of leather was intoxicating. Kelly bought himself a pair of gloves, and got a Harley Davidson bandana for his cousin. No one else bought anything, as everything was very expensive, but looking and touching was fun. His cousin took the bandana out, and and Kelly folded it so it would cover her head. She put it on, and was instantly made cuter. So, after the leather shop, we hit what I can only describe as a Hippy shop. It was full of weird little decorations, like dream catchers, and little statuettes. It allowed you to make bracelets and necklaces and sold all kinds of semi-religious items. It had a wall full of scented candles and incense. Kelly got his cousin a cinnamon scented candle, and the other three girls got all kinds of different incense and candles. I decided to get my sister a gift as well, but I couldn't get just 1 gift, I needed to get something for Kit and Shelly as well. I went to the counter and had three necklaces made. One was the word Mind between two stars. Another was the word Body between two hearts, and the third was the word Spirit, with a heart on one side and a star on the other. I gave the Mind necklace to Kit, the Body necklace to Shelly, and the Spirit necklace to my sister. They each loved them. We decided to go to the food court and relax before taking another walk around the Mall. We were on our way to the food court when we ran into Randy. I stopped to talk to him for a moment, and told the others to go on, i would catch up. "Looks like you're pretty busy." He said to me watching the group go. "Who's that dark haied girl ?" "Kelly's cousin." I told him. He looked again and saw the way she held his arm with her head on his shoulder. "Ohh, weird." he said. "What are you doing here ?" I asked him. "Just walking. I had to get away from my family, they were driving me nuts." He answered. "Do you have any dip on you could buy ?" I asked him. "I ran out some time ago, and almost got myself kicked out of a gas station buying it." "Here..." he said and pulled a tin of Kodiak Wintergreen out of his back pocket. "I havn't dipped much from it, but 5 bucks and it's yours." "5 bucks ?" I asked riasing my eyebrow. "Yeah. I'm broke." He told me. I dug out the 5 bucks and bought the tin from him. "Sweet!" He said. "If you run out, call me. I'll give you your next tin free, since you did me this favor." "Allright." I said, "I need to go catch up with them. I'll catch you later." I stuffed the tin in my back pocket and power walked to the food court. I rejoined my group as they were deciding on what to get on the Pizza. "Pepperoni." I said. "And sausage." Shelly said. "I just want cheese." Kit chimed in. "We'll eat whatever." Kelly said and his cousin nodded. "Pepperoni..... and sausage... with pineapple." My sister said. That last part made everyone laugh. We just ended up getting individual slices, instead of a whole pizza. When we got our pizza, we sat down. I sat next to my sister, and Kit and Shelly sat down the other side of her. Kelly and his cousin sat scross from us, Kelly in front of my sister, me in front of his cousin. "Having fun ?" I asked her. She looked at me with her soft brown eyes and nodded with a smile. She was very cute. "So, did you get more of that nasty stuff off Randy ?" My sister asked. "Of course." I told her. "You should have seen when he tried to buy it at the gas station," Kit told her. "Ohh ?" My sister said raising an eyebrow at me. "What happened ?" "Nothing," I told her. "They guy just told me no. A lot." We made small talk for the rest of the meal, then got up to walk around the mall again. Nothing else happened, and it was time to go home. __________________ Foot in mouth and head up ass-hole Whatcha talkin' 'bout? Difficult to dance 'round this one 'til you pull it out.

10-22-2009, 08:37 AM	#158
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10-22-2009, 11:08 PM	#162
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10-23-2009, 06:00 AM	#165
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10-23-2009, 08:46 AM	#166
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10-23-2009, 10:07 PM	#167
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10-24-2009, 07:46 PM	#168
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10-26-2009, 11:50 AM	#170
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10-26-2009, 05:56 PM	#171
SoCalChargerFan Porn Surfer Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 16	Noticed a small mistake which might confuse some. "Kit had to help them with it, and his sister helped with ours." I'm assuming you're talking about Kelly's cousin, not sister, right?

10-26-2009, 06:09 PM	#172
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10-26-2009, 08:52 PM	#173
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10-30-2009, 05:08 AM	#182
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10-30-2009, 09:12 AM	#183
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10-31-2009, 11:48 PM	#185
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11-02-2009, 07:52 AM	#187
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11-02-2009, 10:09 PM	#188
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11-03-2009, 02:54 AM	#189
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11-03-2009, 04:48 AM	#190
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11-04-2009, 07:02 PM	#191
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11-04-2009, 11:57 PM	#194
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