The camera flashed and Juliet tensed up. There goes my dignity, she thought.

The man behind her said, “Good, good. Just sending that picture out, you can stop now.”

She sighed and both hands let go of her ass, her arms returning to support her on the arm of the couch. She didn’t even look back, she didn’t want to see this, she just looked forward and sighed as she saw the camera just a few feet away focused on her face.

Juliet felt cold, kneeling naked on a leather couch with three sets of video cameras surrounding you didn’t help. She felt Rick climb up behind her on the couch. “Alright baby,” he said, causing her to shiver at being called that, relax and this will be over soon. Or don’t, either way I’ll enjoy it.”

Alright Julie, last chance to back out of this. She felt Rick put a hand on her hip and his cock against her ass. *sigh* Just get it over with. Almost as if he were reading her mind he started to push into her virgin ass.

She was overwhelmed at the pressure then at the pain she felt as the cockhead pushed inside. Given the amount of effort she was making to not cry out in pain, she was cringing her face and balling up her hands in an effort to relieve what she was feeling.

“Fuck Juliet, this is great. You know how long it’s been since I’ve had a virgin nineteen-year-old ass?” His second hand touched her hip and he pulled her back as he pressed forward, sinking more of his hard rod into her bowels. “Remind me to thank your stepdad for this wonderful idea.”

That was a gut punch almost as bad as the pain she felt as Rick claimed her ass. Juliet had been stupid, she was texting and got into an accident. Insurance company paid out for the other guy but she was stuck with the bills, and getting $4000 for the average college student already saddled with debt was next to impossible.

Juliet had tried approaching her stepdad Jake about getting a loan, but he refused to do it. Jake however always creeped Juliet out, always ogling her. For his part Jake was a total pervert and wanted to fuck Juliet, but he wasn’t the cheating type and wouldn’t do that to her mom. He had simply told her he knew how she could get the money but she’d have to come back later, and she’d have to be appropriately dressed to ask. She knew what that meant, and he promised not to touch her. She left to go find other means.

Three days later she had found herself knocking on his office door while her mom was out. When she entered he was predictably watching porn, something her mom okayed for some reason. It was anal porn of all things, she knew that was a particular fascination of his. Jake bared his teeth in a wide grin and said, “I’m disappointed that I can’t find out if the carpet matches the drapes.”

Appropriate dressed meant not at all, and it was a challenge for the pale, skinny, raven-haired girl to muster up the courage to be naked in front of him. She took a seat when motioned and was denied crossing her legs. With her body on display he told her his proposal.

Feeling pubic hair against her ass and his balls against her pussy Juliet knew she was living out that proposal. She gasped when he started to pull back. Rick was chipping in $2000 to get to fuck her ass, and Jake was putting in the other $2000 for videos of the encounter from three sides. He wanted to see her face as her ass got fucked, see her from the side, and also see the cock entering her asshole and fucking her from behind.

A little cry escaped her mouth as he started pushing back in again, and she started to feel more ashamed. Giving up her ass (something she thought she’d never do) to one of her stepdad’s friends while it was being recorded for jerk off material was easily the low point of her life. Any dignity she thought she had melted away with every thrust of Rick’s cock.

Having sawed in and out of her a few times Rick knew she was getting adjusted, and even if she didn’t, who cared. He tightened his grip on her hips and started to thrust faster, getting into a decent rhythm. Juliet’s cries of pain became a little more pronounced as he sped up, but she had seen a few of the videos her stepdad liked (to prepare herself for what was coming) so this wasn’t unexpected. If the girls weren’t acting, this wasn’t supposed to be pleasant, or so it seemed.

He kept speeding up, a hand releasing from her hips to grab her hair and pull her head back, to keep her face focused on the camera. Juliet wasn’t looking into it though, her eyes were tight and her face contorted as he fucked her ass as though he were just fucking her pussy really hard.

The heat and pain in her asshole were getting to her. I don’t know how much longer I can last. If I stop now they might not pay. As she was just reaching that breaking point he slammed into her ass and held himself there, letting out a great loud groan. She finally noticed her own heavy breathing and sighed her relief. He pulled out and she didn’t move.

Another flash from a cellphone camera told her all she needed to know. When the phone beeped Rick looked at it and said, “Your stepdad says you did great. I’ll get these files ready and when you get home you’re to present it to him in an appropriate way.”

Juliet sighed and he smacked her ass. “Unless you want another round before you go.”

 

That's unpleasant for the heroine.

 

This one kind of made my skin crawl. The other two were nasty and Juliette has just given up and is helpless. Incest (even step-incest), anal and blackmail, all not my favorite subjects.

 

I would argue that's the goal of any story, to make you feel something. And you know my proclivities, I can't let my heroines have nice, happy sex. (There's a good reason behind that too)

 

That was the most realistic description of anal sex I have ever read. The coercion was gritty and so was everything else. A well-written story that flowed perfectly. It showed me the other side of a not-so-unanimously-happily produced amateur sex video. Very good, Annie. High marks.

 

LOAnnie2 Welcome back after a long posting absence. The descriptions and the story behind this submission runs through a lot of your work and this particular one is one of your best. Thanks for returning and entering this contest and I am looking forward to more writings from you.

 

If you liked this story, please consider voting for it in the KAW competition. The voting instructions are in the thread: https://forum.xnxx.com/threads/kaw-5-gone-in-a-flash-reading-voting-phase.395123/

 

The Good: This is a very well written and is some of the artists best work. The low amount of mistakes nd the very accurate portrayal make me wonder about the authors personal experiences.

The Bad: I am not really sure how to describe this so I will give it a try and see if I hit the mark. It felt like the author did not love writing this story. It almost felt clinical in its descriptions.

The Ugly: I am not a fan of coerced sex stories. Yes I have used it as a plot device myself on occasion and it is effective. It was not used as a plot device here as much as it was the plot. It left a little bit of a bitter taste in my mouth because I did enjoy the story. That leaves me thinking too much about my own convictions.

 

This was very well written.

It was uncomfortable to read. This is said as a compliment. The feeling of shame and embarrassment were done very well. I felt my cheeks burning in sympathy.

Good job Annie.

 

The best one I've read so far. Well written and pulls you in even if the emotion is distaste and horror.

 

Well it's about time you came back to us LOAnnie. For me, this story had everything, which is characters about whom I had feelings (both good and bad) with descriptions that made me cringe. Very well done, miss.

 

Sex scenes are amongst the most difficult to write well. This is one of the good ones. No women having 10 minute-long orgasms with 12 inch-long cocks shooting out gallons of spunk. The tone is subdued as it probably would be in real life. A good story, well written.

 

Not a comfortable or pleasant read, but a superbly well written piece. Complete in every respect, descriptive, engrossing. It may lose out a little in the voting due to the subject matter, which some people dislike but I for one will be giving good marks to this.

 

Wow. I feel guilty saying I liked this story, but I did. When you return to competition, Annie, you RETURN.

 

Big congratulations to LOAnnie, this one won: https://forum.xnxx.com/threads/kaw-5-gone-in-a-flash-results.395930/#post-6949744

 

This is an excellent example of how to write a story in less than 1,000 words. You've COMPLETELY developed the story under the word limit while making it thoroughly engrossing to read. WOW!! Brilliant, Annie! A much deserved win.

 

I liked it. Well written I felt.

 

I like this. The coercion of an innocent by one in the position of authority.

The feeling of pain interacting with the feeling of pleasure. The feeling of humiliation and embarrassment.

All the emotions could be felt by the reader even if they were contrary to their own beliefs of right and wrong.

Very good. Thanks for sharing.

 

Great story, , can'treally add to whats been said, , thoughtit was beautifully written easy to read, (although hard content)
Thanks very much!

 

I'll have to say it is a very close description of what most young girls wanting to get into the pornographic business have to endure. i too felt what she was feeling, very well written.