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  1. Exploadingpenguins

    Exploadingpenguins Sex Lover Suspended!

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    My first story (hope you like!)
    -E.P.

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    Growing up, Cory had lived with his dad, older brother, and mother. He never really got along with his mom or brother, and eventually moved out with his dad at the age of fifteen, to his year long girlfriend's house. His Girlfriend had two children: one seventeen year-old son, Jeremy, and a thirteen year-old daughter named Sam. Cory's dad and his dad's girlfriend, Michelle worked full time jobs and got home 3-4 hours after everyone got home from school. (2-3 hours after Sam got home from middle school) And Jeremy often went to parties or to his girlfriend's house for most of the afternoon/evening right after school, leaving Cory and Sam alone on nights free of Sam's swimming meets.



    One day after getting home from school, Cory went to his usual activities of playing video games while Jeremy went out with a friend or two. After fourty five minutes or so of game play Sam walked through the living room door arriving home from school. "Hey Cory."
    "Hey Sam, how was school?"
    "Pretty good...Actually it was kind of weird."
    "What was weird about it?"

    Sam blushed mildly. "Well..." she hesitated. "It's just this guy."
    "Uh-oh." Cory smiled warmly, "alright then, better come here and talk about it." Sam reluctantly obeyed and sat on the opposite end of the large crimson love seat in the center of the room. At a closer look Cory saw Sam had a small redish oval on her neck.
    "So this guy, he's a friend of yours?"
    "Well, he's kind of more than a friend."
    "Ah, I see. Troubles with this more than a friend of yours?"
    "Well not exactly. He gave me my first kiss today."
    "That's great, but what was weird about it?"
    "Well...." Sam blushed very brightly, "no, nevermind it's dumb."
    "Come on Sam, you know nothing you say sounds dumb to me."
    "Well...he....kind of started touching me."

    Cory's mind started to wander on the thought. He'd been secretly attracted to Sam ever since he moved in with them a few months ago and had been fantasizing about her quite alot lately. It got so bad that when he was home alone one day, he went into her room and smelt some of her panties littered on the floor worn in previouse days. "Where did he touch you, he didn't hurt you, did he?"

    "No, nothing like that. He just..." She seemed like she was remembering something, "he was rubbing my butt. I asked him what he was doing and he said that he was just exploring." Her entire face was as bright red as a cherry by now. "I told him to stop but then he started kissing my neck, and then..."She took a deep breath and hesitated, "he started rubbing my boobs. It was weird at first and I was telling him to stop, I really was, but he just kept doing it and it felt so good, but...oh I don't know what's going on Cory!"
    "What do you mean?"
    She diverted her eyes slightely. "Well....this probably sounds really weird but I got.....really wet, down here." she placed her hand gently over her pubus. "It wasn't pee, but there was alot of it."

    Cory pondered this for a moment before he looked down and saw the giant bulge in his slacks. He quickly turned his body to the side and put his arms over his lap while keeping his eye's on Sam's. "Well Sam, you're right, that wasn't pee. See when girls get touched like that they get wet there, and feel different."

    Sam looked down. "But I really liked it." She looked back into Cory's deep green eye's and scooted to the middle of the love seat. "How do you know this stuff, Cory?"
    "Well I've done that stuff to girls before."

    Sam's face never dimmed it's bright red glow. She scooted the rest of the way over and held on to Cory's arm and said, "Cory...can you do those things to me?" Cory's eye's widened. He thought about it for a bit, noone would be home for hours, and Sam was asking him to fondel her hot, younge, middle school body.
    "Are you really sure you want me to, Sam?"

    Her look had changed. Her eye's were glistening and filled with desperateness for desires. Sam carefully took one of Cory's hands and placed it over her breast letting his fingers graze her hard nipple and nodded solemly. He started messaging her breast with his right hand, molding it within his fingers while his other hand was placed on her knee. Sam let out a long, soft sigh as she stuck out her chest to push into my hand.

    Cory took his left hand and slid it up underneath her tank-top and began carassing her other breast under her bra. She moaned almost silently as her breasts were being manipulated within Cory's large and masculine hands. Sam opened her eyes and saw the now exposed lump in Cory's pants. She slowly moved her hand to it and began gently caressing it open handedly up and down. Cory tugged up on Sam's tank-top signaling for her to help him remove it.

    Once off, Cory unhooked Sam's bra and slipped it off her revealing two mango sized little breasts with erect pink nipples. He lowered his head and began licking and gently sucking on her right nipple while messaging her left brest with his nearest hand. Sam cooed quietly and softly placed a hand on the back of Cory's head slowly caressing his long dark brown hair as he kissed away at her beautiful breasts.

    Sam slowly leaned back silently telling Cory to hault his actions. He lifted up his head and eased back as Sam placed her small hands on his chest. She started feeling his body, slowly moving down to his stomache, and then to his pubus. She undid his slacks and slowly pulled down his underwear and pants freeing his eager to be released massive erection. Sam gasped and her eye's widened as if she were afraid of the bulky shaft that bounced up and down before her. She put one hand on his hard on, then two. Gently rubbing up, and down the long slightly damped with pre-cum prick.

    Sam was curious to taste the wetness that slowly oozed down his shaft. She lowered her head and kissed the side of it where the precum had dribbled down. Cory closed his eyes with relaxation as his beautiful step-sister began licking the head of his gigantic cock. She brought her mouth ajar over the tip gently sliding his long dick into her mouth. She got to about three fourths of it before she gagged once knowing her limit.

    She started sucking and licking his cock while looking up at him with her innocent eyes desperately. While still being blown, Cory slid his hand under Sam's sweat pants and silky panties which were damp with girly juices and rested his whole hand on top of her vagina. Sam started to suck faster as Cory probed one, then two fingers between her moist lips sliding up and down her wet crevas. He bumped her tiny love bud and Sam instantly let out a muffled moan and closed her eyes.

    Cory started rubbing her little knob in circles clockwise, then counter. Then slipped his fingers back between her lips and gently slid his index finger into her now soaked pussy hole. Sam groaned and started tugging on his penis as she sucked him off while Cory slowly slipped his finger in further and further inside her tight hole. He amazingly discovered her G-spot right away. He began moving is finger in a cresant motion ontop the sensitive spot when suddenly Sam pryed her head from Cory's dick while she arched her back and screamed in sexual lust as her very first orgasm came poring onto Cory's finger and hand. Cory told Sam to suck his cock again and he spewed his load into Sam's mouth watching as she swalled all of the liquid secreations from his slowly softening penis. Sam collapsed on Cory and whispered in his ear that she wanted to do what she'd seen her mom and Cory's dad do before and what she'd seen Jeremy and his girlfriends do before. She whispered in his ear that she wanted him to fuck her.

    Cory nodded and without saying a word layed Sam down on the love seat and slid himself between her long slender legs. He gave Sam one solem look and then jammed his prick into her sopping fuck hole trying to get the painful part over asap. Sam screamed loudly then calmed to a whimpering pant as Cory slowly started sliding his shaft out and then back into her pussy. After her hymen had adjusted to his long dick, Cory started thrusting fast and hard inside of Sam's just deflowered vagina all the way to the hilt of his penis and back to the tip. Sam was moaning very loud now and had came three times before Cory gridded his teeth and told sam to get read for him. He thrust one final time deep into her pussy as she came simotamously feeling his seed flow within her fuck den. Sam embraced Cory in her arms as he collapsed ontop of her moist young body. They layed there for several minutes before Cory slowly unplugged himself from Sam and appologized.

    "I'm so sorry Sam. I don't know what came over me, I can't belive I just did that to you and-"

    Sam brought a finger to his lips then gave him a deep, wet kiss and said, "As long as you'll let us do that again, there's no need to appologize."

    -End
     
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  2. kuzione

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    fuck den?


    i thought that had a hyphon as in "fuck-den"
    :rolleyes:
     
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  3. Exploadingpenguins

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    please review
     
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  4. Exploadingpenguins

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    hey what did i say about first story?


    true though your right, unfortunately it won't let me change a few errors I caught after re-reading it in the actual forums.
     
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  5. ThunderedEchoes

    ThunderedEchoes Screaming Infidelities

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    Weird, so he was 15 when he moved out to his girlfriend(how old?) and she has two kids?!
     
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  6. Exploadingpenguins

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    No you misunderstood.

    And i don't blame you, after I re-read it I knew someone would eventually think that. Anywho no, he moved in with his dad to his dad's girlfriend's house.
    here's a diagram.


    .............move to
    -Bill--(Dad)------\ Bill's girlfriend's house
    -Cory(Son)------/

    yes.
     
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  7. ThunderedEchoes

    ThunderedEchoes Screaming Infidelities

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    Dad's girlfriend, got it, and not trying to nitpick because I am a writer as you too, use spellcheckers, they'll save you in your time of need. younge = young. Cheers.
     
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  8. Exploadingpenguins

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    Sorry to use excuses

    your right, but I should explaine myself: I was up at 11:30 on xnxx just browsing through stories and I decided to be stupid and see what it would look like if I wrote a short one, and I did but I got an Idea for this one and so I wrote it till 1:30am and then had to get up for work at 6:am. And I had nearly zero hours of sleep the night before. So my mind was kind of doozing off. I appologize for not running it through spell check, and for the other mistakes that I made, I just hope that (and I'm not being sarcastic or rude at all, infact thanks for letting me know) people like the story through the little mistakes and faults.
     
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  9. ThunderedEchoes

    ThunderedEchoes Screaming Infidelities

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    Never begin a story tired, and never finish a story without reading through it.
     
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  10. Exploadingpenguins

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    actually it was a mood thing, writing songs or stories of any kind come only with mood and I didn't mean to get in that mood at midnight.
     
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    So I'm curious, does anyone think I should write more? I haven't gotten a single request. Either way I'll be making some different stories in the near futer.
     
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  12. dreese

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    :D GREAT story. Any more adventures with "lil" sam? sure would like to read 'em."
    spelling and stuff wasn't all that bad. JUST KEEP WRITIN'!
    9/10
    thanx:-D
     
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    thanks much, in means alot to get an actual good reply, and yeah I'll probably make some more in the near futer, and when I do I'll USE SPELLCHECK and such. Glad you liked it,
    -E.P.
     
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    Any suggestions on what my futer little sister story(s) should be about?
     
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    Great Story!

    How about the mom joining in with the two of them, show them a thing or two!
     
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  16. Exploadingpenguins

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    a considerable thought, but for now I think I'll save the mother thing for a different story, I already have some other Ideas for 'little sister'
    thanks though
     
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  17. mikeknight

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    The Setting was Great

    The story was very good, loved the ending, a little more detail to build the feeling you are creating. Perfection isn't really as important as expressing what you want to. It would be truely impossable to put emmotions or feelings into words that give them justice but you have done well and I bet part 2 will be much better.......Thanks...Knight
     
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  18. Piss On You

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    nice
     
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  19. Exploadingpenguins

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    Thanks Mike, means alot comming from you. I completely agree the lack of feeling too. I just have to wait 'till my brain kicks out the will to write #2 and I'll try my best at having the story come more alive (that's what I envy your writing talents for the most)
    Thanks much mate. Good luck on your upcomming good bad girl stories,
    E.P.
     
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  20. dewdyke

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    I like it allot. It was very good especially since it was your first. I followed it well and it did what it meant to, it turned me on! Will be reading #2 next.
     
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