Hi everyone! I like to write and I'm having fun while doing so, but I want people's opinions on them. I use another site where I do my writing. It's not finished, and it won't be for a while because of 1. I'm quite busy so I don't have all the time in the world to write , 2. The nature of the story is that I want the readers to have influence so they can control how the story progresses (a bit like a game).

https://chyoa.com/chapter/Introduction.278048

I'm currently working on the 2nd story, so any advice woud be appreciated. (the 2nd one has a long prolouge but please read it ^^).

All the storys also follow the guidelines (such as 18+ etc) - but it does have dark themes such as non-consent.
Thank you for reading

 

Alright, here's my opinion: Stop spamming.

 

Am going now to read the first one, I do love stories so will be happy to let you know how I liked it. Thanks for link!

 

I only made it through the first two parts of first story she when a sorry lol thought crossed my mind and an idea for a new chapter came ti light. But Me not being a writter.. I thought is just pass the idea to you and see what you think. If you like it please fell free to use it and write it anyway you see fit. Anyways here it is in the next comment

 

Let the molester continue

To afraid to confront the molester you just stood remaining still, while the molester continues to grope your butt. All you could do was look behind you to see that the culprit was a old fat man, in his early fifties, he had a vulgar face, fat round lips, a balding head, with the little remaining hair looking unwashed and oily. A strange thought had crossed your mind. Perhaps you remained silent because you actually enjoyed being touched by strangers?

Rediculous!

Who would enjoy being touched by a stranger like that! You made excuses like "I just didn't want to attract attention to myself", or "it would be embarrassing to just scream in the train with so many people", but before you could come up with more excuses, the molester shifted his hand to the front and started carressing your panties. You could feel his fingers as it slid up and down just outside your lower lips. Then with his other hand he slipped his other hand into your blouse and groped your breast vigorously. It was an easy action to pull off, as I had the top three buttons of my blouse already undone.

"You actually wanted people to molest you right? Wearing your school uniform like that... and such slutty underwear... hehehe..." Even his voice was vulgar, especially his chuckle at the end.
Did you become aroused from being molested?

No way!
Yes...
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As a witness to the vulgar attack on this cute little high school girl you are faced with two options. Either you make a scene and put a stop to get apparent disgrace or do you use the opportunity to capitalise on your own twisted lesbian desires and enjoy a taste as well?

Take advantage

Or

Stop the attack

I been rideing this train to the office every morning for the past 4 months. Yeah, it stops me off two blocks further from the office than the second one does. Every sense I noticed that adorable little high school girl on it, I just can't help myself. I know all I do is stare, but at least there are some mornings she lets her skirt ride a little high giving me a nice clear view of those amazing white cotton panties. Witch of course leaves mine soaking wet the whole day at work. But hey, Carol from accounting loves the mess she causes as she kicks them clean for me surfing our quick meetings in the copy room.

Anyways, this one particular morning the gods seemed to be on my wife as the car was slightly over crowded causing my darling treat stand the intire ride. Of course at first I didn't see it as a good thing until I noticed that fat fuck of a pervert gripping and feeling her up. Naturally I wanted to make a scene and have him arrested, but as the attack continued. I couldn't help notivlcing how her face seemed to glow and get squinched shut from actual pleasure his chubby digits where apparently giving her. Well now my disgust turns to arousal and my own pervyness began to surface as my mind thought, I'll be darned if he gets all the fun..

 

Would love to share some fantasy fun!!! I would witness and describe what ever happens before me!!!