1. Twisted Fate

    Twisted Fate BROTHER GRIM

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    XNXX has new and experienced authors, which a few things, people enjoy writing and reading.
    Everyone has a different level of experience when it comes to writing and writing in the English language, let's encourage and foster growth as a community.

    This is community with a common interest, so the idea is that this thread be an index for other threads that people want to link a helpful thread they want to create so it would be easier for someone to find the topic they are searching for or to ask a specific question.

    I encourage experienced writers to mentor and add to topics they see a need for growth.
    I encourage writers that want to improve there skill base to ask questions where others may be able to help.

    If any author/writer would like to be a mentor I encourage you to post your name and whatever else you'd like to add so those wanting to learn could pm you.
     
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      I haven't listed some of the site links for the stuff I posted to try to keep it simple, please don't think I am the original author. If you would like the site please let me know and I'll try to find which site/sites I used in the particular post.
       
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      Someone that has brought to my attention something that may help those that don't know. The item in the posts that yellow are links you may click on to see the information on that headline. Thank you again mysterious pm'er for trying to make this a successful venture.
       
      Twisted Fate, Jan 23, 2016
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    what mean
     
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      if your are interested in what the headline is in yellow is per post, it is a link to take you to a post that has more information on it.
       
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    The Top Five Tips For Using Body Language

    1. Use body language to add depth to dialogue.
    2. Use it because more than 50% of human communication is non-verbal.
    3. Use it to show how your character's emotions affect his or her actions.
    4. Use it to help you show rather than tell your reader everything.
    5. Use it in moderation. If overused, it can slow your story down.


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    1. Twisted Fate
      Thanks ejls!! Great add. :)
       
      Twisted Fate, Jan 20, 2016
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      Awesome list and never even thought about it!!!
       
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      That's some great advice
       
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  13. ahorsewithnoname

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    So, are you going to credit your sources for material? For example, the Editing and Proofreading section. As it stands now, I would think that you're the author for all of the material that you're posting.
     
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    Instead of trying to help the community, it's apparent your priorities are elsewhere. You are making an issue over nothing, it is obvious that you have no positive input or desire to help the community. I don't really care what you think since you are not willing to help the community grow.
     
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      Really? You sound awfully defensive, to be honest. You've popped up in the past couple of, what, weeks, days...and decided to drop all of this wisdom upon us. That's fine. But just don't pass it off as your own. If you're truly looking to be an inspiration to the writing community here (you've been a member for just over four months), certainly you know the value of giving credit where credit is due. Plagiarism is certainly nothing to brush off lightly. As for my contributions to this community, if you had spent more than a few hours here, you'd know how silly your statement truly is.
       
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      From the1885 words i picked randomly from your "White" story (
      #10)
      only19% shows up as unique .... (but far be it to me to challenge you)
      http://smallseotools.com/plagiarism-checker/

      "You've popped up in the past couple of, what, weeks, days...and decided to drop all of this wisdom upon us. That's fine. But just don't pass it off as your own"
      Lmao, this is a mute point since I have not passed it off as my "own". So what is the right amount of time does one have to be on the forum before they can offer something positive?

      If you want to continue this discussion lets take it to pm as not to ruin this thread. Thank you very much.
       
      Twisted Fate, Jan 20, 2016
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    Well there Einstein, do you know why it shows as 19% unique? Because it is showing the work you pasted into the block and comparing it to what it can find on the Internet, to see if "your work", that is, the stuff you paste in the block, matches something. So, what you proved was that 81% of what it found matched my story online here at xnxx.com...or any of the other sites that routinely scrape this site. Nice try, though. You almost convinced everyone here. ::: rolling eyes :::

    You really should go back to "Would You Really Go Down On the Person Above You" and those other supra-intelligent games you've been playing here and stay away from trying to go round-for-round with me. You're out of your league, sonny.

    The word is moot, not mute. Moot point. Sheesh.

    I have less than zero interest in continuing this discussion, period. I'll simply put you on Ignore once I'm sure you're not going to try some other puerile attempt to smear me.
     
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      Hey Nameless didn't we do something like this a while back... and it failed? What was that about four years ago?
       
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    • Nelson Mandela
      Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world.

    • Ralph Waldo Emerson
      The secret in education lies in respecting the student.

    In the 21st Century, the new disadvantaged will be those who do not have the capacity to learn. They will sink, unable to change and adapt as they are flooded with ever more information and change. But learning is about more than just getting by in a changing world. Our ability to learn is what makes us human: we are born curious and our ability to continue learning is what defines us - as individuals, as communities and as societies. Learning can bring you, your family, your organisation and your community any number of benefits.
     
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      I thought you wanted to ignore me? Links can lead to questionable sites, I don't blindly click on a link nor do I aspect others to click on any links (not that I have to justify myself).
      Since you have been so interested in this thread and project, why don't you add to it? The original post asked for the help of experienced writers.
      A persons actions speak louder then words. Shit or get off the pot.
      I refrained from continuing what you have started, because this thread is about things other then squabbles (please ask an independent party how this is making you look).
      I have lead you into every response, I have baited you.
      Please remember that the internet has been around for a very long time.
      I choose not to continue your childish endeavors.
      If you want this thread and the good will of helping others to end just tell me "helping others on xnxx is bad" and I'll let the thread die. The story section is not the place to fight.
       
      Twisted Fate, Jan 20, 2016
  17. ejls

    ejls Siren of the Seaway

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    When I saw W.W. in the links, I assumed it was from Writers Write - where I find a lot of good information. Thank you for posting it here.
     
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    In the For What It's Worth department, Twisted Fate and I have had some PMs and gotten everything straightened out. What he's doing is a good thing. I encourage others to participate and help.
     
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      Ahorsewithnoname was right suggesting I post the links, I shall try to be more diligent in that area. Thanks Ahoursewithnoname for the help in understanding.
       
      Twisted Fate, Jan 21, 2016
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