It only appears that way to the author - if you look at it outside your profile, it looks fine.

 

i'd be very honoured if somebody could do a review of one of my stories or my entire series so far. thankyou

 

The sixth chapter of Calling All Writers has come to a close and I am pleased to announce that ELP is the new winner. If you haven't read his story, Memories in Ashes, read it now. https://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=215894

This was a sensitive, sensual walk through history, written by an author who took the time to research the subject, right down to the correct china. When one is looking for a sex story, they should look elsewhere. But if you are looking for an historically correct piece of literature, about a woman looking for more than her marriage offers her, read this. ELP wrote a very convincing tale, from the female perspective, that was completely believable.

Well done, sir. We applaud your effort.

 

THE HUNGER

Just read a story from wantsomefun titled The Hunger and was floored by it. It has to be one of the best sexual stories I have ever had the pleasure to read. Its themes didn't strike me, at first, because I am not so into vampire stories. However The Hunger is about a totally different creature... one who feeds on the sexual nectar of his willing victims. Do yourself a favor and give this story a read...

The Hunger

 

+1

I agree wholeheartedly with ELP on this. It's a great, great start on what should be an epic storyline.

 

I'll admit, I kind of roll my eyes at vampire stories (although I did write one a while back, so </hypocrite> I guess...), but that one was a bit outside the norm. I appreciated the effort to be divergent. It paid off.

 

THe Hunger

I'd like to think this site has gone downhill, but more likely I've become jaded. I dip in from time to time with increasing frustration.
Then I saw ELP's recommendation of "The Hunger" and because I respect his talent and judgement I risked an hour. And wished it could have been three hours, or better, a day.

For an original plot, lovingly, craftfully, and sensitively woven with a vivid but sensitive imagination, for a sex scene which lasts for hours and you wish would have lasted longer this erotica has no equal.

Curse you "wantsomefun", I had been flexing my two fingers for typing and exploring my imagination and memories for months considering a return, but after reading this hugely talented tale, I'll have to stick with Twitter.

 

FLEETING ENCOUNTERS

I just read a story, on the forum, by eyToad called "Fleeting Encounters" and it just blew me away! What a well-written piece of work this is.

It's about an older man who buys a old house and starts fixing it up and he starts hearing noises in the night that he puts down as common old house sounds. Finding it hard to sleep, he decides to masturbate and, when near his orgasm, hears a female's voice call his name.

I don't want to give the plot of this wonderful story away so I will just tell you that I loved the whole thing and, I think, you'll love it too.

https://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?p=4238175&posted=1#post4238175

Leave a comment there if you agree with me.

 

Since people are reviewing stories on the forum, why not a poem right?

alejk Unexpected

His poem purveys a simplicity, an almost adolescent curiosity. And yet, the protagonist discovers a hidden truth about life. Not everything comes out the way we expect.

His work was significant enough for me to notice, so take a look. There isn't much of a catalog but he shows promise. With a little encouragement, I think he could be something truly amazing.

 

Would anyone like to review my story and leave me some constructive criticism?

"TEENAGE GIRLS FOR SALE"

Go to this link to read the story http://stories.xnxx.com/story/33901/...GIRLS_FOR_SALE

Thanks

HD

 

Request to Review

Hi, everyone, I posted my 3rd story last week and am grateful for the views and the ratings. However, from one writer to another, I'd like to know the particulars behind the thumb ups and downs.

Do you like it for the genre, contents or writing style? What do you not like about it? Any suggestions on how to make it better?

Any feedback is greatly appreciated!

http://stories.xnxx.com/story/36113/My_Little_Buddy%2C_My_Lover

 

My little Buddy. My lover. by DKoontz

First things first- this is not quite my taste when it comes to sexual preferences. But nevertheless I found it interesting to read and worth having a feedback. So here it goes.

The plot evolves around Liam, a college student in economics, and his study buddy Dan. As the story developes the androgyne Dan shows a new side of himself to Liam.

Despite some minor spelling mistakes that could have easily been cleared with reviewing, I found the story pretty well written. Especially the vivid style of presenting the protagonists thoughts or dialogues with Dan have an easy, fresh feeling to them. The story seems to be written down without a lot of effort- in a good way. No big sentence constructions, no complicated twists of grammar and desperate tries to find synonymes for often used words.

What I did not really appreciate was the story itsself, but that's a question of taste I guess. But still there are minor inconsistencies in the plot, where does Dan(ielle) suddenly get her breasts from for example? On the other hand I did not feel the story itsself to be boring at all, there were no unnecessary lengths to it, the conclusion leaves room for a follow-up, which could be a promising idea.

All in all a well written story, with some minor flaws. A fresh approach to a very niche topic. I'd give it a solid 7.2/10 and will definitely follow your writing just to satisfy my couriosity.

 

thank you g_coco

thanks for your review, G, and honest opinions. most of all, thanks for taking the time even though my story subject matter was not to your liking.

I was encouraged enough by you and comments on the story to write chap 2, and am working on chap 3.

thank you again!

http://stories.xnxx.com/story/36343/My_Little_Buddy,_My_Lover_Chap_2

 

List of recommended authors

Does anyone know where there's a list of recommended authors?
There's one somewhere that I used to look at. I thought that it was under this heading of Sex Stories but it's not here and I've looked everywhere without finding it.

I hope someone remembers it and can point me in the right direction.

 

https://forum.xnxx.com/showthread.php?t=82776
the last page or so should have the most updated list

 

nice posts..........

 

Loved Chapter 2!

 

Why isn't this stuck to the top of the page anymore? This used to be such a help. Don't it always seem to go that you don't know what you've got 'till it's gone?

 

Maybe if there was a one post list in a locked thread, then this would be useful.

If every post on this thread was a review then it would always be on the top of the page.

 

And, just for fun, I'll give this wonderful thread a bump.

For all of you newbies, read it all and enjoy. We love to have you here.