I hope there is more to cum. Does that mean I have paedophiliac tendencies? Where is the line mentally between getting a hard on reading about fucking a young one and actually doing it if one got the chance. Assume that the law allowed it. Would that mean you would actually do it? I don't think so. Lopped.

 

Nice ........ mmmmmmmm,!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Very good,

With a different stoy line , keep up the good work.

 

its making my tight lil shorts sooo hot an wet mmmmm

 

very hot on thhis end too. . . . wish we cud help each other out!

cant wait for more, this story is a complete 180 from all the others-VERY HOT! GIGGIDY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

 

show us:rose:

 

I am not specifying the age to avoid violating the rules. Also, I want my readers to use their own imagination. No rule breaking going on here.

 

So here we are at home, a shitload of shameful thoughts running through my head. Sister Frances also mentioned that Maybelle got her license recently, so to start some conversation, or to at least distract me from her physique, I let her drive home. All the while, in spite of my best effort to avoid looking at her, I couldn't stop staring at her high cheekbones, her long silky brown hair, those thick, soft lips. But most of all, I couldn't tear my eyes away from those slender, thick thighs poking out from those tight shorts.

If I had been driving, we probably would have crashed into a fence or something. That's how attracted to her I was. I wasn't even this horny at the sight of my own wife. I just don't know what to think anymore.

So here we are at home, just me and her alone, sitting on my couch. She is dead silent, and I don't know what to say. So we sit in total silence. Awkward? Maybe for me, but she looks totally relaxed. In spite of the half-frown, half-straight face that overtakes her face. I am so uncomfortable, I start fidgeting, something I don't do. So what do I do? I start talking. And that's how it started.


"So Maybelle, I am glad we met each other. You seem like a very nice girl. I am gonna enjoy taking care of you". All she did was turn and look at me. With those eyes. Those eyes. Those eyes.....

I was in a trance, and I could feel myself getting harder and harder. But I continued talking. "I would like to get to know you a little better, so I can give you everything you couldn't have all this time". On that note, she started moving closer, never moving her eyes. And by this point, I was just about ready to burst in my pants I was so hard.

And closer she moved.

And a little closer.

And closer.

And closer still.

By this point, I had no more words left. It's like she was controlling me, sucking the very will to talk from my body. She was extreemly close, our noses were touching. Her eyes still locked in me. Then she spoke, for what had to be the first time since I met her three weeks ago. "All I want is you", she said in a soft, sexy make-you-cum-on-the-spot voice. I was in a daze, and yet I was completely aware of what was happening. After she said that, we started to kiss. And I was right. Her lips were soft and juicy. Our kisses started off soft and careful, and turned more passionate. Not harder, but with more desire, like we were really feeling each other, which we were. She slowly inched her tongue in my mouth, and I happily accepted it. It was warm and wet, and I wondered whether that was the case for all of her holes. Then she pulled away and said, "Can I show you how much I want you? In really love you daddy". "But we've only known each other for three weeks", I said dumbly. "I've seen you stare at me. I know you want me, so let me give myself to you", she purred back at me. I was gonna say that I am her father and we shouldn't go that far, but her stare, her voice, her words, and the fact that she knew I was staring at her all that time twisted my tounge.

So I took her up to my bedroom.

 

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What does that mean?

 

No idea what he means but I'm sure you'll understand what I mean.

I'm loving this story, I can't wait for more

 

daaaaaaammmmmnnnnnnn getting better and better-THANK YOU!

 

oh daddy lost when she can drive kisses

 

and then what ??

 

I got you.

 

THE OPPOSITE OF THE /*/*/*.............LOL. ANYTHING YOU WISH.

 

its clear you´re talking about a little girl...an over 16 year old wouldn´t be adopted...I am afraid I will have to delete it if you go any further...I am sorry but it is against the rules!

 

Please refer to post #28 where he states Maybelle has her drivers license. Although earlier entries led us to believe she may be a little girl, this clearly proves she is not.

 

The Adopted Ass I Couldn't Resist Finale

So here we are in my bedroom. I have no idea what is gonna happen while we are up here, but I have a bad feeling that I know how it all will end. She is in my walk-in closet, doing god knows what, and I'm out here wondering what prompted me to adopt a teenager in the first place. The first thing I see when I look up is a slim, sexy figure in nothing but a thong. Maybelle had quite a pair of tits on her, they looked like beautiful melons. By this point, I didn't even care that she was only 16. My dick was hard enough to make moving mountains look like lifting a pencil. She wanted it, I wanted it, so there was nothing to stop us.

I couldn't take my eyes off of her. She could tell, cause she stopped right in front of me and did a 360, slowing down to let me take in the plump round softness of her ass. She sits down on my lap, with that seductive look in her eyes that first attracted me to her. With her hard nipples pushing against my chest, she starts to take off my shirt. We kiss passionately, our tongues exploring each other. By the time we come up for air, we are both stark naked. I lay her on her stomach and split her legs just enough to fit my throbbing member inside of her. I was slightly concerned that I would be too big, but judging by her moans, I could tell she was enjoying it.

I started slow. No decent man ever starts pounding an ass. You have to savor the skin, the warmth, the tightness, the softness of the ass. Well, at least I do. With every warm thrust, her ass gave me a warm squeeze. I never felt like this before. I was so into this, I lost track of reality. All I could think about was how awesome I was feeling at the moment, with my cock sliding in and out of this girl's ass. And the more into it I get, the more constant her moans. If you based it on moaning alone, you would think I do this on a daily basis.

I banged that ass for an hour. I was so sweaty, I had to hold on to the bed to keep myself from sliding to the floor. By the time I was close to my orgasim (and she was too) she was almost screaming for me to make her cum. Once I did climax, which happened at the exact same time she did, I could swear I saw a bright light. She came, and then got quiet. I would have been completely humiliated by what I just did, but then I heard her voice again.




"You like my ass don't you daddy?"

 

Your story was interesting at first but you seemed to have lost creativity ...
I can't say that I'm anymore creative than you , since I'm obviously not siting a story of my own. Criticism is good inspiration for developing fresh Ideas .