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  1. DoyleGentry

    DoyleGentry Sex Machine

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    Grammar!

    "They're" - They are (They are guys)
    "Their" - belonging to him/her/them (Their cocks)
    and
    "There" - a place which is not here. (Over there)


    PLEASE! Majorly important for an author to know the difference. Other than that, extremely good story and well written.
     
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  2. Debbie1990

    Debbie1990 Porn Surfer

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    Wow

    Amazing story, one I could really see myself doing in real life when I was in school. Keep it up :)
     
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  3. loves2hav4play

    loves2hav4play Porno Junky

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    wow doylegentry, what a way to bust a girls bubble. Early on in the story I explained I wasn't worrying about following all the rules. I know them but didn't say I had skill. Just love writing my fantasies as I play with myself. Sorry to disapoint, my mind was on other things, not grammar rules..
     
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  4. MasterAlexxxx

    MasterAlexxxx Porn Star

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    As a fellow writer, let me give you a tip, as you write do not worry bout grammar and spelling, but after you are done with a session or a chapter or how ever you choose to break it up, then go back, read it again and check for these errors, a grammatically correct story is much better than one that isn't. That being said, I have loved this story from the beginning, and have faithfully followed it along its journey, please do not stop writing.
     
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  5. DoyleGentry

    DoyleGentry Sex Machine

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    An apology.

    I am sorry to burst your bubble with my comment. You are writing an excellent story, please keep at it. Just keep the difference in mind. Proof reading for this kind of thing shows that you care about the story. Yes, write your story, proof read before you post it. You'll get many more positive comments when following that pattern.

    Like MasterAlexxxx says in the following;

     
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  6. Barq

    Barq Porn Surfer

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    Well lets hope you start playing with yourself again soon! I'd love more chapters added to your story
     
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  7. patched

    patched Porn Star

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    great story cant wait for more
     
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  8. Twistedsister

    Twistedsister Porn Star

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    Loved this series, even though grammer problems, so what. We aren't getting graded at school here, it who wrotes and makes people picture the story as awesome erotica. :)
     
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  9. FIREWALKER1975

    FIREWALKER1975 Sex Lover

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    .

    MORE!!!!!!!
     
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  10. young youth

    young youth Sex Lover Suspended!

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    Oh hot story i like very much
     
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  11. Moepos

    Moepos Porn Surfer

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    still waiting...
     
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  12. cheri

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    i've just stumbled across this thread and hope it continues. You've made this little slut fucktoy moist beyond belief, i can't wait to read more.

    There will always be critics and no matter what, i hope it doesn't dissuade you from continuing. No bubble bursting!
     
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  13. lost546

    lost546 Amateur

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    love the story plz continue
     
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  14. Moepos

    Moepos Porn Surfer

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    Waiting patient
     
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  15. Oliviasdaddy

    Oliviasdaddy Amateur

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    Hot Hot Hot

    I hope you continue the story! It has such a nice build up going on and each instalment leaves you wondering how it can possibly get any hotter. You always keep me guessing which is a lot of fun. =)
     
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  16. flipper972

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    Amazing story. Very well done.
     
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  17. hardforwomen

    hardforwomen Porno Junky

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    When you get done with the story in here you should, splice them together into one story, do the spelling corrections, and then put it on the main letter site. I'm willing to bet that it wouldn't go less then 96% approval rating.
     
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  18. MrRightNow

    MrRightNow Porn Surfer

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    i cant wait for the next part please write i cant wait
     
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  19. Moepos

    Moepos Porn Surfer

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    ... waiting for more ...
     
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  20. BAM 69

    BAM 69 Panty Thief

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    I must have MORE of this story
     
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